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aas - 25th May 2008, 06:41 PM
sade bewas seene vich sajjna ek aas terpdi rehni a
saanu sari jindgi ve sajjna teri gaaht kherkdi rehni a
sadia mar muk gayia saddran ne tainu harpal chete karna a
asi jeona a bus lokan layi par khud layi pal- pal marna a
eh dor jindgi di haatan cho, saade enj hi sarkdi rehni a
saanu sari jindgi ve sajjna teri gaaht kherkdi rehni a
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Shaandaar - 26th May 2008, 10:36 AM
Sandeep ji sona hai tuhaadi kalam. Tuhaadi kalam ik din zaroor saari duniyaa wich apnaa sikkaa manva ke chaddegi. This is the perfect poetry using the best words. Hats off to u. Eh line khaas taur te

eh dor jindgi di haatan cho, saade enj hi sarkdi rehni a

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27th May 2008, 09:29 AM
Boht vadiya likhya Sandeep ji tussi..

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27th May 2008, 09:54 AM
ha ji sandeep ji, eh song ta K.S.MAKHAN da hai, ji mainu bahut hi sohna lagda hai

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31st May 2008, 09:44 AM
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ha ji sandeep ji, eh song ta K.S.MAKHAN da hai, ji mainu bahut hi sohna lagda hai
ji jyoti ji mainu pta eh k eh song a par kujh satra meria khud dia likhia mai aad kitia ne

   
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