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I'll Become Your Loneliness!!! - 14th November 2005, 11:47 AM


Frustration creeps in to my mind
As you walked away from my sight

Fate has played a game with me
Where I’m destined to loose…

And yet I’m still waiting for the air of
Your breath to blow my pains away…

As you stay away from my heart
I turn back the pages of my heart

To have your memories as the
Hope that keeps me alive…

I’ll be there with you to share your pain
I’ll become the tears that flow from your eyes

To blow the pain away kissing your cheeks
And to end my life in your heart…

I’ll become your loneliness
When you feel there is no one to care…

I’ll become your fate…
To change your fortunes and make you smile…


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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14th November 2005, 12:59 PM

nice one karthik. loved reading each word of it. keep penning down ur thoughts n keep sharing among us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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14th November 2005, 08:47 PM

I’ll become your loneliness
When you feel there is no one to care…

I’ll become your fate…
To change your fortunes and make you smile…


Dear karthik,

Very well written buddy... take care & keep writting.

   
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Re: I'll Become Your Loneliness!!! - 14th November 2005, 09:07 PM

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Originally posted by karthik

Frustration creeps in to my mind
As you walked away from my sight

Fate has played a game with me
Where I’m destined to loose…

And yet I’m still waiting for the air of
Your breath to blow my pains away…

As you stay away from my heart
I turn back the pages of my heart

To have your memories as the
Hope that keeps me alive…

I’ll be there with you to share your pain
I’ll become the tears that flow from your eyes

To blow the pain away kissing your cheeks
And to end my life in your heart…

I’ll become your loneliness
When you feel there is no one to care…

I’ll become your fate…
To change your fortunes and make you smile…


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hi there karthik.....bahaut accha likkha hai tumne.each n every word is nice.take care.....keep writing..bye


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14th November 2005, 10:16 PM

hey idiot!!!!


WOWIESSSSSS........really gooodddd....loved every word of it

"ill become ur lonliness
when u think there is no one to care..."

wow!!! i really love this one...

keep writing idiot!

take care
bye
ur luccckkkkyyyyyy


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15th November 2005, 05:58 PM

hey jas...thanks yaar for the replyy...
it was nice readin it
take care


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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11th December 2005, 08:43 PM

hello...parul...thanks a lot for the replyy...
such a quick reply na
sorry yaar...i was jus goin thru all these pages ...n saw this...
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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11th December 2005, 08:44 PM

hey farhana...thanks buddy for likin it...
sorry for the delayed reply...
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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13th December 2005, 07:53 PM

heyyy wardaa....thanks a lot for the replyyy...yaar....
keep readin ok
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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