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uske aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya - 19th June 2006, 04:26 PM

dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"


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hum to samjhe the ki barsaat main barsegi sharaab,

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tapti dharti per tumne barsat ki pani bhar di
per jab barsat ayee to tumne dil torne ki baat kah di

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एक जीवविज्ञानी मेंढ़कों के व्यवहार का अध्ययन कर रहा था। वह अपनी प्रयोगशाला में एक मेंढ़क लाया, उसे फर्श पर रखा और बोला - ''चलो कूदो !'' मेंढ़क उछला और कमरे के दूसरे कोने में पहुंच गया। वैज्ञानिक ने दूरी नापकर अपनी नोटबुक में लिखा - ''मेंढ़क चार टांगों के साथ आठ फीट तक उछलता है।''
फिर उसने मेंढ़क की अगली दो टांगें काट दी और बोला - ''चलो कूदो, चलो !'' मेंढ़क अपने स्थान से उचटकर थोड़ी दूर पर जा गिरा। वैज्ञानिक ने अपनी नोटबुक में लिखा - ''मेंढ़क दो टांगों के साथ तीन फीट तक उछलता है।''
इसके बाद वैज्ञानिक ने मेंढ़क की पीछे की भी दोनों टांगे काट दीं और मेंढ़क से बोला - ''चलो कूदो!''
मेंढ़क अपनी जगह पड़ा था। वैज्ञानिक ने फिर कहा - ''कूदो! कूदो! चलो कूदो!'' पर मेंढ़क टस से मस नहीं हुआ।
वैज्ञानिक ने बार बार आदेश दिया पर मेंढ़क जैसा पड़ा था वैसा ही पड़ा रहा ।
वैज्ञानिक ने अपनी नोटबुक में अंतिम निष्कर्ष लिखा - ''चारों टांगें काटने के बाद मेंढ़क बहरा हो जाता है।''




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11th July 2006, 12:25 PM

hi all, i tis not mine.. but i must share with u all .. here..

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bistar se uthane wala tere jaisa namurad dost nahi aya
per uper uthane wala khuda mere pas jarur aya

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kal tak to kaheta tha ki bistar se utha jata nahin ,
aaj uth gaya duniya se , bata itni takat kahan se aa gayi....
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arz kiya hai...

saaki ne naa dekhe honge humse sharaabi,
ki maikhana pee gaye peete peete..

saaki ne na dekhe honge humse sharabi,
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hi all, i tis not mine.. but i must share with u all .. here..

kal tak to kaheta tha ki bistar se utha jata nahin ,
aaj uth gaya duniya se , bata itni takat kahan se aa gayi....
hello dost

appke share ka reply kar rahi hu:

arz kiya hai:

"kahdey meri laash par kahtey hai woh has kar,
aji tum to kahtey thy ki mujhe neend nahi aati"


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kahne ko to bahut kah sakta hoon sone ko bhi bahut so sakta hoon
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appke share ka reply kar rahi hu:

arz kiya hai:

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hi aap lhikte ho to kuch apne log yaad aate hain..


teri khushi hi mera maksad hai
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pata hai main un logo ki shayri hamesha padta hun .. jo khud lihkte hain..


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pata hai main un logo ki shayri hamesha padta hun .. jo khud lihkte hain..
dost accha laga ki aapko shayri pasand hai......!


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" kaun Kahta hai ki aasmaan main suraakh nahin ho sakta,

Ek patthar to tabiyat se uchhalo yaaro. "
mujhe to urdu ke bahut kum words hi yaad rahtey hai.

"milla baharo ko fareb teri berukhi se verna,
yeh pedoo se pattey jadney ka mousam na tha"


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thank u main log out ho raha hoon dosto
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mujhe to urdu ke bahut kum words hi yaad rahtey hai.

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meri urdu bahut achchhi nahin hai, maafi chahunga, yadi koi galti ho jaye to.

" Dekha ki -e-bo mast nigahon se baar baar,
jab tak sharaab aayi , kai daur ho gaye".
"jaam nahi to na sahi, ankho se hi pilla de saaki,
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ankho se dekh liya hota agar tamanna thi ajmaane ki
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" Bo kagaj ki naav tumhari kaise doob gayi Zafar,
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"kismat ne mujhe dhokha diya har pal,
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meri naav waha doobi jaha pani tha kum"


Kismat ne tujhe dhoka diya har pal,
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Kismat ne tujhe dhoka diya har pal,
wahan kya karne gayi thi jahan paani tha kam



kapil ji aap meri post par aaye, bahut bahut shukriya....!

aapka sher padkar lagta hai, aap bahut badey shayar hai.n, aapse kuch shayri ke gur seekhney padeyngey...!


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Unhe jarurat kya hai hame yu aajmane ki, aaj fir jarurat padegi kanch ke paimano ki.
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Unhe jarurat kya hai hame yu aajmane ki,
aaj fir jarurat padegi kanch ke paimano ki.
Khali na hone dena jaam yaro,
warna fir yaad aayegi gujare zamane ki.
"gujrey zamane yaad aatey haiN to ro leti hoon,
woh din suhane yaad aatey hai to ro leti hoon,
jab nahi sah pata dil jalim waqt ki dushbariyaN,
khuda ke saamne haath jodti hoon aur ro leti hoon"


maine koshish ki hai aap sab ki shayri ka jawaab dene ki, par pata nahi aapko mere jawaab pasand aaye hai ja nahi....!


