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dam liyaa thaa na qayaamat ne hanoz
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kyaa hii rizavaan se la.Daaii hogii
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where is everyone...........???? no taish jii .....no @ahna@ jii.................no vikas bhai................aur koi to pahle bhi nahi tha...
   
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main aa gaya sarkaar meri, thoda din aaj ka busy gaya tha saahab, waise maiN ghazal ke definition pe bhi thoda sa confused huN, kyunki kahin 4 sher ko bhi ghazal mana gaya hai, aur kahiN kam se kam 5 sher ki baat kahi gayi hai, aur fir jo teen sher ke hue, un sabko qataa kahuN.....?? thoda sa clear kar dena bhai..... aur chalo aaj ahchi behas hui hai, qataa aur rubaayi ki confusion to door hui kam se kam.....



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main aa gaya sarkaar meri, thoda din aaj ka busy gaya tha saahab, waise maiN ghazal ke definition pe bhi thoda sa confused huN, kyunki kahin 4 sher ko bhi ghazal mana gaya hai, aur kahiN kam se kam 5 sher ki baat kahi gayi hai, aur fir jo teen sher ke hue, un sabko qataa kahuN.....?? thoda sa clear kar dena bhai..... aur chalo aaj ahchi behas hui hai, qataa aur rubaayi ki confusion to door hui kam se kam.....
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dam liyaa thaa na qayaamat ne hanoz
phir teraa vaqt-e-safar yaad aayaa

saadagii haaye tamannaa yaanii
phir wo naii_rang-e-nazar yaad aayaa

uzr-e-vaamaa.Ndagii ae hasrat-e-dil
naalaa karataa thaa jigar yaad aayaa

zindagii yuu.N bhii guzar hii jaatii
kyo.n teraa raah_guzar yaad aayaa

kyaa hii rizavaan se la.Daaii hogii
ghar teraa Khuld me.n gar yaad aayaa

aah wo jurrat-e-fariyaad kahaa.N
dil se ta.ng aake jigar yaad aayaa

phir tere kuuche ko jaata hai Khayaal
dil-e-Gum_gashtaa magar yaad aayaa

koii viiraanii-sii-viiraa.Nii hai
dasht ko dekh ke ghar yaad aayaa

mai.n ne majanuu.N pe la.Dakapan me.n 'Asad'
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Itnaa badaa comment chaapne ke baad not a single reply of thanks or anything...
I think gang started ignoring and wanted me to isolate from here...
Ok then no prbs... But ab Ye to koi nahi sunaaega ke hum 3,4 logon ke alawa kisi ko shayri ki parwah nahi..

Aur jaise fikr ko shiqayat Rehti hai.. Meri koi sunta nahi... Meri koi maanta. Nahi.. Wahi shiqayat main leke ja raha hoon

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main aa gaya sarkaar meri, thoda din aaj ka busy gaya tha saahab, waise maiN ghazal ke definition pe bhi thoda sa confused huN, kyunki kahin 4 sher ko bhi ghazal mana gaya hai, aur kahiN kam se kam 5 sher ki baat kahi gayi hai, aur fir jo teen sher ke hue, un sabko qataa kahuN.....?? thoda sa clear kar dena bhai..... aur chalo aaj ahchi behas hui hai, qataa aur rubaayi ki confusion to door hui kam se kam.....

taish sahib..............traditionally mana gayaa hai ki aik ghazal men matla , maqtaa , aur iske alaawa kam se kam 3 ashaar hone chaahiye.......lekin iske bahut se exceptions bhi dekhane ko mil jaate hai.......jahaan matla-maqta milaakar 3 ashaar ki ghazale bhi kahi gayi hai ............

aur bhai qataa ke wahi scale hai jo maine post no...115 men kahe hai.........rubaai ko anjaan sahib ne post no 111 men clear kiya hai.........

3 sher wala kalaam tabhi qataa hai jab wo aik hi subject par hai otherwise wo qataa nahi kahaa ja sakta..............................
   
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to teen sher agar alag subjects pe hoN, to use hum kaheNge kya...?? vo na qata hui na runaayi....



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I think gang started ignoring and wanted me to isolate from here...
Ok then no prbs... But ab Ye to koi nahi sunaaega ke hum 3,4 logon ke alawa kisi ko shayri ki parwah nahi..

Aur jaise fikr ko shiqayat Rehti hai.. Meri koi sunta nahi... Meri koi maanta. Nahi.. Wahi shiqayat main leke ja raha hoon

Carry on guys... Enjoy....
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ye kisee particular member ya so called gang ki thread nahi hai...........you are always welcome here.........................aap hamaare saath shaayri par baat kare ye hamaare liye khushi ki baat hai.............
   
