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27th April 2003, 03:27 PM
hi everybody i am new to this site maine sabke sher pade it's really very nice mujhe kabhie shero shayari ka shaunk nahin tha but don't know kahan se pada ho gaya isliye sending u 1 sher plzz reply aur agar galat ho to thek bhi karna to padeye....
jindagi katti nahin hi tumhare bin na jee sakte hain hum ' na mar sakte hain hum agar paas tum ajao to pata chale ki kina tadpate hain hum.. ek aur pyaar kya cheez hai hum nahin jante ye kab kase kahan aur kyon ho jaat hai hum nahin jante par itna jarur keh sakte hain jab ye hota hai to har subah haseen aur har raat rangeen nazar ati hai plzzz reply bye everybody takecare punnu |
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27th April 2003, 07:23 PM
welcome to shayri.com punuu. boht acha likha ha app na......keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!app ka likha huwa ka intizar raha ga.......
bye Zahra Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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28th April 2003, 06:55 AM
hi thanks zahra mera vishwas badane ke liye i will try to post some more shers aur haan mera name punnu hai naki punuu ok
thks anas to ap bhi apne shers pesh karo bye punnu |
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28th April 2003, 07:05 AM
hi......i am sorry. next time i will try to write your name speeling correct........ok bye
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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26th October 2003, 03:06 PM
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punnu these shers r really nice smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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28th October 2003, 07:33 AM
thanks khushi for liking my first sher here.thanks bye.
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28th October 2003, 01:57 PM
hello punnu ji,
aapki pahali koshish bahut achchhi rahi. dil ke bhav ko bahut khubsurti se aapne pesh kiya hai. main shayri ka bahut achchha jankaar nahi hoon, phir bhi mujhe jo uchit laga vo main change kerke yahi paste ker raha hoon. gaur fermaiyega. jindagi katati nahin hai tumhare bin na jee sakte hai na mar sakte hain hum agar paas tum aa jaao to pata chale ki tere liye kitana tadpate hain hum.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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28th October 2003, 04:43 PM
Hi Punnu ji
you have posted more than 285 threads till yet abhi bhi aap is site par new ho? bohat aascharay hua jaan kar...... Mobile:-0091-9872030064 www.shilapmittal@yahoo.co.in www.shilapmittal@hotmail.com |
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29th October 2003, 09:30 AM
hi akant ji thanks.i am not new here ye pehli post hai . sahi hai bilkul.mujhe bhi shayri ki itni knowledge nahin hai .thanks for reply.
hi shilap ji.are nahin this one i wrote first time when i came here.but khushii ji ne is par ab reply diya caz she is new isiliye ye post upar aa gayi .thanks for reply.confusion finished ya nahin. thanks manish ji |
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