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Mere Jeha - 29th May 2007, 04:38 PM
HAI KAUN JO HOVEGA MERE JEHA,
KOI NAHI BADNASEEB ETHE MERE JEHA.
IKK HANS AYA C MERE MAN DI JHEEL CH,
UDD GYA KEH KE ,"KOI NAHI HAI BANJAR TERE JEHA"
MERE KOL BADE SAN SUCHE MOTI,
OHNU NA KOI CHOG CHUGA PAYA,
IKK KOYAL DI MITHI KOOK NU NA APNE SURA CH SZA PAYA.
OH HEEKA LAONDI THAK GYI ,
IK BOL NA OHDE NAL GUNGUNA PAYA.
KISE HOR BAGH DE RUKH TE OHNE HUN AALNA BNAYA HOVEGA,
KI PTA SHAYAD HUN KADE OHNU MERA CHETA AYA HOVEGA.
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mere jeha - 2nd May 2008, 09:26 PM
Eh badnassebi vi badi ajeeb hundi a
Lakh nu a plaa vich kakh kar dendi
Kade hansa nu ta rod vi na nasseb hunde
jholia motia naal eh kawan dia bhar dendi
Jameen banjar hove ta ve farak nai painda
je mali da housla buland hove
Piyar bhulda nai kade piyar nu
je rooh naal rooh rzamand hove
Tusi dil to likhia ne a linea
tahio mere dil nu a chooh gayia
Tuhadi sharyi da a kmaal a babbu ji
main kuj hore linea ne jo likh layeia
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2nd May 2008, 11:16 PM
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HAI KAUN JO HOVEGA MERE JEHA,
KOI NAHI BADNASEEB ETHE MERE JEHA.
IKK HANS AYA C MERE MAN DI JHEEL CH,
UDD GYA KEH KE,"KOI NAHI HAI BANJAR TERE JEHA"
MERE KOL BADE SAN SUCHE MOTI,
OHNU NA KOI CHOG CHUGA PAYA,
IKK KOYAL DI MITHI KOOK NU
NA APNE SURA CH SZA PAYA.
OH HEEKA LAONDI THAK GYI ,
IK BOL NA OHDE NAL GUNGUNA PAYA.
KISE HOR BAGH DE RUKH TE OHNE
HUN AALNA BNAYA HOVEGA,
KI PTA SHAYAD HUN KADE OHNU
MERA CHETA AYA HOVEGA.

SSA Babbu ji,

ena pyara likhiya hai, dil karda hai parrde rahiye, tusi ta bahut hi sohna likh lainde ho, sachi mainu ta eda da likhna nahi aaonda, jive ke
MERE KOL BADE SAN SUCHE MOTI,
OHNU NA KOI CHOG CHUGA PAYA,
IKK KOYAL DI MITHI KOOK NU
NA APNE SURA CH SZA PAYA.
OH HEEKA LAONDI THAK GYI ,
IK BOL NA OHDE NAL GUNGUNA PAYA.




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3rd May 2008, 12:35 PM
[quote=ADHURI HEER;285224]SSA Babbu ji,

ena pyara likhiya hai, dil karda hai parrde rahiye, tusi ta bahut hi sohna likh lainde ho, sachi mainu ta eda da likhna nahi aaonda, jive ke
MERE KOL BADE SAN SUCHE MOTI,
OHNU NA KOI CHOG CHUGA PAYA,
IKK KOYAL DI MITHI KOOK NU
NA APNE SURA CH SZA PAYA.
OH HEEKA LAONDI THAK GYI ,
IK BOL NA OHDE NAL GUNGUNA PAYA.




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3rd May 2008, 12:38 PM
[quote=sandeep;285171]Eh badnassebi vi badi ajeeb hundi a
Lakh nu a plaa vich kakh kar dendi
Kade hansa nu ta rod vi na nasseb hunde
jholia motia naal eh kawan dia bhar dendi
Jameen banjar hove ta ve farak nai painda
je mali da housla buland hove
Piyar bhulda nai kade piyar nu
je rooh naal rooh rzamand hove
Tusi dil to likhia ne a linea
tahio mere dil nu a chooh gayia
Tuhadi sharyi da a kmaal a babbu ji
main kuj hore linea ne jo likh layeia
sandeep gill


HELLO SANDEEP ,ene pyare reply lai tuhada dhanwadi ha.tusi sachmuch behad sohna likhde ho..umeed hai jald hi tuhada likheya kujh hor read karan nu milega.
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9th May 2008, 02:37 PM
babbu jee................bahhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttt tttttt khoobsurat ahsaas padan nu miley..........bada changa lagiya tuhadi eh poetry padke....ek geet di tarah jubaane chad gaye tuhadi eh poetry.....

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9th May 2008, 02:49 PM
Babbu ji tusi apni puraani form wich waapis aa rahey ho. This is fantastic. Bahut wadhiyaa shabdaawli. Tusi is nazm wich ik waar nahi kaee waar rooh kadh laee. wasdey raho. Aur Sandeep ji ne vi kyaa compliment keetaa hai tuhanu. Es massage board te ik thandi hawaa de jhonkey waang aayey ne Sandeep ji.

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9th May 2008, 09:14 PM
bahot her wadia likhiya......bahot wadia......

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babbu jee................bahhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttt tttttt khoobsurat ahsaas padan nu miley..........bada changa lagiya tuhadi eh poetry padke....ek geet di tarah jubaane chad gaye tuhadi eh poetry.....

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thanku you SUNITA JI ena pyara reply den lai.tuhanu changa laga behad khushi hoi.
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Babbu ji tusi apni puraani form wich waapis aa rahey ho. This is fantastic. Bahut wadhiyaa shabdaawli. Tusi is nazm wich ik waar nahi kaee waar rooh kadh laee. wasdey raho. Aur Sandeep ji ne vi kyaa compliment keetaa hai tuhanu. Es massage board te ik thandi hawaa de jhonkey waang aayey ne Sandeep ji.

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