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30th March 2013, 03:39 AM
shareeke-ebazm ko aadaab
yaad nahiiN ke yeh Ghazal pehle idhar post ki hai ya nahiiN, aaj besaakhta yaad aa gayi to post kar raha hooN, yeh Ghazal koi taqreeban 7-8 saal pehle kahi thi, apni aara se zaroor nawaazeN
mehke mehke shabaab ki baateN
uski baateN, gulaab ki baateN
usko khona tha baat kismat ki
uska milna hai khwaab ki baateN
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki baateN
ya karo zikr unkii aaNkhoN ka
ya to jaam-e-sharaab ki baateN
kaun sunta hai yaar duniya meiN
humse khaana kharaab ki baateN
hum gareeboN se puuch kar dekho
aalam-e-iz'teraab ki baateN
bewafaa keh rahe haiN vo humko
tauba tauba !! janaab ki baateN
Ghazal-e-"maikash" meiN aur hoga kya ?
dard-o-Gham aur sharaab ki baateN!!
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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30th March 2013, 07:43 AM
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Originally Posted by maikasH
mehke mehke shabaab ki baateN
uski baateN, gulaab ki baateN
usko khona tha baat kismat ki
uska milna hai khwaab ki baateN
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki baateN
ya karo zikr unkii aaNkhoN ka
ya to jaam-e-sharaab ki baateN
kaun sunta hai yaar duniya meiN
humse khaana kharaab ki baateN
hum gareeboN se puuch kar dekho
aalam-e-iz'teraab ki baateN
bewafaa keh rahe haiN vo humko
tauba tauba !! janaab ki baateN
Ghazal-e-"maikash" meiN aur hoga kya ?
dard-o-Gham aur sharaab ki baateN!!
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WaaH ! Kyaa DilKash ... HaseeN Ashaar Hue HaiN
hum gareeboN se puuch kar dekho
aalam-e-iz'teraab ki baateN ......... Kyaa Kahne
Nihaayat UmdaaH Ghazal Huii Janaab
Sar Se Paa Talak
PurKash ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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30th March 2013, 10:44 AM
bahut khoob maikash jee....kya baat hai.....dilkash andaaz
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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30th March 2013, 10:59 AM
Bhai Maikash
Besaakhtgi, barjastgi, saadgi ka muraqqa hai yeh ghazal.
meri bharpoor daad qubool karein.
khush rahein, aabaad rahein.
regards
musharrafhusain
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30th March 2013, 01:53 PM
Bohat khoob maikash ji.............
1,2,5,6,7 are the best.... 
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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30th March 2013, 02:03 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by maikasH
shareeke-ebazm ko aadaab
yaad nahiiN ke yeh Ghazal pehle idhar post ki hai ya nahiiN, aaj besaakhta yaad aa gayi to post kar raha hooN, yeh Ghazal koi taqreeban 7-8 saal pehle kahi thi, apni aara se zaroor nawaazeN
mehke mehke shabaab ki baateN
uski baateN, gulaab ki baateN
usko khona tha baat kismat ki
uska milna hai khwaab ki baateN
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki baateN
ya karo zikr unkii aaNkhoN ka
ya to jaam-e-sharaab ki baateN
kaun sunta hai yaar duniya meiN
humse khaana kharaab ki baateN
hum gareeboN se puuch kar dekho
aalam-e-iz'teraab ki baateN
bewafaa keh rahe haiN vo humko
tauba tauba !! janaab ki baateN
Ghazal-e-"maikash" meiN aur hoga kya ?
dard-o-Gham aur sharaab ki baateN!!
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aapki gazleN haiN dil ke kraeeb,
aap likhte ho kamaal ki baateN....
Maikash ji.....aapki poetry shuru se hi hame bahut khaas lagti hai...aap jab bhi likhte ho..dil ko sakoon milta hai aapko padkar...yu hi aapki kalam chlti rhe...bazm ki ronak aap jaise shayroN se hi hai.
rabb raakha
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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30th March 2013, 07:21 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
WaaH ! Kyaa DilKash ... HaseeN Ashaar Hue HaiN
hum gareeboN se puuch kar dekho
aalam-e-iz'teraab ki baateN ......... Kyaa Kahne
Nihaayat UmdaaH Ghazal Huii Janaab
Sar Se Paa Talak
PurKash ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Ghazal ki pazi'raii ke liye bohat bohat shukriya aapka Naresh saahab
aapki mubarakbaad sar-aaNkhoN par
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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1st April 2013, 01:37 AM
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bahut khoob maikash jee....kya baat hai.....dilkash andaaz
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bohat shukriya Aru saahab, mashkoor hooN jee aapka
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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1st April 2013, 06:55 AM
ya karo zikr unkii aaNkhoN ka
ya to jaam-e-sharaab ki baateN
maikash bhai ji kya umda gazal hui hai
rajinderseep
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1st April 2013, 11:33 AM
usko khona tha baat kismat ki
uska milna hai khwaab ki baateN
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki baateN
bewafaa keh rahe haiN vo humko
tauba tauba !! janaab ki baateN
waah waah waah.. kya khoob hain janaab ki baaateN.. mazaa aa gaya bhai sachh kya andaaz hai zaalim a dil taar taar ho gayaa... subhan allah miyaaN.... jiyo...
likhte raheN.......
Shaad....
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1st April 2013, 12:51 PM
Maikhash Jee Aadaab!
