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dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz - 25th April 2005, 09:11 AM

aik taaza Ghazal.......ehbaab ki nazar

mulai'zaa farmaayeN


dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz
maikash ki Ghazal tumko sunaayeNge kisi roz

thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane
mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz

allah qasam maine to socha bhi nahiiN tha
voh "itnaa" mere dil ko dukhaayeNge kisi roz

har roz aayi'ne se yahi puuchta huuN maiN
kya rukh pe tabbassum bhi sajaayeNge kisi roz..?

udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz

apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum
zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz

"maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto
hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz


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25th April 2005, 09:45 AM

Aapke bayaan mein shaamil hain...
Bahut khoobsurat alfaaz,
aur us se bhi khoobsurat andaaz.....

Kuch humari taraf se bhi arz hai....

Mujhko apne dard-e-dil ke zakhm na dikhaana,
apni ghazalon se kabhi mujhko na behlaana...

meri zidd mein khudaa-ra mujhko na jhukaana,
mere bulaane se pehle tum mujhko manaana...

Yeh to jugalbandi ho gayi!

Abhi bas itna hi...

Mohabbat...
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25th April 2005, 10:18 AM

haaye, shabdoN mein itnii bebasii ko qeh'd rakhnaa achii baat nahiN hai mere bhai! ..jinke liye dil tadapta hai, kaash woh bhii paD sakte apne aashiqoN ke jazbaat.

bahot zordaar ghazal hai miyaan, aur har sher daad ke qaabil hai!

"udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz
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«-- waaaaaah! kya umDa khayaal hai janaab! laa-jawaab.. bahot hii geh'raaii mein le gaye aap to khayaalat kii kashtii ko!

aapkii ghazaloN mein chuphaa ek aaiina hai, aur aapke alfaaz ki parchaayii mein main aksar khud ko paataa hoon; aglii ghazal kaa be'sabrii se intezaar rahe gaa!

mehfil sajaate rahiiye, aur duaa hai kii ek din aapkii mehboob ko yeh ghazaleiN paDne kaa maukaa mile

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25th April 2005, 12:17 PM

Adaab Maikash Sahab,

Bohot acchha laga aapko yaha vaapis paa kar. Janab ek bohot hi umda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne jis ke liye humari daad qabool kare. Ek ajeeb se bebasi, kuch naummeedi aur kaafi dard. Bohot khoob. Likhte rahe.


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25th April 2005, 01:30 PM

udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz


Maikash Sahab SSA.....

aapke aane se bazm phir dilkash ho uthi hai......

aur rahi baat aapke kalaam ki to......use padna humesha hi aacha lagta hai.....

dard aur sitam se bhare is kalaam pe is nacheez ki daad kabool kijiye.....

umeed hai aage bhi aap isi tarah se bazm ko sajate rahenge......



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Re: dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz - 26th April 2005, 10:33 AM

Maikash Miyaan...

Ghazal tau aap khuub kehte hain janaab...yeh aakhiri sher dil ko chaak chaak karne pe tula hai...

"maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto
hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz

ab aap jis alam mein yeh likh gaye hain...usi ko barqaraar rakhte huye...yeh Faiz sahib ke chand ashaar apki nazar karti hoon...

tez hai aaj dard-e-dil saaqii
talKhii-e-may ko tez-tar kar de

josh-e-mahashar hai tashnaakaam abhii
chaak-e-daaman ko taa-jigar kar de

Do shauq-e-shahadat rakhne wale, mere azeez Shayron ko ek saath yahan dekh bus yaad aaya...Jee Sharaabi Sahib aap bhi zara nazar-e-sani kijieygaa...

jahaan bhi rahieye...khush rahieye...

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26th April 2005, 10:33 AM

maikash saheb

mein behad khush hoon ke aap ne arse baad is forum ke liye kuch likha.
hazb e mamool aap ka kalam aap ka khoobsurat andaaz e bayan, laayeq e satayesh hai.
her shayr bohat khayal afreen, aur lateef jazbe ka haamil hai.
meri bharpoor daad qabool karein, aur please isi tarah is forum ko apne kalam se roshan kerte rahein.

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26th April 2005, 06:51 PM

bahut hi accha likha hain apne maikashjee.............shabdon ka pirona bhi kamal ka hain.....


udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz

apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum
zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz

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aapki ghazal behad pasand aayi

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Re: dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz - 16th May 2005, 12:58 PM


dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz
maikash ki Ghazal tumko sunaayeNge kisi roz

thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane
mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz

WaaaaH.. bahut khoob!!


allah qasam maine to socha bhi nahiiN tha
voh "itnaa" mere dil ko dukhaayeNge kisi roz

har roz aayi'ne se yahi puuchta huuN maiN
kya rukh pe tabbassum bhi sajaayeNge kisi roz..?

