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26th July 2014, 04:13 PM
hasratoN ko kab qaraar aataa silaa* paane ke baad
shamma jaltee hi raha kartee hai parwaane ke baad
wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa jabeeN* wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN* hote mere jaane ke baad
jaaN nisaaree ki mohabbat meiN n de meree misaal
ishq koyee kyooN karega mere afsaane ke baad
hum n gar is ko kataate to kahaaN rakhte ise
kya thikaana bhi raha sar ka tere shaane* ke baad
kis tarah mushtaaq*-e-nairaNg*-e-wafa hooN har dafaa
naam par ahd-e-wafa ke maiN daghaa khaane ke baad
is se achchha tha guzartee shaam shaam-e-hijr si
shab ko hum par kya naheeN guzree tere jaane ke baad
chhorh kar mujh ko sar-e-reh yaar mere chal diye
koyee mayykhaane ke pehle koyee mayykhaane ke baad
sirf kar paimaaish*-e-baadaa* hi is se rind tu
wus'at*-e-gham naap mat ek ek paimaane ke baad
jaam tu sab ko hi degee dekhna saaqee hai bas
kis ko tu phusla ke degee kis ko tarsaane ke baad
imtehaaN gar aur hoN to un ka bhi de do pataa
aasraa koyee to ho had se guzar jaane ke baad
hum ne socha tha ke ye hungaama-e-mehfil hai par
kam n ye shorish* huwee khalwat* meiN bhi aane ke baad
kaash ye hota sitamgar ko kiya hota muaaf
bardh gaya dard aur hum-dardoN ke samjhaane ke baad
deed meiN yaksaaN* gham-e-jaanaaN gham-e-dauraaN meree
farq kya rehta gham-e-insaaN ko apnaane ke baad
"zarraa" is aalam meiN hai hastee teree *maanind*-e-abr*
ik siyah* dhabbaa falak par hai baras jaane ke baad
- zarraa
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silaa = result
siyah = black
tabindaa =shining
jabeeN = forehead
ayaaN = evident
shaane = shoulder
mustaaq = eager
nairaNg = enchantment
paimaaish = measurement
baadaa = wine
wus'at = extent
shorish = disturbance
khalwat =privacy
yaksaaN = identical
maanind = like
abr = cloud
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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26th July 2014, 07:40 PM
aadaab !!!
ajj ki meHfil appke naam , beHad umda peshkash hai appki , dil se daad qabool fermaaien
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26th July 2014, 09:02 PM
hasratoN ko kab qaraar aataa silaa* paane ke baad
shamma jaltee hi raha kartee hai parwaane ke baad
Loot liyaa mahfil ko yaaraan aapka matlaa mubaarak......
wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa jabeeN* wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN* hote mere jaane ke baad
Kamaal kaa sher hai mere yaar bas kamaal.............
jaaN nisaaree ki mohabbat meiN n de meree misaal
ishq koyee kyooN karega mere afsaane ke baad
waaahhhhhhhhhhhhh............ behad asardaaar sher hai bhai kyaa kahne
hum n gar is ko kataate to kahaaN rakhte ise
kya thikaana bhi raha sar ka tere shaane* ke baad
ye sher nahii ek mojezaa hai mere bhai.............
kis tarah mushtaaq*-e-nairaNg*-e-wafa hooN har dafaa
naam par ahd-e-wafa ke maiN daghaa khaane ke baad
khoob sher hai waahhhh................
is se achchha tha guzartee shaam shaam-e-hijr si
shab ko hum par kya naheeN guzree tere jaane ke baad
chhorh kar mujh ko sar-e-reh yaar mere chal diye
koyee mayykhaane ke pehle koyee mayykhaane ke baad
kyaa kahon kyaa na kahoon mujhko samajh aata nahii,
aapke aashaar zindaa kar de mar jaane ke baad.....
sirf kar paimaaish*-e-baadaa* hi is se rind tu
wus'at*-e-gham naap mat ek ek paimaane ke baad
jaam tu sab ko hi degee dekhna saaqee hai bas
kis ko tu phusla ke degee kis ko tarsaane ke baad
aap yaqeen na maanenge shaayad magar ek sawaal mere zahen me goonj raha tha pichle kuch dino se, aur maine ufaq saahab se iska zikr bhii kiyaa thaa ke kahiin agar saaqi ke muannass ki koii misaal mil jaatii .... bahot ulajhne ke baad bhii hame koii suurat nazar nahii ati thii.... magar aapne ye sher pesh kar ke merii saarii takleefen door kar si bhai.... bahot bahot shukriyaa jo aapne ye sher kah diyaa bhai...
