hi everybody i am new to this site maine sabke sher pade it's really very nice mujhe kabhie shero shayari ka shaunk nahin tha but don't know kahan se pada ho gaya isliye sending u 1 sher plzz reply aur agar galat ho to thek bhi karna to padeye....
jindagi katti nahin hi tumhare bin
na jee sakte hain hum ' na mar sakte hain hum
agar paas tum ajao
to pata chale ki kina tadpate hain hum..
ek aur
pyaar kya cheez hai hum nahin jante
ye kab kase kahan aur kyon ho jaat hai hum nahin jante
par itna jarur keh sakte hain jab ye hota hai to
har subah haseen aur har raat rangeen nazar ati hai
aapki pahali koshish bahut achchhi rahi. dil ke bhav ko bahut khubsurti se aapne pesh kiya hai. main shayri ka bahut achchha jankaar nahi hoon, phir bhi mujhe jo uchit laga vo main change kerke yahi paste ker raha hoon. gaur fermaiyega.
jindagi katati nahin hai tumhare bin
na jee sakte hai na mar sakte hain hum
agar paas tum aa jaao to pata chale
ki tere liye kitana tadpate hain hum..
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
Last edited by akant; 28th October 2003 at 02:04 PM..
hi akant ji thanks.i am not new here ye pehli post hai . sahi hai bilkul.mujhe bhi shayri ki itni knowledge nahin hai .thanks for reply.
hi shilap ji.are nahin this one i wrote first time when i came here.but khushii ji ne is par ab reply diya caz she is new isiliye ye post upar aa gayi .thanks for reply.confusion finished ya nahin.
thanks manish ji
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