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Re: Taj ke sitam - 2nd September 2006, 05:08 PM
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Sunita tera nikhar dekhu ya tere shayari ka...ab kya kahu? tu to dikhati nahi hai to itna hi kahunga ...SHENAIYO SEY KEH DO KAHI AUR JAKAR GAYE, IS DIL MAI BHI JAL RAHI HAI ARMANO KI CHITAYE...
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3rd September 2006, 08:04 AM
didi lagta hai me kailash ne ye reply bhi sharab ke nashe main jhoomkar hi diya hai...... unhe to khud hi nahi maloom hoga ki wo kya likh rahe hain..... jara sa hosh main aakar padenge to unhe khud samajh nahi aayega ki unhone kya likha hai.........

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3rd September 2006, 11:39 AM
kya likha hai ye kailash ne yaar? dilip mere bhi samajh me nahi aaya


lagta hai ye pi pikar likh rahe hai
sharab k nashe me jhoom rahe hai


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raat khaamosh hain chand madhosh hain haathon mein jaam
sharaab mein uskii tasveer ankhon mein uskaa chehraa
ashqon mein bani uski tasveer ye pal ye wakt hain kitnaa sunheraa

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raat khaamosh hain chand madhosh hain haathon mein jaam
sharaab mein uskii tasveer ankhon mein uskaa chehraa
ashqon mein bani uski tasveer ye pal ye wakt hain kitnaa sunheraa shaam hotein he yaar ankhein nam hojaati hain kadam khud ba khud maikhaaney ki aur chaley jaatein hain naa chaahtein hueyy bhii humm pee jaateinn hainn uskii yaadonn ko bhoolaaneyy keeyy liyee humm phir pee jaateinn hainn

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raat khaamosh hain chand madhosh hain haathon mein jaam
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ashqon mein bani uski tasveer ye pal ye wakt hain kitnaa sunheraa shaam hotein he yaar ankhein nam hojaati hain kadam khud ba khud maikhaaney ki aur chaley jaatein hain naa chaahtein hueyy bhii humm pee jaateinn hainn uskii yaadonn ko bhoolaaneyy keeyy liyee humm phir pee jaateinn hainn
raat jaroori hai har subha ke liye,
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Thanks harash, accha lagga ki tum mere es post par bhi aaye.

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dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"


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dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"
kya karenge maikade mein jake ye maikhane to har waqt khule nahin rehte.ek nazar hi qafi hai jab aankhomein jam ho.umra bhar ke liye madhosh hojate hai aur fir hosh ka nakoi kam hota hai.
   
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aji kaynat ji aap phele baar aaye aur woh es maikhane mai.n to thik hai hum aapka yehi par suwagat kartey hai.n aap es pariwaar kei naye member hai.n aapko jaha bahut dost mileygey, bas jaha ke rules par chaltey rahna.

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aur fir hosh ka na koi kam hota hai.

to lijiye aapke sher ka reply hum bhi kar rahey hai.n

aji nazro se ghayal hai, tabhi hum maikhane aate hai.n
kyu ki waha pyar mai.n doobey nahi.....
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dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"
mangaye sunitaji aap ko kya khub jawab diya hai.
shukriya aap ka humein yaar kehne ke liye ye lijiye aap ka jawab un nazaro se ghayal hue to kya hua abhi tak dil ki nazarein to salamat hai.to kya hua unhone bairukhi di kisi aur ki nazar mein to jaam hota hai.maikhane to tabtak salamat hai jab kharid ne ke liye dam ho
   
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man gaye sunitaji aap ko kya khub jawab diya hai.

shukriya aap ka humein yaar kehne ke liye ye lijiye aap ka jawab

un nazaro se ghayal hue to kya hua,
abhi tak dil ki nazarein to salamat hai.
to kya hua unhone bairukhi di kisi aur ki nazar mein to jaam hota hai.
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dil ki nazro ki baat na kijiye janab,
enhoney hi humey duboya hai,
hum to sambhal kar chaltey thy,
enhoney hi humey giraya hai....

na yeh nazrey unse milti,
na hum barbaad hotey,
na unse hamara naam judta,
na hum badnaam hotey....

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man gaye sunitaji aap ko kya khub jawab diya hai.

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un nazaro se ghayal hue to kya hua,
abhi tak dil ki nazarein to salamat hai.
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dil ki nazro ki baat na kijiye janab,
enhoney hi humey duboya hai,
hum to sambhal kar chaltey thy,
enhoney hi humey giraya hai....

na yeh nazrey unse milti,
na hum barbaad hotey,
na unse hamara naam judta,
na hum badnaam hotey....

