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about beh'r - 27th April 2010, 09:43 PM

Ghazal kahne ki ek semi unusual tarika batata hu…jisko mai follow karta hu..(kuch hadd tak)

(coz the audience for this article is intended to be new learners I have not used the roman hindi editor…coz I remember how difficult it was to read it)

Ye ek tarah se mere limited experience ka nichor hai….ye sirf naye logo ke liye hai…advanced learners ke liye nahi.kyuki baat yaha bahut elementary hai..ye sirf naye logo ko start dene ka ek tarika hai(bahut tariko me

se)….bahut si baate yaha over simplification hai jo bahut bariki se dekhe to naqis sabit ho sakti hai…magar jaisa maine pahle kaha ye naye logo ke liye hai…jab vo log advanced ho jaye to apne aap bariki samaj jayenge

Yaha beh’r ki ek list hai….aap samaj lijiye ki 99% ghazals, mashoor shayaro ki kahi, isi list ki koi ek behr istemaal karti hai..meri gujaarish hai aap bhi shuruaat me inhi me se kisi beher ka istemaal kare.n ghazal kahte huye…

Ise use karne ka sabse asaan tarika ye hai ki aap koi bhi ek gana chosse kijiye….uski dhun apne man me gungunaiye 1-2 din tak…awaaz ke saath bhi gungunaiye 1-2 din tak….phir us dhun par apna kaha koi sentence

chadaiye….tab tak polish kijiye jab tak saari atak-khatak nikal jaye aur aapke words us dhun me shakkar ki tarah ghul jaye…bus yehi beher hai…yehi wazn me hona hai….aur agar apke words us dhun se out ho gaye to apka misra us beher se out kahlaayega….wazn se naqis kahlaayega….

ITS ACTUALLY THAT SIMPLE

But some people may want to check the correctness of their attempt with some objective yardstick….isliye maine us dhun ki taktee include ki hai..now the question is what is a taktee?

BUT KINDLY NOTE BEHER WAHI HAI JO UPAR BATAYA HAI.

.beher ke tools ko beher ka essential requirement nahi samajna chaiye…galib sahib ko to pata bhi nahi hoga ki taktee kya cheez hai..un logo ke paas to koi tool bhi nahi tha siwai khud ka koi dhun man me banaane ke siwai…yaha to dhun bhi ready made hai apke liye

Well ,taktee is breaking of the line into its syllables…for the present purpose and for most purposes(other than scholarly) it will suffice that there are 2 types of syllables

Long and short

It is not in the scope of this article to go very deeply into its intricacies…all I have to say is that when a person swims it is not necessary for him to know what muscles in the body are making him swim or by what chemical reactions of the brain the commands are given to the muscles to move in a specified manner

But a serious budding shayar should know taktee …

Some thoughts about taktee:

All syllables in a line will be either long or short and long syllable is =2 and short syllable is=1( in an another era the same thing was denoted by words …for e.g the below all give the same map

Faa-i-laa-tun( faa=long: i=short: laa=long:tun=long)

Tan-ta -naa -tan (tan=long: ta=short: naa=long:tan=long

Daa-da-dum-dum=( daa=long: da=short: dum=long:dum=long

2122(2=long: 1=short: 2=long:2=long)

There is simply no demerit in using the digital variant…as it is easier for newcomers….some people use words( faa-i-laa-tun) out of sheer habit and some out of vanity(my opinion) and then they translate the words in figures in their minds….(but in the beginning( and perhaps at whatever stage) whats the point?

So a taktee of a line is the map of that line broken in a sequence of short and long syllable.

Most syllable are flexible ..i.e they may either be used as long or short in a given line as per the requirement of the map i.e the beher

For e.g the word ‘koee’ is two syllable=ko-ee and it is totally flexible it can be 11 or 22 or12 or21 as required by the beher

Supposing the map (beher) is 1212 / 1212 / 1212 / 1212( this is a standard beher with a name but you simply don’t need to know it ,after all whats there in a name ,even withot its name that beher will exist like you will exist , even if you change your name!....not knowing the names of the beher will not in the least hinder you)

So 1212 / 1212 /1212/1212

Is short long short long/slsl/slsl/slsl….e,g

Ye zindegi sawaal hai ke zindegi jawaab hai

Ye1-zin2-de1-gi2/sa1-waa2-l1-hai2/ke1-zin2-de1-gi2/ja1-waa2-b1-hai2

Best way to learn taktee is to go the reverse way…generally people take a line and laboriously write it down and put the numbers(weights1-2) ,but in my experience this method is inadequate (to say the least) coz thr person is always confused about the correctness of weights and requires constant supervision from someone(which may noy be always available) and then gets frustrated and may quit the activity

I suggest the learner take up individual behers and find ghazals in that beher….there is enough material on the net for this exercise.mera yakeen hai agar aap 100 ghazal ko note kare to aap 99% taktee seekh jayenge.is se apko koi guide ki bhi jarurat nahi hogi coz the answer is always in front of you..you need not even write it..you simply have to move the cursor over the digital taktee trying to fit the syllables,if you make a mistake the map will correct you automatically…this way you will gradually come to know the syllable break-up and the weights allotted to each syllable and which syllables have flexible weights( and which similar syllable can have flexible weights) for e.g



2122 2122 2122 212
2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2
Chup ke chup ke raa t din aa suu ba haa naa yaa d hai
Hum ko ab tak aa shi ki ka vo za maa naa yaa d hai

Jaisa ki aap dekh rahe hai upar jo apke first line ka map(beher) hai..wahi sare lines me hona chaiye

Ab saare beher ki ek list dikhata hu unke filmi dhun ke examples ke saath…
Best of luck



1] 222 / 212 / 122
hazaj musaddas aḳhram ashtar maḥzuf


1]meraa dil ye pukaare aajaa
Me2 raa2 dil2/ ye2 pu1 kaa2/ re1 aa2 jaa2

2]kaun_aaya tere mann ke dware*
Kau2 n_aa2 yaa2/ te2 re1 man2/ ke1 dwa2 re1

Note: isse milta julta beher hai 221/1212/122
Ye dono apas me hum wazn hai…matlab aap in dono beher ko ek hi kalaam me interchange kar sakte hai

*=yaha note kijiye ek word ke part ko dusre se joda hai.
Generally kaun aaya ka wazn hai=2122( kau2 / n1/aa2/yaa2)
Magar yaha ise beher me fit karne ke liye do alag word ke kuch parts ko jod diya hai jo ki jayaz hai…lekin aisa karma koi compulsion nahi hai agar apko wazn 2122 ka chaiye to vo bhi aap le sdakte hai aur 222 bhi jaisa ki yaha kiya hai

Ap gaur kijiye ki aisa karne se apko 1 syllable extra use karne ke liye mila hai bus ye dhyan rakhna hoga ki aisa hamesha nahi kar sakte…

Agar koi word consonant me khatm ho raha hai aur agla word vowel me shuru ho raha ho tab ye possible hai jaise …kaun aaya ka kau.n_aa.yaa

Ya to koi word vowel me khatm hota ho aur dusra word same vowel(and sound) me shuru hota ho jaise : ya aaiina ka ‘ya_a.ii.naa’ ban gaya yaaiina( padne ke liye)(note kijiye yaha bhi 4 syllables ka 3 syllables ho gaya)

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2) 22 / 122 // 22 / 122
( mutaqarib musamman asram)

1] mitwaa re mitwaa purab na jayyo
Mit2 waa2 re1 mit2 waa2//pu2 rab2 na1 jay2 yo2
Note: //=means compulsory stoppage..apka word is spot par khatm hona hi chaiye

See no 21for further detail

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3) 2212 / 2212 / 2212 / 2212
( rajaz musamman salim )

1]ik raasta hai zindagi jo tham gaye to kuch nahi
Ik2 raa2 s1 taa2/ hai2 zin2 d1 gi2/ jo2 tham2 ga1 ye2 /to2 kuch2 na1 hi2

2]kal chaudvi ki raat thi shab bhar raha charcha tera
Kal2 chau2 dh1 vi2/ ki2 raa2 t1 thi2/ shab2 bhar2 ra1 haa2/ char2 cha2 te1 raa2

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4) 221 / 2122 // 221/2122
( muzari musamman aḳhrab )

1]saare jahaa se accha hindustaa hamaara
Saa2 re2 ja1/haa2 se1 acch2 haa2//hin2 du2 s1/ taa2 ha1 maa2 raa2

2] o dur ke musafir humko bhi saath le le~
O2 duu2 r1/ke2 mu1 saa2 fir2//hum2 ko2 bhi1/saat2 th1 le2 le2

3] ye zindagi ke mele dunya me kam na honge
Ye2 zin2 d1/gi2 ke1 me2 le2// dun2 yaa2 me1/ kam2 na1 hon2 ge2

4]guzra hua zamaana aata nahi dubaara
Guz2 raa2 hu1/ aa2 za1 maa2 naa2// aa2 taa2 na1 //hi2 do1 baa2 raa2

5] takdeer ka fasana jakar kisi sunaye
Tak2 dee2 r1 /ka2 fa1 saa2 naa2// jaa2 kar2 ki1/ se2 su1 naa2 ye2

6] gaadi bulaa rahi hai seetee bajaa rahi hai
Gaa2 d2i bu1/ laa2 ra1 hi2 hai2// see2 tee2 ba1/ jaa2 ra1 hi2 hai2

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5 )221 / 2121 /1221 /212
( muẓari musamman aḳhrab makfuf maḥzuf)

1]pahle to apne dil ki raza jaan jaiye
Pah2 le2 to1/ ap2 ni1 dil2 ki1/ ra1 zaa2 jaa2 n1/ jaa2 i1 ye2

2]lag jaa gale ke phir ye hasi raat ho na ho
Lag2 jaa2 ga1/ le2 ke1 phi2r ye1/ ha1 si2 raa2 t1/ ho2 na1 ho2

3]hum laaye hai tufaan se kashti nikal ke
Hum2 laa2 ye1/ hai2 tu1 faa2 n1/ se1 kas2 ti2 ni1 /kaa2 l1 ke2

4]sab kuch lutaa ke hosh me aaye to kya kiya
Sab2 kuch2 lu1 ta2 ke1 hos2 h1 me1 aa2 ye2 to1 kya2 ki1 yaa2

5] dekha hai zindgi ko kuch itne kareeb se
De2 kha2 hai1 zin2 d1 g2i ko1 ku1 ch_it2 ne1 ka1 ree2 b1 se2

6] mai zindagi ka saath nibhaata chala gaya
Mai2 zin2 d1 gi2 ka1 saa2 th1 ni1 bha2 ta2 cha1 laa2 ga1 yaa2

5A] 221/2121/1221/2(1)( non standard)

1]solah baras ki baali umar ko salaam
So2 laa2 ba1 ras2 ki1 baa2 li1 u1 ma2r ko2 sa1 laa2 (m)*

Ap dekh rahe hai ki yaha salaam ka ‘m’ ko aise hi chor diya bina wazn diye…
Ye ek exception hai jo sab beher me allowed hai..
yaha har line ka last lafz ka last syllable agar extra short^ hai to use wazn me nahi gina jayega..ye exception har beher me hai siwai 1 beher( yaha beher no.26)
^=definition of extra short for e,g

Haath ka ‘th’ magar haathi ka ‘thi’ nahi
Gaav ka ‘v’
Honge ka ‘ge’ jaise syllables yaha applicable nahi hai..’chalo’ ka ‘lo’ applicable nahi hai

Magar harf ka ‘f’ karz ka ‘z’ jaise applicable hai

Note2: non standard means there is no such traditional beher..but as its very close to the said beher and I have found example of it hence I have included it in the required column…generally it is addition or substraction of the standard arkaan

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6 ) 22 / 112 / 22 /22 /22/ 112 / 22 / 22
( mutadarik musamman muẓaaf maqt̤u maḳhbun )

Very rare and maverick beh’r.ghazalon me use nahi hota..yaha har arkaan ke starting 2 ko aap kisi bhi combination me 1-1 me break kar sakte hai..mostly used in hindi

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7 221 / 1222// 221 / 1222
( hazaj musamman aḳhrab).

