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3rd February 2007, 04:17 PM
kya karoon kuch samjh nahi ata
dil unke bina kahin reh nahi pata unka khayal hi hardam rehta hai din basar tanha ho nahi pata raaton ko neend ati nahi hai dil se unki yaad jaati nahi hai aankon mein sirf unka chehra rehta hai har ghari bas unka intezar rehta hai nahi mil sakte hum kabhi yeh mujhe yakeen hai kyunki zameen aur aasaman kabhi milte nahi hai aag aur pani ki kabhi dosti nahi rahi hai chand aur suraj bhi sath rehte nahi ek dor ek do chor hain hum chah ke bhi mil nahi sakte mil bhi jayein ham gar kabhi ek gaanth rishte mein lazmi hai Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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3rd February 2007, 08:48 PM
Nidhi jee:
Shaayad pahli baar aap ko paRhne ka mujeh mauqa mila hai.. yuuN to mujhe aazaad nazm kii zeyaadah samjh nahiiN hai aur maiN aazaad nazm kam paRhta huuN. paR aap kii yeh kavita achchhi hii nahiiN bohat achchhii lagi... KhaayloN ko aap ne khuubi se lafzoN meiN piroya hai ess tarh kii dil par asar hota hai..  likhati raheN yuuN hii.. aur ham... ham.,. bas paRhte raheNge...Mayank |
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3rd February 2007, 09:29 PM
namskaar nidhi ji
bahot dino bad aapki koi rachna paRhne ko mili hum sab ko aapki is rachna ko paRh ke achha laga aapne ehsaasoN ko khoobsoorti se apni is rachna meiN piroye haiN aur yeH lines bahot pasaNd aayi aankon mein sirf unka chehra rehta hai har ghari bas unka intezar rehta hai aapse bas yehi kahunGa ki yuhiN likhte raheN khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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4th February 2007, 05:49 PM
hi nidhi
aaapko mein aaj pehli baar padh raha hu, mein is site pe to bade lambe arse se hu magar aaj tak mein ishq shayri mein hi gaya tha magar aaj mein is dard-e-shayri mein aaya hu to pata chala to ismein aap jaise dost bhi hai jo ese alfaaz likhte hai jo dil ko rone pe majbur kar dete hai, mujhe ab aisa lagta hai ki mujhe is dard ki shayri ke liye alag se time nikalna hoga ese hi sath dete rehna aapne bahut hi khub likha hai ese hi likhte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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5th February 2007, 05:08 PM
Yakinan Aap Khushkismat Hai
Waheed Sabko Daad Nahi Deta Apko Padha , Apke Dard Se Ragbat Ho Gayi. Ek Sher Aapke Nazr Wo Cchalakana ,bahakana Gaya Khatm Sara Jamana Hua Ab To Aankho Ka Ye Haal Hai,khwab Dekhe Jamana Hua Ab Dilo Me Wo Umange Kaha, Paro Me Wo Parwaz Kaha Jis Parinde Pe Naaz Tha Wo Parinda Purana Hua, Maidan Me The Kitne Manchale,tir Charo Taraf Se Chale Mera Dil Hi Nishane Pe Tha Mera Dil Hi Nishana Hua. ( Ho Sake To Meri Gazal Padh Lena.......wahid Rahi) |
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Aadab Arze -
6th February 2007, 02:31 PM
Suna hai pyar ke kisse bade ajib hote haiKushi ke badle gam naseeb hote hainMere dost mohobbat na karna kabhiPyar karne wale bade badnaseeb hote hain
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6th February 2007, 04:38 PM
nidhi ji
bas ye kahna chahti hun ki . koi ho na ho par hamein jeena padega haske ya ro ke. koi chala gya hamari jindagi se door bahut door par hamari saanse wohi hai ya kaho aur jayada saanse chalti si lagti hai. har taraf woh hi dikhega lekin mera yakeen mano ek din ye yaaden khatam to nahi kam jaror ho jayegi tumhe itna nahi pareshan karengi jitna aaj kar rahi hai. dard ko jitna karib se dekho na dard ko utna hi kam hote dekhoge. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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18th February 2007, 05:40 PM
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Pehle to thankyou bcoz i did not not know the piece i wrote is known as Azad Nazm. Main ek shayra nahi hoon bus dil mein jo ata hai woh akhsoron mein dhal leti hoon. And han ate rahiyega........ Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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18th February 2007, 05:41 PM
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Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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18th February 2007, 05:43 PM
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Merul ab to pehli bar nahi padh rahe ho...apne meri 3 rachnayein padhi hain.......well apki daad to pehle se mil gayi hai hamein.......aur han shayri kii har thread equally achi hai.........par asha karti hoon ki aap ka kabhi bhi dard se nata na ho.... Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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18th February 2007, 05:49 PM
Hi wahid,
kisi ke daad dene se hi kisi ki rachna ki khubsurti nahi pata chalti..har nazm apne aap mein achi hain...... mere alfaz mein agar shayri ki paribhasha puchi jaye to main kahungi ki shayri woh zariya hai jis se hum apne zajbaton ko khayalon ko bayan karte hain aur main sajhti hoon ki kisi ke bhi khayalon ko zajbaton ko kisi ki bhi daad nahi zaroorat nahi woh us insaan ke khayal hain aur hamein haq nahi yeh kehna ki woh ache nahi hain........ aha laga ki apko meri yeh racha pasand ayi aur aap yunhi ate rahiega....kaha suna maaf kijiega. Apka sher bahut acha tha.shukriya Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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18th February 2007, 05:51 PM