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dil ki ek aur nazar se dekhiye jisse khud ko sambhal sake phir ek aur nazar se unki nazar ko khud ki nazar se giraiye vo aankhon mein noor laiye aur unko khud ki aankhon mein duboiye vo aap ki nazaron se ghayal ho jayenge aur dekhna aapki nazaron se pi ke madhosh hoke aap ke ishq mein ghayal ho jayenge. EDITED (maikash)
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dil ki ek aur nazar se dekhiye jisse khud ko sambhal sake phir ek aur nazar se unki nazar ko khud ki nazar se giraiye vo aankhon mein noor laiye aur unko khud ki aankhon mein duboiye vo aap ki nazaron se ghayal ho jayenge aur dekhna aapki nazaron se pi ke madhosh hoke aap ke ishq mein ghayal ho jayenge. aap ka yaar kaynat
kaynat ji aapne kaya likha hai kuch samaj nahi aaya, bura na mano to jarra saaf-saaf likhye na....aur nichey likha hua aapka yaar yeh bhi kuch decent sa nahi lagga..! sher phir se likhye mai.n reply jaroor karuNgi..!

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Very nice Bahot acachya likha hai,aapke aur shyarian ho to plz mujhe mail karo


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dost etna samey hi nahi hota ki har kisi ko aapni shayri post ki jaye, ha aap kisi bhi member ko choose karke uski collection pad saktey hai.n member list mai.n jakar, particular member ko choose kar lijiye...bas


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kaynat ji aapne kaya likha hai kuch samaj nahi aaya, bura na mano to jarra saaf-saaf likhye na....aur nichey likha hua aapka yaar yeh bhi kuch decent sa nahi lagga..! sher phir se likhye mai.n reply jaroor karuNgi..!

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sunitaji main muafi chahta hun ki mera likha hua aap ko samaz nahin aaya par yeh ek haqeekat hai yeh unlogo ko sambhal neke liye hai jo log apne chah ne valon ki bevafai se mayus ho jate hai aur vo jeena bhul jate hai mera kehne ka matlab hai ki khud madhosh hone ki bajah unko hamari nazaro ke teerse ghayal karde aur ek baat hamare yahan ke ek shayar ne kahahai ki fulon ko dekh ke deevane hone ki bajah kuchh aisa kijiye ki ful aapkaa divana hojaye matlab ki kisi ko dekh ke unka divana hone ki jagah unko apna divana banaiye.aur aap se ek darkhast thi ki ye jo aap maikhane vali shayriyan likhti hai us mein kahin vo padhkar maikhane ki taraf na chalpade uska dhyan rakhiye mera ye sab shayri jo aap ko bheji thi vo sab likhne ke pichhe ek hi matlab tha ki main kisiko maikash bananese rok sakun isiliye maine vo sab shayriyan aapko bhejata raha aur main yaar likhne ki galati pe muafi chahta hun magar ye dost ka similar word hai isiliye maine aap kolikhatha kaynat aati hai bagon mein bahar jab chaman pe phul khilta hai aatahai dilon ko karar jab dilse dil miltahai
   
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Kismat ne tujhe dhoka diya har pal,
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kapil ji aap meri post par aaye, bahut bahut shukriya....!

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fantaaaaaaaaaaastic................tune mere dil ki baat shayri se bahot achchi tarah keh di hai.............lage raho sunita ben
shukriya bhai saheb.....aapka shayri.com par tahe-dil se suwagat hai, yakeen maniye aapko jaha sab ka bharpoor pyar aur sahyog mileyga....yu hi aatey rahna....humey aapki shayri ka aur aapka intjaar raheyga...!

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wah - 28th March 2007, 06:57 PM
wah aap ne to kya sher likha hai...!! saaki.. ke bina saraab ka sher adhura hai...!!!
wah wah..!!! sharaab ke aansu!!! peene ko man kar raha hai..!!
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wah aap ne to kya sher likha hai...!! saaki.. ke bina saraab ka sher adhura hai...!!!
wah wah..!!! sharaab ke aansu!!! peene ko man kar raha hai..!!
dost aapne yeh sher pasand kiya bahut bahut shukriya...

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man gaye sunitaji aap ko kya khub jawab diya hai.

shukriya aap ka humein yaar kehne ke liye ye lijiye aap ka jawab

un nazaro se ghayal hue to kya hua,
abhi tak dil ki nazarein to salamat hai.
to kya hua unhone bairukhi di kisi aur ki nazar mein to jaam hota hai.
maikhane to tabtak salamat hai jab kharid ne ke liye dam ho

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dil ki nazro ki baat na kijiye janab,
enhoney hi humey duboya hai,
hum to sambhal kar chaltey thy,
enhoney hi humey giraya hai....

na yeh nazrey unse milti,
na hum barbaad hotey,
na unse hamara naam judta,
na hum badnaam hotey....

