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31st May 2007, 09:21 AM
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"jab se tu jawan ho gaye, meri neeyat be-imaan ho gaye, mere ek baar chune ke baad, tu to khil ke gulaab ho gaye" yeh meri pyari priya ke liye.....   .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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31st May 2007, 10:15 AM
[QUOTE=donlove;234578]hey mar jama meri sunita di kina vadhia likhdi a
meri sweety sunita hmmmmmmmm kya kahu appse chalo ek hor pekash tuhade le Palko K Uthte Hi Do Diye Se Jal Jaate Hai Jhuk Jaati Hai Jab Palke To Band Kaliyo Se Nazar Aate Hai Uski Aankhe hai Ya Meh K Pyale Jo Bin Peeye Hi Hum Behak Se Jaate Hai.... -Preet Kitni kashish teri aankhoN maiN hai jaam nazer ata nahi PalkoN ki dekh rawaangi muzhe kutchh our yahan bhata nahi tera husn-o-shabaab loot raha hai mere dil ka har sabab Jo paar tere dil maiN hai kahiN our nazer ata nahi Harash preet aapne aur harash ji ne bahut khoob sher kahey hai.n....! aapke sher ka jawab to harash ji ne de diya hai, ab harsh ji ke sher ke reply ki bari hai...hai...na..! en ankho ki masti mei.n doob gaya ek aur diwana, piyega shab bhar jaam pe jaam dekhyga zamana, har shab eski gujreygi esi maikhane mei.n, bhool jayega ab yeh dosto aapne ghar jana.... koshish ki hai maine aapko reply karne ki, par harash ji aapke sher jaisa to nahi hai, hai na.... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Waah sunita ji bahoot khoob is se achha our kya ho sakta hai..... Is ada ne teri hamko dewana bana liya Apne hi ghar ko hamne maikhana bana liya AankhoN maiN ashq kam nahi rote haiN jaar jaar Chun-chun ke har ik boond paimana bana liya. harash |
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1st June 2007, 10:22 AM
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"paimana bhar gaya to bikhar jayega, mujse bichad kar tu kidhar jayega, na chudda yu be-rukhi se daaman, akhir lout ke tu mere paas hi aayega" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th July 2007, 03:19 AM
didi namaskar,
hw r u? so so so so sorry bahut dher k baad aaya. apko kaha tha nah, shayad aana band ho jaye, pehle exams the, phir internet nahi tha. aap batayein, aap kaisi hain. kuch likha hai, pehla sher sirf aur sirf aapke ke liye, uske baad kuch sharaab par. this is for you sister: apni nigaho se dheere dheere pilaiye barri mehfil mein humein dheere dheere bulaiye tamanna chand ko zameen par dekhne ki puri ho jaye agar app rukh se niqaab dheere dheer uthaiye...... kaisa laga didi? aur kuch meri mehbooba (sharaab) ke liye: pee rahe the hum ajj akele akele seh rahe the gum ajj akele akele vaada kiya usne aakri saans tak saath nibane ka par marange hum ajj akele akele sharaab to marne ke dard ko kam karegi par takleef jo hai saans lene mein, uska kya karen saakhi ne kaha bula do us bewaffa ko par bassi hai wo saanson mein, inn saanso ka kya karen mere aakri nishani, yhe khat, use bewaffa ko bijwa dena jab nah rahun hosh mein saaki, jaam me thoda zeher mila dena kuch nahi mere pass, bash tumse ek choti si gujarish hai mar jayen hum, to mujh par saaki, ek kafan beecha dena.......... didi aapke ke jwab ka intezaar rahega..... aapka chohta bhai manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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14th July 2007, 02:32 PM
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kal jab maikhane se ghar lout rahe thy, tere khayalo.n mei.n hum dubey hue thy, raastey mei.n har mod par tu nazar aaye thi, tu chudda rahi thi..hum tera daaman pakad rahe thy, tu baar baar kuch samaaj ki duhai de rahi thi, hum baar baar tere gale se lipat ro rahe thy...... batana kaisa laga.....tumharey reply ke intjaar mei.n tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th July 2007, 04:53 AM
didi,
abb main kya jwab dun, agar ehsaas dil mein nah ho, to kagaz par kaise ayenge. hum to maikhane nahi jaate, jahan jagah mil gayi, bass use hi maikana bana diya.....majak kar raha hun. maikhana se abb hum ghar nahi jaate dil ke kareeb abb kisiko nahi laate sharaab ke nashe neend to aati hai par vo haseen khwaab "DIDI" aab laaye nahi aate.... kaisa laga? Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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16th July 2007, 04:58 PM
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 batana jara betu.ghar ki har deewar par tasveer hai teri, koi aur tasveer lagau.n to bhi na lage, mujhe to nasha hai eh janam tere pyar ka, koi aur nasha ab to na mujhe chadey..... koshish ki hai...par janti hoon ki pheli ki 2 lines ke baad sher gadbadda gaya hai... phir bhi mujhe pata hai tujhe pasand aa hi jayega....maine jo likha hai....hai na....  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th July 2007, 05:36 AM
kaise ho didi???
