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"kya hua gar vo bewafa nikla" - 20th March 2009, 10:40 PM
DostoN yeh bas ek ehesaas hai jo main aap sabke saath share karna chahti huN......sayad aapko pasand aayegi.......


Bin aansooN ke mere
armaan ka jaNaza nikla
hazar tukde hua dil
ek katra khun Na nikla

Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

log hairaN rah gaye the
meri is adaa ko dekh kar
itNa sitam seh kar bhi
kaise yeh ziNdaa nikla

kyoN sikayat karoon uNki
kii vo wafa ka Qatil hai
pyar to sirf pyar hai Diya
kya hua gar vo bewafa nikla


Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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Aadaab Diya ji..................Diya ji bahut khoob raha aapka yeh kalaam aap to din dugni raat chougni tarakki kar rahi hai is umda kalaam par meri daad kubool ho


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DostoN yeh bas ek ehesaas hai jo main aap sabke saath share karna chahti huN......sayad aapko pasand aayegi.......


Bin aansooN ke mere
armaan ka jaNaza nikla
hazar tukde hua dil
ek katra khun Na nikla

Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

log hairaN rah gaye the
meri is adaa ko dekh kar
itNa sitam seh kar bhi
kaise yeh ziNdaa nikla

kyoN sikayat karoon uNki
kii vo wafa ka Qatil hai
pyar to sirf pyar hai Diya
kya hua gar vo bewafa nikla

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BAHOT KHUB DIYA JI KEEP WRITING LIKE..........

DIYA JALTI HAI TO PARWANE CHALE AATE HAIN
GHUTNO PE CHAL KE ISHQ KE DIWANE CHALE AATE HAIN
AB TO CHALI AAO SANAM TUMHE MERI KASAM
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22nd March 2009, 08:45 AM
Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

kya baat diya ji......kaun hai jo bewafa nikla..........hmm doston se dil ki baat nahi chupate.......hamein bataiye hum uski qabar lenge...

waqay bohat accha likha hai aapne..yuhi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye

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22nd March 2009, 10:26 AM
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DostoN yeh bas ek ehesaas hai jo main aap sabke saath share karna chahti huN......sayad aapko pasand aayegi.......


Bin aansooN ke mere
armaan ka jaNaza nikla
hazar tukde hua dil
ek katra khun Na nikla

Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

log hairaN rah gaye the
meri is adaa ko dekh kar
itNa sitam seh kar bhi
kaise yeh ziNdaa nikla

kyoN sikayat karoon uNki
kii vo wafa ka Qatil hai
pyar to sirf pyar hai Diya
kya hua gar vo bewafa nikla

hey Diya.....

Bahot accha likha hai tumne..ehsaas bahot acche hai....

Arz karti hoon

Unki berukhi ko hum yunh gale lagayenge
Mohabaat kahte hai kise hum unhe sikhayenge

yunhi likhti raho..........

Khush raho......

tumhari di

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22nd March 2009, 07:49 PM
waah Diya ji bahoot oomda rachna..dil ke ahsaas poori taarh utaar ke rakh diye aapne....merii jaanib se dhairoN daad haazir haiN janaab.....khush raheiN


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22nd March 2009, 08:59 PM
Diya Ji,

Bahut khoobsoorat ehsaas hai, bahut pasand aayi aapki koshish, likhti rahiye, kush rahiye.

Ye lines mujhe bahut pasand aayiN-

Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

log hairaN rah gaye the
meri is adaa ko dekh kar
itNa sitam seh kar bhi
kaise yeh ziNdaa nikla


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DostoN yeh bas ek ehesaas hai jo main aap sabke saath share karna chahti huN......sayad aapko pasand aayegi.......