aur waaahhhh kyaa khoob likhaa hai
imtehaaN gar aur hoN to un ka bhi de do pataa
aasraa koyee to ho had se guzar jaane ke baad
hum ne socha tha ke ye hungaama-e-mehfil hai par
kam n ye shorish* huwee khalwat* meiN bhi aane ke baad
lafz nahii mil rahe mujhe kaise tareef kar doon main in aashar ki mere bhaii....
kaisee kaisee manzarkashii pesh karte hain aap.... wo ap[ne ap me kamaal hai...
kaash ye hota sitamgar ko kiya hota muaaf
bardh gaya dard aur hum-dardoN ke samjhaane ke baad
deed meiN yaksaaN* gham-e-jaanaaN gham-e-dauraaN meree
farq kya rehta gham-e-insaaN ko apnaane ke baad
"zarraa" is aalam meiN hai hastee teree *maanind*-e-abr*
ik siyah* dhabbaa falak par hai baras jaane ke baad
ye kalaam shaayd aapka mere dil tak utar gayaa hai....na jaane kitnii baar padh gayaa ise, aur tab jaakar badee himmat karke khud ko jawaab dene ko taiyaar kiyaa hai maine....... aapke kalam se lafz nahii motii nikalte hain bhai.... ho zore kalam aur ur aur zyaada.......
- zarraa
Shaad...
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27th July 2014, 12:00 PM
bohat khub zarraa ji bohat khub lajawab
LOVEU SAINI
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27th July 2014, 12:09 PM
"zarraa" is aalam meiN hai hastee teree *maanind*-e-abr*
ik siyah* dhabbaa falak par hai baras jaane ke baad
Wahhh wahhhh Zarraa saheb...
Kamal ka kamal hai bas.. awesome creation!
MaQta bohat ziada pasand aaya...
Reps added.
Aise hi mehfil ki rounaq bhad'ha k rakhiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,,
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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27th July 2014, 08:31 PM
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aadaab !!!
ajj ki meHfil appke naam , beHad umda peshkash hai appki , dil se daad qabool fermaaien
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aadaab Mujib sahab
ji meherbaanee aap ki ... tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon aap ka ...
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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28th July 2014, 08:23 PM
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Originally Posted by zarraa
hasratoN ko kab qaraar aataa silaa* paane ke baad
shamma jaltee hi raha kartee hai parwaane ke baad
wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa jabeeN* wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN* hote mere jaane ke baad
jaaN nisaaree ki mohabbat meiN n de meree misaal
ishq koyee kyooN karega mere afsaane ke baad
hum n gar is ko kataate to kahaaN rakhte ise
kya thikaana bhi raha sar ka tere shaane* ke baad
kis tarah mushtaaq*-e-nairaNg*-e-wafa hooN har dafaa
naam par ahd-e-wafa ke maiN daghaa khaane ke baad
is se achchha tha guzartee shaam shaam-e-hijr si
shab ko hum par kya naheeN guzree tere jaane ke baad
chhorh kar mujh ko sar-e-reh yaar mere chal diye
koyee mayykhaane ke pehle koyee mayykhaane ke baad
sirf kar paimaaish*-e-baadaa* hi is se rind tu
wus'at*-e-gham naap mat ek ek paimaane ke baad
jaam tu sab ko hi degee dekhna saaqee hai bas
kis ko tu phusla ke degee kis ko tarsaane ke baad
imtehaaN gar aur hoN to un ka bhi de do pataa
aasraa koyee to ho had se guzar jaane ke baad
hum ne socha tha ke ye hungaama-e-mehfil hai par
kam n ye shorish* huwee khalwat* meiN bhi aane ke baad
kaash ye hota sitamgar ko kiya hota muaaf
bardh gaya dard aur hum-dardoN ke samjhaane ke baad
deed meiN yaksaaN* gham-e-jaanaaN gham-e-dauraaN meree
farq kya rehta gham-e-insaaN ko apnaane ke baad
"zarraa" is aalam meiN hai hastee teree *maanind*-e-abr*
