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17th January 2011, 02:21 AM
Ahle-Mahfil ko Shaad ka aadaab... lijiye fir haazir huaa hoon hoon us ehsaas ke saath jise log ishq kahte hain.. gaur kijiyega..
Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se, Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se. Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye, Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se. Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me, Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se. Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi, Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se. Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*, Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se. Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa, Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se. BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin, Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se. Rukhsaar-- cheeks, Girdaab-- saagar me uthne wala bhawar. Pecho-kham-- curls of hair, maho-anjum -- chaand taare, Gaafil -- careless, unaware. shaad... |
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17th January 2011, 09:10 AM
Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye,
Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se. Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi, Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se. Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*, Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se. Very Sweet .. Very Romantic ... Very Touching ... Shaad Bhai ! Good ExpressioN .... Very Impressive Creation .... dil se daad hazir hai ... ! aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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17th January 2011, 12:05 PM
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';420945]Ahle-Mahfil ko Shaad ka aadaab... lijiye fir haazir huaa hoon hoon us ehsaas ke saath jise log ishq kahte hain.. gaur kijiyega..
Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se, Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se. Nice one...................!!! Tu hoga Girdaabe-Bewafaa* duniya ke liye, Meri kashtee ka tu Saahil hai kasam se. Wah, lvly..................!!! Shamaa hai Maghroor bahot tamashaai me, Raushan tera noor Sare-Mehfil hai kasam se. Bahut khoob..............!!! Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi, Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se. Wahhh, wahh.............!!! Tere khaamosh Lab is zulf ke Pecho-kham*, Ye jhuktee nazar badi Qaatil hai kasam se. Kya baat hai.............!!! Tu Maho-anjum* hai ke paikar wafaa kaa, Meraa Ishq naa tere Qaabil hai kasam se. Heart touching lines....!!! BaDa yaqeen tha 'shaad' tujhe duaa pe lekin, Khudaa bhi Tere ishq se Gaafil* hai kasam se. Well, once again a superb creation,Shaad Jee.....!!! Very well written, Romantic, Nice, good..........!!! God Bless You......!!! Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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17th January 2011, 02:12 PM
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 Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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17th January 2011, 03:44 PM
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Aadaab Naresh bhai.. aapka sath aapka pyaar aapki duaaon ka to main hamesha hi muntazir rahta hoon.. jab tak apke daad ka aapki duaaon ka haanth sar pe naa ho hamesha mujhe khali khali sa lagta rahta hai.. har baar ki tarah jo aapne meri hausla afzaai ki hai.. uske liye main aapka behad shukrguzaar hoon.. aate rahen yoonhi. duaaon me yaad rakhhen.. shaad... |
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17th January 2011, 04:07 PM
Sameer Bhai.....bahut bahut bahutttttttttt accha likha hai....jitni b tareef karuN kum hai.....majja aaya romantic creation padkar....yoon hi pyar bhare tarane gun-gunate raho bazm meiN
pyar aur duaoN ke saath baaji .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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17th January 2011, 07:34 PM
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Kavita jee, kaisi hain aap.. is baar fir aapka ye khulooso-muhabbat bhara reply dekha.. meri aankhen purnam ho gaeen.. mere jazbaaton ki itni kadr karne ka shukriya mohtarmaa... Bas isi baat ki khushi hotee hai ki apa dost hamara aaj bhi itna khyaal rakhte hain yahaan... aati rahen aur yoonhi sath detee rahen... apna khoob khyaal rakkkhen. shaad... |
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18th January 2011, 08:35 PM
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18th January 2011, 08:37 PM
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Pyaari baaji.. aap der sse aain par durust aain.. aapko yahan dekh kar yoon lag raha hai ki bas ab kuch baaki na raha. aapka is ada se aana aur is adaa se tareef karne ke to hum kaayal hain huzoor... aati rahiyega.. aashirwad dijiyega.. shaad... |
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18th January 2011, 08:46 PM
Wah Wah kya kehne...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aapka yeh kalaam roushan-e- mehfil hai kasam se........ Aap SDC ke best shayeroN me shamil hai kasam se.......  Yuhi likhte rahiye.....shaad sahab.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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18th January 2011, 10:31 PM
wah! kya sher nikaale hain.
