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Love Tum mere liye kya ho... - 30th October 2008, 11:44 AM

Tum mere liye kya ho..

Suraj ki woh pheli kiran..
Jisse meri zindagi me savera hota hai….

Ped ki woh thandi chaaon….
jo is uthal-puthal zindagi me aaram deta hai….

Mere haaton ki woh mehandi ki rangat…
jo mere liye tumhare pyaar ko bayan karta hai..….

gulshan ka woh khilta hua gulab…
Jo mere jeevan ki bagia ko hamesha mehekata rehta hai….

Mera roop, mera singaar….
jo mujhe khoobsurat hone ka ehsaas karata rehta hai..

samander ki woh gehrai ...
jo mere har dukh ko khud me sama leta hai..

Sawan ki woh pheli phuhar….
Jo mere zindagi ko utsaah se bhar deta hai...….

Ummedon ka woh anant aasmaa..
jo meri tamannaon ke pankh felane ka mauka deta hai..


Tum kya ho mere liye…
Ye vyakt karna muskil hai…
Per itna janti hoon main ki….
Tum se hi mera jeevan hai…
Aur tum bin kuch bhi nahi...


Ek tere bagair hai Zindagi ki Gujar…..
Bata main kya karu….
Sare zamane ki Mohabbat leker…..


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30th October 2008, 01:11 PM

behad khuubsuurat juzbaat haiN !

Ummedon ka woh anant aasmaa..
jo meri tamannaon ke pankh felane ka mauka deta hai..

aise hi likhti rahiye

tareef Qabool farmaaiye


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30th October 2008, 01:17 PM

sukriya kshitizji..... koshish karti rahungi achcha likhne ki.....

kehte hai na..

pankhon se kuch nahi hota... hoslon se udaan hoti hai....

thanks....


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30th October 2008, 05:47 PM

bahut khoob aHsaas ache lage ...

daad Qabool kijiye

likhte rahieN


kuch kahoN to sharm saar hoN
chup rahoN to guneh gaar hoN
   
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30th October 2008, 06:11 PM

daad qabool ki...bahut bahut sukiriya....


Ek tere bagair hai Zindagi ki Gujar…..
Bata main kya karu….
Sare zamane ki Mohabbat leker…..

   
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31st October 2008, 12:16 AM

very Nice Ruchika ji .........Ehesaas achha laga ....likhte rahiye ...khus rahiye


Diya



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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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31st October 2008, 10:59 AM

thanks diyaji... aap bhi hamesha khush rahe ye dua karte hai...


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31st October 2008, 03:16 PM

bahot khoob

kya hume bhi izazat hai kuch bayan karne ke?
   
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31st October 2008, 03:18 PM

tum kya ho mere liye main ye bata nai sakta
par jo ho woh main chupa bhi nai sakta

tum jaise bhi ho mere jazbaton mere khayalon se bayan hota hai,
bewafa hi sahi, jo bhi ho meri humnawan meri kayenaat ho tum
   
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31st October 2008, 03:38 PM

thanks... aapka jazbaat aur aapka dedication bhi acha laga....


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31st October 2008, 03:54 PM

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thanks... aapka jazbaat aur aapka dedication bhi acha laga....
is that for me Ms. Chahat...................................????
   
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31st October 2008, 04:00 PM

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tum kya ho mere liye main ye bata nai sakta
par jo ho woh main chupa bhi nai sakta

tum jaise bhi ho mere jazbaton mere khayalon se bayan hota hai,
bewafa hi sahi, jo bhi ho meri humnawan meri kayenaat ho tum
Ji aapke liye hi tha... i mean ur dedication n emotions are appreciable 4 whom u hv written these lines.....


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31st October 2008, 04:11 PM

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Ji aapke liye hi tha... i mean ur dedication n emotions are appreciable 4 whom u hv written these lines.....
oh thanks anyways,

waise i m not worthy for appreciation


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31st October 2008, 04:12 PM

Jab se ruthi hai zindagi mujhse,
yunhi tanha sa main rehta hoon,
woh jo pass nai hai mere,
Mara mara sa main jeeta hoon......!!!!
   
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13th November 2008, 06:38 PM

ruchi u r d best
keep writing

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13th November 2008, 07:14 PM

bohat achchha likha hai Ruchika aap ne........

wajuud film ka ek geet hai 'tum mere liye kya ho' usay suniyegaa, kaafi rochak hai maien socha tha ki shaaayd hi us se behtar koi vernan kar paaye lekin aap ne kam shabdo.n me.n sahi us se achchha vernan kiya hai...

aap ki yeh poetry paDh kar behad sukuun mila.....likhti rahiye yuu.n hi............

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Smile 17th November 2008, 01:21 PM

Thanks muskanjii.. u r also v swt as ur name...


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Thanks dear... koshish karungi surely us gaano ko sunne ki... vaise hamesha ki tarah hosla badhane ke liye sukriya..... take gud care of urself...


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