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taish bhai aapne meri baat dhyaan se nahi padee.................maine kahaa ki traditionally ghazal men 5 ashaar zaroori maane gaye hai lekin 3 shero waki ghazale bhi kaahi -suni gayi hai..................
   
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nahi to iska ye matlab hai ki aage bhi exceptions ka scope hai.... chaliye sahi hai, kyuNki maiNe ye maan liya tha ki vo exceptions sirf ustaadon ke liye ho shaayd, shukriya sumit saahab, shaad saahab aur uffaq bhai ab o aapko shukriya kehne ki aadat hi daal leni hogi.....



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20th December 2012, 12:24 AM

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to teen sher agar alag subjects pe hoN, to use hum kaheNge kya...?? vo na qata hui na runaayi....
Taish sahab, teen sher (muqammal bait) agar alag alag subjects par hai'n to wo keval sher hi hai'n. Unhe'n qaayde se to ek jagah nahi'n baandhna chahiye.

Lekin jaisa ki exceptions ki baat ki jaaye to ise aap teen sher ki ghazal bhi keh sakte hai'n (agar qaafiya, radeef aur behr ke paimaane par teeno'n sher khare utarte hai'n tab)


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20th December 2012, 12:29 AM

Taish saahab game to aap khelne me maahir ho.. Maana ke mere saare comments andekha kar aur fallang maar kar aapne apne comments neeche diye... Lekin ye game to aapko hi khelna hoga...

Fill in the blanks:

Gangs of ...............

Ghabraiye mat isse bhi bahot se taalibon ka ilm badehega..


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are miyaan maine sab padha, par chunki alag alag raa'e thi aur aakhir tak kisi ek baat pe sehmati nahinho paayin isiliye ye teen sher ki ghazal waali baat pe thoda sa doubt reh gaya isiliye main last meN straight tareee se padha hai.... aur kuch gan vang nahin saahab, balki ye vo thread hai, jahaaN qaayde se shaayri ki bareeqiyoN pe baat ho rahi hai aur agar aapko naam hi dena hai to gangs of shayri de dijiye janaab....



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Kamaal hai.. meri baat To koi sunta hi Nahi... Meri parbaah hi kise Hai yahaan.. Mat maano , karo jo karna hai...

Are shayri ki Baat to koi karta hi Nahi Yahan.. Qata rubaai me sar phoddne se accha hai Shayri karo..

Aur ye. Kaisaa naam hai.. Gang of shaayri... Bakvas.. Adaaygii nahi hui..

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Itnaa badaa comment chaapne ke baad not a single reply of thanks or anything...
I think gang started ignoring and wanted me to isolate from here...
Ok then no prbs... But ab Ye to koi nahi sunaaega ke hum 3,4 logon ke alawa kisi ko shayri ki parwah nahi..

Aur jaise fikr ko shiqayat Rehti hai.. Meri koi sunta nahi... Meri koi maanta. Nahi.. Wahi shiqayat main leke ja raha hoon

Carry on guys... Enjoy....
sahab maine itna kaha meri koe sunta nahi
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taish bhai aapne meri baat dhyaan se nahi padee.................maine kahaa ki traditionally ghazal men 5 ashaar zaroori maane gaye hai lekin 3 shero waki ghazale bhi kaahi -suni gayi hai..................
maine kaha thasource. Do

I need that... Agar ghalib k diwan mai hai sardar jafri wala thn tell me page i will check..
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Aur agar sanad leni hai to Daag ki lao.. Ghalib mai is woqt k hisaab se kuch alag mil sakta hai
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badi achchi gazal hai par kuch samjh nahin aai... shuru ho jaiye sir ji...
lijiye @ahna@ ji ghazal ki explaination pesh e khidmat hai..................

phir mujhe diidaa-e-tar yaad aayaa
dil jigar tashnaa-e-fariyaad aayaa


shaayar kahataa hai ki jab uske pyaase dil aur jigar ne usse shikyaat ki to phir se use apni bhigi aankhe yaad aa gayi........matlab ye koi pahli baar nahi huya hai balki baar baar hota rahaa hai ki uske pyaase dil -jigar usse shikaayat karte hai aur wo rone ki siwaay kuch nahi kar paata...........phir lafz bahut important hai is ghazal men

dam liyaa thaa na qayaamat ne hanoz
phir teraa vaqt-e-safar yaad aayaa


qayaamat se matlab dil ki baichaini se hai..........abhi to baichain dil ko thoda aaram huya tha ki mujhe phir se teri rukhsat ki ghadi yaad aa gayi........
shaayar kah rahaa hai ki uski maashooqa to chali gayi hai lekin jab-2 usko thoda bahut aaram milta hai to phir se waqt-rukhsat ki yaad aakar usko baichain kar deti hai

saadagii e tamannaa yaanii
phir wo naii_rang-e-nazar yaad aayaa


naii-rand -e nazar maayne...........nazro ka dhokha ...........ghalib sahab kahte hai ki wo uski nazaro se dhokha khaa chuke hai lekin phir bhi wo usko bhool nahi paate ...unki tamanna bhi kitni bholi hai.............