1] hum tumse judaa hoke mar jayenge ro ro ke
Hum2 tum2 se1 ju1 daa2 ho2 ke2 mar2 ja2 yen1 ge1 ro2 ro2 ke2

2]jab deep jale aana jab shaam dhale jaana
Jab2 dee2 p1 ja1 le2 aa2 naa2 jab2 shaa2 m1 dha1 le2 jaa2 na2

3] saahil se khuda hafiz jab tumne kaha hoga
Saa2 hil2 se1 khu1 daa2 haa2 fiz2 jab2 tum2 ne1 ka1 haa2 ho2 ga2

4]ik pyaar ka nagma hai maujo ki rawaani hai
Ik2 pyaa2 1r ka1 nag2 maa2 hai2 mau2 jo2 ki1 ra1 waa2 ni2 hai2

5] hum aapki anko me is dil ko basaa de to
Hum2 aa2 p1 ki1 an2 kho2 me2 is2 di2l ko1 ba1 saa2 de2 to2

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8 ) 221 / 1221 / 1221 / 122
hazaj musamman aḳhrab makfuf maḥżuf

1] dushman na kare dost ne ye kaam kiya hai
Dus2 man2 na1 ka1 re2 dos2 t1 ne1 ye2 kaa2 m1 ki1 ya2 hai2

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9) 221/1212/122

( hazaj musaddas aḳhrab maqbuẓ maḥzuf)

Isse milta julta beher hai 22 / 122 // 22 / 122
(no.1) on this list

Can be used interchangeably

Jab example mil jayega tab post kar dunga

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10 ) 2122 / 2122 / 2122 / 212
( ramal musamman maḥzuf)

1] yaari hai imaan mera yaar meri zindgi
Yaa2 ri1 hai2 ee2 maa2 n1 me2 ra2 yaa2 r1 me2 ri2 zin2 d1 gi2

2]manzilen apni jagah hai raaste apni jagah
Man2 zi1 len2 ap2 ni2 ja1 gah2 hai2 raa2 s1 te2 ap2 ni2 ja1 gah2

3]chupke chupke raat din aasu bahanaa yaad hai
Chup2 ke1 chup2 ke2 raa2 t1 din2 aa2 su2 ba1 haa2 naa2 yaa2 d1 hai2

4]sarfaroshi ki tamanna ab hamaare dil me hai
Sar2 fa1 ros2 hi2 ki2 ta1 man2 na2 ab2 ha1 maa2 re2 dil2 me1 hai2

5]aapki nazron ne samjha pyaar ke kaabil hame
Aa2 p1 ki2 naz2 ron2 ne1 sam2 jha2 pyaa2 r1 ke2 kaa2 bi2l ha1 me2

6]hosh walo ko khabar kya bekhudi kya cheez hai
Hos2 h1 waa2 lo2 ko2 kha1 bar2 kya2 be2 khu1 di2 kya2 chee2 z1 hai1

7] dil ke Tukde Tukde karke muskura ke chal diye
Dil2 ke1 Tuk2 de2 Tuk2 de1 kar2 ke2 mus2 ku1 raa2 ke2 chal2 di1 ye2

10.A]2122 /2122/2122(non-standard)

1] chor do aanchal zamaana kya kahega
Cho2 d1 do2 aan2 chal2 za1 maa2 naa2 kya2 ka1 he2 gaa2

2]tu ganga ki mauj mai jamnaa kinaara
Tu2 gan1 gaa2 ki2 mau2 j1 mai2 jam2 naa2 ki1 naa2 raa2

3] angrezi me kahte hai ki I luv you
Ang2 re1 zi2 me2 kah2 te1 hai2 ki2 aa2 I1 luv2 you2

10.B] 2122/2122/2122/2( non standard)

1]bus yehi apradh mai har baar karta hu
Bus2 ye1hi2 ap2 raa2 dh1 mai2 ha2r baa2 r1 kar2 ta2 hu2

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11) 2122 / 2122 / 212
( ramal musaddas maḥzuf)

1]dilke armaa aasuoo me bah gaye
Dil2 ke1 ar2 maa2 aa2 su1 oo2 me2 bah2 ga1 ye2

2] hai agar dushman zamaana gum nahi
Hai2 a1 gar2 dush2 man2 za1 maa2 naa2 gum2 na1 hi2

3]aik din bik jayega maati ke mol
Ai2 k1 din2 bik2 ja2 ye1 ga2 maa2 ti2 ke1 mo2 (l)

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12 ) 212 212 212 212
( mutadarik musamman salim )
Sometimes doubled and employed with 8 arkans

1]har taraf har jagah beshumaar_aadmi
Har2 ta1 raf2 har2 ja1 gah2 be2 shu1 maa2 r_aa2 d1 mi2

2]kar chale hum fida jano tan sathiyon
Kar2 cha1 le2 hum2 fi1 da2 jaa2 no1 tan2 saa2 thi1 yo2

3]khush rahe tu sadaa ye duaa hai meri
Khush2 ra1 he2 tu2 sa1 daa2 ye2 du1 aa2 hai2 me1 ri2

4] aapki yaad aati rahi raat bhar
Aa2 p1 ki2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ti2 ra1 hi2 raa2 t1 bhar2

5]geet gaata hu mai gungunaata hu mai
Gee2 t1 gaa2 taa2 hu1 mai2 gun2 gu1 naa2 taa2 hu1 mai2

6]bekhudi me sanam uth gaye jo kadam
Be2 khu1 di2 me2 sa1 nam2 uth2 ga1 ye2 jo2 ka1 dam2

7] aik ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ai2 k1 lad2 ki2 ko1 de2 kha2 to1 ai2 sa2 la1 ga 2

12A] 212/212/212/212/212(5 arkaan)(non standard)
1] zindagi ke safar me gujar jaate hai jo makaa(m)
Zin2 d1 gi2 k2e sa1 fa2r me2 gu1 zar2 jaa2 te1 hai2 jo2 mu1kaa2(m)


12B] 212/212/212( 3 arkaan)( non standard)
1]zindgi pyaar ka geet hai
Zin2 d1 gi2 pyaa2 r1 ka2 gee2 t1 hai2

2]aaj jaane ki zid naa karo
Aa2 j1 jaa2 ne2 ki1 zidd2 naa2 ka1 ro2

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13 ) 212 / 212 / 212 / 2
( mutadarik musamman maqtu maḥzuf)

1]raat bhar ka hai mehmaa andheraa
Raa2 t1 bhar2 ka2 hai1 meh2 maa2 an1 dhe2 raa2

2] aaj socha to aasu bha.r_aaye*
Aa2 j1 so2 cha2 to1 aa2 su2 bha1 r_aa2 ye2

3] jaa raha hai wafa ka janaaza
Jaa2 ra1 haa2 hai2 wa1 faa2 kaa2 ja1 naa2 zaa2

*= yaha wazn shift hone ka case hai….yaha bhar=2 magar join hone ke wajah se syllable change ho gaya. Bhar aaye ki bajai bha.r_aa .ye ban gaya aur bha ka wazn change ho gaya 1 me
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14) 2122 /1212 / 22
(ḳhafif musaddas maḳhbun maḥzuf maqt̤u)

Ye bahut flexible beh’r hai. Yaha niche diye gaye sab wazn ko interchange karke koi bhi line likhi j sakti ha

1122/1212/22
2122/1212/112
1122/1212/112

1]tumko dekha to ye khayal_aaya
Tum2 ko1 de2 kha2 to1 ye2 kha1 yaa2 l_aa2 yaa2

2]dile naadaa tujhe hua kya hai
Di1 le1 naa2 daa2 tu1 jhe2 hu1 aa2 kya2 hai2

3]jab bhi ye dil udas hota hai
Jab2 bhi1 ye2 dil2 u1 daa2 s1 ho2 ta2 hai2

4]aap jinke kareeb hote hai
Aa2 p1 jin2 ke2 ka1 ree2 b1 ho2 te2 hai2

5]ye mulakat ik bahaana hai
Ye2 mu1 laa2 kaa2 t1 ik2 ba1 haa2 naa2 hai2

6] aaj phir jeene ki tamanna hai
Aa2 j1 phi2r jee2 nee1 ki2 ta1 man2 na2 hai2

7] yuhi tum mujse baat karti ho
Yu2 hi1 tum2 muj2 se 1baa2 t1 kar2 ti2 ho2

8] mai hawaa hu kaha watan mera
Mai2 ha1 waa2 hu2 ka 1haa2 wa 1tan2 me2 raa2

15) 2122/ 1212/112
( ḳhafif musaddas maḳhbun maḥzuf)
Upar wale beher ka hi variation …see above
Interchangeable 14 and 15 in all its variations

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16 ) 2122 / 1122 / 22 or 1122 1122 22
( ramal musaddas maḳhbn maḥzuf maqt̤u )
and
17 )2122 1122 112 or 1122 1122 112
( ramal musaddas maḳhbun maḥzuf )

1] aapke qadmo me aakar ro diye
Aa2 p1 ke2 qad2 mo1 me1 aa2 ka2r ro1 di2 ye2

16 and 17 are interchangeable with each other in all its variations
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18 ) 2122 / 1122 / 1122 / 22
( ramal musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf maqt̤u

1]mera to jo bhi kadam hai vo teri rah me hai
Me2raa1 to2 jo2 bhi1 ka1 dam2 hai2 vo1 te1 ri2 rah2 me2 hai2

2]kabhi khud pe kabhi haalaat pe rona aaya
Ka1 bhi1 khud2 pe2 ka1 bhi1 haa2 laa2 t1 pe1 ro2 na2 aa2 yaa2

3] chunri sambhal gori udi chali jaaye re
Chun2 ri1 san2 bhaa2 l1 go1 ri2 uu2 di1 uu1 di2 jaa 2 ye2 re2

4] koi faryaad tere dil me dabi ho jaise
Ko2 I1 fa2r yaa2 d1 te1 re2 dil2 me1 da1 bi2 ho2 jai2 se2

Both these 18 and 19 are interchangeable behers…
The first syllable may also start with 1 i.e
1122 / 1122 / 1122/ 112 or 22

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19) 2122 / 1122 / 1122 / 112
(ramal musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf)