ik siyah* dhabbaa falak par hai baras jaane ke baad
- zarraa
*
silaa = result
siyah = black
tabindaa =shining
jabeeN = forehead
ayaaN = evident
shaane = shoulder
mustaaq = eager
nairaNg = enchantment
paimaaish = measurement
baadaa = wine
wus'at = extent
shorish = disturbance
khalwat =privacy
yaksaaN = identical
maanind = like
abr = cloud
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wah zarraa bhai bahut khoob har sher lajwaab........radhe radhe
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29th July 2014, 07:55 PM
Bhai....tum is daur Ke shaair nahi ho......tumhari shaairi padkar mujhe Urdu shaairi Ka classical era yaad aataa hai.......aur kyaa maqta likha hai ......jiyo
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29th July 2014, 10:39 PM
Shaad ... mere bhai mere yaar .... kaise qarz utaaroon in mohabbaton ka ... lekin aap ke is behisaab pyaar aur shafqat ka qarzdaar rehne mein hi dil ko sukoon milta hai .... aap ke dil mein hi is qadar rehem aur ikhlaas bhara hai ki naacheez ki is koshish ko us mein jagah mil gayi hai .... aur jise aap ke dil mein jagah mil jaaye wo maamooli hote hue bhi khaas ho jaati hai ... aap ki hausla afzaayee aur qadradaanee ki panaah mein koshish aur justajoo jaaree rakhne ki himmat milti hai ... aap ko dil ki gehraaiyon se shukriya aur dil ki sabhi duaein aap ko .... zarraa
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
hasratoN ko kab qaraar aataa silaa* paane ke baad
shamma jaltee hi raha kartee hai parwaane ke baad
Loot liyaa mahfil ko yaaraan aapka matlaa mubaarak......
wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa jabeeN* wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN* hote mere jaane ke baad
Kamaal kaa sher hai mere yaar bas kamaal.............
jaaN nisaaree ki mohabbat meiN n de meree misaal
ishq koyee kyooN karega mere afsaane ke baad
waaahhhhhhhhhhhhh............ behad asardaaar sher hai bhai kyaa kahne
hum n gar is ko kataate to kahaaN rakhte ise
kya thikaana bhi raha sar ka tere shaane* ke baad
ye sher nahii ek mojezaa hai mere bhai.............
kis tarah mushtaaq*-e-nairaNg*-e-wafa hooN har dafaa
naam par ahd-e-wafa ke maiN daghaa khaane ke baad
khoob sher hai waahhhh................
is se achchha tha guzartee shaam shaam-e-hijr si
shab ko hum par kya naheeN guzree tere jaane ke baad
chhorh kar mujh ko sar-e-reh yaar mere chal diye
koyee mayykhaane ke pehle koyee mayykhaane ke baad
kyaa kahon kyaa na kahoon mujhko samajh aata nahii,
aapke aashaar zindaa kar de mar jaane ke baad.....
sirf kar paimaaish*-e-baadaa* hi is se rind tu
wus'at*-e-gham naap mat ek ek paimaane ke baad
jaam tu sab ko hi degee dekhna saaqee hai bas
kis ko tu phusla ke degee kis ko tarsaane ke baad
aap yaqeen na maanenge shaayad magar ek sawaal mere zahen me goonj raha tha pichle kuch dino se, aur maine ufaq saahab se iska zikr bhii kiyaa thaa ke kahiin agar saaqi ke muannass ki koii misaal mil jaatii .... bahot ulajhne ke baad bhii hame koii suurat nazar nahii ati thii.... magar aapne ye sher pesh kar ke merii saarii takleefen door kar si bhai.... bahot bahot shukriyaa jo aapne ye sher kah diyaa bhai...
aur waaahhhh kyaa khoob likhaa hai
imtehaaN gar aur hoN to un ka bhi de do pataa
aasraa koyee to ho had se guzar jaane ke baad
hum ne socha tha ke ye hungaama-e-mehfil hai par
kam n ye shorish* huwee khalwat* meiN bhi aane ke baad
lafz nahii mil rahe mujhe kaise tareef kar doon main in aashar ki mere bhaii....
kaisee kaisee manzarkashii pesh karte hain aap.... wo ap[ne ap me kamaal hai...
