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~* yaad rakhne me kyaa buraai hai.*~ - 14th September 2018, 09:09 PM

Doston ahbaab ki mahfil me shaad ka aadaab... chotii behar me ek ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai... aapko nazr kar raha hoon.. Arz kiyaa hai..



Haae kyaa khoob shaam aai hai,
har taraf dhund hai tanhaai hai.

ab wo aa jaaen bhi to kyaa haasil,
aashnaa ab hame judaai hai.

baad muddat ke usne dekhaa hai,
yooN lagaa barq si takraai hai.

mere lab pe hain larzishen baaki,
goyaa wo naam hi khudaai hai.

Main use bhool jaaun bhi lekin,
yaad rakhne me kyaa buraai hai.

wo wajh thii bahaar aane ki,
uske bin har kalii murjhaai hai.

andherii raah me kaun aaegaa,
kiskii khaatir shamaa jalaai hai.

hogaa ye wahm hi , lekin ye bataa,
kyaa sadaa de ke tuu bulaai hai...

Shaad...




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19th September 2018, 08:55 PM

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Doston ahbaab ki mahfil me shaad ka aadaab... chotii behar me ek ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai... aapko nazr kar raha hoon.. Arz kiyaa hai..



Haae kyaa khoob shaam aai hai,
har taraf dhund hai tanhaai hai.

ab wo aa jaaen bhi to kyaa haasil,
aashnaa ab hame judaai hai.

baad muddat ke usne dekhaa hai,
yooN lagaa barq si takraai hai.

mere lab pe hain larzishen baaki,
goyaa wo naam hi khudaai hai.

Main use bhool jaaun bhi lekin,
yaad rakhne me kyaa buraai hai.

wo wajh thii bahaar aane ki,
uske bin har kalii murjhaai hai.

andherii raah me kaun aaegaa,
kiskii khaatir shamaa jalaai hai.

hogaa ye wahm hi , lekin ye bataa,
kyaa sadaa de ke tuu bulaai hai...

Shaad...


Salaam shaad sahab...arse baad aayi hun maaf kijiyega.... itni khoobsoorat ghazal se Mahfil roshan hai..aur ham hain ki gham e dunya me aise ghire baithe hain ki Kya kahein....
Har ek sher bahot hee khoobsoorat hai..daad qubool farmayein..yaqeen kijiye dil khush ho Gaya padhkar....dua hai aise hee likhte rahein aap......
Shaad rahiye...😊



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20th September 2018, 03:50 PM

Aap aaye bahaar aai

Bahot shukriyaa aane ke liye madhu ji..... padhne auar pasand karne ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon aapka..

Aati rahiyegaa

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30th September 2018, 02:44 AM

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Main use bhool jaaun bhi lekin,
yaad rakhne me kyaa buraai hai.

andherii raah me kaun aaegaa,
kiskii khaatir shamaa jalaai hai.

hogaa ye wahm hi , lekin ye bataa,
kyaa sadaa de ke tuu bulaai hai...

Shaad...


Kya Likhe hain Shaad ji, Lafz kum pad gaye wah wah karne ki....





Main use bhool jaaun bhi lekin,
yaad rakhne me kyaa buraai hai.





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