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vahii phir mujhe yaad aane lage hain .. -
26th July 2003, 08:50 PM
vahii phir mujhe yaad aane lage hain
jinhen bhulaane mein zamaane lage hain unki aankhon ke gehre bhawar mein hum dil ka safina dubane lage hai aaine mein darpan ubharta hai unka ashqon mein bhi wo jhilmilane lage hai diye the jo phool humne unko kabhi meri saanson ko wo mehkane lage hai ye kahanaa thaa un se muhabbat hai mujh ko ye kahane mein mujh ko zamaane lage haiin bandagi karne se bhi Khuda nahin milta "Kureel" muhabbat mein hosh ab Thikaane lage hain -Manoj Kureel |
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27th July 2003, 10:23 AM
Monaj sahab,
bohot hi umda kalaam hai ye agar mein galat nahin hoon to ye shayr khumar barabankvi ka to nahin. lekin ye aap ka andaaz theek laga ke kuch ashayer kisi shayer ke aur phir kuch apne aur ye nazm.. bohot achche Manoj sahab. Hafeez Paradise is always where love dwells |
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28th July 2003, 12:24 AM
bandagi karne se bhi Khuda nahin milta "Kureel"
muhabbat mein hosh ab Thikaane lage hain chalo ab hosh aaya thik hein,,,but dubara mohabbat mein pad gaye ,,,,,to kisi aur shayar ki aatma royegi,,,,jaise un janab ki jinki aapne ,,,,,,samjh gaye to,,,,,,,,,,, sunha hein humein wo bhulane lagein hein,,,,,, to kya hum unhein yaad aane lagein hein,,,,,,, god knows inka koi bharosa nahin,,,,,, yeh to wehi jane wo kinhein yaad karke kinhein bhulate hein,,,,,,  |
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Galat baat hai Manjo ji |
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Galat baat hai Manjo ji -
28th July 2003, 12:26 AM
Hello Manoj ji ,
ye kalam humane bhi pahale pada hai, aur aap ka dusare kalam ilzam bhi aap ka apna likha hua nahi hai, ye to bahoot galat baat hai ki aap kisi aur ke likhe kalam aap apne naam se post kare umeed hai aap aisa phir nahi karange ..... I request an explanation from you on behalf of shayir.com for this Love Me Not  |
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28th July 2003, 12:38 AM
bandagi karne se bhi Khuda nahin milta "Kureel"
muhabbat mein hosh ab Thikaane lage hain chalo ab hosh jab thikane aa hi gaye,,,, dubara mohabbat mein na pad jana,,,warna aur kisi shayar ki aatma royegi,,,, ,,,samajh gaye kuch,,, suna hein humein wo bhulane lagein hein,,,, to kya hum unhein yaad aane lage,,,,,, |
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