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5th August 2008, 05:29 PM

Har taraf gairahi hai,

Kinaara nazar nahi aata.

Vaada toh kar lete hai bahot mohabbat karlene ke baad,

Par jab musibat pade, toh koi saath nibhaane nahi aata.


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KASHTI K INTJAAR MEIN SAARI UMAR KINAARE PAR NIKAL GAYI...
US HAASEN CHEHRE K INTJAAR MEIN SAARI JINDGI TANHA NIKAL GAYI...
tanhai main bhi akashr unko sochte hain hum
dil se rooh tak raaz unka hi hai..........



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5th August 2008, 05:32 PM

Bikhre hue jazbaat hein
Toote hue khwaab hein

Ye jazbaat meri daulat hai
Yeh khwaab meri saughaat hai

Lamha lamha behlaati rahi
Teri yaad is dil ko
Is liye shaayad aaj bhi
Log Kehte hein "Hum Zinda hein"
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shaam say pahlay teri shaam na honay doon ga...
zindagi main tujhay na.kaam na honay doon ga...
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tanhai main bhi akashr unko sochte hain hum

dil se rooh tak raaz unka hi hai..........

Bichde wo yu ki dobara milne na aaye,
lotkar wo gujre zmane na aaye.
Shikwa nhi jo wo pas nhi,
bus ranj is baat ka h ki 1bar b bulane na aaye,
bhul jata gar wo mujhe to koi gam na tha,
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5th August 2008, 05:35 PM

Dil Ki Gehraiyon Se Chaha Hai Tujhe,
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Kehte Hain Jise Raj-E-Mahobbat,
Wo To Humne Hi Sikhaya Hai Tumhe..!!


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jo keh na sake wo fasana yaad aata hai

guzra hua dilkash jamana yaad aata hai
jab husn se ishq takraya tha kabhi
ghayal hua tha ek parwana yaad aata hai
dil se mohabbat ke tufaan uthe the
jab aankhon ka sapne sajana yaad aata hai
kasturi jaise din mehakte the
mere raaton ka gungunana yaad aata hai
aankhon ka mil kar jhuk jana nahin bhula
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mera usko kankhiyon se dekhna
baar baar aur uska wo muskurana yaad aata hai
raaton ko tanha yaad mein kisiki...

dhuan udata ek deewana yaad aata hai

bohat khoob janab muje ye post bohat bohat passand ayi hai.mere pass ilfaz nahi hai kehne ko sach main bohat acha laga.khush rahen.


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Bikhre hue jazbaat hein
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shaam say pahlay teri shaam na honay doon ga...
zindagi main tujhay na.kaam na honay doon ga...
lagnay doon ga na hawa tujh ko khizaoon ki kabhi...
phool jaisa tera anjaam na honay doon ga...



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Bichde wo yu ki dobara milne na aaye,
lotkar wo gujre zmane na aaye.
Shikwa nhi jo wo pas nhi,
bus ranj is baat ka h ki 1bar b bulane na aaye,
bhul jata gar wo mujhe to koi gam na tha,
dil me basa kar b wo dilse lagane na aaye.
Hua khat-o-jariya b khtam ab likhne ka,
par wo khawab me b hume manane na aaye
Jo ruthe hote hain unko manaya karte hain
dil main rehene waloon ko hum to sataya karte hain



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Kehte Hain Jise Raj-E-Mahobbat,
Wo To Humne Hi Sikhaya Hai Tumhe..!!
rafta rafta jo tere pyar main bikharne lage
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Jo ruthe hote hain unko manaya karte hain

dil main rehene waloon ko hum to sataya karte hain
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hume yeh pasand aaye ..........hope u like it - 5th August 2008, 05:44 PM

dil ke halaat hain kuch aise ki khud se sawal karti hu
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mohabbat ke naam pe tumhe har pal yaad karti hu

AAP TO IS FIELD KI EXPERT HO MADAM...
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Rehnewalon Se Nahi, Jaanewalon Se Pucho Ki Zindgi Kya Cheez Hoti Hai.
Panewalon Se Nahi, Khonewalon se Pucho Ki Izzat Kya Cheez Hoti hai.
Amiron Ko Kya Dekthe Ho, Zara Garibon Se Pucho Ki Daulat Kya Cheez Hoti Hai,
Arre Jiss Ne Dil Diya Hai Usse Nahi, Jiska Dil Toota Hai Usse Pucho Ki Mohabbat Kya Cheez Hoti Hai ............ ......... ......


