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4th February 2007, 03:11 PM
Assalam walekum,
kaise hai aap sab? Ek baar phir hum apni nayi nazm aap sabke samne pesh kar rahe hain,umid karte hain,aap logo ko pasand aayegi, or agar aap logo ko hamari nazm main,koi bhi galti nazar aaye to,baraye_meherbani hamein zarur bataiyega. apna khayal rakhiye. ALLAH HAFIZ ************************************** `v´ ( `·.¸ `·.¸ ) ¸.·´ Ahista _ Ahista( `·.¸ `·.¸ ) ¸.· )´ (.·´ Yeh Rahe Mushkil hai,TU himaat kar,Ahista _ Ahista. sambhal kar rakhna,ek_ek kadam tu,ahista _ ahista na Rona Dil JO tute,Dard to hoga,Ahista _ Ahista. utar Bhi jayega saara yeh gham,ahista ahista guzarta waqt tere dil ko,halka karke rakh dega sabhi mit jayenge,ranj_wa_alam,ahista ahista halakat khez tufaan main,har ek simt dekh laashein. hue patthar dilon ke aankh namm,ahista _ ahista. jo zillat kaum per taari hai,isko dekh kar yarab, Ghuta sine main,lamha bhar ko damm,Ahista _ Ahista. dhari reh jayegi sab Parsayi aye SONY teri, khulega jab tera sara bharam,Ahista _ Ahista. **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.· Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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4th February 2007, 05:40 PM
hi fairy ji
aapko hamara salam walekum salam fairy ji malum nahi aapko padhna itna achchha kyu lagta hai sayad aapki rachna mein jo sabdo ka aap sahara leti hai wo hamein bahut hi achchhe lagte hai aap is baar ek alag hi andaz mein nazar aa rahe hai, par mein aapke is rachna ka javab har baar ki tarah shayri se hi dena pasand karuga gaur ki jiyega Yeh Rahe Mushkil hai,TU himaat kar,Ahista _ Ahista. sambhal kar rakhna,ek_ek kadam tu,ahista _ ahista Samne ho manzil to raste na modna, Jo man mien ho wo khwab na todna, Har kadam par milengi kamyaabi tumhe, Bas sitare chhune ke liye kabhi zameen na chhodna. na Rona Dil JO tute,Dard to hoga,Ahista _ Ahista. utar Bhi jayega saara yeh gham,ahista ahista Khali shishe bhi nishan rakhte hai. Tute dil bhi armaan rakhte hai, Jo khamoshi se gujar jaye, Wo samandar bhi dil me tufaan rakhte hai. guzarta waqt tere dil ko,halka karke rakh dega sabhi mit jayenge,ranj_wa_alam,ahista ahista Waqt guzarta raha par sanse thami thi, Muskura rahe the hum par aankho me nami thi, Saath hamare ye jahan tha saara, Par na jaane kyu tumhari kami thi. halakat khez tufaan main,har ek simt dekh laashein. hue patthar dilon ke aankh namm,ahista _ ahista. Zindgi ke tufan me sahil he teri dosti, Dil ke armano me manzil he teri dosti, Jindagi ban jayegi jannat agar, Maut tak sath rahegi teri dosti. jo zillat kaum per taari hai,isko dekh kar yarab, Ghuta sine main,lamha bhar ko damm,Ahista _ Ahista. ye baat samaj mein nahi aayi please samjaiyega dhari reh jayegi sab Parsayi aye SONY teri, khulega jab tera sara bharam,Ahista _ Ahista. Yadon ki dhun me aapki parchhai si lagti hai, Kaanon me bajti shehnai si lagti hai, Aap karib ho to apnapan hai, Warna seene me sanse bhi parai si lagti hai. aapke javab ka hamien intezaar rahega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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4th February 2007, 06:41 PM
sony ji adaab aur namksaar
aaj mujhe bahot khushi ho rahi hai aapki yeH peshkas ko paRh ke kyuNki aapki yeH peshkas aapki sabhi peshkas meiN se mujhe behtrin si lagi sach me ash'aar ko aapne itni khoobsoorti ke sath jo lafzoN meiN piroye haiN aapko maiN iske liye tah-e-dil se mubarakbad deta huuN aapki kosisH wakehi me rang laayenGi ..aapme wo kabiliyaT hai jo aap har lafzoN ko ek sath baandh deti ho aapko paRh ke mujhe bahot kuch siKhne ko bhi milta hai haaN maiN sach keh raha huuN aur yeH baat aap bhi maante ho kyuNki maiN mayank ji ki ek baat hamesa dhyan meiN rakhta huN jo wo hamesa kehte hai ki hum sab ko yahaaN ek dusre se kuch na kuch sikhne ko milta hai aur aapne bahot hi umda kosisH ki hai is baar dil khus ho gaya poori peshkas kabile tariff hai dil se nikli daad ko kubul kareN allah aapko hamesa khus rakheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT allah hafiz aapka dost dhaval |
