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Digdi dhendi khani ek fakeer di - 7th June 2008, 08:07 AM
Kde ho k sher pind di satth vich beh jana ,
Kde ret di dheri vangu dheh jana ,
Kde karni ustat os khuda di ,
Kde mola da v veri ban beh jana ,


Kar housla kohloo de gerr vich pe jana ,
Kde gitta pinjali nal kheh jana ,
Kdde bachean te gussa kdde reh jana,
Kde mil jani rukhi missi ,
Kde bhukhean hi hasde hasde pe jana ,


Putan vangu fassl palni ,
Sikhar dupher ,kde thnd da kher ,
Jind khet vich galni,
Jad barpda kaher khuda da ,
Udo mehl supnean da dheh jana,

Ro lena do pal kale ho k ,
So jana kde buha dho k,
Fir kar housla pinajr jea shreer ,
Kise navi kiran di aas vich khetan val le jana,

Kade taane shreekan de sehne,
Kade laale shreek ban behne ,
Dekh k halat es khuda de fkeer di ,
Preet di akkh vicho hanju beh jaana

Jat di jaat na loko, jamna karj vich,
Jaandi vaar hasde hasde kaffn karj da le jaana.
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Dr sahab bahut hi shaandaar - 7th June 2008, 10:07 AM
Dr sahab ajj kaafi dinaa baad likhiaa par sikhar nu choh gayey ajj. Sach much bahut achey. Saadey oh saathi jinhaa ne kisaan di eh haalat nahi dekhi shayad onaa dard mehsoos na kar sakan. Par es sachaaee nu punjab de kisaan ne atey rabb de es fakir ne bahut der takk handaayaa hai. hajey vi kadey kadey eh dard saadey saahmney aa khlondaa hai. Bahut changaa laggaa Dr sahab tusi es fakir te kujh likhiaa. Bahut hi umdaa shabdaavli. This is best creation of this weak so far. Vadhiyaa subject di selection karnaa hi sabh kujh nahi hundaa, os naal pooraa insaaf vi karnaa ik bahut vadhi mahaarat hai. Preet ji ne dohaaN hi streams wich outstanding perform keetaa hai.

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8th June 2008, 05:55 PM
Hello Preet Ji,
Tusi Jo V Wording Likhi Hai Es Vich Ajj De Kisan Di Khaani Saf Saf Najar Aundi Hai, Mein Tialk Ji Nal Appericiate Karda Han , Tuhanu Vakeya Hi Es Week Da Best Creation Da Sehra Dita Jana Chaida Hai.
   
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8th June 2008, 10:21 PM
DR.PREET,tusi har vaar ikk damdaar vish chunde ho te uss nu bakhoobi poem da roop dinde ho.iss waar fer tusi bazi maar lai.
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11th June 2008, 02:21 PM
your very very thanks Tilak Ji , SAJAN JI, A BABu Ji, meri chhoti jehi kosish nu Ena maan denn lae , meri kosish rhegi k har ver kuj naven topic te likhan, Actul vich mein Rajsthanii han Punjabi De kuj Shbd jinha nu kise rachna de anusar dhalna aukha ho janda hai, phir v mein kosish kranga k hor vdhia likh skan
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12th June 2008, 04:46 AM
wah dr sahab eh ta dil di gl likh ditta......bahut khoobi naal tusi jatt de jiwan te roshni payi a...main v ik garib jatt da nimana,bebas jeha putt haan jo pardesi rul reha ta sirf apne us pita lai...ta k shreekan de mehnean to bach sakiye....sach manneyo janab parh k akhaan bhar aayiyan....mere mutabik sikhar te hai tuhadi eh gazal....bahut khoobi naal shabdawli di warto kiti hai tusi......mainu kuj lines ta hadho vadh changian laggian........

Jat di jaat na loko, jamna karj vich,
Jaandi vaar hasde hasde kaffn karj da le jaana

Putan vangu fassl palni ,
Sikhar dupher ,kde thnd da kher ,
Jind khet vich galni,
Jad barpda kaher khuda da ,
Udo mehl supnean da dheh jana,


bahut khoob veer g............wasdo raho te inj hi likhde raho........
   
