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Written by gazal sharma...hope u wud love it.... -
7th July 2010, 03:53 PM
mapeyan de ghar dhiyan
hundiyan parhoniyan pal pos dujey ghar tor hi deniyan aangan ch mapeyan de kad pal pal apna dil hai lagaya othe jehda ohda hai ni apna mapeyan di laadliyan sunakhiyan te sohniyan pal pos dujey ghar tor hi deniyan dhiye sadi laaj rakhin Bhuli saada pyar na tere utte har khushi aaja aaj vaar daan tere sohre dhiye tenu laike saat fereyan pal pos dujey ghar tor hi deniyan by girl--- bhulan ehesaana nu kiven main vi ik dhi haan mapeyan de naam to bani aaj main jo vi haan vaada kar chali haan yaadan main ni khoniyan bhaven pal pos dujey ghar tor hi deniyan tor hi deniyan  If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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very touchy -
7th July 2010, 05:15 PM
Dear Gazal.....bahut hi nazuk jehe ahsaas pesh kite ne tusi, mapiyaN de te beti de.....eh rishta hi aida da hai, ki jad bhi ena doha rishtiya bare socho taan dil vich tees jehi uthdi hai, kyuNki main bhi kise di beti haan te maiN kise beti di maa bhi haaN...so dove dard bahut chaNgi tarah samaj sakdi aa...parmatma tuhadi kalam vich hor nikhar deve.
reps +++ pyar naal tuhadi didi vaise je tusi eh ahsaas punjabi poetry te post kitey hunde taan jayada behtar c, aje taan maiN jaldi vich haan, kal es nu punjabi poetry te transfer kar devagi....oh hi es di sahi jagah hai :-)  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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7th July 2010, 08:58 PM
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okk sunita didi thanx.....changa lgeya v thonu pasand aaya.... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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8th July 2010, 08:17 AM
SSA Gazzal.....bahut hi vadhia.....bahut pyara likhia hai tusiN....eddaN hi likhde raho.....take care
 ਹਾਂ ਮੈਂ ਵੀ ਜਾਣਦਾ ਹਾਂ ਇਖਲਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਸਭ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਿਆਂ ਦੀ ਸੀਮਾ ਹਰ ਸਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਰੁਕਦਾ ਨ ਖੂਨ ਇਹ ਨੇ ਦਿਲ ਚਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ ਕੀ ਰੱਤ ਦੇ ਪੁਤਲਿਆਂ ਨੇ ਚੱਟਾਨ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਜਿਉਣਾ ਬੇਦਾਗ ਨੇ ਉਹ ਸਾਰੇ ਬੱਸ ਦਾਗਦਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਉਹ ਲਿਸ਼ਕਦੇ ਨੇ ਸ਼ੀਸ਼ੇ ਮੈਲੀ ਨੁਹਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਖੁਦ ਹੀ ਧਿਆਨ ਮਾਰੋ, ਕਿੰਨਾ ਕਠਿਨ ਹੈ ਯਾਰੋਂ, ਏਨੇ ਖੁਦਾਵਾਂ ਅੰਦਰ ਇਨਸਾਨ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਜਿਉਣਾ |
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8th July 2010, 12:39 PM
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thanxx very much preet ji..... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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17th July 2010, 06:35 PM
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Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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17th July 2010, 06:59 PM
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thanxxx very much vikram jii....................................... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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21st August 2010, 03:10 PM
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If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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24th August 2010, 08:30 PM
Gazal sharma ji bahut bahut mubarak hove is behtreen rachna lai.
daad hazir hai. i rated this thread with 3+++ stars. with blessings rajinderseep |
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2nd September 2010, 02:31 PM
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thanks very much rajinder veer ji mainu bhot khushi hoyi v tohanu meri rachana pasand aayi......god bless u khush raho..... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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2nd September 2010, 02:35 PM
Gazzal ji,,
Sachmuch ek behtareen rachna ...........Dil se daad hazir hai ...Qubool kijiyega....Aise hi likhte rahiyega Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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2nd September 2010, 03:21 PM
kamal hai ji eh taan.......................
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6th September 2010, 01:55 PM
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thnxx very much parveen ji n kavita ji hume khushi huyi k aapko meri rachana pasand aayi...... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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5th October 2010, 11:36 AM
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If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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12th October 2010, 07:12 PM
apne jo ehsaas beyan kiye hain mujhe bhot pasand aaye....likhti rhen
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4th November 2010, 02:00 PM
Bahut hi achhi lagi aapki poem.
Thanks for sharing keep it up. |
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5th November 2010, 12:31 PM
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6th November 2010, 01:22 AM
bhulan ehesaana nu kiven
main vi ik dhi haan mapeyan de naam to bani aaj main jo vi haan vaada kar chali haan yaadan main ni khoniyan bhaven pal pos dujey ghar tor hi deniyan Ghazal Jii, In khoobsorat ehsasaat k liye dil se nikli dherooN daad qabool kijiye... Rep+++ Aur younhi mehfil roshan karta rahiye, DuaooN k saath ijazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th December 2010, 11:35 PM
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bahoon ee pyare te mithe rishte de baare tusi likhia je dil vichoon aiy dua nikli ki h deyaan de Rab naseeb change kare te oo mapiyaan de ghar te susraal vich sada hus diyaan nazar aun Aameen bahoo piyara likhia tusaan ne dil vichoon nikli daad qabool kariya je sariaan deyaan de waste duago Nazish .....................................
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12th December 2010, 08:44 PM
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thnxx very much... god bless u... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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28th December 2010, 11:34 PM
its a nice post. keep it up. and thanks for sharing........................................
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5th February 2011, 12:06 PM
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thnkyu very much mittal sahib............... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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18th March 2011, 03:11 PM
Bahoot hi dil nu chhoon waali nazm pesh kiti hai.....DhiyaaNte huNdiyaaN hi aone Kghar jaan waste........
DhiiyaaN aapne watan nu chhalliyaN Wakhh na hoyiaaN jediaaN ve aaj turiyaaN kall-o-kalliyaan...~~~~~~ A painful verse Gazzal G Harash |
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31st March 2011, 12:50 PM
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thnxx very much harash ji..................................... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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