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7th August 2010, 02:13 PM
sawan ka mausam tha au kuch to likhna hi tha to maine soncha ki kanha ji par hi kyun na likha jaye..........pasand aaye toh reply jaroor kijiyega..........
aapka mitra .................prem anjana
aur haan mitron ik pankti ko do do baar padhe.......jiska prabhav aapko pdhte samay pata chal jayega
Kunj gali mein prem ki varsha, bheege radha rani ho
Madhur muraliya shayam bajawe, koonke koel kari ho
Maduban mein phoolon k jhoole, jhoole lalita pyari ho
Hilmil kar sab sakhi jhulave, sakhiyan ki kilkari ho
Yamuna k tat raas rachwe, madhav raas bihari ho
Gopin k sang hilmil nanche, madhav madan murari ho
Gwlan k sang dhenu charave, dare kaamar kari ho
Baldaaoo au dama ka sang, khele giriwar dhari ho
Yamuna k tat taruwar chaya, baithe kunj bihari ho
Radha k sang sakhi nihare, madhav chailbihari ho
Makhan choro au barjori, ban mein bhawra ghoom raha
Dekh dekh sabka tan dole, bhaktan ka mam jhoom raha
“Anjana” man bane mayura nache dai-dai taari ho
Kanha pe tan man ko vaara,ab jeevan ki balihari ho……………
anjana prem sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai, mai sabko hasata chala gaya. pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi, mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
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7th August 2010, 02:22 PM
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Originally Posted by prem_anjana
sawan ka mausam tha au kuch to likhna hi tha to maine soncha ki kanha ji par hi kyun na likha jaye..........pasand aaye toh reply jaroor kijiyega..........
aapka mitra .................prem anjana
aur haan mitron ik pankti ko do do baar padhe.......jiska prabhav aapko pdhte samay pata chal jayega
Kunj gali mein prem ki varsha, bheege radha rani ho
Madhur muraliya shayam bajawe, koonke koel kari ho
Maduban mein phoolon k jhoole, jhoole lalita pyari ho
Hilmil kar sab sakhi jhulave, sakhiyan ki kilkari ho
Yamuna k tat raas rachwe, madhav raas bihari ho
Gopin k sang hilmil nanche, madhav madan murari ho
Gwlan k sang dhenu charave, dare kaamar kari ho
Baldaaoo au dama ka sang, khele giriwar dhari ho
Yamuna k tat taruwar chaya, baithe kunj bihari ho
Radha k sang sakhi nihare, madhav chailbihari ho
Makhan choro au barjori, ban mein bhawra ghoom raha
Dekh dekh sabka tan dole, bhaktan ka mam jhoom raha
“Anjana” man bane mayura nache dai-dai taari ho
Kanha pe tan man ko vaara,ab jeevan ki balihari ho……………
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aapki ye rachna padh kar man brindavan jaane ko lalait ho utha . very nice
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7th August 2010, 03:10 PM
Bohat hi sundar kavita likhi hai aapne....touching..........................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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9th August 2010, 02:11 PM
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Originally Posted by prem_anjana
sawan ka mausam tha au kuch to likhna hi tha to maine soncha ki kanha ji par hi kyun na likha jaye..........pasand aaye toh reply jaroor kijiyega..........
aapka mitra .................prem anjana
aur haan mitron ik pankti ko do do baar padhe.......jiska prabhav aapko pdhte samay pata chal jayega
Kunj gali mein prem ki varsha, bheege radha rani ho
Madhur muraliya shayam bajawe, koonke koel kari ho
Maduban mein phoolon k jhoole, jhoole lalita pyari ho
Hilmil kar sab sakhi jhulave, sakhiyan ki kilkari ho
Yamuna k tat raas rachwe, madhav raas bihari ho
Gopin k sang hilmil nanche, madhav madan murari ho
Gwlan k sang dhenu charave, dare kaamar kari ho
Baldaaoo au dama ka sang, khele giriwar dhari ho
Yamuna k tat taruwar chaya, baithe kunj bihari ho
Radha k sang sakhi nihare, madhav chailbihari ho
Makhan choro au barjori, ban mein bhawra ghoom raha
Dekh dekh sabka tan dole, bhaktan ka mam jhoom raha
“Anjana” man bane mayura nache dai-dai taari ho
Kanha pe tan man ko vaara,ab jeevan ki balihari ho……………
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prem jee
radhe radhe
bahut sundar varnan kiya hai brij ke sawan ka ya yun kaho kanha ke sang gopiyon ke sawan ka bahut khoob dil se dheron daad aur aashirwaad aise hi likhte raho kanha ki kripa ka anand liye jao aur baante jao
duaon ke saath
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11th August 2010, 08:18 PM
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aapki ye rachna padh kar man brindavan jaane ko lalait ho utha . very nice
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rashmi ji namsahkaar.......... aapko yeh panktiyaan pasand aayi .thanx
jab bhi mai apni yeh panktiyaan man mein gungunata hoon toh mujhe vrindavan ka sukh hi prapt hone lagta hai........aapne meri rachna ko saraha jiske liye dhanyavaad..........
aapka mitra.........prem anjana
anjana prem sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai, mai sabko hasata chala gaya. pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi, mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
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23rd August 2010, 09:36 PM
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Bohat hi sundar kavita likhi hai aapne....touching..........................
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zainy ji bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne in paktiyon ko saraha aur pasand kiya!! thanx!
aapka dost ..............prem anjana
anjana prem sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai, mai sabko hasata chala gaya. pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi, mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
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23rd August 2010, 10:57 PM
khoobsoorat rachna..........dil se daad
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24th August 2010, 09:15 PM
prem bhai namaskaar..
kaise haiN aap...?
is kavita ke baare meiN kya kahuN, mere paas shabd hi nahi haiN....
bahut bahut sundar likha hai aapne...
padh kar rom-rom khil gaya...
aise hi likhte rahiye...
is kavita par aap mubaraqbaad ke haqdaar haiN..
meri taraf se daad-o-mubaraqbaad kubuul kijiyega...
ishwar aapki kalam ko aur noor de...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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27th August 2010, 10:05 PM
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prem jee
radhe radhe
bahut sundar varnan kiya hai brij ke sawan ka ya yun kaho kanha ke sang gopiyon ke sawan ka bahut khoob dil se dheron daad aur aashirwaad aise hi likhte raho kanha ki kripa ka anand liye jao aur baante jao
duaon ke saath
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ishk ji radhe radhe..........
panktiyon ko pasand karne k liye dhanyawaad !
ishk ji aapke aashirwaad ke liye kaanha ji ka dhanyavaad karta hoon
thanx......... aapka prem anjana
anjana prem sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai, mai sabko hasata chala gaya. pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi, mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
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