1]koi humdum na raha koi sahaara na raha
Ko2 I1 hum2 dum2 na1 ra1 ha2 ko2 I1 sa1 haa2 raa2 na1 ra1 haa2


2]humse aaya na gaya tumse bulaaya na gaya
Hum2 se1 aa2 yaa2 na1 ga1 yaa2 tum2 se1 bu1 laa2 yaa2 na1 ga1 yaa2

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20) 212/ 1222 / 212/ 1222
( hazaj musamman ashtar)

1]kya huaa tera vaada vo kasam vo irada
Kya2 hu1 aa2 te1 raa2 vaa2 daa2 vo2 ka1 sam2 vo1 ee2 raa2 daa2

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21) 212/1212//212/1212
( hazaj musamman ashtar maqbuz)

1] jhuumti chali hawa yaad aa gaya koi
Jhu2 m1 ti2 cha1 li2 ha1 waa2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ga1 yaa2 ko1 i2

2]hum to jaate apne gaa(v) sabko ram ram ra/m
Hum2 to1 jaa2 te1 ap2 ne1 gaa2(v)// sab2 ko1 raa2 m1 raa2 m1 raa2 (m)


You will see that the’v’ in gaav is left un accounted for’
An extra short syllable is allowed without accounting for it if it comes just before the compulsory stoppage sign( //=compulsory stoppage symbol)

3] dost dost naa raha pyaar pyaar naa raha
Dos2 t1 dos2 t1 naa2 ra1 haa2// pyaa2 r1 pyaa2 r1 naa2 ra1 haa2

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22 )2112 / 212 / 2112 / 212
(munsariḥ musamman mat̤vi maksuf )
Sorry no examples….will add later
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23 )2112 / 2121 / 2112 / 2
( munsariḥ musamman mat̤vi manḥur)

1] panchi banuu udti phiru mast gagan me
Pan2 chi1 ba1 nu2 ud2 ti1 phi2 ru1 mas2 t1 ga1 gan2 me2

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24 )2112 2112 212
(sari musaddas mat̤vi maksuf

Sorry no examples…will add later

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25 ) 2112 / 1212 / 2112 / 1212
( rajaz musamman mat̤vi maḳhbun)

1] jaane kaha gaye vo din kahte the tere yaad me~
Jaa2 ne1 ka1 haa2 ga1 ye2 vo1 din2 // kah2 te1 the1 te2 ri1 yaa2 d1 me2

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26 )1222 / 1222/ 1222 / 1222
( hazaj musamman salim )

1]muhabbat ho gayi jinko vo parvaane kaha jaaye
Mu1 hab2 ba2t ho2 ga1 yi2 jin2 ko2 vo1 par2 waa2 ne2 ka1 ha2 jaa2 ye2

2]mujhe teri muhabbat ka sahaara mil gaya hota
Mu1 jhe2 te2 ri2 mu1 hab2 ba2 ka2 sa1 haa2 raa2 mil2 ga1 yaa2 ho2 taa2

3]chalo ik baar phirse ajnabi ban jaye humdono
Cha1 lo2 ik2 baa2 r1 phir2 se2 aj2 na1 b2i ban2 jaa2 ye1 hum2 do2 no2

4]khuda bhi aasmaa se jab zamii par dekhta hoga
Khu1 daa2 bhi2 aa2 s1 maa2 se2 jab2 za1 mee2 par2 de2 kh1 taa2 ho2 gaa2

6]suhaani raat dhal chuki na jaane tum kab_aaooge
Su1 haa2 ni2 raa2 t1 dhal2 chu2 ki2 na1 jaa2 ne2 tum2 ka1 b_aa2 oo2 ge2

7]kabhi tanhaiiyon me bhi hamaari yaad aayegi
Ka1 bh2i tan2 hai2 ii1 yo2 me2 bhi2 ha1 maa2 ri2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2 gi2

Note: extra short syllable at the end of the line which is allowed in all behers is not allowed in this beher.this beher is the only exception..

26A] 1222/1222/1222(non standard)

1] poocho naa maine kaise rain bitaii
Po1 cho2 naa2 mai2 ne1 kai2 se2 rai2 n1 bi2 ta2 ii2

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27) 1222 / 1222 / 122
( hazaj musaddas maḥżuf)

1]muhabbat karne wale kam na honge
Mu1 hab2 ba2t ka2r ne1 waa2 le2 kam2 na1 hon2 ge2

2] mere hantho me nau nau chudiyan hai
Me1 re2 haa2 tho2 me1 nau2 nau2 chu2 di1 yaa2 hai2

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28 ) 122 / 122 / 122 / 122
( mutaqarib musamman salim)

1]muhabbat ki jhooti kahaani pe roye
Mu1 hab2 bat2 ki1 jhu2 ti2 ka1 haa2 ni2 pe1 roo2 ye2

2]sambhaala hai maine bahut apne dil ko
Sam1 bha2 laa2 hai1 mai2 ne2 ba1 hut2 ap2 ne1 dil2 ko2

3] ye daulat bhi lelo ye shaurat bhi lelo
Ye1 dau2 lat2 bhi1 le2 lo2 ye1 soh2 rat2 bhi1 le2 lo2

4] jo tum aa gaye ho to noor_aa gaya hai
Jo1 tum2 aa2 ga1 ye2 ho2 to1 noo2 r_aa2 ga1 ya2 hai2

5] jawaani ka unko khayal_aa raha hai
Ja1 waa2 ni2 ka1 un2 ko2 kha1 ya 2l_aa2 ra1 ha a2 hai2

6] ye mana meri jaa muhabbat saza hai
Ye1 maa2 naa2 me1 ri2 jaa2 mu1 hab2 bat2 sa1 zaa2 hai2

7] mere sapno ki rani kab aaye gi tu
Me1 re2 sap2 no1 ki2 raa2 ni1 kab2 aa2 ye1 gi2 tu2

8] jo vada kiya vo nibhana padega
Jo1 vaa2 da2 ki1 ya2 vo2 ni1 bha2 na2 pa1 de2 ga2


9] vo jab yaad aaye bahut yaad aaye
Vo1 jab2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2 ba1hut2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2

10] jinhe naaz hai hind par vo kaha hai
Ji1 nhe2 naa2 z 1hai2 hin2 d1 par2 vo2 ka1 haa2 hai2

11] mubaarak ho tumko samaa ye suhaana
Mu1 baa2 rak2 ho1 tum2 ko2 sa1 maa2 ye2 su1 haa2 na2

12] bane chahe dushman zamaana hamaara
ba1 ne2 cha2 he1 dush2 man2 za1 maa2 na2 ha1maa2 ra2

28A]122/122/122/122/122/12(non standard)

1] ye raatein ye mosam nadi ka kinaara ye chanchal hawa
Ye1 raa2 tein2 ye1 mo2 sam2 na1 di2 ka2 ki1 naa2 ra2 ye1 chan2 chal2 ha1 waa2

28B] 122/122/122(non standard)

mile suur tera hamaara
mi1 le2 suu2 r1 te2 ra2 ha1 maa2 ra2

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29 ) 122 / 122 / 122 / 12
( mutaqarib musamman maḥzuf)

1]suhaana safar aur ye mousam hasi
Su1 haa2 na2 sa1 far2 au2 r1 ye1 mou2 sam2 ha1 si2

2]badan pe sitaare lapete huye
Ba1 dan2 pe2 si1 taa2 re2 la1 pe2 te2 hu1 ye2

3]mere dost kissa ye kya ho gayaa
Me1 re2 dos2 t1 kis2 sa2 ye1 kya2 ho2 ga1 yaa2
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30 )121 / 22 / 121 / 22 / 121 / 22 / 121 /22 /
( mutaqarib musamman muẓaf maqbuz aslam )

1]na jaoo saiiya chudake baiyya kasam tumhari mai ro padungi
Na1 ja2 oo1 saii2 ya1 chu1 daa2 ke1 baiy2 ya2 ka1 sam2 tu1 mha2 ri1 mai1 ro2 pa1 dun2 gi2

2] na aadmi ka koi bharosa na dosti ka koi thikana
Na1 aa2 d1 mi2 ka2 ko1 i2 bha1 ro2 saa2 na1 do2 s1 ti2 ka2 ko1 i2 thi1 ka2 na2

3]tumhari aanko me hamne dekha wafa ki shabnam jhalak rahi hai
Tu1 mha2 ri1 aan2 ko2 me1 ham2 ne1 de2 kha2 wa1 faa2 ki1 shab2 nam2 jha1 lak2 ra1 hi2 hai2

4] zihale masti makun baranjish kitabe hijra hamara dil hai
Zi1 haa2 le1 mas2 t2i ma1 kun2 ba1 ran2 jish2 ki1 taa2 be1 hij2 raa2 ha1 maa2 ra1 dil 2 hai2

5]tumhari dunya se jaa rahe hai utho hamara salaam le lo
Tu1 mha2 ri1 dun2 ya2 se1 jaa2 ra1 he2 hai2 u1 tho2 ha1 maa2 raa2 sa1 laa2 m1 le2 lo2
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31) 121/ 22/ 121/ 22/ 121/ 22
( mutaqarib musaddas muẓaf maqbuz aslam )

This beher is with 6 rather than above 8 arkans(similar beher)
No example found yet

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32) 1212 / 1212 / 1212 / 1212
( hazaj musamman mazbuz )

1]abhi na jaoo chor kar ke dil abhi bhara nahi
A1 bhi2 na1 jaa2 oo1 cho2 d1 kar2 ke1 dil2 a1 bhi2 bha1 raa2 na1 hi2

2]qadam qadam badaye jaa khushi ke geet gaiye jaa
Qa1 dam2 qa1 dam2 ba1 daa2 ye1 jaa2 khu 1shi2 ke1 gee2 t1 ga2 ye1 jaa2

3] pukaarta chala hun mai gali gali dagar dagar
Pu1 kaa2 r1 taa2 cha1 laa2 hu1 mai2 ga1 li2 ga1 li2 da1 gar2 da1 gar2

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33) 1212/1122/1212/22
( mujtas musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf maqt̤u)

May be used interchangeable with next beher
1212/1122/1212/112

1]karoge yaad to har baat yaad aayegi
Ka1 ro2 ge1 yaa2 d1 to1 har2 baa2 t1 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2 gi2

2]kabhi kisiko mukammal jahaa nahi milta
Ka1 bhi2 ki1 si2/ ko1 mu1 kam2 mal2 ja1 haa2 na1 hi2 mil1 ta2

and

34) 1212 / 1122 / 1212 / 112
( mujtas musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf)
May be used interchangeable with above=1212/1122/1212/22

1]gulon me rang bhare bade naubahaar chale
Gu1 lon2 me1 ran2 g1 bha1 re2 baa2 de1 nau2 ba1 haa2 r1 cha1 le2

2]mere naseeb me ai dost tera pyaar nahi
Me1 re2 na1 see2 b1 me1 ai2 dos2 t1 te2 ra1 pyaa2 r1 na1 hi2

3] jhuki jhuki si nazar bekaraar hai ke nahi
Jhu1 k2i jhu1 ki2 si1 na1 za2r be2 ka1 raa2 r1 hai1 ke1 na1 hi2

