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Sitam aur Mehbooba :-) - 10th April 2009, 11:12 PM

Hi Dosto...

Aapke saath aaj fir mai apne dil k kuch ehsaasaat share karna chahta hu...
Ummeed hai,pehle ki tarah aaj bhi aapko pasand aayenge...





Saari Duniya k baraste ghamo se,
mai bhari mehfil me hanske ji liya,
Meri mehbooba k larazte labo se,
jab maine mohabbat ka jaam pe liya...

Duniya k har sitam ne
bahut kuch Sikhaya hai,
Duniya ki har yaad ko
Buland ne jalaya hai..
CHAAK HUA DAAMAN mera duniya k sitamo se,
aur Buland ne mohabbat se USKO si liya...

Duniya k sitamo ki jab yaad aa jati hai,
banke AANSU meri aankho se nikal jati hai,
Ve sitam mere liye anmol ho gaye,
jab Mehbooba ne labo se,
apne UNKO pe liya...


Mehbooba k badan pe
JO NISHANI hai pyaar ki,
bhula deti hai mujhe
har baat takraar ki,
sharma k lipat gayi mujhse,
jab USKO apne labo se maine chuu liya...

lambi umr ki dua nahi maangte hain,
khuda se VE KUCH HASEE PAL maangte hain,
Mehbooba k aaghosh me
Buland ne JINKO ji liya...

Ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye honge...

Mai jaanta hu, shayri ki drishti se Kafi kuch khamiya hai, par ye sirf aur sirf ehsaasaat hain...

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17th April 2009, 12:25 PM

Is duniya k Mai har sitam chahta hu,
K aaj mai lipat k US SE rona chahta hu...
Meri Mehbooba k naram aaghosh me,
bachhe ki tarah ro k sona chahta hu...

Duniya k kisi sitam ki parwaah nahi Buland ko...
Bas Mehbooba k Dil ka ek Kona Chahta hu...

Mujhe Duniya k sitam achhe lagne lage,
jb mehbooba se lipat k ham rone lage..
Bhula diya USKE AALINGAN ne har sitam ko,
isiliye Duniya se har sitam Chahta hu...

Na koi kami rakh e-duniya sitam dhane me,
k bahana milta hai USKE paaas aane me,
ab to Dil b khushi se,har sitam seh jata hai,
har sitam k badle USKA chumban mil jata hai...
Ab to bas yahi silsila chahta hu...
is Duniya k mai har sitam chahta hu...
is duniya k mai har sitam chahta hu...
   
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17th April 2009, 04:02 PM

Tum bht achcha likhte ho Raj..........tumhari feelings bhi bht touching hai........tumne poems to bht likhe lekin aise hi soch aur ehsaas k saath agar ghazal likhoge to kya gazab dhaoge........i'll wait for ur ghazal
   
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17th April 2009, 04:43 PM

Thanks Naaz,
lekin mai koi ghazal wazal nahi likhna chahta...
Mai to bas aise he apne ehsaaso ko bayaa karne me khushi mehsoos karta hu...
Mujhe koi Shayar nahi ban na...

Ye to bas aise he. . . .
Actuly kafi log Diary likhte hain...
Mai koi diary nahi likhta...
Bas jo Dil me aata hai, yaha post kar deta hu...

Mere paas apni in lines ki koi copy b nahi hai, bas jo b likhta hu, yahi ya fir Dosto ko SMS kar deta hu...

Waise b Duniya me ek se ek Umda aur mashhoor shayar bhare hue hain...
Mai apna comparison unse nahi karna chahta...

Neways thanks 4 coming and reading my Ehsaas...
   
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17th April 2009, 05:00 PM

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Thanks Naaz,
lekin mai koi ghazal wazal nahi likhna chahta...
Mai to bas aise he apne ehsaaso ko bayaa karne me khushi mehsoos karta hu...
Mujhe koi Shayar nahi ban na...

Ye to bas aise he. . . .
Actuly kafi log Diary likhte hain...
Mai koi diary nahi likhta...
Bas jo Dil me aata hai, yaha post kar deta hu...

Mere paas apni in lines ki koi copy b nahi hai, bas jo b likhta hu, yahi ya fir Dosto ko SMS kar deta hu...

Waise b Duniya me ek se ek Umda aur mashhoor shayar bhare hue hain...
Mai apna comparison unse nahi karna chahta...

Neways thanks 4 coming and reading my Ehsaas...
I respect ur feelings......aur sahi baat hai jismei khushi mehsoos ho wahi karna chahiye.....anyways KEEP IT UP
   
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Aapka Romani ghazal esahas padne mai acha lagta hai. khai dil ko bhi chhuta hai. aage bhi aise hi chalta rahe. meri shubh kamna hai.....
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Hi Dosto...

Aapke saath aaj fir mai apne dil k kuch ehsaasaat share karna chahta hu...
Ummeed hai,pehle ki tarah aaj bhi aapko pasand aayenge...





Saari Duniya k baraste ghamo se,
mai bhari mehfil me hanske ji liya,
Meri mehbooba k larazte labo se,
jab maine mohabbat ka jaam pe liya...

Duniya k har sitam ne
bahut kuch Sikhaya hai,
Duniya ki har yaad ko
Buland ne jalaya hai..
CHAAK HUA DAAMAN mera duniya k sitamo se,
aur Buland ne mohabbat se USKO si liya...

Duniya k sitamo ki jab yaad aa jati hai,
banke AANSU meri aankho se nikal jati hai,
Ve sitam mere liye anmol ho gaye,
jab Mehbooba ne labo se,
apne UNKO pe liya...


Mehbooba k badan pe
JO NISHANI hai pyaar ki,
bhula deti hai mujhe
har baat takraar ki,
sharma k lipat gayi mujhse,
jab USKO apne labo se maine chuu liya...

lambi umr ki dua nahi maangte hain,
khuda se VE KUCH HASEE PAL maangte hain,
Mehbooba k aaghosh me
Buland ne JINKO ji liya...

Ummeed hai aapko pasand aaye honge...

Mai jaanta hu, shayri ki drishti se Kafi kuch khamiya hai, par ye sirf aur sirf ehsaasaat hain...
Bhai,
Pasand aaya.....aur dil se aaya....


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lambi umr ki dua nahi maangte hain,
khuda se VE KUCH HASEE PAL maangte hain,
Mehbooba k aaghosh me
Buland ne JINKO ji liya...
Bahut khoob.....

Vikram


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Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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Bhai,
Pasand aaya.....aur dil se aaya....




Bahut khoob.....

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Oye Raj Bhai ..............

Qatel ikha hai bahut hi lajawab isliye main kehta hun aapki poetry mujhe bahut pasand aati hia simply define what's you want to teell in your poetry.........

Keep t up bhai .........

Take care......


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Oye Raj Bhai ..............

Qatel ikha hai bahut hi lajawab isliye main kehta hun aapki poetry mujhe bahut pasand aati hia simply define what's you want to teell in your poetry.........

Keep t up bhai .........

Take care......
thanx Sameer bhai ... Ye to bas yu he likh diya tha ... Kaafi pehle ki baat hai... Aaj Maine jb ye dekhi to khud hairaan tha k ye maine likhi hai btw shukriya isko pasand karne ka...
   
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Raj,

bahut khoob dear.... bahut pyaare ehsaas hai... keep it up....khush raho...


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Thanx Lamha for coming,reading and apreciating it..
Tc and keep smiling
   
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