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bahut acha likha hai apne, humein padkar acha laga. humne b thodi is koshish ki hai jawab dene k, umeed hai jo likha hai pasand ayega. gaur farmaiye:

humara ghar to aasman mein tha
tujhe dek-Kar zameen pe aya hun
teri nigaho ne mujhe baheka diya
zammane kahe main peeke aya hun

teri chah mein BARBAAD hum b ho gaye
apno mein paraye hum b ho gaye
par koi shikwa is nadani par
chahe tere pyaar mein BADNAAM hum ho haye

apke jawaab ka intezaar rahega....

Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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man gaye sunitaji aap ko kya khub jawab diya hai.

shukriya aap ka humein yaar kehne ke liye ye lijiye aap ka jawab

un nazaro se ghayal hue to kya hua,
abhi tak dil ki nazarein to salamat hai.
to kya hua unhone bairukhi di kisi aur ki nazar mein to jaam hota hai.
maikhane to tabtak salamat hai jab kharid ne ke liye dam ho

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dil ki nazro ki baat na kijiye janab,
enhoney hi humey duboya hai,
hum to sambhal kar chaltey thy,
enhoney hi humey giraya hai....

na yeh nazrey unse milti,
na hum barbaad hotey,
na unse hamara naam judta,
na hum badnaam hotey....

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hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh.....

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namaskar sunita g,
bahut acha likha hai apne, humein padkar acha laga. humne b thodi is koshish ki hai jawab dene k, umeed hai jo likha hai pasand ayega. gaur farmaiye:

humara ghar to aasman mein tha
tujhe dek-Kar zameen pe aya hun
teri nigaho ne mujhe baheka diya
zammane kahe main peeke aya hun

teri chah mein BARBAAD hum b ho gaye
apno mein paraye hum b ho gaye
par koi shikwa is nadani par
chahe tere pyaar mein BADNAAM hum ho haye

apke jawaab ka intezaar rahega....
manish bahut accha tumko aapni es post par dekh kar....lijiye jawaab deti hoon....

mere pyar mein kuad ko rusba na kar,
yeh hai goongey bahro ka shahar,
jaha dil ki baat na samjey koi,
har kadam par milti hai naye thokar...

hehehe...... waiting for u r reply

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manish bahut accha tumko aapni es post par dekh kar....lijiye jawaab deti hoon....

mere pyar mein kuad ko rusba na kar,
yeh hai goongey bahro ka shahar,
jaha dil ki baat na samjey koi,
har kadam par milti hai naye thokar...

hehehe...... waiting for u r reply
bahut dher mein kahi tumne yhe baat
hum to dil ko alvida keh chuke hain
har kadam par milti hai naye thokar...
hum khud us SHAHAR mein reh chuke hain

kaisa laga.....app ke jawab ka intezaar rahega

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bahut dher mein kahi tumne yhe baat
hum to dil ko alvida keh chuke hain
har kadam par milti hai naye thokar...
hum khud us SHAHAR mein reh chuke hain

kaisa laga.....app ke jawab ka intezaar rahega
es shahar mein ek baar dil lagaya hai humne,
patharon ko aapna kudha banaya hai humne,
har dard jakar us kudha ko sunaya hai humne,
par har baar usko khamosh hi paya hai humne.

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es shahar mein ek baar dil lagaya hai humne,
patharon ko aapna kudha banaya hai humne,
har dard jakar us kudha ko sunaya hai humne,
par har baar usko khamosh hi paya hai humne.
SHAHAR k galiyon mein mil jayenge
tumhe mere massum dil ke tukde
beed mein tumhe sunaiydenge
iss tanha dil ke dukde

SHAHAR mein main khoh gaya hun
kaun hum main, beed mein gum gaya hun
pinjre mein band paxi (bird) ki tarah
ajadi ki umeed lagana aab main bhul gaya hun

kaisa laga.....

Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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SHAHAR k galiyon mein mil jayenge
tumhe mere massum dil ke tukde
beed mein tumhe sunaiydenge
iss tanha dil ke dukde

SHAHAR mein main khoh gaya hun
kaun hum main, beed mein gum gaya hun
pinjre mein band paxi (bird) ki tarah
ajadi ki umeed lagana aab main bhul gaya hun

kaisa laga.....
suna hai tu har dard ki dawa deti hai,
do goont piya de humey sakoon miley,
uski be-wafei se toot gaya hoon main,
nikal jaye ab dum ki humey sakoon miley...

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aap aise maat kahiye....

puraani yaadon ko bulane ko koshish mein
main aab har pal peeta hun
kya kahun hosh mein rehna abb munasib nahi
isse main paani samak kar jo peeta hun

Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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