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Post Kaun Aayega Yahan...... - 20th October 2008, 02:12 AM

Kaun Aayega yahan Koi Na Aaya hoga,
Mera Darwaza Hawaon Ne Hilaya Hoga .......
Aaj Aankhe Surkh Aur Num Hain Unki,
Kisi Shakhsh Ki Yaad Ne Rulaya Hoga .........
Aaj Kadam Kyon Ladkhada Rahe Hain Unke,
Shayad Kisi Ki Yaad Ne Pilaya Hoga ...........
Is Tez Dhoop Main Sang Na Hoga Koi Uske,
Gar Koi Hoga To Woh Uska Saya Hoga .......
Kaun Aayega yahan Koi Na Aaya hoga,
Mera Darwaza Hawaon Ne Hilaya Hoga .......

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Yahan Nahee-Gazal Section Mein Submit Kar Sakte Hain** - 21st October 2008, 02:30 PM

Mafh Kijiyega-Ye Gazal ‘Jagjit Singh Jee Kee Awaz Mein Aur “Kaif” Jee Kee Likhhi Huyi Hain **
Haan, Shaayad ‘Kaif Bhupali’ Jee Kee Hain **
Aap Pehli Baar Yahan Aaye Hain Shayaad ?
Aapko Shayar Jee Ka Naam Pata Agar Na Ho To Kamsekam “Not Mine” Likhhna Na Bhuliyega **
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12th November 2008, 02:42 AM

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Mafh Kijiyega-Ye Gazal ‘Jagjit Singh Jee Kee Awaz Mein Aur “Kaif” Jee Kee Likhhi Huyi Hain **
Haan, Shaayad ‘Kaif Bhupali’ Jee Kee Hain **
Aap Pehli Baar Yahan Aaye Hain Shayaad ?
Aapko Shayar Jee Ka Naam Pata Agar Na Ho To Kamsekam “Not Mine” Likhhna Na Bhuliyega **
Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Shukriya **


Aadhi adhoori jaankari hona bahut hi khatarnaak hoti hai, isiliye pehle poori tarah se kisi bhi cheez ke bare main jankari le lena chahiye aur phir use kehna chahiye. Keval first 2 lines hi Jagjeet singh ke album "Unique" album ki hai jise "Kaif Bhopali" ne hi likha hai, baaki sabhi lines maine khud hi likhi hain. To zara apne gyan ko thoda sa update kar lijiyega. Waise ise padne ke liye shukriya

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12th November 2008, 09:49 AM

Is tez dhoop mein sang na hoga koi uske. . .
Gar hoga to woh uska saaya hoga. . .

Kya baat hai. . .!!
Bahut khoob!!!
Ek salaah hai ke jab kisi dusre shayar ki lines se shuruwat karein to pehle hi mention kar dein, accha rehta hai.
Baaki jo lines apne khud likhi hain vo to kaabil-e-taariff hain hi.

Take care. . .


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13th November 2008, 12:24 AM

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Is tez dhoop mein sang na hoga koi uske. . .
Gar hoga to woh uska saaya hoga. . .

Kya baat hai. . .!!
Bahut khoob!!!
Ek salaah hai ke jab kisi dusre shayar ki lines se shuruwat karein to pehle hi mention kar dein, accha rehta hai.
Baaki jo lines apne khud likhi hain vo to kaabil-e-taariff hain hi.

Take care. . .
Thanks for your comments Ritu. In future I'll take care of it.
   
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