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Bachpan De Din - 6th November 2007, 03:54 AM

Meray wallon saray hi dostaan mitraan layi, jehray ki kuj mazburiaan karaan aapnay ghar to nekkal k pardesaan ch aa k baithe nay.
te har sah di dhadkan de naal punjab diyaan galiyaan nu chetay karde nay.



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6th November 2007, 08:34 AM

Sminder ji mein kive tareef kran, apne drd nu es tran bisan kr dita jive koi bhutb hin khoobsurt poem ga riha hove , bhut achha lagea tusi ese tram likhde rho
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6th November 2007, 02:58 PM

Shaminder ji bahut vadhiyaa likdey oN tusi.

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Kamaal likhiyaa hai.

Khush raho. Wasdey raho

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8th November 2007, 09:17 AM

sahan de wich rahchiya nu, ve dillan bhulauna sukha ni,
je ek ek pal ek sadi jeha, taan umara languna saukha ni,
suj gayiaan aakhiyaan ro ro k,chal tu hi das ki kariye,
tainu aakhiya si tu maniya ni, k ishq handauna saukha ni.



shminder ji bhut hi achian lagain thodian eh lines bhut khoobsurt andaz hai apna ehsas likhan da
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dil no chu gaye lafaz - 13th November 2007, 12:33 PM

Shaminder ji....behad khoobsurat likhiya hai tusi....ek ek lafaz te lu-kandey khade ho gaye...te menu v apne bacpan de din te oh bichdiy.n hoeya saheliya.n yaad aa gayeia...jinha de naal shayad hun kade mulkaat kade na hoveygi.....te tuhadi poem de naal chand ku yaada.n main v share kar rahi haan....

sacchi bachpan de din v ki din c,
na koi preshanni te na koi fikar c,
har waqt khelne da hi khayal c,
kisi vi gal da na koi malaal c,
hun na oh din te na hi oh waqt hai,
hun har pal dil nu lagiya rehnda,
koi na koi fikar hai...........
kade naukri da te kade,
apne ghar-pariwaar da..........
kade bachiya da te kade,
kade aapne jivan safar da......

hun oh bachpan mud nahi auna,
te hun ohna saheliya.n ne v,
phela di tarah kidhe kade milna hai,
hun pipli te neechey kikli v kade nahi pauni hai,
te hun amb de bootey te peeng v kade nahi chadauni hai,
hun koyal di awaz de naal ku-ku karke awaz v nahi milauni hai,
te hun reit de ghar v kade nahi banu.ne ne,
te na hi hun kade mil sahleya.n gidha pauna hai....

hun tan bas...
hun tan bas......
aida hi zindgi nikaldi jani hai...
nit navi koi preshaani hai....

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Meray wallon saray hi dostaan mitraan layi, jehray ki kuj mazburiaan karaan aapnay ghar to nekkal k pardesaan ch aa k baithe nay.
te har sah di dhadkan de naal punjab diyaan galiyaan nu chetay karde nay.



ਓਹ ਦਿਨ ਜਿੰਦਗੀ ਦੇ ਗਏ...
ਦਿਨ ਬਚਪਨ ਦੇ ਗਏ !
ਨਿੱਕੇ-ਨਿੱਕੇ ਹੱਥ ਗਿੱਲੀ ਮਿੱਟੀ ਚ ਲਬੇੜਨੇ...
ਕੱਚੇ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਉੱਤੇ ਟਾਇਰ ਸਾਇਕਲਾਂ ਦੇ ਰੋੜਨੇ!
ਭੱਜਕੇ ਟਰਾਲੀਆਂ ਦੇ ਪਿਛੋਂ ਗੱਨੇ ਖਿਚਨੇ...
ਨਿੱਕੀ ਉਮਰੇ ਨਜਾਰੇ ਬੜੇ ਲਏ !
ਆਟੇ ਦੀ ਪਕਾਉਣੀ ਚਿੱੜੀ ਮਾਂ ਤੌਂ ਜਿੱਦ ਕਰਕੇ..
ਜਹਾਜ਼ ਉਡਾਉਣੇ ਕਾਗਜ਼ਾਂ ਦੇ ਪਾੜ ਵਰਕੇ !
ਬਾਰਸ਼ਾਂ ਦੇ ਪਾਣੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੋਲਾ ਪਾ-ਪਾਅ ਭਿਜਨਾ..
ਤਾਇਆਂ-ਚਾਚਿਆਂ ਦੇ ਘਰੋਂ ਰੋਟੀ ਖ਼ਾਣ ਗਿਜਣਾ !
ਓਹ ਨਾ ਸਾਂਝਾਂ ਦੇ ਸਮੇਂ ਨਾਂ ਹੁਣ ਰਹੇ ???
ਉਮਰਾਂ ਦੇ ਲੰਬੇ ਪੈਂਡੇ ਝੱਟ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੁਕਗਏ...


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21st November 2007, 03:09 AM

Sunita Varinder ji aap ji da bahut bahut thanwad jo aap ji nay aapna kemti samma kad k es nemanay jehay di likhiyaan hoian gallan wall dhayan deta.

Main Dr. preet and tilak ji da v bahut bahut thanwadi haan k jehna nay mainu pad k aapnay vechar meray naal sanjahay ketay nay.


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