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12th June 2008, 09:12 AM
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your very very thanks Tilak Ji , SAJAN JI, A BABu Ji, meri chhoti jehi kosish nu Ena maan denn lae , meri kosish rhegi k har ver kuj naven topic te likhan, Actul vich mein Rajsthanii han Punjabi De kuj Shbd jinha nu kise rachna de anusar dhalna aukha ho janda hai, phir v mein kosish kranga k hor vdhia likh skan
   
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wah dr sahab eh ta dil di gl likh ditta......bahut khoobi naal tusi jatt de jiwan te roshni payi a...main v ik garib jatt da nimana,bebas jeha putt haan jo pardesi rul reha ta sirf apne us pita lai...ta k shreekan de mehnean to bach sakiye....sach manneyo janab parh k akhaan bhar aayiyan....mere mutabik sikhar te hai tuhadi eh gazal....bahut khoobi naal shabdawli di warto kiti hai tusi......mainu kuj lines ta hadho vadh changian laggian........

Jat di jaat na loko, jamna karj vich,
Jaandi vaar hasde hasde kaffn karj da le jaana

Putan vangu fassl palni ,
Sikhar dupher ,kde thnd da kher ,
Jind khet vich galni,
Jad barpda kaher khuda da ,
Udo mehl supnean da dheh jana,


bahut khoob veer g............wasdo raho te inj hi likhde raho........
thanks balraj ji meri es chhoti jehi kosish nu pasand karn lae , jd chot dil vich lagdi hai tan dard use tran da hi hunda hai, wese mein punajbi na pdea hon karan menu thodi shbdawali vich dikat rehndi hai, phir v kosish krda han k es maa boli de najdeek aa skan
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18th June 2008, 10:08 AM
dr. preet ji bahut hee sohna likhiya hai. tusi ta every kissan di gal keh gay is poem vich. bahut bahut bahut hee sohna lagga tahanu par k.

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9th July 2008, 04:32 PM
thanks sona singh ji ajj kaafi dina to aaea ta dekhea k kise ne es fakir di khaani nu like kita , eh hi sada aann data hai mera salam es desh de majdoor te kisan nu hmesha janda rhega .
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ssa ji ...es mehfil ch sab tu vadia shaayer mainu tusi laggde ho....bahut vadia likhde ho...
   
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ssa ji ...es mehfil ch sab tu vadia shaayer mainu tusi laggde ho....bahut vadia likhde ho...

thanks deep ji tuhadi mohar lagwani b koi supreme court de judge to ght nahi, tuhade te tilak ji to ank lene bhut mushkil han. thanks again
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Kde ho k sher pind di satth vich beh jana ,
Kde ret di dheri vangu dheh jana ,
Kde karni ustat os khuda di ,
Kde mola da v veri ban beh jana ,


Kar housla kohloo de gerr vich pe jana ,
Kde gitta pinjali nal kheh jana ,
Kdde bachean te gussa kdde reh jana,
Kde mil jani rukhi missi ,
Kde bhukhean hi hasde hasde pe jana ,


Putan vangu fassl palni ,
Sikhar dupher ,kde thnd da kher ,
Jind khet vich galni,
Jad barpda kaher khuda da ,
Udo mehl supnean da dheh jana,

Ro lena do pal kale ho k ,
So jana kde buha dho k,
Fir kar housla pinajr jea shreer ,
Kise navi kiran di aas vich khetan val le jana,

Kade taane shreekan de sehne,
Kade laale shreek ban behne ,
Dekh k halat es khuda de fkeer di ,
Preet di akkh vicho hanju beh jaana

Jat di jaat na loko, jamna karj vich,
Jaandi vaar hasde hasde kaffn karj da le jaana.
Preet G tusi te awesome haige o. Maaf karna mainu bohta punjabi bolni te nai aandi (halaki main aap punjabi haigan) par tuhade ehsaas di tareef layi mere kol onj wi alfaaz nai je haige...

Tusi great likhya hi Preet.. Aenj hi likhde rao....

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28th September 2008, 09:23 PM
thanks veer ji meri is chhoti jehi rachna nu pasand krn lae
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Preet G tusi te awesome haige o. Maaf karna mainu bohta punjabi bolni te nai aandi (halaki main aap punjabi haigan) par tuhade ehsaas di tareef layi mere kol onj wi alfaaz nai je haige...

Tusi great likhya hi Preet.. Aenj hi likhde rao....

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29th September 2008, 11:57 AM
Ro lena do pal kale ho k ,
So jana kde buha dho k,
Fir kar housla pinajr jea shreer ,
Kise navi kiran di aas vich khetan val le jana

sari rachna bahut hi sohni hai... sachi...pind di uthe de lokan di yad andi hai pad ke...... wasde raho....
   
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Dr. Sahib sach maano main thuhanu bahut nahi paria par ah jo tuc likhiya hai kehar hai..jad v koi jatt kisaan de halaat nu dasda ta mainu khushi mildi hai kiyuki ajkal ta singra ne jatt nu ik katal,badmaash,nesheri bna chadiya hai..jionde raho
   
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