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masoomshayer - 27th February 2006, 07:52 AM

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27th February 2006, 11:13 AM

Yu hi badhta Chala jaaye Manjil tak ye Kaarwaa.n,
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27th February 2006, 07:43 PM

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Bohat hi umdah khayaal hai aur maiN bhi aapke saath huuN

mera ID hai pravsaxena@yahoo.com

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My ID is Pulkit_Creations@yahoo.com or Pulkit_Creations@hotmail.com Hope I can be there too...


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28th February 2006, 01:32 AM

Adaab,

Kindly add me in Online Mushaira also

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Aadab,,

Bay had.. acha khial hay.. is say yakeenan mujh jisay nay shiro ko sekh nay ko bhoot kuch mily ga..

wisay mujh ko is site say shikiat hay..
jo kuch bhi post kar do.. log Aa tay zaroor hay.. lay kin itny kanjoos... kay jo dil may hay wo dil may he liye chaly jatay hay..
View 100 Replies 2.. wah kia ratio hay.. 50 log aye tw un may say ek kuch likh ta hay..

aur jo likh ta hay wo bhi subhan Allha.. wo he ek line
1) Wah kia baat hay
2) kia vichar hay
3) likh tay rahoo


indian movies kay thaky huye dialog say bhi thaki aui liny hay...

arry koi sujhaoo do.. koi galti nikalo.. kuch pata chaly kaha mistake hay.. may tw request kar kar kay mar ja ta hoo.. pleas do sher your fellings and view on my work.. magar koi fida nahi..

isi liye miny likh na he chordh dia..

ghar may kisi ko shumaoo tw khay tay hay.. hamara sar mat kahoo

online kisi ko sunaoo.. tw.. wah wah is kay ilawa.. aur kuch nahi..

acha hay likho he nahi..

aur agar kisi ki galti nikal do.. tw bas phir.. hafto tak koi jawab he nahi..

may bhi ap jisay jazbaat rakhta hoo.. sekhna bhi cha ta hoo aur sekhana bhi.. jis kay liye miray pass ek game ka idea.. hay.. lay kin q k wo bhoot buri thara flop hoo gi.. isi dar say miny abhi tak shuro bhi nahi ki...

agar ap kuch hosla day.. tw may abhi shuro kiye day ta hoo

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11th March 2006, 02:34 AM

Maikhashji,
Your thought of a get-2-gether in a conference chat is a brilliant idea. You can count me inn for it. Here is my email address: -

jigar_4_mona_only@yahoo.com

I surely would appriciate the oppourtunity to get more knowledge from great shayars we have on shayri.com.

I thank you for putting it all together for all of us.
take care,
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12th March 2006, 05:32 PM

maikash ji..

inshallah hum bhi zaroor is mehfil ka hissa banna chahenge...kuch seekhna chahenge taaki aaur behtar ho sakein...
my id is shiningeyez22@yahoo.com...
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hi - 19th March 2006, 12:37 AM

hi maikash ji aadaab from manu , i want to take participation in d same.

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maikash bhaiya cant b sure but i will try my best to b there,my id is

loveme_bhushan@yahoo.co.in

hope to hear from u soon.



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23rd March 2006, 12:25 AM

sir,
my id is justcoolout@yahoo.com

It would be my pleasure 2 join an online mushaira amongst
such stalwarts of this site.



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25th March 2006, 08:15 AM

Hi Everyone,

Maikash has not come online for quiet sometime... I hope he does soon and when he does he too joins in the mushayra..

Till then I am hoping to schedule it today my early morning and we will see how many are online and if enough members are there we can have the mushayra.. Last time only three of us were there but it was great

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Re: Online Mushaira at shayri.com......? Give us your feedback....!! - 4th April 2006, 09:54 PM

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Bazm-e-ehbaab ko salaam , namaste aur sat sri akaal


Internet pe bohat si urdu adab ki aisi mehfileN haiN jinka apna chatroom hai, jahaan site ke membraan ek duusre se taabadlaa-e-khayaal kar sakte haiN, aur mujhe yaad hai ke kuch baras pehle aisi hi ek mehfil ke zariye "online mushairey" ke concept ke tahat mujhe bohat kuch seekhne ko mila.