kaash ye hota sitamgar ko kiya hota muaaf
bardh gaya dard aur hum-dardoN ke samjhaane ke baad
deed meiN yaksaaN* gham-e-jaanaaN gham-e-dauraaN meree
farq kya rehta gham-e-insaaN ko apnaane ke baad
"zarraa" is aalam meiN hai hastee teree *maanind*-e-abr*
ik siyah* dhabbaa falak par hai baras jaane ke baad
ye kalaam shaayd aapka mere dil tak utar gayaa hai....na jaane kitnii baar padh gayaa ise, aur tab jaakar badee himmat karke khud ko jawaab dene ko taiyaar kiyaa hai maine....... aapke kalam se lafz nahii motii nikalte hain bhai.... ho zore kalam aur ur aur zyaada.......
- zarraa
Shaad...
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maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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29th July 2014, 11:24 PM
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';463375]
jaam tu sab ko hi degee dekhna saaqee hai bas
kis ko tu phusla ke degee kis ko tarsaane ke baad
aap yaqeen na maanenge shaayad magar ek sawaal mere zahen me goonj raha tha pichle kuch dino se, aur maine ufaq saahab se iska zikr bhii kiyaa thaa ke kahiin agar saaqi ke muannass ki koii misaal mil jaatii .... bahot ulajhne ke baad bhii hame koii suurat nazar nahii ati thii.... magar aapne ye sher pesh kar ke merii saarii takleefen door kar si bhai.... bahot bahot shukriyaa jo aapne ye sher kah diyaa bhai...
aur waaahhhh kyaa khoob likhaa hai
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ye ek bahaut hi achchha sawaal uthaaya hai aap ne Shaad bhai ... mujhe bhi is ke baare meiN mukammal taur par ilm naheeN tha, bas maiN ne khud hi assume kar liya tha ki lafz "saaqi" ko feminine gender meiN kaha jaana chaahiye.
aap ka aur Ufaq bhai ka discussion to main ne follow naheen kiya hai ... par aap donon ne individually mujh se is mudde ka zikr kiya hai...
waise aap ne sahi kaha ki zyaadatar aashaar meiN "saaqi" ke gender ki misaal naheen milti hai ...
lekin abhi abhi ustaad shora ke 2 aashaar meri nazar mein aaye hain jis mein "saaqi" ka gender masculine lag raha hai, jaisa ki Ufaq bhai ka opinion hai .... main aashaar neeche quote kar raha hoon...dekhiye aap ko kya interpretation lag raha hai ...
tere sheeshe meiN mayy baaki naheeN hai
bata kya tu MERA SAAQI naheeN hai
- Iqbal
pila de ok se SAAQI jo hum se nafrat hai
piyala gar naheeN DETA n de sharaab to de
- Ghalib
is hisaab se mere sher mein correction ki zaroorat parhegi ... to ise is tarah se change karne ka soch raha hoon ..
jaam to dena sabhi ko hai tujhe saaqi magar
kis ko tu phusla ke dega kis ko tarsaane ke baad
-zarraa
main ne socha ki mujh se jo galti huwee hai use sudhaar loon aur readers ke saath share kar loon taaki unhein galat misaal n mile meri wajah se.
main bahaut shukrguzaar hoon, Shaad bhai aap ka aur Ufaq bhai ka, ki aap doston ke zariye mujhe kuchh seekhne ko mila
Duaon ke saath
Zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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29th July 2014, 11:34 PM
Ek missal. Aur
saaqi mujhe tarsa Ke pilaata hai mai e naab
Ik baar bahut si nahi har baar zaraa sii
Daagh dehalvi
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30th July 2014, 09:45 AM
I am speechless.......................
