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3rd September 2014, 01:56 PM
inspired by the wordings of Hakim Naasir saab's sher....
hum to ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii piiye haNs ke
ghum ko sehne ke liye baadaa-kashii kyuN karte
original sher by Naasir saab....
pii jaa ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii haNs ke Naasir
ghum ko sehne meN bhii kudrat ne mazaa rakkhaa hai
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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gaahe-gaahe* pitaa tha maiN shab-e-ghum-o-ruz-e-khair**
haath meN tha baadaa aur wo keh gaye aaj shab-ba-khair
(*often; **nights of sorrow & days of happiness)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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wahhhh...bahut khoob....Zarra ji thread ke liye aapko Reps bante hai
reps added +++
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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hosh main hai tu kya pata tujhe baada-kashii kya hai
Utha ye jaam-e-sharab fhir batana mehfil-e-shayarii kya hai
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3rd September 2014, 10:23 PM
Mujhe hairaan' na karo tum fusoon' ki aad mein
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From a drinker to a non drinker
hosh main hai tu kya pata tujhe baada-kashii kya hai
Utha ye jaam-e-sharab fhir batana mehfil-e-shayarii kya hai
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bohat khoob. .................................
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accha sher hai raina sahab....per filhaal aapko baada word se sher banana hai....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
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3rd September 2014, 11:54 PM
Iss tishnagi key shauk hain bilkul nahi saada
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Dear ye sher khul nahiN paya.....can you pls interpret it misra e oola to samajh agaya saani ka connection clear nahin hai.
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ye qi'taa tha, magar aadhaa hi post kiya tha
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Iss tishnagi key shauk hain bilkul nahi saada
Paani ko tarastey bhi maangey hai yeh baada....
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!
Sanjayji, kya khub bayaanaat huii hai....
dheroN daad....
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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From a drinker to a non drinker
hosh main hai tu kya pata tujhe baada-kashii kya hai
Utha ye jaam-e-sharab fhir batana mehfil-e-shayarii kya hai
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh ji waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
kya baat hai, Ananthji......
aap to double centruy kii aur baRh gaye
bahot khub.......
dheroN daad
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Waaaaaaahhhhhhh! bahot khoob awesome word play
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Waaaaaahhhhhhh! umdaa.......kabhi kabhi hairaan kar dete ho aadil.....dheron dheron daad
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Thanks a million dear .........................
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4th September 2014, 10:21 AM
Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor...
Ek baar khudko bhoolney
Aaey the hum zaroor..
Baada kashi key daur mein
Kuch yaar bhi miley
Kuch mayye aur main key khogaye
Aur kuch ko tha guroor....
Baada kashi ka daur ab
Dikhta kahin nahin
Ek boondh jo miley
Humey bhi deejiye huzoor..
Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor.....
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4th September 2014, 10:23 AM
Shukriya Adil bhai,
Kuch padh key,kuch soch key,kuch likh kar seekh raha hoon....Inayat!:-)
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inspired by the wordings of Hakim Naasir saab's sher....
hum to ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii piiye haNs ke
ghum ko sehne ke liye baadaa-kashii kyuN karte
original sher by Naasir saab....
pii jaa ayyaam kii talkhii ko bhii haNs ke Naasir
ghum ko sehne meN bhii kudrat ne mazaa rakkhaa hai
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gaahe-gaahe* pitaa tha maiN shab-e-ghum-o-ruz-e-khair**
haath meN tha baadaa aur wo keh gaye aaj shab-ba-khair
(*often; **nights of sorrow & days of happiness)
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WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Aadeil sahab ...sare aashaar behtareen hue hain....aap to lara k test record ki barabari par hain...dheron daad
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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Mujhe hairaan' na karo tum fusoon' ki aad mein
Mere junoon sey gehra nahin hai koi yahan'...
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Iss tishnagi key shauk hain bilkul nahi saada
Paani ko tarastey bhi maangey hai yeh baada....
(SR)c&p
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shayaraina
Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor...
Ek baar khudko bhoolney
Aaey the hum zaroor..
Baada kashi key daur mein
Kuch yaar bhi miley
Kuch mayye aur main key khogaye
Aur kuch ko tha guroor....
Baada kashi ka daur ab
Dikhta kahin nahin
Ek boondh jo miley
Humey bhi deejiye huzoor..
Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor.....
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Bohat khoob Raina ji...achhi shuruaat hai...likhte raheya
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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Waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh! MashaAllah! MashaAllah! kya baat hai jij bahot khoob
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Bohat bohat shukriya saali sahiba ...thanx alot
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bohat khoob. .................................
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Bohat bohat shukriya .....................
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh ji waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
kya baat hai, Ananthji......
aap to double centruy kii aur baRh gaye
bahot khub.......
dheroN daad
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Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab ...thanx a lot for your appreciation
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Zarraa sahab ljjiye is baar ek sher meri taraf se bhi haazir hai
HotoN pe mere hosh ke daawe to nahi haiN
Aa tere tarke baada ko aasaan bana duN.....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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Zarraa sahab ljjiye is baar ek sher meri taraf se bhi haazir hai
HotoN pe mere hosh ke daawe to nahi haiN
Aa tere tarke baada ko aasaan bana duN.....
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!... outstanding thinking...
its just superb!...... words are inefficient to praise that verse!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor...
Ek baar khudko bhoolney
Aaey the hum zaroor..
Baada kashi key daur mein
Kuch yaar bhi miley
Kuch mayye aur main key khogaye
Aur kuch ko tha guroor....
Baada kashi ka daur ab
Dikhta kahin nahin
Ek boondh jo miley
Humey bhi deejiye huzoor..
Baada kashi ka daur tha
Bas tha yahan suroor.....
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waaaaaaaaahhhh!!!
Sanjayji,
bahot hi khubsurat tehriir kii hai.....
yuN hi aate rahiye
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Zarraa sahab ljjiye is baar ek sher meri taraf se bhi haazir hai
HotoN pe mere hosh ke daawe to nahi haiN
Aa tere tarke baada ko aasaan bana duN.....
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waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!
Zainyji,
bahot hi khubsurat sher pesh kiya hai aapne........
dilse dheroN daad.............
DaaoN ke saath,
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Aadeil sahab ...sare aashaar behtareen hue hain....aap to lara k test record ki barabari par hain...dheron daad
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Ananthji,
iis qadardaani aur hausla afzaaii ke liye aapka behad momnoon hooN
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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Oye bluffmaster bhool gaye the ya check kar rahe the
Ab hui na koi baat.....bemisaal qita hai dost......dheron daad.
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oye!
bluffmaster nahi hooN
arrey! copy paste meN sirf pehla sher post kiya ...
aadat nahi hai naa!
hamesha sirf sher post kartaa hooN....
Thanks you liked it
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4th September 2014, 12:16 PM
arrey! notepad meN pehle type karta hooN phir yahaaN paste karta hooN....
hmm.. just padhe msgs.... PM kartaa hooN
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Zarraa sahab ljjiye is baar ek sher meri taraf se bhi haazir hai
HotoN pe mere hosh ke daawe to nahi haiN
Aa tere tarke baada ko aasaan bana duN.....
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Waaaaaaahhhh!!! Bohat khoob....dheron daad
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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*pari*
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!... outstanding thinking...
its just superb!...... words are inefficient to praise that verse!
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waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!
Zainyji,
bahot hi khubsurat sher pesh kiya hai aapne........
dilse dheroN daad.............
DaaoN ke saath,
Adil
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Waaaahhhhhhhh back with a bang bahot khoob rumaanii andaz aur gehri soch hai is sher meiN...too good
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Waaaaaaahhhh!!! Bohat khoob....dheron daad
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Bohat bohat shukriyah dostoN. ..
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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4th September 2014, 02:10 PM
jab baap ko bedardi se peet'tey dekha maa ko!
haqeeqat khuli ke baada haraam kyuN hai....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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4th September 2014, 02:37 PM
Hassan Bhai....Lafzon sey qaatil hain aap...waah!
Yeh shayaron' ka hai mahal,Ashaaron ki sultanat...
Har lafz mein ho moti jahan yeh hai wohi Jannat...
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Love n rgds
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jab baap ko bedardi se peet'tey dekha maa ko!
haqeeqat khuli ke baada haraam kyuN hai....
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Waaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!! Hassan bhai...der aaye par durust aaye...bohat khoob..dheron daad
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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arz-e-iltija na kar waqt tamaam hua maikade ka baada to nahi hai
pii la de saaqii aik jaam ke tera waqt mere gham se ziyaada to nahi hai
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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4th September 2014, 05:14 PM
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Originally Posted by hassan
jab baap ko bedardi se peet'tey dekha maa ko!
