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sikke puraane - 23rd January 2011, 07:46 PM
dosto ko aadaab/salaam/ssa

is section ka silsila badaate huye meri ek koshish pesh kar raha hu...
aaj hi likhi hai
dosto se guzarish hai ki ise durust karne me meri help kijiye.
all suggestions and corrections are welcome.

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kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
khuda jaane jaayen fasaane kaha tak

bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

jaha hum khaDe the wahi tak thi manzil
game ishq jaate sunane kaha tak

divane huye hai sabhi hosh wale
sambhalte phir akhir divane kaha tak

uTho zidd na cheDo ye baate purani
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Wah wah mere bhai Bohat khoob Ghazal ke 3 shero me se yeh tay karna mushkil ho gaya hai ke sabse kamaal ka sher kaunsa hai..............waise to poori Ghazal ghazab dhaa rahi hai mere bhai.

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dosto ko aadaab/salaam/ssa

is section ka silsila badaate huye meri ek koshish pesh kar raha hu...
aaj hi likhi hai
dosto se guzarish hai ki ise durust karne me meri help kijiye.
all suggestions and corrections are welcome.

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kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
khuda jaane jaayen fasaane kaha tak

bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

jaha hum khaDe the wahi tak thi manzil
game ishq jaate sunane kaha tak

divane huye hai sabhi hosh wale
sambhalte phir akhir divane kaha tak

uTho zidd na cheDo ye baate purani
chalaa.ooge sikke puraane kaha tak

Zidd Ji...!

Aaap Ki Ye Ghazal Hr Taraf Se Mukammal Or Khubsurat Hai.....
Aap Ki Soch Ki Wussat Or Alfaz Ko Piranay Ka Fun Ja-baja Nazar Aaya Hai Is Nazar Me........

Is Shandaar Takhleeq Pr Me To Tah-e-Dil Se Aap Ko Daad Pesh Krta Hun.......... Qabool Farmayen

Yunhi Likhtay Rahen Or Aatay Rahen



Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi

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YuuN toh saari ghazal ka lafz lafz taareef ke qaabil hai .. har ashaar aap se aise adaa huaa hai jaise kisi murtikaar ne khoobsurat muzasmaa shaahakar kar diya ho .. sachaai toh yeh hai Zidd Bhaai ! jo mujhe nazar aai ... yun toh tajmahal banne ke baad bhi logo ne nuqtaachiinii ki hogi ... ! magar jo kharaa woh kabhi nahi badaltaa ... !

iss sab ke baawjood nayi zubaan kehtaa .. tazaa tareen khayaal ... maqtaa ... mujhe behad pasand aayaa ...

uTho zidd na cheDo ye baate purani
chalaa.ooge sikke puraane kaha tak

aakhir kehna hi padhega ... humari dil se daad le hi li jiye ... ! iss behtar kalaam ko janam dene ki khushi meN ...!

abhi toh bahut kuch aap kehne aur likhne waale hai ... intezaar ke saath khadhe hai ... aate rahen likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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30th January 2011, 05:03 PM
kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
khuda jaane jaayen fasaane kaha tak

bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

divane huye hai sabhi hosh wale
sambhalte phir akhir divane kaha tak

Ji .. nice one ......................


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Wah wah mere bhai Bohat khoob Ghazal ke 3 shero me se yeh tay karna mushkil ho gaya hai ke sabse kamaal ka sher kaunsa hai..............waise to poori Ghazal ghazab dhaa rahi hai mere bhai.

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thanks bhai....for the appreciation.
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Zidd Ji...!

Aaap Ki Ye Ghazal Hr Taraf Se Mukammal Or Khubsurat Hai.....
Aap Ki Soch Ki Wussat Or Alfaz Ko Piranay Ka Fun Ja-baja Nazar Aaya Hai Is Nazar Me........

Is Shandaar Takhleeq Pr Me To Tah-e-Dil Se Aap Ko Daad Pesh Krta Hun.......... Qabool Farmayen

Yunhi Likhtay Rahen Or Aatay Rahen
aapki daad sar ankho par shakil bhai....
yu hi hausla badaate rahiye,,,,

apka teh e dil se shukriya

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YuuN toh saari ghazal ka lafz lafz taareef ke qaabil hai .. har ashaar aap se aise adaa huaa hai jaise kisi murtikaar ne khoobsurat muzasmaa shaahakar kar diya ho .. sachaai toh yeh hai Zidd Bhaai ! jo mujhe nazar aai ... yun toh tajmahal banne ke baad bhi logo ne nuqtaachiinii ki hogi ... ! magar jo kharaa woh kabhi nahi badaltaa ... !

iss sab ke baawjood nayi zubaan kehtaa .. tazaa tareen khayaal ... maqtaa ... mujhe behad pasand aayaa ...

uTho zidd na cheDo ye baate purani
chalaa.ooge sikke puraane kaha tak

aakhir kehna hi padhega ... humari dil se daad le hi li jiye ... ! iss behtar kalaam ko janam dene ki khushi meN ...!

abhi toh bahut kuch aap kehne aur likhne waale hai ... intezaar ke saath khadhe hai ... aate rahen likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
nareshji namaste...
apka izzat afzai ka apna ek alag dhang hai,rang hai....zara darr bhi lagta hai ki agee apko nirash na karu....

hausla afzaii ka bahut shukriya
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Bahut khoooooooooob....