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bilkul sahi farmaya hai apne,,...........acha laga aap yahan aye...... Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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18th February 2007, 06:00 PM
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jina padega unke bagair yeh to hamne socha na tha gum de jayenge woh hamein yeh to hamne manga na tha kyun chala gaya woh zindagi se meri yeh to hamne chaha na tha jine mana tha hamne apna woh hamein begana kar gaye zamane ke liye unhe hamne choda tha woh zamane ke liye hamein chod gaye Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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19th February 2007, 01:41 PM
sukhriya nidhi
ki aap hamari khushi ke liye khuda se dua karte hai sukhriya again reply deke hamara hausla afzzai karne ka aate rahiyega hamari mehfil mei aaapka dosst Merul Quote:
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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19th February 2007, 09:45 PM
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Humne aapko pahle baar parha hai, aap ne apne ahsaas ko bahut kubsurati ki saath pesh kiya hai mujhe bahut hi achaa lagi aapki post. mujhe aage bhi aapki post ka intezaar rahega. aap yu hi likhte rahe. Derd mila ruh me raahen nahi milti, Sochu mai baar-baar per aahen nahi milti. Bekhudi me aaker likh diya del pe tune uska naam, kuch to hain ankhon me per nigahen nahi milti. khush raye or muskurate rahe. SHAAN |
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25th February 2007, 06:32 PM
Shukriya tariq......acha laga ki apko yeh rachna pasand ayi.jald hi main apni nayi rachna ke sath hazir houngi
Take Care Regards Nidhi Quote:
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26th February 2007, 12:54 AM
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Dear Nidhi tumhaari ye aazaad nazm bhi kaabil-e-taarif hai , mai jaise ise aage aage padhata gaya is ki line dil par gahraa sar karti gayi, sahi mai bahut asardaar nazm likhi hai, dil ko chhoo jaane vaali regards manu |
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26th February 2007, 10:10 PM
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Hi manu, how r u wll its gr8 to see you on this post.well thankyou very much for taking out time and responding to this nazm thankyou take care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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26th February 2007, 11:06 PM
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hello nidhi ji appne bhot khub likha hai jo bhi apdhe gha rode gha pyar chiz hi asi hai ki ik khushi se kar hazaro gum de jata hai hume appki har lavjh likha hoon bhot pasand aya humne appko pehli var padha hai juhi likhte rehna kamal Khamooshi Say Ek Dard Ko Sehna Acha Lagta Hay Us Ka Milna Na Milna Qismat Ki Baat Hay Pal Pal Us Ki Yaad May Roona Acha Lagta Hay Us Key Bina Sari Khushyaan Aajab lagti Hain Roo Roo Kar Us Ki Yaad May Soona Acha Lagta Hay jann raj
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26th February 2007, 11:08 PM
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appne bhot khub likha hai appne bilkul sahi likha hai pyar hota aisa hai ki ek khushi se kar hazaro gum de jata hai aur gum hamare jine ka sahara ban jyata hai appko humne pehli var padha hai sach me appka har lavjh likha houa dil ko shu ghea juhi likhte rehna khush rehna kamal Khamooshi Say Ek Dard Ko Sehna Acha Lagta Hay Us Ka Milna Na Milna Qismat Ki Baat Hay Pal Pal Us Ki Yaad May Roona Acha Lagta Hay Us Key Bina Sari Khushyaan Aajab lagti Hain Roo Roo Kar Us Ki Yaad May Soona Acha Lagta Hay jann raj
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28th February 2007, 09:59 PM
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Hi Kamal thankyou vetru much......... take care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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28th February 2007, 10:14 PM
too gud nidhi
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3rd March 2007, 01:18 PM
Thankyou saurabh
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6th March 2007, 03:21 PM
Hello Nidhiji....
kaisi hai aap ?? ummed hai khair se hongi... well Nidhiji... kiya likhu aap ki tareef me samjh me nahi aarha hai.. kyu ke har ek ne aap ki khoob tareef ki hai aur unke tareef me aapne bhi unka shukriya ada kiya hai. but khass kar aap ne jo sakhiji ko shayarana andaz me reply dekar apne dil ki baat wazeh kardi ... wo bahut pasand aayi mujhe...aise hi aap likhte rahe aur hamaribhi islaah kare.. Shukriya Ek PaTThar ki bhi taQdeer saNwaR sAkti hai, SharT yE hAi kE SaleKe sE TaRaShA JaYe...!!!!  --------------------------- |
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21st April 2007, 05:28 PM
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Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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