to maine socha kyuN na shayri.com ke members ko ek jagah jamaa kiya jaaye.....yuuN ek taraf jahaaN naye dostoN se jaan-pehchaan ka mauqaa milega wahiiN shayri ke mutalliQ do baateN bhi ho jaayeNgi aur yaqeenan ek-duusre se kuch na kuch seekhne ka mauqa hi milega.

ab isey kis tarah aNjaam diya jaaye, yeh mas'alaa apni jagah hai........ek tariqaa yuuN ho sakta hai ke, ek din aur waqt muqarrar kiya jaaye, aur msn messenger ya yahoo messenger ke zariye ek hi conversation meN sabko invite kiya jaaye......

jin ehbaab ko apna email address share karne se aitraaz ho voh ek naya email address banaa sakte haiN


ye ek khayaal tha jo zahan meN kayi dinoN se Ghar kiye baiThaa tha.......agar aap log iske haq meN vote dete haiN to iss online gathering ko silsilevaar banaya jayega.........matlab ke har hafte ya har mahine kam se kam ek baar aisa kiya jayega.......

mujhe aap sab membraan ki qeemati ra'ye ka iNtezaar rahega


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Aadaab Miakash Saheb,
Aapka kadam sach mein qabil-e-taareef hai. Aap jaise senior writer ki is site ko bahut jarurat hai.
waise main koi nahi hota yeh sab kehne ke liye kyoki maine khud yahan kuch nahin likha. Magar yahan aata 2003 se hoon. Qabil doston ko aksar parkar chala jata hoon.
Meri bas ek guzaarish hai aapse ki jis khubsurati se aap sab doston ko invite kar rahe hain, uss khubsurti se baki nahin karte dikhey. Kuch ek doston ki language bahut teekhi si lagi mano woh invitation nahin koi faisla suna rahe hon. Meri guzaarish hai ki aap sabhi ko samjhayein ki kaise invite kara jaye.

Shukriya Maikash ji, aapke khayaal jaankar dil ko khushi hui hai

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5th April 2006, 03:51 PM

Hi Friends,

I had spoken to Maikash regarding the mushaiyra yesterday. He says he has become a lot busier now a days compared to the time he posted this thread... but he will try his best to be with us..

We have thought of a time that shud suit him as well as us... So... all those who are interested must come online on Yahoo Msgr...Coming Sunday at 7.30 PM (I.S.T.) which would be 3.30 UK time....

Aap log mujhe yaa Rohin ko contact kijiyega... hum conference shuru kar lenge... hum dono ke hi yahoo IDs oopar mentioned hain... for those who are not already added

So Hopefully... is baar hum is mehfil ki shuruaat kar paayenge... meraa maanna hai ke 10 log agar ikathha bhi ho jaayne ek jagah to sirf knowledge share kar kar ke hi kaafi seekh sakte hain.... Jus need to have the eagerness...


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hi - 6th April 2006, 04:20 PM

Maikash ji,

Namaskaar......... main aaj hi aapka yah thread dekha. sach mushaira mein jaane ka saubhagya badi muskil se milata hai. aur main chaunga ki main muhsiare upasthit rahu aur bahut kuchh seekh saku.. but afsos main chat messenger nahi use kerta.. lekin jab bhi mujhe mauka milega main jarur upasthit hone ki koshis kerunga.. aapka yah nek kheyaal mujhe bahut achchha laga.. main aap sabke sath hoon... mera email address hai.........

akant2000@yahoo.com

Akant...


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7th April 2006, 12:35 AM

i will be there pullu bhai .. please invite me when u start the confrence .. okies..... sure i will come ,,,

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10th April 2006, 04:24 PM

Adaab Doston,

Kal shaam 7.30 baje (IST) kucch members ikathhaa huwe thhe online mushaiyre ke liye.. Sadly Maikash bhai cud not be a part of us... I could not inform him in advance as I wasnt sure as to even one member will be in... nobody committed... lekin kaafi members ikattha ho gaye the... we were around 10 people..