sirf do lafz bolne kii koshish karoonga, "BEYOND EXCELLENCE"... shaayad yeh bhii kam ho, Zarrasaab.. toh muaafee chaahunga
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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30th July 2014, 10:21 AM
Zarra sahib...speechless performance.....ek ek aashar jaise moti hain..jinhe main baar baar apni maala me pirona chahta hu.....hats off to u.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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30th July 2014, 10:14 PM
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Zarrarji apki ye ghazal sabse pehle maine padhi lekin comment nahin kr saki coz i ws speechless....dobara padhi again speechless...ab teesri bar padhne k baad himmat kr pai hun is behad umdaa ghazal ki shaan me kuch keh sakun....har ek ashaar apne ap me hi misaal hain.....padhte waqt aise laga kisi behad mashahoor shayar ko padh rahi hun...ap to bht hi aala darje ke shayar hain Zarraji :respect: 14 verse padhne k baad bhi man nhi bhara, intehaii behtareen qalaam pesh kiya hai aapne dilse dheron dheron daad....shabd kam pad rahe hain tareef keliye muaf karna zarraji thikse dil ki kaifiyat bayaan nhi kr parahi.....m ur fan nw
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N@zneen ji ... aapne jo itne khuloos aur dariyadili se daad farmaayee hai, us ka sahi se shukriya ada kar paane ke liye alfaaz ki kami si mehsoos ho rahi hai. Bas aap jaise saathiyon aur qadradaanon ka hi karam aur hausla afzaayee hai ki koshish jaari rehti hai. Tah e dil se aap ka mashqoor ... duaon ke saath ... Zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 08:35 PM
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bohat khub zarraa ji bohat khub lajawab
LOVEU SAINI
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Bahaut bahaut Shukriya Saini ji
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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2nd August 2014, 02:24 PM
Waah Waaah Waah Waah Waah Waaah Waaaaahhhhhhhhh................................... !!!!
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3rd August 2014, 02:46 AM
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"zarraa" is aalam meiN hai hastee teree *maanind*-e-abr*
ik siyah* dhabbaa falak par hai baras jaane ke baad
Wahhh wahhhh Zarraa saheb...
Kamal ka kamal hai bas.. awesome creation!
MaQta bohat ziada pasand aaya...
Reps added.
Aise hi mehfil ki rounaq bhad'ha k rakhiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,,
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Hassan bhai, is ghazal ko dil meiN jagah dene ka aur is mohabbat bhari pazeeraayee ka bahaut bahaut shukriya. And thanks for reps too. Aap ka saath bahaut keemtee hai mere liye. Take care !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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wah zarraa bhai bahut khoob har sher lajwaab........radhe radhe
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Meherbaani Ishk sahab ... bahaut bahaut shukriya
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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9th August 2014, 01:39 AM
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Bhai....tum is daur Ke shaair nahi ho......tumhari shaairi padkar mujhe Urdu shaairi Ka classical era yaad aataa hai.......aur kyaa maqta likha hai ......jiyo
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Ufaq bhai, aap ke aashaar aur aap ke shayari par comments ki hi tarah aap ki daad bhi bahaut insightful, deep, authentic aur unique hai. Tah e dil se mashqoor hoon aap ka bhai! Dheron duaein !
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12th August 2014, 11:26 PM
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I am speechless.......................
sirf do lafz bolne kii koshish karoonga, "BEYOND EXCELLENCE"... shaayad yeh bhii kam ho, Zarrasaab.. toh muaafee chaahunga
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Aadeil bhai ... aap ki is mohabbat bhari daad se mera dil bhar aaya. Gale laga kar shukriya aap ko !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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15th August 2014, 12:01 AM
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Zarra sahib...speechless performance.....ek ek aashar jaise moti hain..jinhe main baar baar apni maala me pirona chahta hu.....hats off to u.
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Aru ji .... heartfelt thanks to your very kind words. Means a lot to me. Is koshish ko dil mein jagah dene ka dher saara shukriya !!
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18th August 2014, 07:57 PM
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Waah Waaah Waah Waah Waah Waaah Waaaaahhhhhhhhh................................... !!!!
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Bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya Masoom Pyar ji ...................
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 12:49 PM
Zarra ji...............ahsaas behad khoobsurat lge.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th August 2014, 04:56 PM
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Zarra ji...............ahsaas behad khoobsurat lge.
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Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Sunita ji !