4]ruke ruke se kadam ruk ke baar baar chale
Ru1 ke2 ru1 ke2 se1 ka1 dam2 ruk2 ke1 baa2 r1 baa2 r1 cha2 le2

5] kisi nazar ko tera intezaar aaj bhi hai
Ki1 si2 na1 za2r ko1 te2 raa2 in2 te1 zaa2 r 1aa2 j1 bhi1 hai2

6] na tu zamee keliye hai na aasmaa ke liye
na1 tu2 za1 mee2 ke1 li1 ye2 hai2 na1 aa2 s1 maa2 ke1 li1 ye2

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35 )1212 / 1122 / 1212 / 1122
( mujtas musamman maḳhbun)

No examples yet..will add later

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36) 1121 / 2122 / 1121 / 2122
(ramal musamman mashkul)

1]raha gardisho me hardum mere ishq ka sitaraa
Ra1 haa1 gar2 di1 sho2 me1 har2 dum2// me1 re1 ish2 q1 ka2 si1 taa2 raa2

2]ye na thi hamari kismat ke visaale yaar hota
Ye1 na1 thi2 ha1 maa2 ri1 kis2 mat2 ke1 vi1 saa2 le1 yaa2 r1 ho2 ta2

36A] 1121/2122( non standard)

1] ye jawaani hai diwaani~
Ye1 ja1 waa2/ hai2 di1 waa2 ni2

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37 )11212 / 11212 / 11212 / 11212 /
( kamil musamman salim )

1]mere hum nafas mere humnawa mujhe dost bake daga na de
Me1 re1 hum2 na1 fas2 me1 re1 hum2 na1 waa2 mu1 jhe1 dos2 t1 ban2 ke1 da1 gaa2 na1 de2

2] vo jo humme tumme qaraar tha tumhe yaad ho ke na yaad ho
Vo1 jo1 hum2 me1 tum2 me1 qa1 raa2 r1 tha2 tu1 mhe1 yaa2 d1 ho2 ke1 na1 yaa2 d 1 ho2

3]mujhe tumse kuch bhi na chaiye mujhe mere haal pe **** do
Mu1 jhe1 tum2 se1 kuch2 bhi1 na1 cha2 I1 ye2 mu1 jhe1 me2 re1 haa2 l1 pe1 cho2 do2

4]mai khayal hu kisi aur ka mujhe sochta koi aur hai
Mai1 kha1 yaa2 l1 hu2 ki1 si1 au2 r1 ka2 mu1 jhe1 soc2 h1 ta2 ko1 i1 au2 r1 hai2

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mai koi professional writer to hu nahi isliye kahi kahi kisiko language follow karne me dikkat ho to aap be jhijak pooch lijiyega
Yaha examples filmi geet ka hai..mostly aisa hoga ki bataii gayi line hi us beher me ho aur baki ka gana na ho( aksar aisa hoga)
Kuch concepts par abhi nahi aaye hai jab time ayega tab dekhenge…
Once again
agar koi example yaha wrong ho ya koi typo ho to usse jarur point out kijiyega
BEST OF LUCK…..

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aapka b'ehr seekhane ka yeh pehla kadam.......naye likhne waalon ke liye vardaan saabiit hoga......aapki b'ehr ki class ka ek student main bhi hu......aashirvaad di jiye......

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Thanks bhayee for all this ..

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222 / 212 / 122
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mere hisaab se aap is beher se start mat kariye....
ye ek rare beher hai
sabse best hoga 'tumko dekha 'ke e.g wala beher
usme examples bhi bahut hai aur bahut flexible hai.....

2122 1212 22
1122 1212 22
2122 1212 112
1122 1212 112

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kuch dosto ne PM par aha hai ki ye bahut lenghty hai aur vo confuse ho rahe hai........
isliye is thread ko 3 parts me baTta hu....

jo dost confuse ho rahe hai vo seedhe part 1 se part 3 par chale jayen
part 2 baad me dekhe thode practice ke baad



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Ghazal kahne ki ek semi unusual tarika batata hu…jisko mai follow karta hu..(kuch hadd tak)

(coz the audience for this article is intended to be new learners I have not used the roman hindi editor…coz I remember how difficult it was to read it)

Ye ek tarah se mere limited experience ka nichor hai….ye sirf naye logo ke liye hai…advanced learners ke liye nahi.kyuki baat yaha bahut elementary hai..ye sirf naye logo ko start dene ka ek tarika hai(bahut tariko me

se)….bahut si baate yaha over simplification hai jo bahut bariki se dekhe to naqis sabit ho sakti hai…magar jaisa maine pahle kaha ye naye logo ke liye hai…jab vo log advanced ho jaye to apne aap bariki samaj jayenge

Yaha beh’r ki ek list hai….aap samaj lijiye ki 99% ghazals, mashoor shayaro ki kahi, isi list ki koi ek behr istemaal karti hai..meri gujaarish hai aap bhi shuruaat me inhi me se kisi beher ka istemaal kare.n ghazal kahte huye…

Ise use karne ka sabse asaan tarika ye hai ki aap koi bhi ek gana chosse kijiye….uski dhun apne man me gungunaiye 1-2 din tak…awaaz ke saath bhi gungunaiye 1-2 din tak….phir us dhun par apna kaha koi sentence

chadaiye….tab tak polish kijiye jab tak saari atak-khatak nikal jaye aur aapke words us dhun me shakkar ki tarah ghul jaye…bus yehi beher hai…yehi wazn me hona hai….aur agar apke words us dhun se out ho gaye to apka misra us beher se out kahlaayega….wazn se naqis kahlaayega….



ITS ACTUALLY THAT SIMPLE

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But some people may want to check the correctness of their attempt with some objective yardstick….isliye maine us dhun ki taktee include ki hai..now the question is what is a taktee?

BUT KINDLY NOTE BEHER WAHI HAI JO UPAR BATAYA HAI.

.beher ke tools ko beher ka essential requirement nahi samajna chaiye…galib sahib ko to pata bhi nahi hoga ki taktee kya cheez hai..un logo ke paas to koi tool bhi nahi tha siwai khud ka koi dhun man me banaane ke siwai…yaha to dhun bhi ready made hai apke liye

Well ,taktee is breaking of the line into its syllables…for the present purpose and for most purposes(other than scholarly) it will suffice that there are 2 types of syllables

Long and short

It is not in the scope of this article to go very deeply into its intricacies…all I have to say is that when a person swims it is not necessary for him to know what muscles in the body are making him swim or by what chemical reactions of the brain the commands are given to the muscles to move in a specified manner

But a serious budding shayar should know taktee …

Some thoughts about taktee:

All syllables in a line will be either long or short and long syllable is =2 and short syllable is=1( in an another era the same thing was denoted by words …for e.g the below all give the same map

Faa-i-laa-tun( faa=long: i=short: laa=long:tun=long)

Tan-ta -naa -tan (tan=long: ta=short: naa=long:tan=long

Daa-da-dum-dum=( daa=long: da=short: dum=long:dum=long

2122(2=long: 1=short: 2=long:2=long)

There is simply no demerit in using the digital variant…as it is easier for newcomers….some people use words( faa-i-laa-tun) out of sheer habit and some out of vanity(my opinion) and then they translate the words in figures in their minds….(but in the beginning( and perhaps at whatever stage) whats the point?

So a taktee of a line is the map of that line broken in a sequence of short and long syllable.

Most syllable are flexible ..i.e they may either be used as long or short in a given line as per the requirement of the map i.e the beher

For e.g the word ‘koee’ is two syllable=ko-ee and it is totally flexible it can be 11 or 22 or12 or21 as required by the beher

Supposing the map (beher) is 1212 / 1212 / 1212 / 1212( this is a standard beher with a name but you simply don’t need to know it ,after all whats there in a name ,even withot its name that beher will exist like you will exist , even if you change your name!....not knowing the names of the beher will not in the least hinder you)

So 1212 / 1212 /1212/1212

Is short long short long/slsl/slsl/slsl….e,g

Ye zindegi sawaal hai ke zindegi jawaab hai

Ye1-zin2-de1-gi2/sa1-waa2-l1-hai2/ke1-zin2-de1-gi2/ja1-waa2-b1-hai2

Best way to learn taktee is to go the reverse way…generally people take a line and laboriously write it down and put the numbers(weights1-2) ,but in my experience this method is inadequate (to say the least) coz thr person is always confused about the correctness of weights and requires constant supervision from someone(which may noy be always available) and then gets frustrated and may quit the activity

I suggest the learner take up individual behers and find ghazals in that beher….there is enough material on the net for this exercise.mera yakeen hai agar aap 100 ghazal ko note kare to aap 99% taktee seekh jayenge.is se apko koi guide ki bhi jarurat nahi hogi coz the answer is always in front of you..you need not even write it..you simply have to move the cursor over the digital taktee trying to fit the syllables,if you make a mistake the map will correct you automatically…this way you will gradually come to know the syllable break-up and the weights allotted to each syllable and which syllables have flexible weights( and which similar syllable can have flexible weights) for e.g



2122 2122 2122 212
2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2 2 2 1 2
Chup ke chup ke raa t din aa suu ba haa naa yaa d hai
Hum ko ab tak aa shi ki ka vo za maa naa yaa d hai

Jaisa ki aap dekh rahe hai upar jo apke first line ka map(beher) hai..wahi sare lines me hona chaiye

Ab saare beher ki ek list dikhata hu unke filmi dhun ke examples ke saath…
Best of luck



1] 222 / 212 / 122
hazaj musaddas aḳhram ashtar maḥzuf


1]meraa dil ye pukaare aajaa
Me2 raa2 dil2/ ye2 pu1 kaa2/ re1 aa2 jaa2

2]kaun_aaya tere mann ke dware*
Kau2 n_aa2 yaa2/ te2 re1 man2/ ke1 dwa2 re1

Note: isse milta julta beher hai 221/1212/122
Ye dono apas me hum wazn hai…matlab aap in dono beher ko ek hi kalaam me interchange kar sakte hai

*=yaha note kijiye ek word ke part ko dusre se joda hai.
Generally kaun aaya ka wazn hai=2122( kau2 / n1/aa2/yaa2)
Magar yaha ise beher me fit karne ke liye do alag word ke kuch parts ko jod diya hai jo ki jayaz hai…lekin aisa karma koi compulsion nahi hai agar apko wazn 2122 ka chaiye to vo bhi aap le sdakte hai aur 222 bhi jaisa ki yaha kiya hai

Ap gaur kijiye ki aisa karne se apko 1 syllable extra use karne ke liye mila hai bus ye dhyan rakhna hoga ki aisa hamesha nahi kar sakte…

Agar koi word consonant me khatm ho raha hai aur agla word vowel me shuru ho raha ho tab ye possible hai jaise …kaun aaya ka kau.n_aa.yaa

Ya to koi word vowel me khatm hota ho aur dusra word same vowel(and sound) me shuru hota ho jaise : ya aaiina ka ‘ya_a.ii.naa’ ban gaya yaaiina( padne ke liye)(note kijiye yaha bhi 4 syllables ka 3 syllables ho gaya)


