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Originally Posted by Vazeer Razavi
Bohat Unda Ashaar hai Adeel Sahab.
Bas ek guzarish hai, is line mein sakta huraha hai "Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko"
Ager "shikast dil" ke aywaz "shikasta dil" woh to sher wazan bana rahye ga
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Bahot shukriya, Vazeer saab.
Aapke suggestionko hamne note kiya hai. YahaaN to ham tabdil nahiN kar paa rahe haiN par hamne isse apne note me change kar diya hai.
Iss tarah suggestions dete rahiyega.
Thaks a lot.
Adil