Please is baar jo bhi members aa rahe hon... mujhe ya Rohin ko pehle se inform karden... taaki main Maikash ko inform kar sakoon... It would have been realy embrassing.. if I had invited him and none of us turned up....

Hum Sab me ek Mayank (Anjaana_Rahi) his thhe jo kucch level tak urdu adaab se parichit hain... so unhi se kaha gaya humse knowledge share karne ko...

Bas yunhi aage badhte badhte... Ek ghazal shuru ii gayi aur sabhi se usme sher jodhne ko kaha gaya... Khoobsurat bani yaa nahi... yeh aap bataaiyega... but ek saath milkar kucch bhi karen mazaa poora milta hai... Ghazal pesh-e-nazar hai...


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Lage kuchh ham pe ilzaam aise hi..

Likha dil ke kaagaz par naam teraa
Ab likhoon dil ka paigaam aise hi

Besabab to na thi hamari mohabbat
Mili Tanhaaiyan humen inaam aise hi

Kin gunaahon ki sazaa milti hai hame..
Kya hote hain wafa ke anjaam aise hi

Bhar aaati aaankhen hai bewajah ab
Paaye ishq me naye aayaam aise hi

Aashiqi thi meri na thi koyii dillagii
KyuN huii hasraten tamaam aise hi..?

Chaaya yaadon main hai ik chehra
Fir dhalne lagi hai jo shaam aise hi



Jin members ne kal mushiayre me bhaag liyaa woh thhe...

1. Mayank (Anjaana Rahi)
2. Jasleen (Roshani)
3. Shraddha (Shrdh)
4. Manu (Acharya_mj)
5. Deep (Deep in your heart)
6. Brij (passionate lover)
7. Ranjana Bhatia (ranju_bhatia)
8. Khozi (Sorry... I don't know his name)
9. Pulkit

Rohin cud not join us as he had to leave for some urgent work...

Ek ek karke humsafar judhte hain... kaafila badhta jaata hai... safar aur haseen ho jaata hai... hope more of us will join the mushaiyra next week...


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Bahot khub likha aap sab ne milke.....well done


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jara is andaaz pe aashiko ke gour farmaiye - 4th August 2006, 01:00 AM

janaab

mein shayar hun jo shayri-e-dard ki mehfil aabaad karta hun....
aapse is umeed ke sath choti aur masum si fariyaad karta hun...
saja unhe bhi de jo apna mobile number forward karte hai...
unke paas bhi mobile hai ye advertise yahan karte hai...

unke khilaaf koi kanuni karwai bhi kijiye...
ayse bad-tamejo ko kadi sajaye dijiye...
hum mushqil se apne haal-e-dil bata rahe hai..
wo shouk se hasinaon se ishq lada rahe hai..

takleef hume nahi ki unhe unka ishq mil jayega...
par janta hun wo ek naya dard bhara gazal banayega...
do dil mil jaye ye dua to hum bhi farmaate hai...
par janaab tuta hua dil bhi yahan kishto mein aate hai...

aap kahenge dil bhi bhala kishto mein kaise tut sakta hai....
dekhiye wo kabakht ek baar dhoka kha ke phir dil lagate hai...

thats all i can say...
hope u wont mind the way i express my feelings


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dard bhari ek dastaan se khuda ko rulane chale...
   
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jazbe - 22nd September 2006, 08:34 PM

log kya samach pahe gi kisi ke jazbe ki.......?
log to hamesha yeh hi sochte hai..........chalo aacha naye donte hai ..mazaak urane ke liye..
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ap ki shayri bout aschi hai isi tara likte rao


dosti aur pyar sirf kismat valo ke nasseb hote hai
har kisi ke nahi
preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya
aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya

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Adaab

Mujhe bohat takleef ho rahi hai yahaN jo bhi kuch chal raha hai ye dekh kar. Bohat logoN se shikayateN aayeen haiN ke yahaN ka mahole badmaza hota ja raha hai.

