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Love Bachpan - 3rd July 2010, 07:34 AM

Kya bachpan dohraoge?
Beete din yaad dilaoge?


Bhar ayengi ankhein barbas,
Jab laut kar piche jaoge.


Dhoodhiya hontho par kachi hansi,
Kya ussey wapis la paoge?


Voh jhoole, voh geet, voh masti,
Kya vaise fir hass paoge?


Surili lori ki woh meethe nind,
Aaj na vaise paoge.


Sache dilo ki massom baate,
Ab na tutla ke keh paoge.


Bade ho kar dukh sehna,
Ess sach ko jhoothla paoge?


Kho gaye hao woh fusat ke lamhe,
Unko fir dhoodh laoge?


Kya bachpan dohraoge?
Beete din yaad dilaoge?


Anil Arora

Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?

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3rd July 2010, 07:51 AM

Very Impressive .........very tuoching ! Anil Ji !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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3rd July 2010, 03:18 PM

Dhanyawad apka,bas kal dopahar ko u he baithe baithe apne beete hue palo ki yaado me kho gya to,un yaado ko maine kavita me likh diya.


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3rd July 2010, 07:58 PM

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Kya bachpan dohraoge?
Beete din yaad dilaoge?


Bhar ayengi ankhein barbas,
Jab laut kar piche jaoge.


Dhoodhiya hontho par kachi hansi,
Kya ussey wapis la paoge?


Voh jhoole, voh geet, voh masti,
Kya vaise fir hass paoge?


Surili lori ki woh meethe nind,
Aaj na vaise paoge.


Sache dilo ki massom baate,
Ab na tutla ke keh paoge.


Bade ho kar dukh sehna,
Ess sach ko jhoothla paoge?


Kho gaye hao woh fusat ke lamhe,
Unko fir dhoodh laoge?


Kya bachpan dohraoge?
Beete din yaad dilaoge?
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4th July 2010, 02:12 PM

sunder ati sunder kavita k liye dhanyavad.....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur hume padhwate rahiye!!!
aapka mitr prem anjana..........


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4th July 2010, 05:06 PM

Aap sab ka dhanyawad,main apne bachpan ki yaado me kho gya tha ess liye u he baithe baithe likh di.


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Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
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