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Ek Paagal Nazm Paagal SmaajoN Ke Naam - 9th December 2005, 01:21 AM

Ek Paagal Nazm Paagal SmaajoN Ke Naam

Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos

Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kaY

Aflaaq-- skys, KaY----vomit

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9th December 2005, 03:27 AM

dear brijinder.....
aapki nazm ko padhke mere moonh pe taala lag gaya hai...itni kadwahat kyun....har ek lavz mein wehshat hi wehshat nazar aayi....magar in sab ke bawajood yahi kehna chahungi ke bahaut umda likkha hai aapne...bahaut behetreen tareeke se aapne apne dil ke angaare lavzon me zaahir kiye hain....likhte rahieyga.


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12th December 2005, 01:13 AM

Thanx farhana for the warm words of appreciation.This reflects the state of my mind when sometimes bitterness n hypocacies of the society hurts you far too much.
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