Bin aansooN ke mere
armaan ka jaNaza nikla
hazar tukde hua dil
ek katra khun Na nikla

Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

log hairaN rah gaye the
meri is adaa ko dekh kar
itNa sitam seh kar bhi
kaise yeh ziNdaa nikla

kyoN sikayat karoon uNki
kii vo wafa ka Qatil hai
pyar to sirf pyar hai Diya
kya hua gar vo bewafa nikla


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DostoN yeh bas ek ehesaas hai jo main aap sabke saath share karna chahti huN......sayad aapko pasand aayegi.......


kyoN sikayat karoon uNki
kii vo wafa ka Qatil hai
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Aadaab Diya ji..................Diya ji bahut khoob raha aapka yeh kalaam aap to din dugni raat chougni tarakki kar rahi hai is umda kalaam par meri daad kubool ho
Janaab kashif jee
adaab,.....kahan gayab ho jate ho aap ?
aaj kal nazar hi nahin aate ho mahfil meiN.

humari yeh koshish aapko pasand aaya hume behat khusi mili...
aise hi Dua.on me.N yaad rakhiyega ...

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BAHOT KHUB DIYA JI KEEP WRITING LIKE..........

DIYA JALTI HAI TO PARWANE CHALE AATE HAIN
GHUTNO PE CHAL KE ISHQ KE DIWANE CHALE AATE HAIN
AB TO CHALI AAO SANAM TUMHE MERI KASAM
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Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
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Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

kya baat diya ji......kaun hai jo bewafa nikla..........hmm doston se dil ki baat nahi chupate.......hamein bataiye hum uski qabar lenge...

waqay bohat accha likha hai aapne..yuhi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye

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Hum jante hai ki doston se kuchh chhupate nahin hai ...batane layak jab bhi kuchh hoga hum zarur batayenge ............

aapko humari yeh koshish pasand aayi hume achha laga
saath dete rahiyega

Dua.oN ke saath

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hey Diya.....

Bahot accha likha hai tumne..ehsaas bahot acche hai....

Arz karti hoon

Unki berukhi ko hum yunh gale lagayenge
Mohabaat kahte hai kise hum unhe sikhayenge

yunhi likhti raho..........

Khush raho......

tumhari di

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aap mere apne ho .....aapki yeh sher hume bahot pasand aayi
apni sis ko humesha dua.on mein yaad rakhna


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yeh chand ahsaas mere dil ko tadpa gaye:

Dulhan si sajke baithi thi
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Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla


bahut khoob likha hai, bhagwaan tumhari kalam ko aur accha likhne ki taaqat deN.

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DostoN yeh bas ek ehesaas hai jo main aap sabke saath share karna chahti huN......sayad aapko pasand aayegi.......


Bin aansooN ke mere
armaan ka jaNaza nikla
hazar tukde hua dil
ek katra khun Na nikla

Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

log hairaN rah gaye the
meri is adaa ko dekh kar
itNa sitam seh kar bhi
kaise yeh ziNdaa nikla

kyoN sikayat karoon uNki
kii vo wafa ka Qatil hai
pyar to sirf pyar hai Diya
kya hua gar vo bewafa nikla
aadab diya ji itna dard bhara likha hai apne ki padhne wale insan ko bhi ansoo aa jate hai. kash aisa kabhi na ho humari har khushiya app pe kurbaan hai.
yuhi humesha khush rahiye dua humesha apke sath hai humari.
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15th April 2009, 08:40 AM
Hi Diya..

Dard ko lafzon mein beyaan karna kabhie aasan nahi hota....
Du'a karti hu aap aaur bhi aacha aur pyaara likhe ...mohabaat per

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muaafi chahati hun waqt ki kami ke wajah se aapko reply nahi de payi thi.....
meri nazm aapko pasand aayi ,mujhe bahot khusi hui

daad dil se kabul hai
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Diya Ji,

Bahut khoobsoorat ehsaas hai, bahut pasand aayi aapki koshish, likhti rahiye, kush rahiye.

Ye lines mujhe bahut pasand aayiN-

Dulhansi sajke baithi thi
barbadi ke chauthe per
Qatl hue the saare khawab
lab se uff tak Na nikla

log hairaN rah gaye the
meri is adaa ko dekh kar
itNa sitam seh kar bhi
kaise yeh ziNdaa nikla


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-Rashid

Rashid jee
aapko meri nazm pasand aayi mujhe behat khusi hui
younhi apni raye dete rahiye
khus rahiye

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Hi Diya,

Excellent thought............Keep it up


thanx a lot Naaz jee

miss u lot


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