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Phakeer -
5th May 2003, 12:45 PM
Weh jo phakkad kabir hote hain
mann ke behad ameer hote hain. Sampradaayon mein banddh nahin pate jinke roshan zameer hot hain. Weh shama-sheel namr hote hain jo haqiqat mein veer hote hain. Tod dete hain dhan ke bal ka guroor praya weh jo phakeer hote hain. ------------------------------- 
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Re: Phakeer -
4th April 2006, 04:28 PM
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tume reply karne ke liy main itney lafz kaha se laun? ab har koi tumare tarah lafzon se ameer to hei nahi. fir bi mei tumare kagaj kalam ko pranam kerti hun. tumari kaanch |
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Re: Re: Phakeer -
5th April 2006, 01:22 PM
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tumhne is fakeer ko parhkar mujhe ameer bana diya. vipin
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Re: Phakeer -
18th April 2006, 05:11 PM
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aapki es rachana ko padh ke dil bas yahi shabd nikala wah kya khub aapne likha... sach bahut chhoti hai creation per aser bahut gahara hai eska.. gagar mein sagar... yah andaaj aapka bahut pasand aaya... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Re: Re: Phakeer -
18th April 2006, 10:22 PM
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Namaskaar Meri dua rehti hai ki mujhe bass channd dost hee parhlein tow bahaut hai. Isi tarah aapne bhi is fakeer ko parha tow ameeri ki taraf is fakeer ke kadam barhney lagey hain. aapka dhanyavaad aapka vipin
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Re: Phakeer -
19th April 2006, 10:19 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Vipinbox
[B]Weh jo phakkad kabir hote hain mann ke behad ameer hote hain. Sampradaayon mein banddh nahin pate jinke roshan zameer hot hain. Weh shama-sheel namr hote hain jo haqiqat mein veer hote hain. Tod dete hain dhan ke bal ka guroor praya weh jo phakeer hote hain. Vipin ji.........aapki yeh choti si rachana bahut ghari aur bahut hi sundar hai...........koi shabad nahi hai. mere pass iske liye.... with best wishes ranju |
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Re: Re: Phakeer -
22nd April 2006, 10:16 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by ranju bhatia
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Bahaut khushi hui is rachna mein aapke hastaakshar dekhkar. dhanyavaad vipin
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18th December 2012, 11:45 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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19th December 2012, 09:03 AM
bbade bhai saahab, kahaan ghum hain aap....?? aapke bina hindi kavitaaoN ka forum sunaa lagta hai.... ek aur behtareen kavita ke liye main aapko mubaraqbaad deta huN... aur duaa karta hun ki jald hi aapse fir ru-ba-ru huNgaa...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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