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Cool Mera GaoN - 17th May 2003, 02:31 PM

KaheeN door chhod aaya hooN mai
Apne gaaoN apne makaan ko,
Badi keemat chukaani padi ey shehar
Behtar jindgi ke is armaan ko,

Wo jangal se gujarti khaamosh sadkeiN
Mujhe aksar yaad aa jaati haiN,
Mere kheton se dikhte nazaare, pahaaroN ke kinaare
Ye tasweereiN nazar se, kahaaN utar paati haiN,

Gujre waqt ke nazaare, mere apne wo saare
Sabhi to aahista aahista bichad gaye,
Suna hai mere makaan ke kinaare bhi
Toot-toot kar bikhar gaye,

Wo pathshala(school) gaaoN ki jahaaN
BachhoN ki chahchahat se bhar jaati thi,
Ab wo chaupaal bhi sooni hai
JO gaoN ki ronak kahi jaati thi,

Sochta hooN kya paya maine
Abna chain o sukooN khokar,
Ab bhi to wahi roti khata hooN
Mai apne khaliyaanoN se juda hokar.

Chaand

Mai aksar poora sa nazar aata tha
Ey sheher tujhse pehchaan se pehle,
Is beemaar tabiyat se anjaan tha ye Chaand
Kuchh kar gujarne ke armaan se pehle.


Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

- Chaand
   
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gr8 - 17th May 2003, 09:49 PM

channd dost,
Sochta hooN kya paya maine
Abna chain o sukooN khokar,
Ab bhi to wahi roti khata hooN
Mai apne khaliyaanoN se juda hokar.

sach kahte ho......jivan maie bahot paane ke liyae ya kuchh naya paane ke liyae jo daud lagate hai... kya hasil karte hai??? aakhir to wahi par aa kar atak jaate hai jaha se khali hathh hi loutna hai.
   
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Re: Mera GaoN - 16th September 2005, 07:58 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Chaand
KaheeN door chhod aaya hooN mai
Apne gaaoN apne makaan ko,
Badi keemat chukaani padi ey shehar
Behtar jindgi ke is armaan ko,

Wo jangal se gujarti khaamosh sadkeiN
Mujhe aksar yaad aa jaati haiN,
Mere kheton se dikhte nazaare, pahaaroN ke kinaare
Ye tasweereiN nazar se, kahaaN utar paati haiN,

Gujre waqt ke nazaare, mere apne wo saare
Sabhi to aahista aahista bichad gaye,
Suna hai mere makaan ke kinaare bhi
Toot-toot kar bikhar gaye,

Wo pathshala(school) gaaoN ki jahaaN
BachhoN ki chahchahat se bhar jaati thi,
Ab wo chaupaal bhi sooni hai
JO gaoN ki ronak kahi jaati thi,

Sochta hooN kya paya maine
Abna chain o sukooN khokar,
Ab bhi to wahi roti khata hooN
Mai apne khaliyaanoN se juda hokar.

Chaand

Mai aksar poora sa nazar aata tha
Ey sheher tujhse pehchaan se pehle,
Is beemaar tabiyat se anjaan tha ye Chaand
Kuchh kar gujarne ke armaan se pehle.

mere chaand,

aaj fir is rachna ko padha to meri kavita yaad aa gayi...
janae wale ke naam ek khat....

dono kavita k bich hai khulaa aashmaan or kabhi n paar kar sake aisa samander.....

tumhari meena
   
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16th September 2005, 08:42 PM

Chand ji,

Bahut hi achhi kavita pesh ki hai aap ne. gaaon ki baatein... wah, bahut bahut bahut hi khoobsurat hai. achha laga tumhe parh ke. bas yun hi likhte rehna aur hamensha khush rehna!

Apna khyaal rakhna!

   
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