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aao, tasleem kareiN - 12th September 2018, 12:53 AM

raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar


aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN

maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN


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12th September 2018, 12:11 PM

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raNg-e-rivaayat ke khilaaf taaza'h Ghazal ke do misre hue haiN, mehfil ki nazar


aao, tasleem* kareiN, pehle se jaz'baat nahiiN

maiN bhi kuch aur hooN aur tujh meiN bhi vo baat nahiiN


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poori gazal bhi jaldi pesh kijiye...intejaar hai besabri se.



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14th September 2018, 12:56 AM

ta'bedaar hooN Sunita jee aur shukurguzaar bhi, hauNsla-afza'ii ke liye

Jaise hi taqmeel hui, haazir karta hooN


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Jaise hi taqmeel hui, haazir karta hooN


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14th September 2018, 01:34 PM

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