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2) 22 / 122 // 22 / 122
( mutaqarib musamman asram)

1] mitwaa re mitwaa purab na jayyo
Mit2 waa2 re1 mit2 waa2//pu2 rab2 na1 jay2 yo2
Note: //=means compulsory stoppage..apka word is spot par khatm hona hi chaiye

See no 21for further detail

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3) 2212 / 2212 / 2212 / 2212
( rajaz musamman salim )

1]ik raasta hai zindagi jo tham gaye to kuch nahi
Ik2 raa2 s1 taa2/ hai2 zin2 d1 gi2/ jo2 tham2 ga1 ye2 /to2 kuch2 na1 hi2

2]kal chaudvi ki raat thi shab bhar raha charcha tera
Kal2 chau2 dh1 vi2/ ki2 raa2 t1 thi2/ shab2 bhar2 ra1 haa2/ char2 cha2 te1 raa2

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4) 221 / 2122 // 221/2122
( muzari musamman aḳhrab )

1]saare jahaa se accha hindustaa hamaara
Saa2 re2 ja1/haa2 se1 acch2 haa2//hin2 du2 s1/ taa2 ha1 maa2 raa2

2] o dur ke musafir humko bhi saath le le~
O2 duu2 r1/ke2 mu1 saa2 fir2//hum2 ko2 bhi1/saat2 th1 le2 le2

3] ye zindagi ke mele dunya me kam na honge
Ye2 zin2 d1/gi2 ke1 me2 le2// dun2 yaa2 me1/ kam2 na1 hon2 ge2

4]guzra hua zamaana aata nahi dubaara
Guz2 raa2 hu1/ aa2 za1 maa2 naa2// aa2 taa2 na1 //hi2 do1 baa2 raa2

5] takdeer ka fasana jakar kisi sunaye
Tak2 dee2 r1 /ka2 fa1 saa2 naa2// jaa2 kar2 ki1/ se2 su1 naa2 ye2

6] gaadi bulaa rahi hai seetee bajaa rahi hai
Gaa2 d2i bu1/ laa2 ra1 hi2 hai2// see2 tee2 ba1/ jaa2 ra1 hi2 hai2

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5 )221 / 2121 /1221 /212
( muẓari musamman aḳhrab makfuf maḥzuf)

1]pahle to apne dil ki raza jaan jaiye
Pah2 le2 to1/ ap2 ni1 dil2 ki1/ ra1 zaa2 jaa2 n1/ jaa2 i1 ye2

2]lag jaa gale ke phir ye hasi raat ho na ho
Lag2 jaa2 ga1/ le2 ke1 phi2r ye1/ ha1 si2 raa2 t1/ ho2 na1 ho2

3]hum laaye hai tufaan se kashti nikal ke
Hum2 laa2 ye1/ hai2 tu1 faa2 n1/ se1 kas2 ti2 ni1 /kaa2 l1 ke2

4]sab kuch lutaa ke hosh me aaye to kya kiya
Sab2 kuch2 lu1 ta2 ke1 hos2 h1 me1 aa2 ye2 to1 kya2 ki1 yaa2

5] dekha hai zindgi ko kuch itne kareeb se
De2 kha2 hai1 zin2 d1 g2i ko1 ku1 ch_it2 ne1 ka1 ree2 b1 se2

6] mai zindagi ka saath nibhaata chala gaya
Mai2 zin2 d1 gi2 ka1 saa2 th1 ni1 bha2 ta2 cha1 laa2 ga1 yaa2

5A] 221/2121/1221/2(1)( non standard)

1]solah baras ki baali umar ko salaam
So2 laa2 ba1 ras2 ki1 baa2 li1 u1 ma2r ko2 sa1 laa2 (m)*

Ap dekh rahe hai ki yaha salaam ka ‘m’ ko aise hi chor diya bina wazn diye…
Ye ek exception hai jo sab beher me allowed hai..
yaha har line ka last lafz ka last syllable agar extra short^ hai to use wazn me nahi gina jayega..ye exception har beher me hai siwai 1 beher( yaha beher no.26)
^=definition of extra short for e,g

Haath ka ‘th’ magar haathi ka ‘thi’ nahi
Gaav ka ‘v’
Honge ka ‘ge’ jaise syllables yaha applicable nahi hai..’chalo’ ka ‘lo’ applicable nahi hai

Magar harf ka ‘f’ karz ka ‘z’ jaise applicable hai

Note2: non standard means there is no such traditional beher..but as its very close to the said beher and I have found example of it hence I have included it in the required column…generally it is addition or substraction of the standard arkaan

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6 ) 22 / 112 / 22 /22 /22/ 112 / 22 / 22
( mutadarik musamman muẓaaf maqt̤u maḳhbun )

Very rare and maverick beh’r.ghazalon me use nahi hota..yaha har arkaan ke starting 2 ko aap kisi bhi combination me 1-1 me break kar sakte hai..mostly used in hindi

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7 221 / 1222// 221 / 1222
( hazaj musamman aḳhrab).

1] hum tumse judaa hoke mar jayenge ro ro ke
Hum2 tum2 se1 ju1 daa2 ho2 ke2 mar2 ja2 yen1 ge1 ro2 ro2 ke2

2]jab deep jale aana jab shaam dhale jaana
Jab2 dee2 p1 ja1 le2 aa2 naa2 jab2 shaa2 m1 dha1 le2 jaa2 na2

3] saahil se khuda hafiz jab tumne kaha hoga
Saa2 hil2 se1 khu1 daa2 haa2 fiz2 jab2 tum2 ne1 ka1 haa2 ho2 ga2

4]ik pyaar ka nagma hai maujo ki rawaani hai
Ik2 pyaa2 1r ka1 nag2 maa2 hai2 mau2 jo2 ki1 ra1 waa2 ni2 hai2

5] hum aapki anko me is dil ko basaa de to
Hum2 aa2 p1 ki1 an2 kho2 me2 is2 di2l ko1 ba1 saa2 de2 to2

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8 ) 221 / 1221 / 1221 / 122
hazaj musamman aḳhrab makfuf maḥżuf

1] dushman na kare dost ne ye kaam kiya hai
Dus2 man2 na1 ka1 re2 dos2 t1 ne1 ye2 kaa2 m1 ki1 ya2 hai2

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9) 221/1212/122

( hazaj musaddas aḳhrab maqbuẓ maḥzuf)

Isse milta julta beher hai 22 / 122 // 22 / 122
(no.1) on this list

Can be used interchangeably

Jab example mil jayega tab post kar dunga

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10 ) 2122 / 2122 / 2122 / 212
( ramal musamman maḥzuf)

1] yaari hai imaan mera yaar meri zindgi
Yaa2 ri1 hai2 ee2 maa2 n1 me2 ra2 yaa2 r1 me2 ri2 zin2 d1 gi2

2]manzilen apni jagah hai raaste apni jagah
Man2 zi1 len2 ap2 ni2 ja1 gah2 hai2 raa2 s1 te2 ap2 ni2 ja1 gah2

3]chupke chupke raat din aasu bahanaa yaad hai
Chup2 ke1 chup2 ke2 raa2 t1 din2 aa2 su2 ba1 haa2 naa2 yaa2 d1 hai2

4]sarfaroshi ki tamanna ab hamaare dil me hai
Sar2 fa1 ros2 hi2 ki2 ta1 man2 na2 ab2 ha1 maa2 re2 dil2 me1 hai2

5]aapki nazron ne samjha pyaar ke kaabil hame
Aa2 p1 ki2 naz2 ron2 ne1 sam2 jha2 pyaa2 r1 ke2 kaa2 bi2l ha1 me2

6]hosh walo ko khabar kya bekhudi kya cheez hai
Hos2 h1 waa2 lo2 ko2 kha1 bar2 kya2 be2 khu1 di2 kya2 chee2 z1 hai1

7] dil ke Tukde Tukde karke muskura ke chal diye
Dil2 ke1 Tuk2 de2 Tuk2 de1 kar2 ke2 mus2 ku1 raa2 ke2 chal2 di1 ye2

10.A]2122 /2122/2122(non-standard)

1] chor do aanchal zamaana kya kahega
Cho2 d1 do2 aan2 chal2 za1 maa2 naa2 kya2 ka1 he2 gaa2

2]tu ganga ki mauj mai jamnaa kinaara
Tu2 gan1 gaa2 ki2 mau2 j1 mai2 jam2 naa2 ki1 naa2 raa2

3] angrezi me kahte hai ki I luv you
Ang2 re1 zi2 me2 kah2 te1 hai2 ki2 aa2 I1 luv2 you2

10.B] 2122/2122/2122/2( non standard)

1]bus yehi apradh mai har baar karta hu
Bus2 ye1hi2 ap2 raa2 dh1 mai2 ha2r baa2 r1 kar2 ta2 hu2

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11) 2122 / 2122 / 212
( ramal musaddas maḥzuf)

1]dilke armaa aasuoo me bah gaye
Dil2 ke1 ar2 maa2 aa2 su1 oo2 me2 bah2 ga1 ye2

2] hai agar dushman zamaana gum nahi
Hai2 a1 gar2 dush2 man2 za1 maa2 naa2 gum2 na1 hi2

3]aik din bik jayega maati ke mol
Ai2 k1 din2 bik2 ja2 ye1 ga2 maa2 ti2 ke1 mo2 (l)

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12 ) 212 212 212 212
( mutadarik musamman salim )
Sometimes doubled and employed with 8 arkans

1]har taraf har jagah beshumaar_aadmi
Har2 ta1 raf2 har2 ja1 gah2 be2 shu1 maa2 r_aa2 d1 mi2

2]kar chale hum fida jano tan sathiyon
Kar2 cha1 le2 hum2 fi1 da2 jaa2 no1 tan2 saa2 thi1 yo2

3]khush rahe tu sadaa ye duaa hai meri
Khush2 ra1 he2 tu2 sa1 daa2 ye2 du1 aa2 hai2 me1 ri2

4] aapki yaad aati rahi raat bhar
Aa2 p1 ki2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ti2 ra1 hi2 raa2 t1 bhar2

5]geet gaata hu mai gungunaata hu mai
Gee2 t1 gaa2 taa2 hu1 mai2 gun2 gu1 naa2 taa2 hu1 mai2

6]bekhudi me sanam uth gaye jo kadam
Be2 khu1 di2 me2 sa1 nam2 uth2 ga1 ye2 jo2 ka1 dam2

7] aik ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ai2 k1 lad2 ki2 ko1 de2 kha2 to1 ai2 sa2 la1 ga 2

12A] 212/212/212/212/212(5 arkaan)(non standard)
1] zindagi ke safar me gujar jaate hai jo makaa(m)
Zin2 d1 gi2 k2e sa1 fa2r me2 gu1 zar2 jaa2 te1 hai2 jo2 mu1kaa2(m)


12B] 212/212/212( 3 arkaan)( non standard)
1]zindgi pyaar ka geet hai
Zin2 d1 gi2 pyaa2 r1 ka2 gee2 t1 hai2

2]aaj jaane ki zid naa karo
Aa2 j1 jaa2 ne2 ki1 zidd2 naa2 ka1 ro2

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13 ) 212 / 212 / 212 / 2
( mutadarik musamman maqtu maḥzuf)