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AAP TO IS FIELD KI EXPERT HO MADAM...
HUM ABHI NAYE HAI..... BAHUT KHOOB... LIKTI RAHIYE...
janab ...hum bhi new hain....bas kabhi kabhi 2/4 labz youn nikal aati hai



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janab ...hum bhi new hain....bas kabhi kabhi 2/4 labz youn nikal aati hai
A Mohabat tere anjam se rona aaya.
Jane kyun aaj tere naam se rona aya,
Yu to her sham umid me guzar jati hain.
Aaj kuch baatein yaad aayi to sham pe rona aya.
Kabhi taqdir, kabhi matam,kabhi duniya ka gila,
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yeh ishq ke mehefil hai janab ...rona mat ......... - 5th August 2008, 05:55 PM

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A Mohabat tere anjam se rona aaya.
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Yu to her sham umid me guzar jati hain.
Aaj kuch baatein yaad aayi to sham pe rona aya.
Kabhi taqdir, kabhi matam,kabhi duniya ka gila,
Manzil-e-ishq k har kaam pe rona aya.
Jab hua zamane me mohabat ka zikr.
Mujhe apne dil-e-nakaam pe rona aya
kaisi ye kashish hai tumhare pyaar ki.....
jis me ho kar door...
tumhari har saans ko mehsus kar lete hain....
kar nahi sakte juda khud se tumhare ehsaas ko.......
is liye tanhayi me....
tumhare is ehsaas se hi baat kar lete hain.........



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A Mohabat tere anjam se rona aaya.
Jane kyun aaj tere naam se rona aya,
Yu to her sham umid me guzar jati hain.
Aaj kuch baatein yaad aayi to sham pe rona aya.
Kabhi taqdir, kabhi matam,kabhi duniya ka gila,
Manzil-e-ishq k har kaam pe rona aya.
Jab hua zamane me mohabat ka zikr.
Mujhe apne dil-e-nakaam pe rona aya

"aap yoon baat baat par na roya karo,
2 din jawani hai koi pyari si baat karo"

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kaisi ye kashish hai tumhare pyaar ki.....

jis me ho kar door...
tumhari har saans ko mehsus kar lete hain....
kar nahi sakte juda khud se tumhare ehsaas ko.......
is liye tanhayi me....
tumhare is ehsaas se hi baat kar lete hain.........
dard-a-mohbbat k maro k sahare dub gaye,
kal dubi thi apni kashti aaj kinare dub gaye.
tum tufaan se ghbraye tumne sahil tham liya,
hm tufaan se takraye hm bechare dub gaye.
dil walo ki kismat dekho dil k sahare chal nikle the dil k sahare dub gaye.
jisse subah jag uthti thi,

wahi savera sham bna,jinse chamak uthti thi raat, wahi sitare dub gaye.
kashti k kuch kaam na aayi is hwa ki charagarin,

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2 din jawani hai koi pyari si baat karo"

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Dikha tha bhid me mujhko tamashabeno ki tarah
Ek wo chehra jise main apna samjhta tha,

Ehsaas me zakhm khata rha, muskurata raha.
Dusron ke pyar par apna haq samjhta tha.
Haan sach h tere liye main umr bhar rota raha,
Lekin mujhe shayd hi koi apna samjhta tha.
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aapne sahi kaha sunita ji - 5th August 2008, 06:05 PM

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kaisi ye kashish hai tumhare pyaar ki.....

jis me ho kar door...
tumhari har saans ko mehsus kar lete hain....
kar nahi sakte juda khud se tumhare ehsaas ko.......
is liye tanhayi me....
tumhare is ehsaas se hi baat kar lete hain.........
ISHK MEIN HUM AB KHUD KO BADNAAM HONE NAHI DENGE...
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ISHK MEIN HUM AB KHUD KO BADNAAM HONE NAHI DENGE...
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janab hume ab tak aapke jawab ka intezar thi - 5th August 2008, 06:43 PM

Meri mohabbat meri zindigi ki ek pehchan hai.......
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kabhi roshni hun shaam ke kabhi tanhai main tere saath hun
tum jahan bhi ho humesha roshan karegi tumhare zindegi ....Diya_Jale
Dear Diya ,Apko shayri ka shokh hai lekin shairy ke liye Urdu zabaan janna bahot zaroori hai,jaise intezar thi ki jagha kaho intezar tha,sayri ki jagha kaho shayri, then only you can become a good shaira. i hope you don,t mind.
Aap meri ghazal ki radeef hain, Qafiya badalta rehta hai radeef nahin badalti....................ek aur sher malaheza farmayen..........

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Dear Diya ,Apko shayri ka shokh hai lekin shairy ke liye Urdu zabaan janna bahot zaroori hai,jaise intezar thi ki jagha kaho intezar tha,sayri ki jagha kaho shayri, then only you can become a good shaira. i hope you don,t mind.
Aap meri ghazal ki radeef hain, Qafiya badalta rehta hai radeef nahin badalti....................ek aur sher malaheza farmayen..........

Honton se tu pilaye main peeta rahun sharab
Bujhne na paaye, pyaas ka aisa diya jale..........
aap ke saath rehete rehete bahat kuchh sikh jayenge ...hume achha laga aapne humare galti bataye ...aage se hum sudharne ki koshish karenge ....
tere intezar main aisa kuchh kar jayenge
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