matla to ek dum kaatil hai. Ye sher to haasil-e-ghazal laga: Wo jhaank Lenaa tera Parde se ek baar hi, Mere intezaar kaa Haasil hai kasam se. Sandeep 'Saahil' saahilspoetry.blogspot.com |
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18th January 2011, 10:32 PM
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Zainy, Kuch zyaada hi tareef kar dee aapne kasam se..... main is layaq bhi nahi shayad... khair zarra-nawaazi ka behad shukriya.. aaati rahen , padhti rahen.. allah hafiz... |
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18th January 2011, 10:53 PM
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Sahil bhai, kaise hain aap.. ??? Aapko mujh nacheez ka ye adna sa kalaam pasand aaya, behad mashkoor-o-mamnoon hoon aapka.. yoonhi saath dete rahiyega.. khush rahiye. shaad... |
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21st January 2011, 03:35 PM
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ishq ki khubsurti ko itni najaakat se farmaaya hai apne ...jise padh kar laga aaj bhi ishq dilo me basta hai khi... tere labzoN pe aaj kayal vo kasam se ....... ishq k tere ye ahsaas bakhoob hai kasam se ........... duaa hai dil se tere ishq ko kasam se .... aabaad rahe tera noor har dam se......... likhte rahiyega  na rok saka maalik ki ibadat se use koi ye banda hai us parwar digaar ka dafan har riwaj ab us kabra me hai jis par chada hai kafan us pahredar ka.. |
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21st January 2011, 07:04 PM
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Aadaab, aapka reply padha behad khushi hui janakar ki aapko hamara likhna achaa laga.. jee haan is baat se main beshaq sahmat hoon ki ishq aaaj bhi dilon me bastaa tabhi to log use likhte hain aur log use padhte hain.. aapka ye tareef karne ka shayrana andaaz behad pasand aaya. aati rahen yoon hi saath detee rahen... khush rahiye. shaad... |
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24th April 2014, 11:25 PM
bhai namaste
aapki is purani GHAZAL par nazar padii. . janaab bahot hi umdaah ehsaas aur andaaZ . dil shaad shaad ho gayaa . dil se daad duaaon ke saath ijaazat aapka Dhaval |
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25th April 2014, 01:01 PM
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Dhavalbhai kii rehnumaaii se hameiN aapkee ye behad khubsurat ghazal ka lutf milaa hai......... ise taghaful karne ke liye muaafee chahta hooN.... masha allah! kya rumani andaaz hai, janaab!... Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se, Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se. kya baat hai, kya baat hai............. jazbaatoN ki bayaanaat khub nikhar ke aayee hai............... daad hi daad aapko, Sameerbhai............ ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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7th June 2014, 12:09 PM
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aapkaa behad shukrguzaar hoon jo aapne is kalaam ko na jaane kahaan se dhuund nikaalaa... yaeen maniye main khud ise padh kar usii rang me rang gaya jo ise likhte waqt mere dil o jogar me they... ek baar fir se shukriyaa aapka dhaval bhai..... tashreef laate rahiyega Shaad... |
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7th June 2014, 12:13 PM
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Aadeil saahab aadaab.... bahot bahot shukriyaa aapki tareef o tavajjoh kaa.. main tahe dil se mashkoor hoon aapka.... aur dhaval bhai ka aek baar fir se shukriya jo unhone is kalaam ko saamne laane me merii madad ki.. aate rahiyegaa... aur khush rahiye Shaad..... |
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7th June 2014, 04:03 PM
kya shoiab bhai....ye nageena kahan chhipaye baithe the.........speechless....heart blowing...very very romantic.......sorry foe being late.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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8th June 2014, 01:59 PM
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thanks alot Naaz..... behad khushi hoti hai jab jab aap bazm me tashreef laatii hain.. aaapko ye andaaz ye kalam pasand aaya merii khushnaseebi hai kasamm se..... aati rahiyegaa aur apnaa khayaal rakhiyega... Shukriyaa Shaad..... |
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8th June 2014, 02:01 PM
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bahot inaayat , bahot shukriyaa aapka Aru bhai... ise Dhaval bhai ki mehrbaani kahunga jo saalon puraana kalaam aap sab ke saamne laane me meri madad kii unhone... thanks for your comment my dear... aate rahna.. Shaad... |
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11th June 2014, 11:54 AM
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Yeh jo Rukhsaar* pe ek til hai kasam se, Isi pe Atkaa huaa mera Dil hai kasam se. Waah waah kia aaghaaz e mohabbat hai mera matlb aaghaaz e kalaam hai. Puri ghazal laajawaab aaghaaz ki tarah ihtataam b sundar sher par. just clap clap clap .....................................
Dil jalaa ke poochhte haiN badii masoomiyat se woh. Shamaa ka hi kyuN muqaddar hai raat bhar jalnaa. Dr. Imtiaz Nazish |
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