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29th June 2004, 03:06 PM
tumhaarii dost-navaazii me.n gar kamii hotii
zamiin TuuT ke taaro.n pe gir gaii hotii bahut se log pashemaan ho gae hote jo baat sach thii agar vo kahii gaii hotii Khushii ne Thiik kiyaa jo hamase duur-duur rahii hamaare paas jo aatii to ro pa.Dii hotii tujhe bhii log hamaarii tarah samajh lete hamaare jaiso se terii agar dostii hotii mai.n raushanii ke saraabo.n se to bachaa rahataa nasiib me.n jo zaraa aur tiiragii hotii (Salman Akhtar) Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th June 2004, 09:04 PM
Dear pulkit,
bahoot khoob...aai se hi likhte rahena. pappu.  |
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29th June 2004, 11:02 PM
bahut se log pashemaan ho gae hote
jo baat sach thii agar vo kahii gaii hotii kya bat kahi hai pulkit ji. Sacchai hoti hi kadvi hai. Aap ki baat me weight hai. Jindagi a phalsafa bhi yahi hai. Aap ne kaha hai isliye sir ankho per hai na hota yakin agar kisi aur ne kahi hoti. Likhte rahiye. Nutkhut. Humko aata hai huner dil mei.n utar jaane kaa |
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30th June 2004, 10:33 AM
Hi! Pappu!
Thx for the appreciation..... I also like the kallam so posted it here.... Keep writing n Take Care!!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th June 2004, 11:00 AM
Hi Nutkhut!
Thanks for replying on this post.... Seriously Poet has written truth only.... Neways Take Care and keep writing Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th June 2004, 02:07 PM
Pulkit saahab!
Namaskaar! Salman Akhtar ji ka bahut hi khubsurat ye ghazal aap ne pesh kiya hai.. Bahut bahut sukriyaa ham sab se share karne ke liye... Likhte rahiyegaa... Achchhaa lagtaa hai padh kar... MayanK |
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30th June 2004, 04:02 PM
Maynak!
Thanks a lot for appreciating the effort.... Aap yun hi hausal badate rahiye, main yunhi post karta rahoonga........ TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th June 2004, 04:30 PM
pulkit bhai kalaam bahut pasand aaya aage bhi mehfil mein chaandi ki kiran barqaraar rakhiYeGaa
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30th June 2004, 04:53 PM
Mast Bhai,
Aapko kalaam pasand aya.. Dil se khushi huyi... Aage bhi aise hi kalaam post karne ki koshish rahegi..... Take Care and Do keep writing Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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2nd July 2004, 06:16 PM
Bahut achi nazm likhi hai aapne Pulkit ji...
Aise hi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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2nd July 2004, 07:04 PM
hello pulkit ji
wah..kya gazab ki gazal likh dali......bahut hi jazbati,,keep it up... and keep smiling... |
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Re: tumhaarii dost-navaazii me.n gar kamii hotii... -
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Bahut khoob...tum tau ek dum paarkhi ho gaye ho...jahan tahan se heere dhoondh yahan pesh karte ho...Salman Akhtar sahib ki likhi yeh ghazal bhi khuub achii lagi...khaas kar ke yeh sher... Khushii ne Thiik kiyaa jo hamase duur-duur rahii hamaare paas jo aatii to ro pa.Dii hotii main bhi sochti rahi ki aakhir khushi kyon duur duur rahi...ab tumne samjhaa diya...ki usko kya padhi thee ki mere sang roye...lol...bahut khoob... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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3rd July 2004, 12:29 PM
Priya
Thx a lot for encouragement n appreciation.... It's a Salman Akhtar's creation.. I just posted it here.... Neways... Thx a lot .. TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd July 2004, 12:33 PM
Swati,
Thx alot for appreciation.. but all the credit goes to Salman Sahab who wrote this beautiful work... and a li'l to me also for posting it here......  So.. Thx a lot for coming here... I must admit... I like ur style of writing.... TC...  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd July 2004, 01:38 PM
Paras!
What Say... Woh aye humare post par!! Kabhi Hum unko Kabhi apne post ko dekhte hain  Well... Now I seriously think that this post is relly special.... Salman Sahab has created a masterpiece....... Jahan tak Parkhi hone ka sawaal hai... If my posts have to be listed in the same forum with shayars like U, Banno di and others... they have to be special...... Neways... Thx a lot for ur appreciaton.... I wud wish that happiness always sticks with u..... So... Take Care n Keep Writing...... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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