Waaahhh... !!


udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz

apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum
zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz

Behad khoobsurat!!


"maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto
hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz

Waaaaahhh!!

Maikash ji!

Ek aur behad khoobsurat kalaam.. bahut accha laga ise padhkar... yun hi khhobusrta ashaar humaare beech laate rahiyega....


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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Bahut khoob...

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hi - 29th July 2005, 07:54 PM

thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane
mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz



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wah wah wah,
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maikash ji,

taarif mai koi jawaab nahi milae aisi gajal.

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wow...

Very nice maikash ji...

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bhai waah - 24th March 2006, 09:06 PM

Aadaab huzoor. i hope ki aapne pehchaan to liya hi hoga. arse baad in sheroN ke zariye mulaakaat ho rahi hai.

bahot khoob ghazal hai. Aaj ek arse baad shayri.com per lauta aur aapki ye ghazal padhi to dil khush ho gaya. Reply kiye bina dil nahi mana. Ek aur baar mubaarakbaad dena chaahunga. Bahot acchi ghazal hai.

chaliye aapki ghazal padhte padhte 2 sher zahen me aa gaye. aapki nazar kar raha hun.

Raat itni to teri baahoN me guzaar lunga.
ki saher tarsegi har pal, saher hone tak.

ek aur.... mulaaizaa farmaayein..

Kal raat mujhse meri besabr zindagi ne kaha
Soch lo "rahul" kal fir vohi saher hogi.


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Chalta hun.

Rab aapko salaamat rakkhe.


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11th September 2006, 06:57 PM

Maiksah bhaa'i,

paRh kar mazaa aaa gaya.. MaikaShi ka kyaa aalam hai.. bohat khoob!

ess naa-cheez ka daad haazir hai, qubool keejiye...

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11th September 2006, 08:48 PM

maikash sir ek aur bahut hi udma peshkash thi ye aapki.aapko jab v padhte hain jee karta hain padhte rahen.aapse bas yahi guzarish karunga ki aap aage v bas yunhi likhte rahiye hum jaise nacheezon ke liye.taki hume kuch andaaz-e-bayaan seekhne ko mil jaye.



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12th September 2006, 01:11 AM

kya kaheN bhai ye miyaaN maikash kuch ziyada hi bad'tameez ho gaye haiN aaj-kal....dostoN ne itni muravvat se apne tabsire se nawaaza aur huzuur ne kisi ka bhi shukriya adaa nahiiN kiya...!!


dosto sabse mazrat chahta huuN......tabiyat zaraa na'saaz hai isliye sabhi ka ek hi post maiN dhanyavaad karne ki gustaakhi kar raha huuN

Ghazal ko dobara na padhne ki jurrat shayad isliye nahiiN ke is Ghazal ki beher meiN behisaab laGhzisheiN numaayaaN haiN...isko maine pphir se kehne ki koshish ki hai kisi roz post karuuNga


jin dostoN ne husala badhaaya hai unka shukurguzaar huuN


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12th September 2006, 03:22 AM

thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz

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12th September 2006, 11:05 AM

bahut dino bad kuch aisa padha hai ... jisk ek ek shabd ko taar bana du ... to tar ki jhankaar se dard ka sitaar baj uthe....!!

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hi - 12th September 2006, 11:27 AM

maikash ji aap ki ghazal jab bhi padhte hai, bas padhate hi rahate hai,kyaa khoob rawaani hai ,padh kar sach mai mazaa aa gaya,aap ki agli ghazal ka besabri se intzaar rahegaa,aur is dilkash kavish par meri dil se daad kabool kijiyega janaab

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Aapke bayaan mein shaamil hain...
Bahut khoobsurat alfaaz,
aur us se bhi khoobsurat andaaz.....

Kuch humari taraf se bhi arz hai....

Mujhko apne dard-e-dil ke zakhm na dikhaana,
apni ghazalon se kabhi mujhko na behlaana...

meri zidd mein khudaa-ra mujhko na jhukaana,
mere bulaane se pehle tum mujhko manaana...

Yeh to jugalbandi ho gayi!

Abhi bas itna hi...