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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30th August 2014, 05:06 AM
Bhai zarra,
miyaaN pehle to aadab tasleem farmaaiiye
duuje maiN ufaq bhai ki baat se sau-fee-sadi muttafiq hooN ke saahab aap kisi aur hi sadi ke sho'ra haiN, in dinoN KahaaN dikhaayi paDti hai yeh alfaaz ki adaakaari?
hum n gar is ko kataate to kahaaN rakhte ise
kya thikaana bhi raha sar ka tere shaane* ke baad
yeh ashaar aapne mere saamne padha hota to maiN tab taq "muqarrar" ki guhaar lagaata jab tak zabaaN bejaan na ho jaati
aur maqta aalaa huaa hai, dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad ke haqdaar haiN aap
yeh Ghazal aur aapki baaqi Ghazaliyaat bhi maiN kayi baar padh chuka hooN, abhi kal hi chuTiiyoN se lauTa hooN to pehle aapka haq aur apna farz adaa kar raha hooN
abhi mulaqaat hoti rahegi, jeete rahiye
Allah kare, zor-e-qalam, "aur ziyaada"
Khuda Hafiz
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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30th August 2014, 10:29 AM
Masha Allah bohat khoob zarraa sahab
Behad umda ghazal hai. .
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Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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17th October 2014, 01:33 AM
Meri nazroN se kaise bach gaya ye .. samajh nahi aa raha .. aapke alfaazoN ki tareef karne ke liye bhi jigar ka hona zaroori hai.. khaak bande ki itni haisiyat hi nahi .. aap bas mere alfaazoN main dabe jazbaatoN ko samajhte hue meri tareef kabool kareN ..
Khyaal rakheN apna
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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18th October 2014, 12:24 AM
Zarra jee Aadaab... !
Waah waah waah waah janab ... kuch aur zubaaN se nikalte nahi nikal rahaa hai ... behad umdaaH aur behad laajawaab gazal kahi hai janab ...
Kis sher ko behar kahuN kis sher ko umdaa kahuN kisko Aalaa ... har sher beintehaaN khoob aur mayaari hai ... aik aik kafiye ko laa jawaab khayaal ataa kiya hai janab ...
Is khoob aur Aalaa kalaam par meri bus dili daad kabul kijiye ...
In chaNd lafzoN ke siva maiN aur kuch nahi kah sakta janab is umdaa kalaam ke aage...
Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko apni umdaaH peshkashoN se nawaazte rahiye ....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...
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24th October 2014, 06:30 PM
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Bhai zarra,
miyaaN pehle to aadab tasleem farmaaiiye
duuje maiN ufaq bhai ki baat se sau-fee-sadi muttafiq hooN ke saahab aap kisi aur hi sadi ke sho'ra haiN, in dinoN KahaaN dikhaayi paDti hai yeh alfaaz ki adaakaari?
hum n gar is ko kataate to kahaaN rakhte ise
kya thikaana bhi raha sar ka tere shaane* ke baad
yeh ashaar aapne mere saamne padha hota to maiN tab taq "muqarrar" ki guhaar lagaata jab tak zabaaN bejaan na ho jaati
aur maqta aalaa huaa hai, dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad ke haqdaar haiN aap
yeh Ghazal aur aapki baaqi Ghazaliyaat bhi maiN kayi baar padh chuka hooN, abhi kal hi chuTiiyoN se lauTa hooN to pehle aapka haq aur apna farz adaa kar raha hooN
abhi mulaqaat hoti rahegi, jeete rahiye
Allah kare, zor-e-qalam, "aur ziyaada"
Khuda Hafiz
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Maikash sahab ... aadaab... Ye meri khushkismati ki aap jaise behtareen shayar aur maahir-e-sukhan ke dil mein mujhe aur meri is koshish ko thodi si jagah mil saki hai. Waaqayee aap se ye hausla afzaayee pa kar iraadon ko hausla milta hai. Bilkul yahi ummeed hai ki mulaakaaton ka silsila chalta rahega. Aap ka tah e dil se shukriya ada karta hoon. Meri jaanib de aap ko dheron daad... Zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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26th October 2014, 03:17 AM
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Masha Allah bohat khoob zarraa sahab
Behad umda ghazal hai. .
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Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Zainy ji
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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26th October 2014, 09:52 PM
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Meri nazroN se kaise bach gaya ye .. samajh nahi aa raha .. aapke alfaazoN ki tareef karne ke liye bhi jigar ka hona zaroori hai.. khaak bande ki itni haisiyat hi nahi .. aap bas mere alfaazoN main dabe jazbaatoN ko samajhte hue meri tareef kabool kareN ..
Khyaal rakheN apna
Kunaal
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Tashreef laane ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Kunal sahab. Aap ki daad ki bahaut ahmiyat hai mere liye.
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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