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HI Merul ji, Salam, kaise hain aap? aapne hamari nazm itni pasand ki,uske liye dilse apka shukriya ada karti hun, hum to bas aaj ki sachai likhne ki koshish karte hain,,, or jaisa humne hamesha kaha hai,,,ki hamari koshish tab kamiyab hoti hai,jab aap jaise dost use padhte hain,or sarahte bhi hain, aapki tamam shayri bohot achhi thi,aur apke reply karne ka andaz bhi kafi achha hai,, shukriya itni pyari shayri ke saath sarahne k liye, --------------------------------------------------------- aapne humse ek ashar ka matlab puchaa tha,,,,,,,,,,,, jo zillat kaum per taari hai,isko dekh kar yarab, Ghuta sine main,lamha bhar ko damm,Ahista _ Ahista. TASHRIh ( ASHAR KA MATLAB ) dar asal aaj kal hamara mahol din_ba_din kharab hota ja raha hai,thode se halat achhe hote hi,phir se jhagde,atang,garz har jagah maar_pit,gussa,nafrat,...... jaise k bas ab yehi hamari zindagi ban gayI HAIN. or jab hum apne mahol main ,yeh sari cheezon ko panapte dekhte hain,hota dekhte hain..to andar hi andar damm ghut ta hai,matlab aisa lagta hain,ki andar se koi hame jakde hue hain,, ek pal k liye hamare andar ghutan si peda ho jati hai,bas lagta hai, aise jine se mar jana behtar hain... ----------------------------------------------------- umeed karti hun,humne apko apne is ashar ka matlab samjha diya hai,, kuch aur puchna hai,to aap be jhijhak puch sakte hai.. ek baar phir,dilse apka shukriya ada karti hun, apna khayal rakhiye ALLAH HAFIZ **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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4th February 2007, 11:38 PM
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Dhaval ji adaab aur namksaar.. hum apse kya kahe. aap hamesha hi hamari hosla afzai karte hain,or yeh apki sabse achhi baat hain, apne kaha yeh hamari sabse achhi peshkash hain,, bata nahi sakti kitni khushi hui yeh baat jaan kar, kyunki humne ise bohot mehnat k baad likha tha,aur apki yeh baat sunkar,dil ko sukun mila,,k chaliye MEHNAT KA FAL mil gaya  apne kaha ki,ap humse kuch sikhte hain,magar sach kahun,,, to maine apko aur mayank ji ko padhkar kafi kuch sikha hai,,, maine apki takriban sari post padhi hai,,aur apse sikhne ki koshish ki hai, bas ap isi tarah hamein sarahte rahiye. ALLAH Apko bhi tarakki de.AAMIN khush rehna. apna khayal rakhiye ALLAH HAFIZ **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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6th February 2007, 01:28 PM
hi fairy ji
sukhriya mujhe asar ka matlab samjane ke liye aapne asar ka matlab kuch is tarah se hamare samne rakh diya ki koi bhi ise padh kar samaj sakta hai , maaf karna is post pe kai din baad aaya hu to sayad aapko javab dene mein thodi der ho gayi par aaj aapki hi rachna ne aankho ko hi nahi par dil ko bhi chhua hai, milte raiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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14th February 2007, 05:44 PM
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Aap ki nazm to buhut bahut achee lagi guzarta waqt tere dil ko,halka karke rakh dega sabhi mit jayenge, ranj_wa_alam, ahista ahista bahut sahi kaha hai ki waqt hi sabse achaa marham hai mujhe behat pasand aai. aap isee tarah likhe rahe mujhe intezaar rahega. intezaar ke saath aap ka dost SHAAN ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Waqt ki aanch me pather bhi pigal jaate hain, Gaao gahre bhi hon jitne wo bhar jaate hain, Shaan |
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14th February 2007, 06:11 PM
Asslamualikum ......
