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Love ~~~~~~~~~Loneliness~~~~~~~~ - 31st December 2002, 03:54 AM

Dosto, kuch arse pehley kuch likha tha maine, aaj phir uski yaad aayi to aapke saath share kar rahi hu pesh hai,,,,,

Precious are the times,
which we shared!!
But why always in return,
YOu never cared??

I cared so much for U,
That in your LUV i became insane!!
Was? there anything missing in it,
That you always gave me Pain??

I always wished for yourz happiness,
If circumstances could be converted,
Why then thinking this day and night,
Left me just Hurted??

In what condition you left me,
You can never guess,
Being in this Huge world,
everywhere today i have LONELINESS !!!!

Luv PRiya>>


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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31st December 2002, 04:04 AM

Nice jaaneman, if you don't mind, maine abhi abhi kuch lonliness ke upar likha hai

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In my dreams long ago, I had seen her in my hands,
Now the glass of broken dreams is piercing my eyes..
To escape this loneliness, I will do everything I can,
Betrayal was the truth, hidden in love's disguise..

I desired for something that wouldn't come about,
I chose a far destination, but received a dark path..
I screamed for help, still no one heard me shout,
Who was once the light of my life, is now the past..

Heart's desires have drained away with my tears,
My shadow has left the soul, as she left my life..
Must escape this loneliness, no longer can I bare,
Love is behind all of this; my burden of strife..
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Likhte rahiye..



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Thumbs up Priya ji - 31st December 2002, 04:11 AM

priya ji, this is greatly written with much pain i can never imagine
aap bahut acha likhti hai aur aise hi likhte rehega
take care plz
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thanks - 3rd January 2003, 08:07 AM

hey aman yaar thanks for likin .....lluved ur words...intensely....
In my dreams long ago, I had seen her in my hands,
Now the glass of broken dreams is piercing my eyes..
To escape this loneliness, I will do everything I can,
Betrayal was the truth, hidden in love's disguise..

I desired for something that wouldn't come about,
I chose a far destination, but received a dark path..
I screamed for help, still no one heard me shout,
Who was once the light of my life, is now the past..

Heart's desires have drained away with my tears,
My shadow has left the soul, as she left my life..
Must escape this loneliness, no longer can I bare,
Love is behind all of this; my burden of strife..

jaise mere il ki baat aapne apne haathon likh daali

Priya......

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dearest ishika ji how r u ? hey thanks that u liked my writings so much! am honored! i luv what u write too ishika....u write ver deeply and nice...

thanks again for uplifting the spiritts in me

luv ya
Priya


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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