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5th November 2014, 11:43 AM
dil to gul hai use machalne do
gul ko shole men tum na dhalne do meri takleef had se guzri hai ab to tum hijr se nikalne do hijr- Separation is se khush to farishte bhi honge ek mulaqaat bhi na talne do khwab hum dono mil ke dekhenge par ise sach men to badalne do waqt ho raat ka ke din ka ho baat ke silsile ko chalne do hum to bas tumse pyar karte hain koi jalta hai hum se jalne do mere mehboob milne ayenge aye baharo mujhe sanbhalne do baharo- Spring gham ka qissa tamaam kardo khud phir na Parwaaz dil men palne do qissa – Story, tamaam- finish By Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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6th November 2014, 11:33 AM
waaahhhhh Mujeeb saahab kyaa kahne aapki ummdh shahkaari ke....
nayaab kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne dil se daad qubool kijiye shaad.... |
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7th November 2014, 11:26 AM
Dear Sameer Sb.
aap Jis dilchaspi se mere kalam ko padhte hain aur sarahte hain....oh mere liye waqai bais-e-masarat ki baat hai....main aap ka teh dil se mashkoor hun. yun hi saath dete rahiyega. Agar ho saketo is kalaam men eh change kardijiyega. 1. Khawab ko khwab 2. Erase the word (Revised): from title of the Ghazal. Duaon ke saath Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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7th November 2014, 04:58 PM
namaskaar mujib ji
aapne jo shaad bhai ko requset ki thi edit karne ki...wo ho gya hai. aapki shayri ke ehsaas bahut acche lge hame...yu hi likhte rhiye aur bazm ko sajate rahiye. duaoN ke saath  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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8th November 2014, 10:45 PM
Bohut bohut shukriya Sunita ji.
Aap ki daad milti hai to mehsoos hota hai ke kamiyabi mili. Yun hi saath dete rahiye. Thanks and regards. Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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8th November 2014, 11:33 PM
waqt ho raat ka ke din ka ho
baat ke silsile ko chalne do vaah umda khyaal 07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }  Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
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9th November 2014, 06:34 AM
Bohut bohut shukriya...sher pasand karne ka.
Yun hi sath dete rahiye Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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9th November 2014, 11:10 PM
meri takleef had se guzri hai
ab to tum hijr se nikalne do hijr- Separation is se khush to farishte bhi honge ek mulaqaat bhi na talne do Waah...Bahut khoob..mujeeb ji... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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10th November 2014, 11:23 AM
Bohut bohut shukriya Madhuji
Mere do sher ko aap ne pasand kiya mujhe behad khushi hui. Ek baat hai...ap ne badi der kardi is Ghazal ko padhne men....shayed aap otherwise busy thin. Isi tarah saath dete rahiyega. With regards. Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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10th November 2014, 03:37 PM
Parwaz bhai aapka kalam per ke dil se yeh aawaz nikli...
Hui hai aaj shamma raishan , thora dil ko aur machane do khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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10th November 2014, 05:44 PM
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aur gazal to bahut pahle hi pad li thi maine haan reply karne me zaroor deri huyi...sahi kaha aapne...thoda busy thi.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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11th November 2014, 02:57 PM
Mere dear Hamdam Sb.
wah .....achha sher bhi bana liya aap ne.. Shukriya Saath dete rahiye Duaon ke saath Mujeeb Parwaaz |
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11th November 2014, 03:04 PM
Adaab Madhuji
Kher koi baat nahin. Isi context men ek Ghazal ke chaar misre yaad agaye....eh Ghazal Dr. Bashir Badre marhoom ki hai. Arz kar raha hun. " koi kanta chubha nahin hota dil agar phool sa nahi hota kuch to majburiyan rahi hongi yun koi bewafa nahin hota" Thanks & regards Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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14th November 2014, 01:41 PM
Mujeeb ji,
Bahut khub likha hai aapne... aapke bhav bahut achchhe lage.. kahi kahi laga jaise shabdo ki barish ho gayi hai.. navashyak shabdo ko kam hi likhe.. phir aap dekhenge aap ka likha hriday ki gaharyi mein apana sthaan banayega.. shubhkamnao sahit Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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14th November 2014, 08:25 PM
Dhanyawaad Akant ji
Aap ki tippani suikaar hai mujh ko. isi prakar apna mat rakh ke mujhe abhar prakat karne ka avsar den....... jo bhi ucheet lage mujhe batayen. mujhe khushi hogi. saath dete rahen Thanks & regards. Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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14th November 2014, 11:23 PM
Mujeeb bhai
Salaam Aapki yeh tehreer dil ko pasand aayiin...mere dil se daad hi daad Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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17th November 2014, 08:56 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaab bahut umda ghazal kahi hai Mujeeb saheb, bahut saari daad.
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai |
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18th November 2014, 04:10 PM
Salam Dhaval Sb.
Bohut bohut shukriya isi tarah saath dete rahiyega Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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18th November 2014, 04:11 PM
Bohut bohut shukriya Iftekhar Sb.
Hamesha saath dete rahiyega. Duaon ke saath Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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