kiya haal hai aap ke ???? aaj aapne waqi sochne per majboor kardiya hai, well ziyada kuch nahi kahonga aap ko... Merulji aur Dhavalji bahut khoob likha hai aap ki tareef me.. isliye bahut bahut mubarak ho aap ko ke aapne itna khobsurat kalaam pesh kiya. Ek PaTThar ki bhi taQdeer saNwaR sAkti hai, SharT yE hAi kE SaleKe sE TaRaShA JaYe...!!!!  --------------------------- |
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salam shaan ji, kaise hain aap? aapka bohot_bohot shukriya jo aapne hamein itna sarahYa,, bas aap logo ka saaath hi hamein achha likhne main madad karta hain, hamein aise hi sarahiye, hum wada karte hain,ki age bhi INSHA ALLAH achha likhne ki koshish karenge. APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE ALLAH HAFIZ **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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WALEKUM ASSALAM IRFAN JI, ji hum bilkul thik hain aap kahiye aap kaise hain? dilse aapka shukriya ada karna chahungi,,, aapne kayi dino baad hamari post padhi hain,,aur yakin maniye aa[pka reply dekh kar bohot khushi hui, bas aise hi hamein padhte rahiye,, aur koi bhi galti lage,to zarur batayiyega, apna khayal rakhiye Allah hafiz **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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21st November 2007, 10:42 AM
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Aaj kuch pichli post dekhraha tha to aapki ek post par nazar padhi aur yakeen maniye dil baag baag ho gaya is gazal ko padh ke bahut hi umda ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne ese hi likhti rahiye dili daad kubool ho Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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21st November 2007, 11:01 AM
Dear sony........aapki gazal bahut acchi lagi...aaj tak aapko jitna bhi pada hai yeh sabse behtar laga mujhe....har sher dil ko sakoon de gaya...yu hi likhtey rahiye...kush rahiye...
duao.n ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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1st December 2007, 06:20 PM
[quote=Mohammad Kashif;258642]Assalam-O-Alaykum..................Sony ji kesi hai.n aap ?
Aaj kuch pichli post dekhraha tha to aapki ek post par nazar padhi aur yakeen maniye dil baag baag ho gaya is gazal ko padh ke bahut hi umda ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne ese hi likhti rahiye dili daad kubool ho[/quote Walekum assalam kashif ji, hum thik hain, aap kaise hain? aapne apna kimti waqt nikal kar,,hamari purani post ko padha, saath hi hamari itni hosla afzai ki, sach bohot khushi mayassar hui aap jese dosto ka sath agar isi tarah milta raha,, to insha allah hum isse b behtar koshishe pesh karege,AAMIN SUMM AAMIN SHUKRIYA BOHOT BOHOT SHUKRIYA apna khayal rakhiye, khush rahiye, ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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kaise hain aap? aapka tahe dilse shukriya ada karte hain, k aapko hamari ghazal is hadd tak pasand aayi, aapki pasandigi k liye bohot bohot shukriya, bas apna saath yuhi banaye rakhiyega, khush rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye, ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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uffff ye shayri itni dair se kion guzri nigahon se ... soni ji poori ghazal itni gehraye liye howe hai aur itne khubsurat andaz main likhi hai aapne ke alfaz nahi mere pas tareef ke liye is mukammal aur khoobsurat shayri pe daad qubool kijiye soni ji yunhi likhti rahiye khush rahiye humesha ameen apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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Aadab mani ji, kaise hain aap? aap hamari bazm me aaye.kya yeh kisi khushi se kaam hain, aap aaye ,,yehi hamare liye bohot hain, kehte hain na,k apno ka saath hamesha milta hain,,chahe der sde sahi, aapne hamari koshish ko pasand kiya,hamari hosla afzai ki, sach dilse apke shukra guzar hain, aap b hamesha khush rahe, apna khayal rakhiye, ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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