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SAKHI BAS ITNA SA KAAM KAR,
YE SAARE ILZAAM MERE NAAM KAR
EK DO PAIMANE SE MERA KYA HOGA,

SARA MAIKHANA MERE NAAM KAR
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SAKHI BAS ITNA SA KAAM KAR,
YE SAARE ILZAAM MERE NAAM KAR
EK DO PAIMANE SE MERA KYA HOGA,

SARA MAIKHANA MERE NAAM KAR
(N.M)

gar hota mumkin to beshak maiN yeh kar deti,
sarra maikhana kaya har maikhana tere naam kar deti,
par jaha to har koi mera diwana hai, eh mere ashiq,
maikhana chorr, Kaash !maangi hoti tune meri zindgi,
bin sochey zindgi naam tere kar deti....................


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hi - 8th October 2007, 05:32 PM

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gar hota mumkin to beshak maiN yeh kar deti,
sarra maikhana kaya har maikhana tere naam kar deti,
par jaha to har koi mera diwana hai, eh mere ashiq,
maikhana chorr, Kaash !maangi hoti tune meri zindgi,
bin sochey zindgi naam tere kar deti....................
Hi sunita ji kaisi hai aap?
achaa sher hai. vaise aap achaa to likhatee hee hai. jab bhi dhaval milta hai aap ki tareef karta hai. aap ke is shr ke reply men ghulam ali sahaab ki ek ghazal paish karta hoon.

kaun hai jisane may nahin chakkhi
kaun jhuuthi qasam uthaata hai
mayakade se jo bach niakalata hai
teri aankhon mein duub jaata hai

piye ja raha huun, jiye ja raha huun
jawaani ko dhokha diye ja raha huun

judaayi hi tha zindagi ka muqaddar
bahut ji chuka lijiye ja raha huun

bahut zakm khaaye magar raaston par
charaagaan to kuchh kuchh kiye ja raha huun

bhulaana mujhe itana aasaan na hoga
kayi daastaanein diye ja raha huun

kashish koyi aisi hai jine mein ' aarif'
ke mar mar ke bhi main jiye ja raha huun


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Hi sunita ji kaisi hai aap?
achaa sher hai. vaise aap achaa to likhatee hee hai. jab bhi dhaval milta hai aap ki tareef karta hai. aap ke is shr ke reply men ghulam ali sahaab ki ek ghazal paish karta hoon.

kaun hai jisane may nahin chakkhi
kaun jhuuthi qasam uthaata hai
mayakade se jo bach niakalata hai
teri aankhon mein duub jaata hai

piye ja raha huun, jiye ja raha huun
jawaani ko dhokha diye ja raha huun

judaayi hi tha zindagi ka muqaddar
bahut ji chuka lijiye ja raha huun

bahut zakm khaaye magar raaston par
charaagaan to kuchh kuchh kiye ja raha huun

bhulaana mujhe itana aasaan na hoga
kayi daastaanein diye ja raha huun

kashish koyi aisi hai jine mein ' aarif'
ke mar mar ke bhi main jiye ja raha huun


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namaskaar manu g, kaise haiN aap.
g haan, dhaval se aapke bare meiN baat hue thi, accha hai na do bade bade shayar ek doosrey ke etne paas rahtey haiN

manu g, ab kaya kahuN aapne to mere sher ke jawaab meiN Gulaam Ali Saheb ki gazal likh di......maiN es akabil kaha ki mere sher ka jawaab unki gazal se ho.

aapne mera sher pasand kiya dil se shukriya yu hi padtey rahiyega aur aapni rai detey rahiyega.

god bless u


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" Buland hausale Fateh ki buniyaad hua karte hain,
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" Bhulana humko na itna assan hoga,
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salam valaikum dosto, aki aap logo ke bich ek naya chehra hai, lekin dosto mai yakin dilata hu ki shayro ki es mahfil me mai aap logo ko kabhi sikayat ka mouka nahi dunga,

kisi ko chaho to etna ki mohabat bhi kam pad jaye, phir bhi wo tumhara naa ho saka to samjhna ki tumne kabhi chaha hi nahi use,
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" Buland hausale Fateh ki buniyaad hua karte hain,
kaanpate hathon se talwaar na uthaya kijiye".

" Bhulana humko na itna assan hoga,
gujarish ye hai ki koshish to kijiye".
"jab jab tumey bulaya tum aur yaad aaye,
jatey nahi hai dil se ab tak tumarey saaye,
tumse bichdney ka jab bhi khayal aaya,
tanhai to kaya hum mahfil mai bhi gabraye"


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bahut khoob Sunita ji, Bahut khoob, kafi dinon ke baad koi umda sher suna hai. tahe dil se taarif karna chahoonga.

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" Buland hausale Fateh ki buniyaad hua karte hain,
kaanpate hathon se talwaar na uthaya kijiye".

" Bhulana humko na itna assan hoga,
gujarish ye hai ki koshish to kijiye".

Atul ji appne appna naam to bataya, bahut bahut shukriya. aur mera share appko pasand aaya, yeh pad kar accha lagga.

arz hai:

"aaj phir dil se ek awaaz aai hai,
is liye humne ye shayari bnai hai,
aapko bhulane ki koshish kaise karen hum,
nas nas mein teri yaad samaai hai"

appki dost


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Atul ji appne appna naam to bataya, bahut bahut shukriya. aur mera share appko pasand aaya, yeh pad kar accha lagga.

arz hai:

"aaj phir dil se ek awaaz aai hai,
is liye humne ye shayari bnai hai,
aapko bhulane ki koshish kaise karen hum,
nas nas mein teri yaad samaai hai"

appki dost
sunita ji i really impressed with ur this shayari keep continue wah wah

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