uzr-e-vaamaa.Ndagii ae hasrat-e-dil
naalaa karataa thaa jigar yaad aayaa


shaayar apne dil ki hasrato se muaafi maangataa hai ki use uzr e vaamaa [thakaawat ka bahaana] karnaa padaa kyunki use rote-2 yad aaya ki use to itna dukh hai ki agar wo rotaa rahaa to uska jigar hi fat jaayega.......

zindagii yuu.N bhii guzar hii jaatii
kyo.n teraa raah_guzar yaad aayaa


is sher ki explaination aap logo par chhodataa hu..........

kyaa hii rizavaan se la.Daaii hogii
ghar teraa Khuld me.n gar yaad aayaa


tera ghar mere liye khuld [heaven] se bhi jiyaada sundar hai.......marne ke baad bhi meri aarzo hogi ki main sawarg na jaakar tere ghar rahu..........aur jab main sawarg se bhaag jaane ki koshish karungaa to rizavaan[gateman of heaven] mujhe rokega .....aur hamaari ladaai ho jaayegi

aah wo jurrat-e-fariyaad kahaa.N
dil se ta.ng aake jigar yaad aayaa


yahaan fariyaad se matlab rone se hai...shaayar kahataa hai ro -2 ke uska jigar to fat chuka hai aur dil men rone ki wo taaqat nahi hai......isliye use jigar yaad aa rahaa hai

phir tere kuuche ko jaata hai Khayaal
dil-e-Gum_gashtaa magar yaad aayaa


magar ke maayne shaayad se liya jaana chaahiye.........tere koonche men mera dil khoya tha aaj usi khoye huye dil ki yaad aayi to tere koonche bhi yaad aa gayaa

koii viiraanii-sii-viiraa.Nii hai
dasht ko dekh ke ghar yaad aayaa

mai.n ne majanuu.N pe la.Dakapan me.n 'Asad'
sang uThaayaa thaa ke sar yaad aayaa


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shukriya janaab, keep the good work coming saahab......



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tuu dost kisee ka bhi

tuu dost kisii kaa bhii sitam_gar na hu_aa thaa
auro.n pe hai vo zulm ki mujh par na hu_aa thaa

chho.Daa mah-e-naKhshab kii tarah dast-e-qazaa ne
Khurshiid hanoz us ke baraabar na hu_aa thaa

taufiiq ba andaaz-e-himmat hai azal se
aa.Nkho.n me.n hai vo qataraa ki gauhar na hu_aa thaa

jab tak kii na dekhaa thaa qad-e-yaar kaa aalam
mai.n motaqid-e-fitanaa-e-mahashar na hu_aa thaa

mai.n saadaa dil aazurdagi-e-yaar se Khush huu.N
yaanii sabaq-e-shauq mukarrar na hu_aa thaa

dariyaa-e-ma_aasii tunuk abhii se hu_aa Khushk
meraa sar-e-daaman bhii abhii tar na hu_aa thaa

jaarii thii asad daaG-e-jigar se mere tahasiil
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hu_ii taakhiir to kuch

hu_ii taaKhiir to kuchh baa_is-e-taaKhiir bhii thaa
aap aate the magar ko_ii inaa.Ngiir na thaa

tum se bejaa hai mujhe apanii tabaahii kaa gilaa
us me.n kuchh shaa_ib-e-Khuubii-e-taqadiir bhii thaa

tuu mujhe bhuul gayaa ho to pataa batalaa duu.N
kabhii fitaraak me.n tere ko_ii naKhchiir bhii thaa

qaid me.n hai tere vahashii ko vahii zulf kii yaad
haa.N kuchh ek ra.nj-e-Garaa.Nbaari-e-za.njiir bhii thaa

bijalii kau.nd ga_ii aa.Nkho.n ke aage, to kyaa
baat karate, ke mai.n lab tashnaa-e-taqariir bhii thaa

yusuf us ko kahuu.N aur kuchh na kahe, Khair hu_ii
gar biga.G baiThe to mai.n laayaq-e-ta'ziir bhii thaa