1]raat bhar ka hai mehmaa andheraa
Raa2 t1 bhar2 ka2 hai1 meh2 maa2 an1 dhe2 raa2

2] aaj socha to aasu bha.r_aaye*
Aa2 j1 so2 cha2 to1 aa2 su2 bha1 r_aa2 ye2

3] jaa raha hai wafa ka janaaza
Jaa2 ra1 haa2 hai2 wa1 faa2 kaa2 ja1 naa2 zaa2

*= yaha wazn shift hone ka case hai….yaha bhar=2 magar join hone ke wajah se syllable change ho gaya. Bhar aaye ki bajai bha.r_aa .ye ban gaya aur bha ka wazn change ho gaya 1 me
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14) 2122 /1212 / 22
(ḳhafif musaddas maḳhbun maḥzuf maqt̤u)

Ye bahut flexible beh’r hai. Yaha niche diye gaye sab wazn ko interchange karke koi bhi line likhi j sakti ha

1122/1212/22
2122/1212/112
1122/1212/112

1]tumko dekha to ye khayal_aaya
Tum2 ko1 de2 kha2 to1 ye2 kha1 yaa2 l_aa2 yaa2

2]dile naadaa tujhe hua kya hai
Di1 le1 naa2 daa2 tu1 jhe2 hu1 aa2 kya2 hai2

3]jab bhi ye dil udas hota hai
Jab2 bhi1 ye2 dil2 u1 daa2 s1 ho2 ta2 hai2

4]aap jinke kareeb hote hai
Aa2 p1 jin2 ke2 ka1 ree2 b1 ho2 te2 hai2

5]ye mulakat ik bahaana hai
Ye2 mu1 laa2 kaa2 t1 ik2 ba1 haa2 naa2 hai2

6] aaj phir jeene ki tamanna hai
Aa2 j1 phi2r jee2 nee1 ki2 ta1 man2 na2 hai2

7] yuhi tum mujse baat karti ho
Yu2 hi1 tum2 muj2 se 1baa2 t1 kar2 ti2 ho2

8] mai hawaa hu kaha watan mera
Mai2 ha1 waa2 hu2 ka 1haa2 wa 1tan2 me2 raa2

15) 2122/ 1212/112
( ḳhafif musaddas maḳhbun maḥzuf)
Upar wale beher ka hi variation …see above
Interchangeable 14 and 15 in all its variations

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16 ) 2122 / 1122 / 22 or 1122 1122 22
( ramal musaddas maḳhbn maḥzuf maqt̤u )
and
17 )2122 1122 112 or 1122 1122 112
( ramal musaddas maḳhbun maḥzuf )

1] aapke qadmo me aakar ro diye
Aa2 p1 ke2 qad2 mo1 me1 aa2 ka2r ro1 di2 ye2

16 and 17 are interchangeable with each other in all its variations
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18 ) 2122 / 1122 / 1122 / 22
( ramal musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf maqt̤u

1]mera to jo bhi kadam hai vo teri rah me hai
Me2raa1 to2 jo2 bhi1 ka1 dam2 hai2 vo1 te1 ri2 rah2 me2 hai2

2]kabhi khud pe kabhi haalaat pe rona aaya
Ka1 bhi1 khud2 pe2 ka1 bhi1 haa2 laa2 t1 pe1 ro2 na2 aa2 yaa2

3] chunri sambhal gori udi chali jaaye re
Chun2 ri1 san2 bhaa2 l1 go1 ri2 uu2 di1 uu1 di2 jaa 2 ye2 re2

4] koi faryaad tere dil me dabi ho jaise
Ko2 I1 fa2r yaa2 d1 te1 re2 dil2 me1 da1 bi2 ho2 jai2 se2

Both these 18 and 19 are interchangeable behers…
The first syllable may also start with 1 i.e
1122 / 1122 / 1122/ 112 or 22

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19) 2122 / 1122 / 1122 / 112
(ramal musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf)

1]koi humdum na raha koi sahaara na raha
Ko2 I1 hum2 dum2 na1 ra1 ha2 ko2 I1 sa1 haa2 raa2 na1 ra1 haa2


2]humse aaya na gaya tumse bulaaya na gaya
Hum2 se1 aa2 yaa2 na1 ga1 yaa2 tum2 se1 bu1 laa2 yaa2 na1 ga1 yaa2

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20) 212/ 1222 / 212/ 1222
( hazaj musamman ashtar)

1]kya huaa tera vaada vo kasam vo irada
Kya2 hu1 aa2 te1 raa2 vaa2 daa2 vo2 ka1 sam2 vo1 ee2 raa2 daa2

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21) 212/1212//212/1212
( hazaj musamman ashtar maqbuz)

1] jhuumti chali hawa yaad aa gaya koi
Jhu2 m1 ti2 cha1 li2 ha1 waa2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ga1 yaa2 ko1 i2

2]hum to jaate apne gaa(v) sabko ram ram ra/m
Hum2 to1 jaa2 te1 ap2 ne1 gaa2(v)// sab2 ko1 raa2 m1 raa2 m1 raa2 (m)


You will see that the’v’ in gaav is left un accounted for’
An extra short syllable is allowed without accounting for it if it comes just before the compulsory stoppage sign( //=compulsory stoppage symbol)

3] dost dost naa raha pyaar pyaar naa raha
Dos2 t1 dos2 t1 naa2 ra1 haa2// pyaa2 r1 pyaa2 r1 naa2 ra1 haa2

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22 )2112 / 212 / 2112 / 212
(munsariḥ musamman mat̤vi maksuf )
Sorry no examples….will add later
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23 )2112 / 2121 / 2112 / 2
( munsariḥ musamman mat̤vi manḥur)

1] panchi banuu udti phiru mast gagan me
Pan2 chi1 ba1 nu2 ud2 ti1 phi2 ru1 mas2 t1 ga1 gan2 me2

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24 )2112 2112 212
(sari musaddas mat̤vi maksuf

Sorry no examples…will add later

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25 ) 2112 / 1212 / 2112 / 1212
( rajaz musamman mat̤vi maḳhbun)

1] jaane kaha gaye vo din kahte the tere yaad me~
Jaa2 ne1 ka1 haa2 ga1 ye2 vo1 din2 // kah2 te1 the1 te2 ri1 yaa2 d1 me2

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26 )1222 / 1222/ 1222 / 1222
( hazaj musamman salim )

1]muhabbat ho gayi jinko vo parvaane kaha jaaye
Mu1 hab2 ba2t ho2 ga1 yi2 jin2 ko2 vo1 par2 waa2 ne2 ka1 ha2 jaa2 ye2

2]mujhe teri muhabbat ka sahaara mil gaya hota
Mu1 jhe2 te2 ri2 mu1 hab2 ba2 ka2 sa1 haa2 raa2 mil2 ga1 yaa2 ho2 taa2

3]chalo ik baar phirse ajnabi ban jaye humdono
Cha1 lo2 ik2 baa2 r1 phir2 se2 aj2 na1 b2i ban2 jaa2 ye1 hum2 do2 no2

4]khuda bhi aasmaa se jab zamii par dekhta hoga
Khu1 daa2 bhi2 aa2 s1 maa2 se2 jab2 za1 mee2 par2 de2 kh1 taa2 ho2 gaa2

6]suhaani raat dhal chuki na jaane tum kab_aaooge
Su1 haa2 ni2 raa2 t1 dhal2 chu2 ki2 na1 jaa2 ne2 tum2 ka1 b_aa2 oo2 ge2

7]kabhi tanhaiiyon me bhi hamaari yaad aayegi
Ka1 bh2i tan2 hai2 ii1 yo2 me2 bhi2 ha1 maa2 ri2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2 gi2

Note: extra short syllable at the end of the line which is allowed in all behers is not allowed in this beher.this beher is the only exception..

26A] 1222/1222/1222(non standard)

1] poocho naa maine kaise rain bitaii
Po1 cho2 naa2 mai2 ne1 kai2 se2 rai2 n1 bi2 ta2 ii2

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27) 1222 / 1222 / 122
( hazaj musaddas maḥżuf)

1]muhabbat karne wale kam na honge
Mu1 hab2 ba2t ka2r ne1 waa2 le2 kam2 na1 hon2 ge2

2] mere hantho me nau nau chudiyan hai
Me1 re2 haa2 tho2 me1 nau2 nau2 chu2 di1 yaa2 hai2

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28 ) 122 / 122 / 122 / 122
( mutaqarib musamman salim)

1]muhabbat ki jhooti kahaani pe roye
Mu1 hab2 bat2 ki1 jhu2 ti2 ka1 haa2 ni2 pe1 roo2 ye2

2]sambhaala hai maine bahut apne dil ko
Sam1 bha2 laa2 hai1 mai2 ne2 ba1 hut2 ap2 ne1 dil2 ko2

3] ye daulat bhi lelo ye shaurat bhi lelo
Ye1 dau2 lat2 bhi1 le2 lo2 ye1 soh2 rat2 bhi1 le2 lo2

4] jo tum aa gaye ho to noor_aa gaya hai
Jo1 tum2 aa2 ga1 ye2 ho2 to1 noo2 r_aa2 ga1 ya2 hai2

5] jawaani ka unko khayal_aa raha hai
Ja1 waa2 ni2 ka1 un2 ko2 kha1 ya 2l_aa2 ra1 ha a2 hai2

6] ye mana meri jaa muhabbat saza hai
Ye1 maa2 naa2 me1 ri2 jaa2 mu1 hab2 bat2 sa1 zaa2 hai2

7] mere sapno ki rani kab aaye gi tu
Me1 re2 sap2 no1 ki2 raa2 ni1 kab2 aa2 ye1 gi2 tu2

8] jo vada kiya vo nibhana padega
Jo1 vaa2 da2 ki1 ya2 vo2 ni1 bha2 na2 pa1 de2 ga2


9] vo jab yaad aaye bahut yaad aaye
Vo1 jab2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2 ba1hut2 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2

10] jinhe naaz hai hind par vo kaha hai
Ji1 nhe2 naa2 z 1hai2 hin2 d1 par2 vo2 ka1 haa2 hai2

11] mubaarak ho tumko samaa ye suhaana
Mu1 baa2 rak2 ho1 tum2 ko2 sa1 maa2 ye2 su1 haa2 na2

12] bane chahe dushman zamaana hamaara
ba1 ne2 cha2 he1 dush2 man2 za1 maa2 na2 ha1maa2 ra2

28A]122/122/122/122/122/12(non standard)

1] ye raatein ye mosam nadi ka kinaara ye chanchal hawa
Ye1 raa2 tein2 ye1 mo2 sam2 na1 di2 ka2 ki1 naa2 ra2 ye1 chan2 chal2 ha1 waa2

28B] 122/122/122(non standard)

mile suur tera hamaara
mi1 le2 suu2 r1 te2 ra2 ha1 maa2 ra2

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29 ) 122 / 122 / 122 / 12
( mutaqarib musamman maḥzuf)

1]suhaana safar aur ye mousam hasi
Su1 haa2 na2 sa1 far2 au2 r1 ye1 mou2 sam2 ha1 si2