WaaH janab kia baat hai behad khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab..
Is khoobsurat gazal par meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... 
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2nd April 2013, 11:43 PM
bewafaa keh rahe haiN vo humko
tauba tauba !! janaab ki baateN
ahaan...... kia baat hai janab...
boht aalaa... boht khoob..
DuaooN k saath ijaazat,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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5th April 2013, 05:58 PM
Maikash JI..... Bahot Lutf Aaya Aap Ka Ye Kalaam Parh Kar...
Ghazal Ki Rawaani Aur Andaaz-e-Bayaan BHi Umdah Raha
Bahot Si DAAAD Qabool Kijiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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8th April 2013, 09:31 AM
maikash bhaiyaa
pranaam ssa
bahot hi khoob huzoor . . umdaah Ghazal aur umdaah ehsaas
yuunhi bazm ki shaan ko badhaate rahiye aage bhee. . . dil se daad aur duaaen
khush rahiye apnaa khayaal rakhen
duaaon ke saath ijazat
aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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8th April 2013, 05:00 PM
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Bhai Maikash
Besaakhtgi, barjastgi, saadgi ka muraqqa hai yeh ghazal.
meri bharpoor daad qubool karein.
khush rahein, aabaad rahein.
regards
musharrafhusain
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Musharraf bhai aadaab,
aap ba'khoobi jaante haiN ke aapki raye,tabsira mere liye kya ehmiyat rakhte haiN aur jab aap dadd ataa farmaate haiN to maiN phoole nahiiN samaata
sar-aaNkhoN par, bohat shukriya
aate raha kijiye gaahe-ba-gaahe, aapse mukhaatib hona bhi mere liye baa'is-e-massarrat hai
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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11th April 2013, 12:54 AM
bahut hi pyari ghazal kahi hai apne....yakeenan behtreen
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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26th April 2013, 04:33 AM
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Originally Posted by maikasH
shareeke-ebazm ko aadaab
yaad nahiiN ke yeh Ghazal pehle idhar post ki hai ya nahiiN, aaj besaakhta yaad aa gayi to post kar raha hooN, yeh Ghazal koi taqreeban 7-8 saal pehle kahi thi, apni aara se zaroor nawaazeN
mehke mehke shabaab ki baateN
uski baateN, gulaab ki baateN
usko khona tha baat kismat ki
uska milna hai khwaab ki baateN
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki baateN
ya karo zikr unkii aaNkhoN ka
ya to jaam-e-sharaab ki baateN
kaun sunta hai yaar duniya meiN
humse khaana kharaab ki baateN
hum gareeboN se puuch kar dekho
aalam-e-iz'teraab ki baateN
bewafaa keh rahe haiN vo humko
tauba tauba !! janaab ki baateN
Ghazal-e-"maikash" meiN aur hoga kya ?
dard-o-Gham aur sharaab ki baateN!!
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maikash bhai,
bahut khoob. aap kee is ghazal mein riwayati rang bakhoobi nazar aata hai, aur wo aap ki pahchaan hai. tamaam ashar khoob lagey.
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki baateN
ye sher padh kar abdul hameed 'adam' ke har ghazal kee yaad taza ho gayi.
naacheez
Feroz
Feroz
ye zindagi hai kya 'feroz' shayari hai kya
kuchh haulnaak haadsey asha'ar ho gaye
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26th April 2013, 05:39 AM
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Originally Posted by maikasH
shareeke-ebazm ko aadaab
yaad nahiiN ke yeh Ghazal pehle idhar post ki hai ya nahiiN, aaj besaakhta yaad aa gayi to post kar raha hooN, yeh Ghazal koi taqreeban 7-8 saal pehle kahi thi, apni aara se zaroor nawaazeN
mehke mehke shabaab ki baateN
uski baateN, gulaab ki baateN
usko khona tha baat kismat ki
uska milna hai khwaab ki baateN
aaj dil khol kar pilaa saaqi
kal kareNge hisaab ki baateN
ya karo zikr unkii aaNkhoN ka
ya to jaam-e-sharaab ki baateN
kaun sunta hai yaar duniya meiN
humse khaana kharaab ki baateN
hum gareeboN se puuch kar dekho
aalam-e-iz'teraab ki baateN
bewafaa keh rahe haiN vo humko
tauba tauba !! janaab ki baateN
Ghazal-e-"maikash" meiN aur hoga kya ?
dard-o-Gham aur sharaab ki baateN!!
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Shandaar paishkash ke liyN dili daad qubool farmaaiye hazir hai
aslam
zindagi ke haseen lamhe ka
Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
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26th April 2013, 10:10 PM
As Salaam Walikum
Bahut khob Janab
Ashq Banke Woh Mere Chachm-e-Tar Main Rehta Hai
Ajeeb Woh Shaks Hai Jo Paani Ke Ghar Main Rehta Hai
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Faanoos Banke Jiski Hifazaat Hawaa Kare
Woh Shama Kia Bhuje Jise Roshan Kudha Kare
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26th April 2013, 10:16 PM
Janab muhtrahaam Maikash
Behaad Kushi hui Janab apko dekh kar kaise mijaaz Hain apke....
Kaafi salon bad apki ghazal Parii salaam hai mere Bhai apko Bahut umdaa ....
Likhte rahega. .. Apka Purana dost....
Chal parin hain kashtiyaan samandar dur hai kinaara.....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara....
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Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai....
ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........
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