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13th May 2009, 05:34 PM
Thi kai pabandiyan use chune ke liye
Ek pal bhi na laga mujhe pine ke liye
Ab mere har gum ka sahara hai yehi
Kisi sahare ki zarurat nahi jine ke liye
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14th May 2009, 10:46 PM
ham rind subuu_kash haiN, mastii se hai kaam apnaa
dekh, ai nigeh-e-saaqii!, Khaalii na ho jaam apnaa
Tufail Ahmad "Shamimi"
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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14th May 2009, 10:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
ham rind subuu_kash haiN, mastii se hai kaam apnaa
dekh, ai nigeh-e-saaqii!, Khaalii na ho jaam apnaa
Tufail Ahmad "Shamimi"
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"raat bhar jaam se jaam takrate rahe,
teri mast nigaah se paigaam aate rahe"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th May 2009, 07:52 PM
bahut khoob dii
madhoshi meh koi ghuustaki nah ho jaye...
Saaki tu nazar hatha-kar jaam bar.....
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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14th July 2009, 10:42 PM
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bahut khoob dii
madhoshi meh koi ghuustaki nah ho jaye...
Saaki tu nazar hatha-kar jaam bar.....
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"tumne aaj do lafz bol kar muje madhosh kar diya,
barso.n peeta raha maikhane mein par nasha aaj hua"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th July 2009, 12:10 AM
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"tumne aaj do lafz bol kar muje madhosh kar diya,
barso.n peeta raha maikhane mein par nasha aaj hua"
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aaya hu ab hosh mai
pee ke sharab main
madhosh toh tab thaa
jab giraftaar thaa tere husn main.............
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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15th July 2009, 06:55 AM
Haan to di.......lijiye aapki mehfil me aa hi gaye.......suna hai yahan jo bhi aata hai saade me aata hai aur nashe me jaata hai....
hahahahaha............
anywaz bahut hi umda likha hai sab ne....
ek koshish main bhi kar lun .....(waise na mujhe nafrat hai sharaab se )
Har Jaam Bhara Hai Khoon-e-Jigar Se Maikhaane Me Maine......
Mere Seene Me Ab Aansuon Ka Dariyaa Na Raha.....
Jo Jala Di Aaj Tasveer Kisi Bewafaa Ki E Saaki......
Sambhalo Mujhe!!! K Hosh Me Aane Ka Zariyaa Na Raha......
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18th July 2009, 03:57 AM
pii bhii le do ghuu.NT zaahid pii bhii le
maikade se kaun pyaasaa jaayegaa
nm
Wahi hai markaz'e'Kaaba wahi hai rah'e'buthaana...
Jahaan diwaane do milkar sanam ki baat karte hain..
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3rd August 2009, 09:38 PM
kuchh to ho jaatii hai kam sifat-e-taubaa_shikanii
pii ke ham to.D diyaa karate hai.n paimaane ko
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th August 2009, 07:51 PM
Kuch To Baat Hai Teri In Nigaho Mein Saakhi.
Tere Diwane Bin Piye Yunhi Zhoomne Nahin Lagte.
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27th August 2009, 08:32 PM
Ishq-e-Bewafaai hi fakat,,, unki rahi hai fitrat
Toh kyu daga se aaj mujhe, ho rahi hai hairat
Samjhaya bahut hai pehle bhi apne jigar ko maine
Sailaab-e-lahoo-e-ashq-e-sharaab banati hai mohabbat
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28th August 2009, 02:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ehsaas
Ishq-e-Bewafaai hi fakat,,, unki rahi hai fitrat
Toh kyu daga se aaj mujhe, ho rahi hai hairat
Samjhaya bahut hai pehle bhi apne jigar ko maine
Sailaab-e-lahoo-e-ashq-e-sharaab banati hai mohabbat
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"zaahid ye merii shoKhii-e-ri.ndaanaa dekhanaa
rahamat ko baato.n baato.n me.n bahalaa ke pii gayaa"
[zaahid=wise man; shoKhii=mischief/restlessness; ri.ndaanaa=drunk]
[rahamat=benevolence]
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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acha he apko pasand he ye shear. -
14th September 2009, 09:40 PM
"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine **** di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"[/QUOTE]
Zra gaur kijie,
Gam is kadar mila ghabra k pee gae
Khushi thodi c mili
Mila k p gae,
Yun to na the janam se peene k aadi, sharab ko tanha dekha to taras kha k pee gae.