dekh kar Gair ko kyuu.N ho na kalejaa Tha.nDaa
naalaa karataa thaa vale taalib-e-taasiir bhii thaa

peshe me.n aib nahii.n, rakhiye na farhaad ko naam
ham hii aashuftaa-saro.n me.n vo javaa.N 'Meer' bhii thaa

ham the marane ko kha.De paas na aayaa na sahii
aaKhir us shauKh ke tarakash me.n ko_ii tiir bhii thaa

paka.De jaate hai.n farishto.n ke likhe par naahak
aadamii ko_ii hamaaraa dam-e-tahariir bhii thaa

rekhtaa ke tumhii.n ustaad nahii.n ho "Ghalib"
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are ise kyun adhura chor diya bhala, ise to khatm kiye dete saahab.....



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are ise kyun adhura chor diya bhala, ise to khatm kiye dete saahab.....
Kya adhoora reh gaya janaab.???


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arz e niyaaz e ishq ke qaabil

arz-e-niyaaz-e-ishq ke qaabil nahii.n rahaa
jis dil pe naaz thaa mujhe vo dil nahii.n rahaa

[niyaaz = offering]

jaataa huu.N daaG-e-hasarat-e-hastii liye hue
huu.N shammaa-e-kushtaa daraKhur-e-mahafil nahii.n rahaa

[shammaa-e-kushtaa = extinguished lamp; daraKhur = worthy]

marane kii ai dil aur hii tadabiir kar ki mai.n
shaayaan-e-dast-o-baazuu-e-qaatil nahii.n rahaa

[tadabiir = solution/remedy; shaayaan = worthy; dast = hand]

ba-ruu-e-shash jihat dar-e-aa_iinaabaaz hai
yaa.N imtiaaz-e-naakis-o-qaamil nahii.n rahaaa

[ba-ruu = in front; shash = six; jihat = direction]
[imtiaz = distinction, naakis = incomplete, qaamil = complete]

vaa kar diye hai.n shauq ne band-e-naqaab-e-husn
Gair az nigaah ab ko_ii haa_il nahii.n rahaa

[vaa = open; Gair az = other than; haa_il = obstacle]

go mai.n rahaa rahiin-e-sitam haaye rozagaar
lekin tere Khayaal se Gaafil nahii.n rahaa

[rahiin-e-sitam = burdened; Gaafil = careless]



dil se havaa-e-kisht-e-vafaa miT ke vaa.N
haasil sivaaye hasrat-e-haasil nahii.n rahaa

bedaad-e-ishq se nahii.n Darata magar 'Asad'
jis dil pe naaz thaa mujhe vo dil nahii.n rahaa

[bedaad = injustice]
   
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zikr us parivash ka

zikr us pariivash kaa, aur phiir bayaa.N apanaa
ban gayaa raqiib aaKhiir thaa jo raazadaa.N apanaa

[pariivash=angel/beauty/fairy, raqiib=enemy, raazadaa.N=friend]

mai vo kyo.N bahut piite bazm-e-Gair me.n yaarab
aaj hii huaa ma.nzuur un ko imtihaa.N apanaa

ma.nzar ik bula.ndii par aur ham banaa sakate
arsh se idhar hotaa kaash ke makaa.N apanaa

[arsh=heaven]

de vo jis qadar zillat ham ha.Nsii me.n Tale.nge
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surmaa-e-muft-e-nazar huu.N merii qiimat ye hai
ke rahe chashm-e-Kharidaar pe ehasaa.N meraa

ruKhsat-e-naalaa mujhe de ke mabaadaa zaalim
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surmaa e muft e nazar

surmaa-e-muft-e-nazar huu.N merii qiimat ye hai
ke rahe chashm-e-Kharidaar pe ehasaa.N meraa

ruKhsat-e-naalaa mujhe de ke mabaadaa zaalim
tere chehare se ho zaahir Gam-e-pinhaa.N meraa

waaaaahhhhhhhhhh kya baat kahi hai shaayar ne mazaa aa gaya.... bas ek lafze-mabaadaa pe atak gaya hoon uffaq saab...

Haalkai madaawa suna tha pehle kabhi, lekin mabaadaa se meri mulaaqat pehli hai.. gar roshni daalen to merhrbaani hogii... shukriyaa

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waaaaahhhhhhhhhh kya baat kahi hai shaayar ne mazaa aa gaya.... bas ek lafze-mabaadaa pe atak gaya hoon uffaq saab...