vo khwaab jo subah uthne nahi dete, raat ko katam nahi hone dete, vo khwaab jahan usse mulakat ho jaye.........wo khwaab. aapka sher acha tha, humein to pasand aaya, very meaningful. abb hum likte hain, umeed hai pasand ayega: ajj pyass lagi thi mujko labon ko nahi, mere dil ko nashe mein abb b bewaffa ko yaad kiya par humari halat ki khabar nahi usko Saaki neh b dil manga humara yhe b kaha, jo b pasand aaya usse pee lo humne kaha, dil humara...agar chahiye tumhe zameen par tukde pade hain....jo pasand aaye ley lo i knw wha i jus wrote is really sad, wha cn i do!!!! plz tell me ur thoughts, bye Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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18th July 2007, 09:15 AM
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manna tu dil ka ameer hai, saaki ka bhi koi zameer hai, zameen par pade dil ke tukde nahi uthati, kyuki woh giri hue cheez se dil nahi lagati.... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th July 2007, 04:46 AM
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har jaam ka bass mai hi nasseb hun Saakhi chal do pal hi baathein kar le mujhse main maut k bahut kareeb hun.......  Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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19th July 2007, 10:20 AM
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aise likheyga to pitai karvayga mujse...samja...mujhe last line pasand nahi aaye.....  "aaj mausam bhi bheega bheega sa hai, aalam bhi kuch bahka bahka sa hai, do jaam pee loon phir tere paas aau.n, kuch ho na jaye dil kuch darra darra sa hai" hehehehehehe..............  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th July 2007, 04:54 PM
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tum kareeb aaye....sharm se dhoor ho gaye hum dekha kaatil nigahon se....aur nashe mein behak gaye hum daar se dil kuch jyada hi dhadk raha hai kaha kareeb aayo...par daar se.....usi jagah par...kade reh gaye hum...... hahahahah Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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23rd July 2007, 06:10 AM
didi kaha hon??????????????????? miss u
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25th July 2007, 03:04 PM
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hum tum ji bhar pyar kare.n, mai.n tum mei.n kho jau, tum muj mei.n kho jao, tan-man apna ek dooje par nisaar kare.n  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th July 2007, 04:43 PM
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yhe beet kehne mein, tumse dher ho gayi izhaar ka kiya, khud k dil se shikayat ho gayi hum to kissi aur ke ho chuke hain abb kaise kahen........k ..............saaki se mohabaat ho gayi.............. Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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26th July 2007, 07:18 PM
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badalna nahi aata humen auro ki tarah, har ek rut mein tera intezar karte hai, na tum sameet sako ge jise qayamat tak, khuda ki kasam tumhe itna pyaar karte hai......... |
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27th July 2007, 06:07 AM
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zakm humesha rehta hai, bass nishaan badal jatein hain phalkon mein basse khwaab badal jatein hain..... tum kya mohabaat karoge qayamat tak waqt k saath dil k yhe armaan b badal jatein hain mat baat karo tum mohabaat ki humse nibahi mohabaat, phir b bewaafai ka ilzaam hai mat puchna mere gum ka sabab "LAMHA" bass ek haath se kabr khod raha hun......aur doosre haath mein jaam hai  Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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27th July 2007, 04:46 PM
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Hi hame nahi tha pata jis ISH ko ham ISHQ ban ne ki rai de chuke woh ishq me kabhi tooth chuke hain sorry i AM REALLY VERY SORRY apna chaial rakhna aapki doast jaan Unko chaha hai unko chahein ge wade jo kiye te woh nibhayein ge ho kar kisi aur ke bhi rahein ge unhi ke ham chahein haar jaayen hamara pyaar nahi haare jism chahe ho jaye kisi aur ka dil to hai unka aur unhi ka rehe ga mil sakein na woh aur ham kahin phir bhi joodhre hain unka mera dil kahin jaante hain ham mera kal koi aur hai par phir bhi HUMKO UNSE PYAR HAI |