Ham to reh karte he
Lekin wo na sharam karte he na wo rehm naam ka bharam karte he
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unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda,
Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M
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14th September 2009, 09:54 PM
gam is kadar mila ghabra k pee gae,
Khushi thodi c mili mila k p gae,
Yun to na the janam re peene k aadi,
Sharab ko tanha dekha to taras kha k p gae
unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda,
Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M
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acha he apko pasand he ye shear. -
14th September 2009, 10:18 PM
aapka shear acha laga mam, likhte raho pls..
unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda,
Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M
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acha he apko pasand he ye shear. -
14th September 2009, 10:25 PM
aapka shear acha laga mam, likhte raho pls..
unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda,
Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M
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9th October 2009, 11:23 PM
Monu ji aapne mera post kiya sher pasand kiya....shukriya 
"muje aaj nasha kyuN hota nahi,
dil mera to kabhi aise rota nahi,
aaj kya hua es nadaaN dil ko ,
hichkiyaN lene se baaj aata nahi"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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12th April 2010, 12:13 AM
saaqii terii mahafil me.n ham jaam uchhaale.nge
jab kaabe me.n jaaye.nge zam_zam se nahaa le.nge
ham gulshan-e-fitarat se jiine kii adaa le.nge
shaaKho.n se lachak le.nge kaa.NTo.n se anaa le.nge
--nm
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st April 2010, 05:54 AM
meri tabaahi ka ilzaam ab sharaab ke sar hain..
main bhi kya karta.tum per aa rahi thi baat!!!
sagar...
wo mere dil ko kuchal ke chala gaya
anjane me muzko wo shayar bana gaya
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ek dard dikha -
28th June 2010, 02:25 AM
bahot khub likah hai , aapki shayri padh kar kuch dil halka huwa hai .
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4th August 2010, 04:57 PM
meri to har shaam ab jaam ke naam hoti hai,
jaam mein tu hoti hai, ya teri tasveer hoti hai??
-sunita virender singh
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th October 2010, 06:45 PM
Wah...Wah...Wah... ,,,,,,,,,Its wonderful.!!!!!!!!!!
   
"पोंछ कर अश्क अपनी आँखों से मुस्कुअराओ तो कोई बात बने,
सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने"...........
Thank you very very much Suneetaji *************
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27th October 2010, 11:07 AM
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meri to har shaam ab jaam ke naam hoti hai,
jaam mein tu hoti hai, ya teri tasveer hoti hai??
-sunita virender singh
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har shaam you.n, jaam mat uthaayaa karo
nashe me is kadar, naa doob jaaya karo
meri tasveer ko pyaale mai.n kyon kar dekho?
kkadii hu.n saamne, jaraa haath to badhaaya karo
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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27th October 2010, 04:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma
har shaam you.n, jaam mat uthaayaa karo
nashe me is kadar, naa doob jaaya karo
meri tasveer ko pyaale mai.n kyon kar dekho?
kkadii hu.n saamne, jaraa haath to badhaaya karo
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etna accha mera naseeba kahaN,
jo chahuN wo mil hi jaye muje,
jaam meiN tuje dekh kar khushi hoti hai,
tera hath pakadne se dar lagta hai,
aaj tak toota hai mera har sapna,
yeh sapna bhi sheshy ki tarh toot na jaye :-(
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th October 2010, 06:56 PM
Hello sunitaji...........I like very much......i really sweet shayri - e - Sharab......I wished you..........
"Ishq-e-Bewafaai hi fakat,,, unki rahi hai fitrat
Toh kyu daga se aaj mujhe, ho rahi hai hairat
Samjhaya bahut hai pehle bhi apne jigar ko maine
Sailaab-e-lahoo-e-ashq-e-sharaab banati hai mohabbat.....
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27th October 2010, 10:29 PM
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Originally Posted by sneha123
Hello sunitaji...........I like very much......i really sweet shayri - e - Sharab......I wished you..........
"Ishq-e-Bewafaai hi fakat,,, unki rahi hai fitrat
Toh kyu daga se aaj mujhe, ho rahi hai hairat
Samjhaya bahut hai pehle bhi apne jigar ko maine
Sailaab-e-lahoo-e-ashq-e-sharaab banati hai mohabbat.....
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hello sneha.....aapko yeh thread pasand aa raha hai, bahut accha laga jaankar, keep continue 
"aao aaj raat hum baithe saath saath,
kuch ho mere dil ki kuch tere dil ki baat,
jaam pe jaam hum lagayeN saari raat,
khul kar kaheN ek dooje se apne jazbaat"
-Sunita Virender Singh 
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th October 2010, 11:25 AM
Hello Suneetaji,,,,,,,,Sneha here, Thanks for reply my comments so i'm very happy and really i like very much your shayri - e - sharab i'm very impressed it....Thanks lot.......
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16th October 2011, 07:52 PM
"aaj phir dil hai kuch behka jaye,
do ghoont pee kar tera naam liya jaye,
yu to tera naam lene par hai bandishy,
peene ke baad koi bandish nahi"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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miss u all -
24th April 2015, 02:41 PM
dosto.....aaj es thread ko pad rhi thi to, bahut accha lga aap sabko padna, aap sabki bahut yaad aa rhi hai...bahut miss karte hai ham aapko...tab hamare paas kitna waqt hota tha, aik din meiN kai post hote thy hamare...jod-tod karke sher banate thy, majja aata tha.
es thread meiN aik chotta sa sher likha tha apni pasand ka uske aage aisa silsilla chala ki 708 post ho gye es thread par 
miss u all
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th May 2015, 10:20 AM
Apki badolat humare bhi nazar padi. kai khubsoorat sher mile.
Bohut khoob.
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14th May 2015, 01:35 PM
bin saaqi, bin sharaab jiya karieN ge..
hum tumhari aankhoN se jab piya karieN ge....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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