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Masjid mei.N namazei.N padhni thi, Mandir mei bhajan bhi gaane they
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khaak alfaaz aap ko pasand aaye bahut shukriya fakhri ji....
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28th July 2015, 10:34 AM
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Shaad saheb aapka aur Madhuji ka kalam lajawab hota hei. Aap dono isii tarah likhte raheiyega
Fakhri
Masjid mei.N namazei.N padhni thi, Mandir mei bhajan bhi gaane they
Sirf achcha ik insa.N hona kaafi nahi.N hota dunya mei.N
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Aapki inaayat hai Fakhri saahab........... warnaa khaaksaar ke alfaaz me wo dam kham kahaan...... saath banae rakiyega insha allah ham bhi likhne ko koshishen karte rahenge..... shukriyaa tahe dil se aapkaa...
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28th July 2015, 10:49 AM
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28th July 2015, 10:52 AM
Imaan ko ruksat hue zamaane the huye
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28th July 2015, 12:25 PM
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28th July 2015, 01:08 PM
bahut khoob sher pesh kiye hain aap sab ne....
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29th July 2015, 03:53 AM
Zamana Hua Apna Mun.H Bund Kiye
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29th July 2015, 07:06 AM
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Wah bahut khoob Janaab umdaa sher hua hai
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29th July 2015, 10:58 AM
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29th July 2015, 11:04 AM
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Bahut khoob sher fakhri sahab......
aate rahein...
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Waaah!...bahut khoob sher kaha mast ji............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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29th July 2015, 11:32 AM
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nice sher mast saahab.......................
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29th July 2015, 11:51 AM
aaj kaa sher.....
pahloo se hawaa kaa koii jhoNkaa abhii guzraa,
mujh ko ye lagaa tum they sanam, tum they sanam, tum......
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aaj kaa sher.....
pahloo se hawaa kaa koii jhoNkaa abhii guzraa,
mujh ko ye lagaa tum they sanam, tum they sanam, tum......
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Waaaaahhhh!!...bahut khoob shaad ji.........
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29th July 2015, 12:52 PM
"justju jiski usko to na paaya hamne,
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29th July 2015, 04:10 PM
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nice sher mast saahab.......................
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Shukriyaa Shaad bhai.........................
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Shukriyaa Madhu............................................. ..........
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30th July 2015, 03:27 AM
Saaqi ne apni aankho.N se itni pilayee hei
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30th July 2015, 04:16 AM
neend ko jab meri aankhon ka pata de koi...
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30th July 2015, 08:40 AM
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neend ko jab meri aankhon ka pata de koi...
ishq ye hota hai kya mujhko bata de koi...
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Waah waah!
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taish ji...
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30th July 2015, 11:11 AM
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Achcha sher hai shaad ji.....
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shukriyaa madhu saahibaa............
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31st July 2015, 02:48 PM
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31st July 2015, 02:58 PM
zindagi me khushi bas zara chahiye,
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One has to work v. hard to accomplish something big and meaningful. This sher depicts that scenario:
Hazaaro.N meel tai ker ke shuaey.N shams aati hei.N
Tabhi jaa ker andhera is jaha.N ka khutm hota hai.
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One has to work v. hard to accomplish something big and meaningful. This sher depicts that scenario:
Hazaaro.N meel tai ker ke shuaey.N shams aati hei.N
Tabhi jaa ker andhera is jaha.N ka khutm hota hai.
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very nice sher Fakhri saahab................................
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3rd August 2015, 10:05 AM
Aaj kaa sher.....
sooraten aadmee me hotee hain,
seeraten saadgee me hotee hain..
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Aaj kaa sher.....
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Umda sher hua hai bhai jaan..........................
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inaayaten bhai...................... bahut shukriyaa
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Likhne ko to likh leta hoo.N kuch kuch kabhi kabhi
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Bohot khoob janab
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Waaah bhushan ji...mast ji....
Behad khoob sher kahe aap dono ne.....
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Shukriyaa Madhu ...........................................
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