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27th July 2007, 06:28 PM
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kis ko khabar thi kis ko yakeen tha,aise bhi din aayenge, jeena to mushkil hoga,mar bhi na payenge, hum jaise barbaad dilo ka jeena kya aur marna kya, aaj teri mehfil se uthe'MANISH', kal duniya se uth jayenge............................ |
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28th July 2007, 02:11 AM
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hello jaan, hw r u? dnt feel sorry, stf happens.....u learn......life goes on. hw r u? tc aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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28th July 2007, 04:03 AM
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humko khabar thi k yhe din zaruur ayega k humara haath chodne ka waqt zaruur ayega aur humne badnaami ko hass k seh liya aur jab saasne rukein.....to humare marne ka paigaam zaruur ayega humein yaad hai....yaad hai, wo pyaara sa "LAMHA" jaab hum the...tum the....aur chup kaynat thi phir aandi aayi......aur tumne saath nah diya chod gayi gehra zakm dil par.......yhe aishe kaali raat thi abb to bass sharaab chahiye jeene k liye saakhi ki abb ek jaruraat se ban-ne lagi hai par hum dubara mohabaat nahi karenge zindagi ki shamma bujne jo lagi hai....... Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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28th July 2007, 01:41 PM
wow...gr8....kaya khoobsurat tuk-bandi chal rahi hai...hum aa jaye aapki es tuk-bandi mei.n
saaki ka daman kab tak yoon hi pakdey rahogey, kab tak saanso.n ko seene mei.n jakdey rahogey, Manish chorr to saaki ko aur azaad kar do sannso.n ko, yeh kushnseeb lamha hai, rooh ko ban parinda udney do.... just shayri hai munna....darasal mai.n aap dono ka naam apne sher mei.n likhna chah rahi thi.....! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th July 2007, 07:22 PM
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is dil-e-barbaad par ab bas usi ka raaj hai, sannse ab kabhi azaad na ho payegi'MANISH', rooh-e-zindagi ab saaki ki mohtaj hai......... |
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28th July 2007, 11:50 PM
didi welcome back, glad u r enjoyin this. well, help me........i cn only write sad shers.....
. nt fair.here come another one; daman choda, hasna choda aur chodi sharaab bayan karun dard ko, likhu aishe koi kitaab par lafzon mein itna dard nahi hai kaise kahein...mar gaye ishq aur ho gaye barbaad saaki ki baat mat karo baatein karti hai humse....par aankh rakti hai jaam par aur yehi soch-kar peeta hai "Manish" aaj peele jee bar-kaar...teri jaan jaa sakti hai kissi jaam par.... Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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30th July 2007, 09:47 PM
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raat gumsum hai magar chand khamosh nahi, kaise keh du 'MANISH' aaj fir hosh nahi, aise dube teri yadon ki gehrai mai, haath mai jaam hai magar peene ka hosh nahi............ |
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31st July 2007, 11:10 PM
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raat ke pass andheron k sivaye kuch b nahi jaise en aankhon mein aansuon k siave kuch b nahi de dete tumhe dil, par wo bi tutgaya sivaye dhuaon k mere pass kuch b nahi ek aur jaam peene ka jee chahta hai peete shaam ho gayi....abb subah tak peene ka jee chahta hai abb thak gaya hua main zindagi se maut thak aaj peene ka jee chahta hai........ bahut khub lamha ji, bahut acha likha hai apne. Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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2nd August 2007, 06:17 PM
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bahut khub MANISH............ aap ki aahat pehchante hai hum, duniya ke gham-o ko bhi jante hai hum, aap ki bewafai ke hi sahare , aaj bhi has-kar jeena jante hai hum, ishk ka jaha bhi naam hota hai, tadapna sisakna waha aam hota hai, badnaseebo ko kabhi ishk ho nahi sakta, ye to khushnaseebo ka kaam hota hai................ |
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5th August 2007, 02:17 AM
wow lamha, really good, bt plz remember to mention shraab or anything related to it k. i hope u didnt upset u. apologies in advance.