Waise Mr Khanna naraaz hai par chalta hai,
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kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
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bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

divane huye hai sabhi hosh wale
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thanks radhika ji....

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thanks bhai....for the appreciation.
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dosto ko aadaab/salaam/ssa

is section ka silsila badaate huye meri ek koshish pesh kar raha hu...
aaj hi likhi hai
dosto se guzarish hai ki ise durust karne me meri help kijiye.
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kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
khuda jaane jaayen fasaane kaha tak

bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

jaha hum khaDe the wahi tak thi manzil
game ishq jaate sunane kaha tak

divane huye hai sabhi hosh wale
sambhalte phir akhir divane kaha tak

uTho zidd na cheDo ye baate purani
chalaa.ooge sikke puraane kaha tak
Zidd Saheb, Aadaab,

Ghazal pasnd aai, magar ik sawaal reh gaya..

]kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
khuda jaane jaayen fasaane kaha tak

bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

Kaafiya dohraaya kyuN gaya hai? Aap se siikha so puuch rahaa huuN. Be-adabi ki muafi chahta huuN.

Shab-ba-khair,
Naadaan

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Zidd Saheb, Aadaab,

Ghazal pasnd aai, magar ik sawaal reh gaya..

]kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
khuda jaane jaayen fasaane kaha tak

bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

Kaafiya dohraaya kyuN gaya hai? Aap se siikha so puuch rahaa huuN. Be-adabi ki muafi chahta huuN.

Shab-ba-khair,
Naadaan
Sawaal se pehle sawaal yeh hai ke kya Qafiya dohraya jana najayez hai..........aur jawab shayed yeh hai ke bilkool najayez nahi hai.....

aa ke patthar to mere sahan me.n do-chaar gire
jitane us pe.D ke phal the pas-e-diivaar gire

[sahan = courtyard; pas-e-diivaar = other side of the wall]

aisii dahashat thii fazaao.n me.n khule paanii kii
aa.Nkh jhapakii bhii nahii.n haath se patavaar gire

mujhe giranaa hai to mai.n apane hii qadamo.n me.n giruu.N
jis tarah saayaa-e-diivaar pe diivaar gire

[saayaa-e-diivaar = wall's shadow]

tiiragii chho.D gaye din me.n ujaale ke Khutuut
ye sitaare mere ghar TuuT ke bekaar gire

[tiiragii = darkness; Khutuut = letters]

dekh kar apane dar-o-baam laraz uThataa huu.N
mere ham_saaye me.n jab bhii ko_ii diivaar gire

[dar-o-baam = walls and roofs; laraz = tremble]
[ham_saaye = neighbourhood]

vaqt kii Dor Khudaa jaane kahaa.N se TuuTe
kis gha.Dii sar pe ye laTakii hu_ii talvaar gire

[Dor = string]

ham se Takaraa ga_ii Khud ba.Dh ke andhere kii chaTTaan
ham sambhal_kar jo bahut chalate the naachaar gire

haath aayaa nahii.n kuchh raat kii dal_dal ke sivaa
haaye kis mo.D pe Khvaabo.n ke parastaar gire

kyaa kahuu.N diidaa-e-tar ye to meraa cheharaa hai
sang kaT jaate hai.n baarish kii jahaa.N dhaar gire

[diidaa-e-tar = tear filled eyes; sang = stone]

dekhate kyo.n ho 'Shakeb' itanii bulandii kii taraf
na uThaayaa karo sar ko ki ye dastaar gire

[bulandii = height; dastaar = turban]

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dosto ko aadaab/salaam/ssa

is section ka silsila badaate huye meri ek koshish pesh kar raha hu...
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kadam dagmagaye najaane kaha tak
khuda jaane jaayen fasaane kaha tak

bhatakte rahe raah me apne dil ki
diya saath dilne na jaane kaha tak

jaha hum khaDe the wahi tak thi manzil
game ishq jaate sunane kaha tak

divane huye hai sabhi hosh wale
sambhalte phir akhir divane kaha tak

uTho zidd na cheDo ye baate purani
chalaa.ooge sikke puraane kaha tak
Hi friends,,,Kajal here,thanks for nice feeling....keep it up....
   
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