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kahin kho na jana -
7th July 2011, 04:36 PM
Duniya ki bheed me kahin kho na jana... badi zalim hai duniya ye tune na jana. abhi to jaise ghari hai imtihaan ki, abhi se tum ghabra na jana... saath dunga main har kadam par tera zara ek baar mujhe aawaz lagana.... |
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7th July 2011, 05:13 PM
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Good luck......... Thanks for share with us......... Best regards....... kumkum |
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8th July 2011, 01:32 PM
thanks kumkum ji....
 becoz of ur inspiring words motivate us to write something..... Thanks dear... |
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8th July 2011, 02:28 PM
Dear shayri main wazan nahi hai zara si aur try kro..u will become great soon
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9th July 2011, 12:28 PM
thanks for ur advice...
Wajan daalne ki koshish karunga... |
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10th July 2011, 01:47 PM
dear apko mera comment bura to nahi lga ?
Yar apki poetry achi hai,us k bavajood b main ne kmjor is liey kaha k ap aur zyada mehnat kro.so bhai naraz na hona. Abid Afzal Majaaz.. +923149815410 |
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11th July 2011, 11:52 AM
nahi Abid ji,
aisi koi baat nahi hai hum to apni rachnaye post karte hai taki aaplog use padhkar aur behtar banane me help kare. Aap meri aur bhi rachnaye padh sakte hai... |
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12th July 2011, 10:38 AM
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