Afsos ki baat ye hai ke ye site jo sher kehne aur sunane ke liye hai usey yahaN ke membaran ne dating-joint meN tabdeel kar diya hai. Shayrana zaban ki jagah galiyoN aur bhadde afaaz ne le li hai. Log jis tarah ke alfaaz istemaal kar rahe hain wo badi sharm ki baat hai. Jab paRh kar sharm aati hai to un hazraat ko wo alfaaz yahan likh kar chaspaaN karte huve kyuN nahin aayee.

Sabhi dostoN maiN is baat se aagah karva duuN ke behtar hoga ke is tarah ki batoN ke liye koi aur jagah chun leN. Ab yahan se aise logoN ka daan-paani uth gaya samjheN. MaiN baRi hi saKhti se aisee har post ko delete karne jaa raha huuN. Aur gandi zaban wale har member BAN karne ja raha huuN.

Ye baat tai hai ke is site par is qism ki harketeN yahaN bardasht nahiN ki jaayeNgi. Chahe jo bhi ho.
Aur jo log is jagah se pyaar karte haiN unse meri guzarish hai ke Khuda ke liye apne waqt men se kuch lamhe iske liye nikalen aur yahaN hone waali kisi bhi badmaza baat par nazar rakhen aur uskii ittela mujhe deN. Foran action liya jaayega.
Ummeed hai aap sab is baat par ghaur kareN ge aur yahaN ke haalt theek karne meN meri madad kareNge.

“YahaN Khaskar Ekta ji ki post ka zikr karna chahuN ga. Ekta ji aapko ye post nahiN karni chahiye thi. YahaN aapki tasveer ki zaruurat nahiiN hai. Agar aap shayri karti haiN to most welcome. Aapki post delete ki jaa rahi hai.”

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salam praveen ji,
thanx achaa laga agar hume bhi kuch shikayat hogi jo hum zaroor likhege waise hum shayri.com naye hain per yaha hume jo bhi shakas mile hain bahut achee hai sub mujhe abhi koi shikayat nai hai.
thanx

SHAAN


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Mujhe bohat takleef ho rahi hai yahaN jo bhi kuch chal raha hai ye dekh kar. Bohat logoN se shikayateN aayeen haiN ke yahaN ka mahole badmaza hota ja raha hai.

Afsos ki baat ye hai ke ye site jo sher kehne aur sunane ke liye hai usey yahaN ke membaran ne dating-joint meN tabdeel kar diya hai. Shayrana zaban ki jagah galiyoN aur bhadde afaaz ne le li hai. Log jis tarah ke alfaaz istemaal kar rahe hain wo badi sharm ki baat hai. Jab paRh kar sharm aati hai to un hazraat ko wo alfaaz yahan likh kar chaspaaN karte huve kyuN nahin aayee.

Sabhi dostoN maiN is baat se aagah karva duuN ke behtar hoga ke is tarah ki batoN ke liye koi aur jagah chun leN. Ab yahan se aise logoN ka daan-paani uth gaya samjheN. MaiN baRi hi saKhti se aisee har post ko delete karne jaa raha huuN. Aur gandi zaban wale har member BAN karne ja raha huuN.

Ye baat tai hai ke is site par is qism ki harketeN yahaN bardasht nahiN ki jaayeNgi. Chahe jo bhi ho.
Aur jo log is jagah se pyaar karte haiN unse meri guzarish hai ke Khuda ke liye apne waqt men se kuch lamhe iske liye nikalen aur yahaN hone waali kisi bhi badmaza baat par nazar rakhen aur uskii ittela mujhe deN. Foran action liya jaayega.
Ummeed hai aap sab is baat par ghaur kareN ge aur yahaN ke haalt theek karne meN meri madad kareNge.

“YahaN Khaskar Ekta ji ki post ka zikr karna chahuN ga. Ekta ji aapko ye post nahiN karni chahiye thi. YahaN aapki tasveer ki zaruurat nahiiN hai. Agar aap shayri karti haiN to most welcome. Aapki post delete ki jaa rahi hai.”

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Arey Baqtiyar sahab salam...

Aap bhi is baat se ittefakh rakhane lage, janker khushi hui.....

May to bus dua hi ker raha tha ke khuda aapko Hidayat bakshe.....

Lagta hai meri dua kabul hui...

Chaliye deri se aaye per durust to aaye....
Khuda Hafez!


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