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रेत पर नाम लिखने से क्या फायदा - 24th November 2010, 06:07 PM

रेत पर नाम लिखने से क्या फायदा



रेत पर नाम लिखने से क्या फायदा, एक आई लहर कुछ बचेगा नहीं।
तुमने पत्थर सा दिल हमको कह तो दिया पत्थरों पर लिखोगे मिटेगा नहीं।
मैं तो पतझर था फिर क्यूँ निमंत्रण दिया
ऋतु बसंती को तन पर लपेटे हुये,
आस मन में लिये प्यास तन में लिये
कब शरद आयी पल्लू समेटे हुये,
तुमने फेरीं निगाहें अँधेरा हुआ, ऐसा लगता है सूरज उगेगा नहीं।
मैं तो होली मना लूँगा सच मानिये
तुम दिवाली बनोगी ये आभास दो,
मैं तुम्हें सौंप दूँगा तुम्हारी धरा
तुम मुझे मेरे पँखों को आकाश दो,
उँगलियों पर दुपट्टा लपेटो न तुम, यूँ करोगे तो दिल चुप रहेगा नहीं।
आँख खोली तो तुम रुक्मिणी सी लगी
बन्द की आँख तो राधिका तुम लगीं,
जब भी सोचा तुम्हें शांत एकांत में
मीरा बाई सी एक साधिका तुम लगी
कृष्ण की बाँसुरी पर भरोसा रखो, मन कहीं भी रहे पर डिगेगा नहीं।

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shakuuntla jee bahut hee da ghazal kee yaad dila dee aapne. ye maine khud vishnu saxena jee ke munh se ek kavi sammellan mein suni hai. kamaal ka likha hai unhone. bahut bahut shukriya ye ghazal post karne ke liye.



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25th November 2010, 08:54 AM

Ehsaas bahut khoob lage hume ... Shakuntala Ji !

Nice Creation ... !

Thanks For Sharing ..........




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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shakuuntla jee bahut hee da ghazal kee yaad dila dee aapne. Ye maine khud vishnu saxena jee ke munh se ek kavi sammellan mein suni hai. Kamaal ka likha hai unhone. Bahut bahut shukriya ye ghazal post karne ke liye.

thanks apane pasand kiya

mene dubai mai do bar suna yaha 26 jan ko musayera hota hai

mujhe bahut pasand hai dr vishnu ki har poem aur geet

neeraj ji ke baad inka hi naam hai

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nice sharing...............................


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रेत पर नाम लिखने से क्या फायदा



रेत पर नाम लिखने से क्या फायदा, एक आई लहर कुछ बचेगा नहीं।
तुमने पत्थर सा दिल हमको कह तो दिया पत्थरों पर लिखोगे मिटेगा नहीं।
मैं तो पतझर था फिर क्यूँ निमंत्रण दिया
ऋतु बसंती को तन पर लपेटे हुये,
आस मन में लिये प्यास तन में लिये
कब शरद आयी पल्लू समेटे हुये,
तुमने फेरीं निगाहें अँधेरा हुआ, ऐसा लगता है सूरज उगेगा नहीं।
मैं तो होली मना लूँगा सच मानिये
तुम दिवाली बनोगी ये आभास दो,
मैं तुम्हें सौंप दूँगा तुम्हारी धरा
तुम मुझे मेरे पँखों को आकाश दो,
उँगलियों पर दुपट्टा लपेटो न तुम, यूँ करोगे तो दिल चुप रहेगा नहीं।
आँख खोली तो तुम रुक्मिणी सी लगी
बन्द की आँख तो राधिका तुम लगीं,
जब भी सोचा तुम्हें शांत एकांत में
मीरा बाई सी एक साधिका तुम लगी
कृष्ण की बाँसुरी पर भरोसा रखो, मन कहीं भी रहे पर डिगेगा नहीं। wah kya baat hai ji

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nice sharing shakuantala ji.....................................


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रेत पर नाम लिखने से क्या फायदा



रेत पर नाम लिखने से क्या फायदा, एक आई लहर कुछ बचेगा नहीं।
तुमने पत्थर सा दिल हमको कह तो दिया पत्थरों पर लिखोगे मिटेगा नहीं।
मैं तो पतझर था फिर क्यूँ निमंत्रण दिया
ऋतु बसंती को तन पर लपेटे हुये,
आस मन में लिये प्यास तन में लिये
कब शरद आयी पल्लू समेटे हुये,
तुमने फेरीं निगाहें अँधेरा हुआ, ऐसा लगता है सूरज उगेगा नहीं।
मैं तो होली मना लूँगा सच मानिये
तुम दिवाली बनोगी ये आभास दो,
मैं तुम्हें सौंप दूँगा तुम्हारी धरा
तुम मुझे मेरे पँखों को आकाश दो,
उँगलियों पर दुपट्टा लपेटो न तुम, यूँ करोगे तो दिल चुप रहेगा नहीं।
आँख खोली तो तुम रुक्मिणी सी लगी
बन्द की आँख तो राधिका तुम लगीं,
जब भी सोचा तुम्हें शांत एकांत में
मीरा बाई सी एक साधिका तुम लगी
कृष्ण की बाँसुरी पर भरोसा रखो, मन कहीं भी रहे पर डिगेगा नहीं।

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sakuntala ji bahut hi sundar likha hai
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bahut acha likhate hai

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bahot khoob bahot khoob rachna aapne pasand kii hai aur hum sabhi ko padhne ka mauka diya shakuntla dee... yoonhi share karti rahen aur likhti bhi rahen.. duaaon me yaad rakhen.

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bahot khoob bahot khoob rachna aapne pasand kii hai aur hum sabhi ko padhne ka mauka diya shakuntla dee... yoonhi share karti rahen aur likhti bhi rahen.. duaaon me yaad rakhen.

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shakuuntla Ji

Rachna me ehasaaso ko bahut hi khoobsurati ke saath piroya hai aapne

bahut khoob . khus rahiyega.




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shukriya is rachana ke liye....mujhe vishnu ji ki kavita to pasanad hai hi mgar unka kavita padne ka andaaj aur unki khubsurat awaj bemishal hai............main aksar unhe suna karta hun.........baagi


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shukriya is rachana ke liye....mujhe vishnu ji ki kavita to pasanad hai hi mgar unka kavita padne ka andaaj aur unki khubsurat awaj bemishal hai............main aksar unhe suna karta hun.........baagi
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thanks a lot

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