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Love Shaam hote hi ye dil udaas hota hai - 3rd February 2003, 04:30 PM

Shaam hote hi ye dil udaas hota hai,
Toote khwaab ke sivaay na kuch paas hota hai,
Tumhari yaad ese waqt bahut aati hai,
Jab koi bhi aaspaas nahi hota hai.............!

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3rd February 2003, 11:06 PM

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bohoooot hi acha kaha aap ne. udasi si nazar ayi isme.... keep it up. :-)


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good - 4th February 2003, 03:31 AM

Genius ji,
mujhe aap ki shayeri acchi lagi.agar aap bura na mane to mai iski last line mai kuch tabdili(changes) karna chati hoon.

Shaam hote hi ye dil udaas hota hai,
Toote khwaab ke sivaay na kuch paas hota hai,
Tumhari yaad ese waqt bahut aati hai,
Jab na koi aas- paas hota hai
   
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