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Raatbhar (रातभर) - 5th November 2015, 11:59 PM

aap mahfil sajaate rahe raatbhar
guftguu me.n Jo aate rahe raatbhar

yaad me.n aapkii aa.nkh rotii rahii
ho.nTH bhii thartharaate rahe raatbhar

shauq e shamma.a se parvaane aate rahe
aatish e dil jalaate rahe raatbhar

beKHudii me.n KHudii se Jo piite Gaye
jaam e ma.i Dagmagaate rahe raatbhar

kyaa kare.n pyaas bujhtii nahi.n Jo Safiir
aap lab se pilaate rahe raatbhar
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आप महफ़िल सजाते रहे रातभर
गुफ़्तगू में जो आते रहे रातभर

याद में आपकी आंख रोती रही
होंठ भी थर्थराते रहे रातभर

शौक़ ए शम्मा1 से परवाने आते रहे
आतिश ए दिल जलाते रहे रातभर

बेख़ुदी में ख़ुदी से जो पीते गए
जाम ए मय2 डगमगाते रहे रातभर

क्या करें प्यास बुझती नहीं जो सफ़ीर
आप लब से पिलाते रहे रातभर
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1 शम्मा की लालसा / desire of flame
2 शराब के प्याले / goblets of wine



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6th November 2015, 10:37 AM

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aap mahfil sajaate rahe raatbhar
guftguu me.n Jo aate rahe raatbhar

yaad me.n aapkii aa.nkh rotii rahii
ho.nTH bhii thartharaate rahe raatbhar

shauq e shamma.a se parvaane aate rahe
aatish e dil jalaate rahe raatbhar

beKHudii me.n KHudii se Jo piite Gaye
jaam e ma.i Dagmagaate rahe raatbhar

kyaa kare.n pyaas bujhtii nahi.n Jo Safiir
aap lab se pilaate rahe raatbhar
-------------------------------------

आप महफ़िल सजाते रहे रातभर
गुफ़्तगू में जो आते रहे रातभर

याद में आपकी आंख रोती रही
होंठ भी थर्थराते रहे रातभर

शौक़ ए शम्मा1 से परवाने आते रहे
आतिश ए दिल जलाते रहे रातभर

बेख़ुदी में ख़ुदी से जो पीते गए
जाम ए मय2 डगमगाते रहे रातभर

क्या करें प्यास बुझती नहीं जो सफ़ीर
आप लब से पिलाते रहे रातभर
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1 शम्मा की लालसा / desire of flame
2 शराब के प्याले / goblets of wine


Aadeil bhai....bahut khoob likha hai aur last wala sher to kya kehne...bahut khoob


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6th November 2015, 02:29 PM

wah aadeil bhai wah kya khoob likha hai
daad hi daad
likhte rahen


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6th November 2015, 03:24 PM

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aap mahfil sajaate rahe raatbhar
guftguu me.n Jo aate rahe raatbhar

yaad me.n aapkii aa.nkh rotii rahii
ho.nTH bhii thartharaate rahe raatbhar

shauq e shamma.a se parvaane aate rahe
aatish e dil jalaate rahe raatbhar

beKHudii me.n KHudii se Jo piite Gaye
jaam e ma.i Dagmagaate rahe raatbhar

kyaa kare.n pyaas bujhtii nahi.n Jo Safiir
aap lab se pilaate rahe raatbhar
-------------------------------------

आप महफ़िल सजाते रहे रातभर
गुफ़्तगू में जो आते रहे रातभर

याद में आपकी आंख रोती रही
होंठ भी थर्थराते रहे रातभर

शौक़ ए शम्मा1 से परवाने आते रहे
आतिश ए दिल जलाते रहे रातभर

बेख़ुदी में ख़ुदी से जो पीते गए
जाम ए मय2 डगमगाते रहे रातभर

क्या करें प्यास बुझती नहीं जो सफ़ीर
आप लब से पिलाते रहे रातभर
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1 शम्मा की लालसा / desire of flame
2 शराब के प्याले / goblets of wine
Waahh...bahut khoob adeil ji...

Daad qubool kijiyega...



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10th November 2015, 10:48 AM

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Aadeil bhai....bahut khoob likha hai aur last wala sher to kya kehne...bahut khoob
aapka bahot bahot shukriya, Sunita dii



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wah aadeil bhai wah kya khoob likha hai
daad hi daad
likhte rahen
Ishqji,

aapka behad shukr guzar hu....



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Waahh...bahut khoob adeil ji...

Daad qubool kijiyega...
Madhuji,

aapkii daad aur mubaarakbaad ke liye mai tah-e-dil shukrguzar hu....



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bahut khoob kalaam huaaa hai janaab...... bahut aalaa ..

likhte rahen salaamat rahen..............

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aap mahfil sajaate rahe raatbhar
guftguu me.n Jo aate rahe raatbhar

yaad me.n aapkii aa.nkh rotii rahii
ho.nTH bhii thartharaate rahe raatbhar

shauq e shamma.a se parvaane aate rahe
aatish e dil jalaate rahe raatbhar

beKHudii me.n KHudii se Jo piite Gaye
jaam e ma.i Dagmagaate rahe raatbhar

kyaa kare.n pyaas bujhtii nahi.n Jo Safiir
aap lab se pilaate rahe raatbhar
-------------------------------------

आप महफ़िल सजाते रहे रातभर
गुफ़्तगू में जो आते रहे रातभर

याद में आपकी आंख रोती रही
होंठ भी थर्थराते रहे रातभर

शौक़ ए शम्मा1 से परवाने आते रहे
आतिश ए दिल जलाते रहे रातभर

बेख़ुदी में ख़ुदी से जो पीते गए
जाम ए मय2 डगमगाते रहे रातभर

क्या करें प्यास बुझती नहीं जो सफ़ीर
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1 शम्मा की लालसा / desire of flame
2 शराब के प्याले / goblets of wine
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bahut khoob kalaam huaaa hai janaab...... bahut aalaa ..

likhte rahen salaamat rahen..............

Shaad..........
aapka behad shukr guzaar hu Shoaibbhai.....
duaaoN ke saath....



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Bahut aala aur haseen kalaam hua hai aadeil bhai mazaa aa gaya yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
Bhai aapko Diwali aur nav varsh kii shubh kaamnaaeN....

aapkii navazish ke liye aapka bahot bahot shukriya...



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