Haalkai madaawa suna tha pehle kabhi, lekin mabaadaa se meri mulaaqat pehli hai.. gar roshni daalen to merhrbaani hogii... shukriyaa

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shaad sahib aapko dekhkar bahut khushi huyi......................mabaada ke matlab.hai...............kahi aisaa na ho.............ghalib sahab is ashaar men kahate hai ki mujhe ro lene do kahi aisaa na ho ki mera dard jo chippa rah gayaa hai wo tumhaare cehare se dikhane lage.................
   
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shaad sahib aapko dekhkar bahut khushi huyi......................mabaada ke matlab.hai...............kahi aisaa na ho.............ghalib sahab is ashaar men kahate hai ki mujhe ro lene do kahi aisaa na ho ki mera dard jo chippa rah gayaa hai wo tumhaare cehare se dikhane lage.................

Behad shukrguzaaar hoon Uffaq saahab jo aapne apne keemti waqt ko mujh jaise kam ilm pe zaaya karna gawaara samjhaa... asal me lafz mera dekha hua nahi thaa, bas isiliye bechainn ho utha tha.. aur jo aapne abb rubaru karaaya hai to yaqeen maaniye sher ki khubsurti aur nikhar gai hai meri nazar mein... bahot bahot shukriyaa

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عشرتِ قطرہ ہے دریا میں فنا ہو جانا
درد کا حد سے گزرنا ہے دوا ہو جانا

Ishrat e qat^rah hay daryaa mai fanaa ho jaanaa
Dard kaa Had se Guzarna hay dawa ho jaanaa
تجھ سے، قسمت میں مری، صورتِ قفلِ ابجد
تھا لکھا بات کے بنتے ہی جدا ہو جانا
Tujh se Qismat mai mari Soorat e Quful e abjad
Thaa likhaa baat ke banty hi judaa hoo jaanaa
دل ہوا کشمکشِ چارۂ زحمت میں تمام
مِٹ گیا گھِسنے میں اُس عُقدے کا وا ہو جانا
Dil huwaa kashmakash e chaara e zeHmat mai tamaam
miT gayaa Ghisney mai us u’qday ka waa ho jaanaa
اب جفا سے بھی ہیں محروم ہم اللہ اللہ
اس قدر دشمنِ اربابِ وفا ہو جانا

ab jafaa se bhi haiN meHroom hum Allah Allah
is Qadar dushman e arbaab e wafa ho jaanaa
ضعف سے گریہ مبدّل بہ دمِ سرد ہوا
باور آیا ہمیں پانی کا ہوا ہو جانا

Zaaf se garyah mubaddil bah dam e sard hawaa
Bawar aaya hamieN paani ka hawaa ho jaana
دِل سے مِٹنا تری انگشتِ حنائی کا خیال
ہو گیا گوشت سے ناخن کا جُدا ہو جانا

Dil se miTnaa taree angisht e Hinaaii ka Khayaal
Ho gayaa gosht se nakhun ka judaa ho jaanaa
ہے مجھے ابرِ بہاری کا برس کر کھُلنا
روتے روتے غمِ فُرقت میں فنا ہو جانا

Hai mujhy abr e baharee ka baras kar khulna
Roty roty gham e furqat miN fana ho jaanaa
گر نہیں نکہتِ گل کو ترے کوچے کی ہوس
کیوں ہے گردِ رہِ جَولانِ صبا ہو جانا

Gar nahieN nikhat e gul ko tery koochy kee hawas
kiyoN hai gird e reh e joolaan e Sabaa ho jaanaa
تاکہ تجھ پر کھُلے اعجازِ ہواۓ صَیقل
دیکھ برسات میں سبز آئنے کا ہو جانا
Takeh tujh par khuley ejaaz e hawa e Saiqal
Dekh barsaat mai sabz aainey ka ho jaanaa
بخشے ہے جلوۂ گُل، ذوقِ تماشا غالبؔ
چشم کو چاہۓ ہر رنگ میں وا ہو جانا

Bakhsy hai jalwa e gul zoq e tamasha Ghalib
Chashm ko chahiye har raNg mai waa ho jaana



I’shrat = aish , araam , sakon
Qoful = taala , lock
Abjad = Haroof ki gintee , ya haroof ka adaad o shumar ,
Kashmakash = koshish , uljhan
Chaara = way , raastaa
U’qday = girah , gaanTh , knot
Waa = khulna
Za’aaf = kamzor, enervation ,
Mubaddil = badalny walaa ,
Bawar = bharosa , aitmaad
Anghisht = ungli , finger
Hinaii = mehndi
Furqat judaaii
Nikhat = khushbu
Jolaan = doRny waala , tez raftaar
Ejaz = jaado , karishma
saiQal = chamakdaar , saaf suthra
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