2]badan pe sitaare lapete huye
Ba1 dan2 pe2 si1 taa2 re2 la1 pe2 te2 hu1 ye2

3]mere dost kissa ye kya ho gayaa
Me1 re2 dos2 t1 kis2 sa2 ye1 kya2 ho2 ga1 yaa2
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30 )121 / 22 / 121 / 22 / 121 / 22 / 121 /22 /
( mutaqarib musamman muẓaf maqbuz aslam )

1]na jaoo saiiya chudake baiyya kasam tumhari mai ro padungi
Na1 ja2 oo1 saii2 ya1 chu1 daa2 ke1 baiy2 ya2 ka1 sam2 tu1 mha2 ri1 mai1 ro2 pa1 dun2 gi2

2] na aadmi ka koi bharosa na dosti ka koi thikana
Na1 aa2 d1 mi2 ka2 ko1 i2 bha1 ro2 saa2 na1 do2 s1 ti2 ka2 ko1 i2 thi1 ka2 na2

3]tumhari aanko me hamne dekha wafa ki shabnam jhalak rahi hai
Tu1 mha2 ri1 aan2 ko2 me1 ham2 ne1 de2 kha2 wa1 faa2 ki1 shab2 nam2 jha1 lak2 ra1 hi2 hai2

4] zihale masti makun baranjish kitabe hijra hamara dil hai
Zi1 haa2 le1 mas2 t2i ma1 kun2 ba1 ran2 jish2 ki1 taa2 be1 hij2 raa2 ha1 maa2 ra1 dil 2 hai2

5]tumhari dunya se jaa rahe hai utho hamara salaam le lo
Tu1 mha2 ri1 dun2 ya2 se1 jaa2 ra1 he2 hai2 u1 tho2 ha1 maa2 raa2 sa1 laa2 m1 le2 lo2
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31) 121/ 22/ 121/ 22/ 121/ 22
( mutaqarib musaddas muẓaf maqbuz aslam )

This beher is with 6 rather than above 8 arkans(similar beher)
No example found yet

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32) 1212 / 1212 / 1212 / 1212
( hazaj musamman mazbuz )

1]abhi na jaoo chor kar ke dil abhi bhara nahi
A1 bhi2 na1 jaa2 oo1 cho2 d1 kar2 ke1 dil2 a1 bhi2 bha1 raa2 na1 hi2

2]qadam qadam badaye jaa khushi ke geet gaiye jaa
Qa1 dam2 qa1 dam2 ba1 daa2 ye1 jaa2 khu 1shi2 ke1 gee2 t1 ga2 ye1 jaa2

3] pukaarta chala hun mai gali gali dagar dagar
Pu1 kaa2 r1 taa2 cha1 laa2 hu1 mai2 ga1 li2 ga1 li2 da1 gar2 da1 gar2

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33) 1212/1122/1212/22
( mujtas musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf maqt̤u)

May be used interchangeable with next beher
1212/1122/1212/112

1]karoge yaad to har baat yaad aayegi
Ka1 ro2 ge1 yaa2 d1 to1 har2 baa2 t1 yaa2 d1 aa2 ye2 gi2

2]kabhi kisiko mukammal jahaa nahi milta
Ka1 bhi2 ki1 si2/ ko1 mu1 kam2 mal2 ja1 haa2 na1 hi2 mil1 ta2

and

34) 1212 / 1122 / 1212 / 112
( mujtas musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf)
May be used interchangeable with above=1212/1122/1212/22

1]gulon me rang bhare bade naubahaar chale
Gu1 lon2 me1 ran2 g1 bha1 re2 baa2 de1 nau2 ba1 haa2 r1 cha1 le2

2]mere naseeb me ai dost tera pyaar nahi
Me1 re2 na1 see2 b1 me1 ai2 dos2 t1 te2 ra1 pyaa2 r1 na1 hi2

3] jhuki jhuki si nazar bekaraar hai ke nahi
Jhu1 k2i jhu1 ki2 si1 na1 za2r be2 ka1 raa2 r1 hai1 ke1 na1 hi2

4]ruke ruke se kadam ruk ke baar baar chale
Ru1 ke2 ru1 ke2 se1 ka1 dam2 ruk2 ke1 baa2 r1 baa2 r1 cha2 le2

5] kisi nazar ko tera intezaar aaj bhi hai
Ki1 si2 na1 za2r ko1 te2 raa2 in2 te1 zaa2 r 1aa2 j1 bhi1 hai2

6] na tu zamee keliye hai na aasmaa ke liye
na1 tu2 za1 mee2 ke1 li1 ye2 hai2 na1 aa2 s1 maa2 ke1 li1 ye2

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35 )1212 / 1122 / 1212 / 1122
( mujtas musamman maḳhbun)

No examples yet..will add later

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36) 1121 / 2122 / 1121 / 2122
(ramal musamman mashkul)

1]raha gardisho me hardum mere ishq ka sitaraa
Ra1 haa1 gar2 di1 sho2 me1 har2 dum2// me1 re1 ish2 q1 ka2 si1 taa2 raa2

2]ye na thi hamari kismat ke visaale yaar hota
Ye1 na1 thi2 ha1 maa2 ri1 kis2 mat2 ke1 vi1 saa2 le1 yaa2 r1 ho2 ta2

36A] 1121/2122( non standard)

1] ye jawaani hai diwaani~
Ye1 ja1 waa2/ hai2 di1 waa2 ni2

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37 )11212 / 11212 / 11212 / 11212 /
( kamil musamman salim )

1]mere hum nafas mere humnawa mujhe dost bake daga na de
Me1 re1 hum2 na1 fas2 me1 re1 hum2 na1 waa2 mu1 jhe1 dos2 t1 ban2 ke1 da1 gaa2 na1 de2

2] vo jo humme tumme qaraar tha tumhe yaad ho ke na yaad ho
Vo1 jo1 hum2 me1 tum2 me1 qa1 raa2 r1 tha2 tu1 mhe1 yaa2 d1 ho2 ke1 na1 yaa2 d 1 ho2

3]mujhe tumse kuch bhi na chaiye mujhe mere haal pe **** do
Mu1 jhe1 tum2 se1 kuch2 bhi1 na1 cha2 I1 ye2 mu1 jhe1 me2 re1 haa2 l1 pe1 cho2 do2

4]mai khayal hu kisi aur ka mujhe sochta koi aur hai
Mai1 kha1 yaa2 l1 hu2 ki1 si1 au2 r1 ka2 mu1 jhe1 soc2 h1 ta2 ko1 i1 au2 r1 hai2

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Yaha examples filmi geet ka hai..mostly aisa hoga ki bataii gayi line hi us beher me ho aur baki ka gana na ho( aksar aisa hoga)
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Bhayee pahli try hai .... yun to thread bahut pahle banbaa diya tha ........
shaam ko saath mais ahi ki thi par fir ulajh gaya ........
yaha pe hi seekhna sahi rahega ...........

zara dekhyeN ise

saans aayee aansu aaye rab yaad aaya
aap yaad aye to sab yaad aaya

jab bhi milne ki dili khwaahish ki
fir bichdne ka sabab yaad aaya

soch maiN hun ki tujhe dekha hai
aainaa hia tu mera ab yaad aaya

tujhpe jo dekhi khuda ki mehr
apna bhi dast-e-talab yaad aaya

geeli geeli hia meri aankheN kyuN
aaj din bhar tu kab yaad aaya

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Badi meharbani Zidd saheb for this thread.........aapka experience sar aakho par....yaqeenan is thread se mere jaisa Bahr se Kharij shayer bohat fayda uthayga.

Bas aapka sath chahiye is koshish me.


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shaam ko saath mais ahi ki thi par fir ulajh gaya ........
yaha pe hi seekhna sahi rahega ...........

zara dekhyeN ise

saans aayee aansu aaye rab yaad aaya
aap yaad aye to sab yaad aaya

jab bhi milne ki dili khwaahish ki
fir bichdne ka sabab yaad aaya

soch maiN hun ki tujhe dekha hai
aainaa hia tu mera ab yaad aaya

tujhpe jo dekhi khuda ki mehr
apna bhi dast-e-talab yaad aaya

geeli geeli hia meri aankheN kyuN
aaj din bhar tu kab yaad aaya

apka qafiya aisa hai ki ye ghazal 'tumko dekha' wale meter me nahi aa sakti

isse milta julta ek meter hai...usme apki kai lines chali gai hai

dhun hai......

dil dhadakne ka sabab yaad aaya( youtube par mil jayegi)
iski taktee hai
2122 1122 22
1122 1122 22
2122 1122 112
1122 1122 112

apka

phir bichadne ka sabab yaad aaya..bilkul sahi hai

apki kai lines is beher me already hai
aap poori ghazal is dhun aur is taktee par dhaalne ki koshish kijiye
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aaj kisi dost ne aapke article ke banisbat baat ki, to maine us se link le kar ise padha...aapne bahut badhiya kaam kiya hai....
maiN ye sab baat isliye keh raha hoon kyuNki pichhale kuch arse se maiN beharbandi ke baare meiN soch raha tha...aur jitna khud se samjh aa raha tha use samjh bhi raha tha...aaj aapka article padh kar yuN laga jaise kisi ne mere dil ki baat rakh di ho....mujhe behad khushi hui....aur aapka tahe dil se shukriya karna chaahta hooN...reps dene ki try ki thee lekin sdc ke rules ke chalte de nahi paaya...lekin shukriya keh sakta hooN....aur maiN bahut saara shukriya kehna chaahta hooN.....

shukriya....


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shaam ko saath mais ahi ki thi par fir ulajh gaya ........
yaha pe hi seekhna sahi rahega ...........

zara dekhyeN ise

saans aayee aansu aaye rab yaad aaya
aap yaad aye to sab yaad aaya

jab bhi milne ki dili khwaahish ki
fir bichdne ka sabab yaad aaya

soch maiN hun ki tujhe dekha hai
aainaa hia tu mera ab yaad aaya

tujhpe jo dekhi khuda ki mehr
apna bhi dast-e-talab yaad aaya

geeli geeli hia meri aankheN kyuN
aaj din bhar tu kab yaad aaya

vikasji ye jaan kar bahut khushi hui ke aapne bahut khoobi se is ghazal ka beher bandha....aur 99% sucessful rahe...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=70079

isse aur dosto ka hausla badega
chalo is thread ki wajah se ek ghazal to taiyyar hui.....ye thread safal ho gaya

kuch dosto ne kaha hai ki formatting bahut kacchi hai aur unhe follow karne me dikkat hoti hai likhawat...so naresh sahab ne iske page making ki zimmedaari li hai....bahut jaldi vo 'page making' karke is thread ko aur clear karenge........