Haqeeqat khuli ke baada haraam kyun hai....
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Originally Posted by ananthpak
arz-e-iltija na kar waqt tamaam hua maikade ka baada to nahi hai
pii la de saaqii aik jaam ke tera waqt mere gham se ziyaada to nahi hai
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bohat khoob!...........................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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4th September 2014, 05:23 PM
Waaah Hassan Sahab..Masha Allah, Masha Allah....:-)
Jab kabhi baada-o-jaam dekhta hoon
Zindagi ki sardiyon ko sekta hoon....
(SR)c&p
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4th September 2014, 07:29 PM
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Originally Posted by aadeil
Ananthji,
sahi baat kahi
vaise shaayaroN ka bhii yehi haal hota hai, jab tak form meN haiN to apnaa fusoon chalaate rehte haiN aur out of form ho gaye to out ho jaate haiN
aur aapke fusoon kaa javaab nahi, aapne kahaa ye aapka fav topic nahi hai phir bhii aap perfect stroke play kar rahe haiN, iis tarah to aap Tendulkar kii category meN aa gaye jo football player bante bante God of Cricket ban gayaa
yuN hi aapka fusoon chalta rahe ye duaa ke saath...
Adil
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Adil ji..............lol..........
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4th September 2014, 07:34 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
wahhhh...bahut khoob....Zarra ji thread ke liye aapko Reps bante hai
reps added +++
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya is hausla afzaayee ka Sunita ji
Reps aur pazeeraayee ke asli haqdaar wo sabhi shoraa hain jo apne alfaaz se is bazm mein fusoon paida kar rahe hain. Main un ki taraf se aap ke reps dil se qabool karta hoon aur aap ke yahaan aane ka bahaut bahaut shukriya ada karta hoon. Ummeed hai yoon hi aap ka saath naaseh hota rahega.
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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4th September 2014, 08:04 PM
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Originally Posted by N@zneen
Ek request hai zarraji....ap shayad busy haiN ye nazar araha hai aur is month aapki guftugu thread bhi shuru hogai hai shayad apko dono thread par bane rehne pareshani ho to if u want u cn take a brk frm ths thread for a month we'll resume it after you are free its just a suggestion, if its not a problem for u we can continue
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Jee Zarraa saheb aap bikul sahi farma rahe haiN!
Bikul theek faisla hai aap ka! aur meHfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz ko hum insha Allah roshan karte raheN ge sab dost mil ke!
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
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Originally Posted by aadeil
Zarraasaab,
ji billkul. ye fusoon bilkul nahi rukega aap apnii fursat meN aate rahiyega aur agar aapko vaqt kii paabandii hai to aap har hafte ke bajaaye 10 din kaa vaqt rakhiye har lafz ke liye Just a suggestion
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Originally Posted by ananthpak
Yes we all are with you Zarraa sahab...devote more time on your interview yahan ki fikr na kare
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doston, thank you sssssooooo much for this amazing fabulous support. aap se ye sun kar waaqayee dil ko behad tasalli milee hai. saath hi ye dekh kar bhi dil ko behisaab khushi huwee ki aap jo keh rahe hain wo kar ke bhi dikha rahe hain. you are walking the talk with great dedication, sincerity and passion. is anjuman ko aap ne kis qadar rangeen, rawaan aur jawaan banaaye rakkha hai, dekhte hi banta hai. taareef aur shukriya ke liye alfaaz kam parh rahe hain.
aap sab ko aur sabhi members ko dheron dheron dilee duaein
aadeil sahab, lagta hai ki ek lafz par 10 din ka aap ka suggestion waise bhi laagoo karna hoga, kyunki har lafz par itnee sargarmee se charcha ho raha hai aur itne saare khoobsurat qalaam aa rahe hain, ki discussion dekh kar main time to time period bardhaata jaaoonga, as required lekin har hafte naya lafz dene mein mujhe koyee dikkat naheen hogi, kyunki mujhe to ek hi baar lafz dena hai, saare hafte us par qalaam kehne ki mehnat to members ko karni hoti, jo wo barhee hi khoobsurti se karte chale ja rahe hain
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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