tum mujhe aaj pilado sakhi ek jaam nahi, purra maikhana pila do sakhi mat pucho tum humare dard k barre mein aansuon ko jaam mein ghulakar pila do sakhi aaj mujhe nashe mein mast kar do phir se dhadke dil, aise harkat kar do pilaoge tum mujhe meri akkri saans tak bass tum aisha koi vaada kar do..... bass yhe vaada kar do.... Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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6th August 2007, 08:31 PM
Nisha aur Aesh ki duniya basaa ker peeta hoon
Kisi ko apnay samnay bethaa ker peeta hoon Bharosa itnaa hai rehmat-e haq per kashif Khyaal-e- atish-e- dozakh bhula kay peeta hoon! Syed Kashif Shah Al Jubail Saudi Arabia |
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beautiful moment.........
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6th August 2007, 09:42 PM
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mat pee sharaab "LAMHA"masjid mein baith kar, ek hi botal hai, kahin KHUDA na maang le............. |
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8th August 2007, 04:10 PM
aaj ji bhar ke pee jaye yeh irada hai,
kisi be-wafa ko yaad karne ka wada hai, aaj likhu kuch bewafa par ja sharab par, aaj dard es dil meiN kuch jayada hai........... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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8th August 2007, 08:20 PM
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hey.......SUNITA JI, bahut ache............ aap to aa gayi par humare dost MANISH kaha gayab ho gaye hai aaj kal kuch likhate nahi hai woh...........manish, come back................waiting 4 ur reply.. sham hote hi ye dil udaas hota hai, toote khawabo ke siwa kuch na pass hota hai, tumhari yaad us waqt bahut aati hai, maykhana jab koi aas-pass hota hai.............. |
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9th August 2007, 03:17 PM
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manish dekha, lamha ko aapki yaad tab aati hai jab koi maikhana aas-paas hota hai....kaya samjay.... lamha - lamha sharaab peeti hoon, teri yaddoN ke saath jeeti hoon, nahi bhool pati tujhe ek bhi pal, har lamha maiN bhi yaad aati hoon? .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th August 2007, 03:26 PM
Bahut hi khoob hai yeh Sunita G
"Jiye to bahut hain ham logo ki khaatir ab tere liye jeene ko jee chahta hai, yun to piye hai hamne maikhaane kai, par ab teri aankhon se peene ko jee chahta hai" Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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9th August 2007, 03:40 PM
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tu kho jaye meri baahoN meiN aur maiN jahaN ko bhool jauN" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th August 2007, 04:19 PM
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jaam honton ke peene ki hamein aadat nahi kisi ki baahon mein jaane ki izaazat nahi ham to bhula dena chahte hai khud ko kisi ke liye par unhe khud ko bhool jaane se fursat nahi Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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9th August 2007, 07:03 PM
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AAP KE SHER KA JAWAAB DENA CHAHUNGI............GAUR FARMAYE................ ek khushi ki chaah mai har khushi se dur huye hum, kisi se kuch keh bhi na sake itne majboor huye hum, na aayi unhe nibhaani pyaar mai wafaa, aur zamane ki nazar mai bewafaa ke naam se mashhur huye hum............... |
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10th August 2007, 08:49 AM
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Lamha ji yeh aapke sher ka jawaab............... Khushiyan mohaabat mein kaha milti hai, Mohabbat ka to gham hi anjaam hota hai, Naam-e-Bewafa se mashoor ho jana, Mohabbat ka sabse bada inaam hota hai......... Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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11th August 2007, 12:03 AM
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kya jawaab diya hai apne..................aap ka jawaab nahi............ unse roz milne ko jee chahta hai, kuch sunne sunane ko jee chahta hai, tha kisi ke manane ka andaaz aisa, ke aaj fir ruth jane ko jee chahta hai.............. |
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