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29th September 2006, 08:58 PM

sabse pahale pranam maikash ji,

to ab shuru karu............?

dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz
maikash ki Ghazal tumko sunaayeNge kisi roz

shayad hum aapki gazal hi parh rahe hai ji..........

''dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz'' ye line achhi lagi hume.

har roz aayi'ne se yahi puuchta huuN maiN
kya rukh pe tabbassum bhi sajaayeNge kisi roz..?

ye tabbassum kya hota hai?

apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum
zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz

masha allah..............

"maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto
hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz

maikash miyaan aapne kya likha hai ye..............behatariin. bahot hi pyara sher laga ye hume..........

apki gazal ki jitni tariif karun kam lagti hai,
humari to palken bhi aaj num lagti hai..

hmmmm kahan se laye itna dard haa boliye boliye.....

sach kaun to aapki ye gazal dil ko chhu gai aaj humare....unhi likhte rahiye ji yahi dua hai dene ke liye

ok ji bye bye

graze

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29th August 2008, 05:08 PM

maikash bhaii.....bahut khoob kaha aapne...har sher kabiley tareef hai....par yeh sher sabse khaas laga :

udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz

bahut umda khayaal haiN

kush rahiye
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lafzo ki tarah dil ki kitab main milenge,

ya banke mahak aapko gulab main milenge,

milne ke liye e dost zara theek se sona,

aaj hum tumse khwabon main milenge....


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Soch rahi hooN kaise is kalaam par nazar nahiN gayi meri ab Tak!! Is Ke Liye pehle to mein aap se maafi Chaahugi! ..

KahNe Ko Kaafi kuch hai.. par Samjh meiN nahiN aa raha ki Shuru kaha se Kare, Har sher Laa-jaawaB hai

Jis tarah se baayaaN kiya hai aapne usay pad Kar bahuT aasudgi mili wakay ye kalaaM khabil-e-tareef hai!

Bohat hi khuubsurat aur dil azeez ghazal likhi hai aap ne... padha to sirf padhti hi reh gayi..

maikash ji... aap shayri.com ke un shayeroN me shaamil haiN jin ke Ghazalein yahaan ki raunaq badha deti hain....

aapki ghazaloN ka hamesha se intezaar rehta hai...

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aik taaza Ghazal.......ehbaab ki nazar

mulai'zaa farmaayeN


dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz
maikash ki Ghazal tumko sunaayeNge kisi roz

thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane
mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz

allah qasam maine to socha bhi nahiiN tha
voh "itnaa" mere dil ko dukhaayeNge kisi roz

har roz aayi'ne se yahi puuchta huuN maiN
kya rukh pe tabbassum bhi sajaayeNge kisi roz..?

udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz

apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum
zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz

"maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto
hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz
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Maikash saheb Adaab!!!

Janaab takreeban teen mahine hue haiN mujhe sdc join kiye aur meri badkismati dekhiye ki jo khojta hua aaya tha woh mujhe aapki Ghazal meiN teen mahine baad mila....
Pehle aapko na padh paana shayad ghaflat ho sakti hai, lekin ab na padhna badkismati hogi...
Main Kya tareef karunga aapki Ghazal ki, likhne ka sabab matr apni haazari darz karvana tha...

Ijaazat...
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Maikash ji, aapki yeh gazal aaj maine Facebook ke apne page Shayri Through Emotions par share ki hai...muje behad pasand hai yeh gazal....!!

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Wuaahhhh saaheb..
Mazaa aa. Gaya ..purasar kalaam zabardast aihsaas ..
Jitnii tareef kareiN utni kam
special thanks to sunita jee
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Wuaahhhh saaheb..
Mazaa aa. Gaya ..purasar kalaam zabardast aihsaas ..
Jitnii tareef kareiN utni kam
special thanks to sunita jee
daad qubool farmaaeiN
Kshitiz ji.....ham Maikash ji ki gazal ka thanx karte hai, uske bahane aapne hame yaad to kiya :-) kahaN busy rehte hai aap...kuch likhiye na bazm ko aapke taaza kalaam ka intezaar hai

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maikash ji poori maikash hai yeh gazal.........zabardast.

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Sunita jee ..

Kaisi haiN aap ..yaad to use karte haiN jise bhula diya jaaye ..
Maine ek ghazal likhi hai shayad dard section ke pehle page pe hi hai
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Maikash ji,

bahut behtereen ghazal...Ek baar punjabi poetry
section mein Shiv di Ghazal thread.me aap se mukhatib
hua tha...
aaj aap ki gazal Kisi roz pari , bAut khoob.

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