Location: Aapne Sanam Ko Yaad Kiya Sar Jhuka Liya**
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29th January 2004, 09:49 PM
Bohot hi khubsurat kalam likhhi hein aapne. Wah, keya baat hein. Dilko bohot achha laga, aur poche ke kitni khushi huyi. I can't explain. Really it's so beautiful. Likhte rahiyega. Tahe dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Take care. God bless you.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
his shivani gi
how r u?
yakin maniye to afsos hota hay jab achi posts tak
ja nahi pate..magar bhala ho doston ka jo acha parhne
ka mashwara dete hain...
khob likha hay jnab....jise hath pakar kar sath chalne ka wada diya jaye use himmat or takat dilane k liye aap k ilfaz apni
sachayi or mukhlis maani sath liye hwe hain,,acha laga
likhte rahiye ga
aik banjara'''
bas''''
banjara''''
agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon
or judai main mohabbat kasi????
i am really thankful to all of you...i am glad you all liked it....act i didnt expect ke everyone will like it so much.....i wrote this one especially for all those people who have posted their shayris in the shayri-e-dard forum....i just couldn't tolerate those broken hearts so i thought may be this can help them feel better and i hope it has........once again thank you all.....chaandji,banjaraji,romanaji,puneetji and shimulji of course....bye n take care!
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
hello asifji......thanx a lot for appreciating my poem....i think last time i confused with some other person i am sorry for that....take care aur aate rahiyega yahan....bye!
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
bakhoob likha hai shivani ji, hum to aab soch rahe hai ki kisi insaan ki tareef-e-bayaan hai ya khud khudaayi ko kaafile mein utaar layi hai aap.. bahut pasand aaya..likhte rahiyega
duaaon ke saath
-mast
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
Hi, Shivani...
Kaise ho..... aashaa he achchhi hi hogi...
bahot hi achchha likhaa he....
keep writing...
Take care.....
~*~ saahil ~*~
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Ye alfaz he dard e dil ke, aur kuch nahi.n
Ye ghaav he zindagee ke, aur kuch nahi.n
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mastji aap ka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne hamein itna saraha.....sach main dil khush ho gaya apni itni taarif padhke....tahe dil se shukriys kubool kijiyega....bye 4 now...and take care!!!!!
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
hello rakshitji.....hum to bilkul thik hain aur hum bhi yehi aasha karte hain ki aap bhi achche hi honge...aap ka bahut bahut shukriya...i'm glad u liked it.....bye 4 now!take care!!!!!!!
koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....