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berh seekhne ke liye jaha tak koshish ki hai mere hisaab se .. pahle hum lafzo ka sahi talaffuz karnaa sekhte hia. matlab lafz ko sahi tareeke se kaise boleN ....

isliye humne socha hai ki hum , ek ek word karke unki takhti karenge ........ aur unka wazan samjehnge .......... ye chote chote lekin important step hai, jo hume seekhne honge ........


isliye hum takhti se shuru kar rahe haiN . hope ki aap sab saath ayenge , nahi aaye to aapki marzi
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\bas ise aap ek game ki tarah leN ...........

iske kayde haiN ..........


hum ek word lenge

uska meaning likehnge
aur usko bolte woqt kaise hum usko alag alag part mai alag kar rahe hia likhenge
jaise

hum awaaaz ko jab bolenge to humari aawaaz kaise ayegi.......


aaa+waa+z


jo lambi awaaz hogi use 2 yaani lambi awaaz kahenge aur 2 likehnge

jo chotii awaz hogi use 1 likehnge

awaaz word ko bolte woqt hum


aaa +waaa+z aise bolte hai

is hisaab se

aa ke liye 2

waa ke liye bhi 2
aur "z" ke liye 1 likhnege

lekin

koi koi aawaaz beher bandhte hue choti bhi gini jaa sakti hai aur badi bhi
iskiye vo flexible hai
uska wazn x se jahir kar sakteN hai

isliye hum word ko digit mai takhti karte huee .. teen tarah s elikehnge


1 , 2 and X .


1 -choti awaaz ke liye

2 lambi awaaz ke liye
X - jo choti bhi ho sakti hia , lambi awaaz bhi

kisiko kuch poochna hai to beshak pooch sakta hai

" aur dosto sahi galat , aur humaraa marg darshan zid bhayee ki zimmedari hai , woh humari madad karenge

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i am starint the game .......

pyaar

pyaa+r

pyaa - 2
r - 1

its 21

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next word is ..

mohabbat , ya muhabbat

plzz iski takhti aur meaning batayeN

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i am starint the game .......

pyaar

pyaa+r

pyaa - 2
r - 1

its 21

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next word is ..

mohabbat , ya muhabbat

plzz iski takhti aur meaning batayeN



mahabbat / mohabbat /muhabbat = love

teeno jayaz hai

ma 1 / hab 2 / bat 2
mu 1 / hab 2 / bat 2
mo 1 / hab 2 / bat 2

waise ustaad log mahabbat use karna jyada pasand karte hai ghazals ke liye...correct teeno hai aur usage me bhi

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mahabbat / mohabbat /muhabbat = love

teeno jayaz hai

ma 1 / hab 2 / bat 2
mu 1 / hab 2 / bat 2
mo 1 / hab 2 / bat 2

waise ustaad log mahabbat use karna jyada pasand karte hai ghazals ke liye...correct teeno hai aur usage me bhi

NEXT........

duniya
दु नि - 2
या - 2

dunia means world .........
aur takhti 2-2

lekin yaa word last mai X ho sakta hia kya ye batayeN


next word

Guncha

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दु नि - 2
या - 2

dunia means world .........
aur takhti 2-2

lekin yaa word last mai X ho sakta hia kya ye batayeN
mere opinion me nahi ho sakta....koi precedence nahi hai meri nazar me...
aur waise bhi adaa hota nazar nahi aata
dun 2 / yaa 2

next........


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aur waise bhi adaa hota nazar nahi aata
dun 2 / yaa 2

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guncha गुन्चा word diya hai maine

aap iski takhti karo pahle

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aap iski takhti karo pahle
gun 2 / cha 2


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gun 2 / cha 2


next........

ishq
ishq

ish/q
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hmmmm

mere khyal se

sirf 2 hi hogi iski takhti

ya ish/ q

21

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ya ish/ q

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Zidd sahab...chaliye aapne isay aakhir shuru tou kiya...

Ab kyuN ke yeh aapki thread hai aur aapne members ko beh'r sikhane ki zimmedaari li hai ,tou aapko kuch raey dena chahti huuN...



Meri guzarish hai ke yahaaN kuch rules banaiye


1)Word ke correct spelling likha jaaye,agar kisi bhi member ne ghalat likha hai tou theek kijiyega, kyunki spelling se behr per farq padhta hai..


ex:dunia,duniya ,dunya...which one is correct..???


jis tarah aapne "muhabbat" word ka khulaasaa kiya hai,waise hi kiya kijiye..


2)Har word ke saath hindi aur english ke meanings bhi likhenge tou isse knowledge badhegi...


3)koi bhi member kahin bhi ghalat ho tou usay quote karke theek karte rahiyega..

har member ki post check karna aur theek karna aapki zimmedaari hai...

mujhe puura yaqeen hai aap yeh zimmedaari puuri imandaari se nibhayenge..



@Members se request hai ke actively is thread per apne replies diya kareiN, isse beh'r seekhne me aapki aur dusroN ki madad hogi...


and remember this is not just a game.....so apne replies bohat hi soch samajhker, diya kijiye....




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Zidd sahab...chaliye aapne isay aakhir shuru tou kiya...

Ab kyuN ke yeh aapki thread hai aur aapne members ko beh'r sikhane ki zimmedaari li hai ,tou aapko kuch raey dena chahti huuN...



Meri guzarish hai ke yahaaN kuch rules banaiye


1)Word ke correct spelling likha jaaye,agar kisi bhi member ne ghalat likha hai tou theek kijiyega, kyunki spelling se behr per farq padhta hai..


ex:dunia,duniya ,dunya...which one is correct..???


jis tarah aapne "muhabbat" word ka khulaasaa kiya hai,waise hi kiya kijiye..


2)Har word ke saath hindi aur english ke meanings bhi likhenge tou isse knowledge badhegi...


3)koi bhi member kahin bhi ghalat ho tou usay quote karke theek karte rahiyega..

har member ki post check karna aur theek karna aapki zimmedaari hai...

mujhe puura yaqeen hai aap yeh zimmedaari puuri imandaari se nibhayenge..



@Members se request hai ke actively is thread per apne replies diya kareiN, isse beh'r seekhne me aapki aur dusroN ki madad hogi...


and remember this is not just a game.....so apne replies bohat hi soch samajhker, diya kijiye....

mere khyaal se jo spelling mai confuse ho woh hindi font mai likh sakta hai,

"urdu font mai likhne wala meri nazar mai ab tak koe nahi hai .."

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zeest - life

zees/t

takhti in digit
2 1 .............
hmmmm
taktee to sahi hai ...matlab end result
waise
socho

zee / s / t...aise nahi hota?

maghar last ke [s] aur [t] sakin hai matlab looseely translated chote wazn hai
gar agar ek hi lafz me ek saath do saaqit aa jaaye to ek cancel ho jata ...

isliye
zee 2 / s1 / t1 hokar bhi
zee 2 / s0 / t1 ho jaayega

finally u are right

zees 2 / t1

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chal ...walk

cha 1

L 1

chal=2

next:beshumaar..??




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cha 1

L 1

chal=2

next:beshumaar..??
be/1/shu/1/maar/2/

beshumaar=1 +1+ 2=4

Next......Manzoor ...???




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cha 1

L 1

chal=2

next:beshumaar..??
chal=2

gol lafz hai jaise dil

cha.la( chota a) nahi hota...sirf ek jhatke me 'chal' hota hai

beshumaar

be x / shu x / maa 2 /r 1......... ( begana ka 'be'=1 ki misaal hai)

aksar...be 2 /shu x / maa 2 /r 1

commonly= be 2 / shu 1 /maa 2 / r1

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beshumaar=1 +1+ 2=4

Next......Manzoor ...???

naresh ji good to see you on this thread....

choti si mistake ki hai aapne,

be..x

shu 1

maa 2

r 1

aap r count karna bhool, shuru shuru me mujh se bhi yeh bhool baar baar hoti thi, khair..

manzoor: admired/chosen/approved/accepted/granted

man 2

zoo 2

r 1

manzoor 221



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gol lafz hai jaise dil

cha.la( chota a) nahi hota...sirf ek jhatke me 'chal' hota hai

beshumaar

be x / shu x / maa 2 /r 1......... ( begana ka 'be'=1 ki misaal hai)

aksar...be 2 /shu x / maa 2 /r 1

commonly= be 2 / shu 1 /maa 2 / r1

next.......

rab

rab: god/almighty


rab 2


ra1

b 1

so rab=2







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choti si mistake ki hai aapne,

be..x

shu 1

maa 2

r 1

aap r count karna bhool, shuru shuru me mujh se bhi yeh bhool baar baar hoti thi, khair..

manzoor: admired/chosen/approved/accepted/granted

man 2

zoo 2

r 1

manzoor 221





rab: god/almighty


rab 2

ra1

b 1

so rab=2
mistake shudhaarne ka shukriya .........Zainy Ji !




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Manzilen

Man /2/ zi /1/ len /2/

Man=2
zi=1
len=2

212

Next = Bekhudi




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Man=2
zi=1
len=2

212

Next = Bekhudi

Be 2

khu 1

di 2

bekhudi 212

next:..watan




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di 2

bekhudi 212

next:..watan
wa / 1 / tan / 2 /

wa =1

tan = 2

Watan = 1 2


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beshumaar=1 +1+ 2=4

Next......Manzoor ...???
nareshji ....total karne ki zarurat nahi hai......urdu beher ki scanning sound se hai...
hindi meter me akshar( letters) se scanning hoti hai isliye total likh dete hai bahut log sentence ke end me....
yaha applicable nahi hai
aap farq dekhiye

ghazal
hindi= gh 1 + za 1 + la 1........1+1+1+=3
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naresh ji good to see you on this thread....

choti si mistake ki hai aapne,

be..x

shu 1

maa 2

r 1

aap r count karna bhool, shuru shuru me mujh se bhi yeh bhool baar baar hoti thi, khair..

manzoor: admired/chosen/approved/accepted/granted

man 2

zoo 2

r 1

manzoor 221






rab: god/almighty


rab 2


ra1

b 1

so rab=2





rab =2

but not because ra 1 + b 1=2
it is simply a long monosylabble(sound) hence 2
1 + 1 =2 ka koi concept nahi hai...halanki aisa lagta hai mutadarik behar ke ek variation se...magar vo beher khud hindi meter se derived hai...

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wa =1

tan = 2

Watan = 1 2


Next = tasleem
apko yha dekh kar accha laga.......
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tas 2 / lee 2 /m 1


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apko yha dekh kar accha laga.......
( koshish kijiye ki aise word diye jaaye jo aam shayri me use hote hai)

tas 2 / lee 2 /m 1


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tarah
ta+rah

12

ya bas 2

next
aksar
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nareshji ....total karne ki zarurat nahi hai......urdu beher ki scanning sound se hai...
hindi meter me akshar( letters) se scanning hoti hai isliye total likh dete hai bahut log sentence ke end me....
yaha applicable nahi hai
aap farq dekhiye

ghazal
hindi= gh 1 + za 1 + la 1........1+1+1+=3
urdu= gha 1 / zal 2 ( total ka koi concept nahi hai)

in hindi why the do total - any reason
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ta+rah

12

ya bas 2

next
aksar
ta 1 /rah 2

ye bhi sahi

tar 2 / ha1

dono usage me hai
ek aur baat batata hu..wazn kaise change hoga

kshitiz sahab ne bandha hai

tarah has( hamne seekha hai gulo ki tarah has kar milna)mere hisaab se sahi hai ...magar koi debate kar sakta hai

yaha........ta 1 / ra 1 / has 2( matlab 11)....

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