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bahon ke dermyan ab doori na rahey koi........ - 1st September 2004, 04:58 PM

bahon ke dermyan ab doori na rahey koi
chahat ke paimane me majboori na rahey koi

jindgi ki rahon me bewafai miley kharon ki
phoolon ki hasratey bhi jaroori na rahey koi

jis sheh per nazar dalo,,aye tere daaman me
tamanna tere dil ki adhoori na rahey koi

mahabbt ke aaene me surat teri hi jhalkey
ankhon ke jharokho me jee-hazoori na rahey koi

phalak ke sitaron se gila kerna nahi "sona"
arzoo-e-jami per tarap-e-kastoori na rahey koi


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Re: bahon ke dermyan ab doori na rahey koi........ - 1st September 2004, 05:11 PM

bahon ke dermyan ab doori na rahey koi
chahat ke paimane me majboori na rahey koi

jindgi ki rahon me bewafai miley kharon ki
phoolon ki hasratey bhi jaroori na rahey koi

jis sheh per nazar dalo,,aye tere daaman me
tamanna tere dil ki adhoori na rahey koi

mahabbt ke aaene me surat teri hi jhalkey
ankhon ke jharokho me jee-hazoori na rahey koi

phalak ke sitaron se gila kerna nahi "sona"
arzoo-e-jami per tarap-e-kastoori na rahey koi

priye swati
tumahri kalam mein wo jaadu hai jo padhnewale ko sammohit kar deta hai...is gazal ki khubsurati ka bakhaan karne ke liye mere paas alfaaz nahin hai,,,,behad purasar aur khubsurat kalaam likha hai tumne,,,,har sher laajawab hai....jaise mohabbat ki chaasni se likh dala gaya ho..meri daad kubool karo....yeh kalaam hamesha yaad rahega....
take care
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1st September 2004, 05:20 PM

bahon ke dermyan ab doori na rahey koi
chahat ke paimane me majboori na rahey koi

jindgi ki rahon me bewafai miley kharon ki
phoolon ki hasratey bhi jaroori na rahey koi


WoW! Really beautiful!!


jis sheh per nazar dalo,,aye tere daaman me
tamanna tere dil ki adhoori na rahey koi

mahabbt ke aaene me surat teri hi jhalkey
ankhon ke jharokho me jee-hazoori na rahey koi


Jis sheh pe nazar dalo, aye tere daman me, tamanna tere dil ki adhoori na rahey koi..... Wah Wah!

Swati,

Really Very beautiful words once again... I really like them so much that i am reading them again and again!! Ab tumhari post hai... Acchi to hogi hi naa

Won't write much... coz i still want to read it again... U do take care and keep writing


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hi - 1st September 2004, 05:21 PM

dear manoj
...tumne bhi tareef ki jis chasni me jabab diya hai,,aur daad di hai ,,wo andaz bhi hamesha yaad rahega mujhe....
bahoot pyara aur sunder reply diya hai,,,
ab sammohit ya jadoo to parhne wala hi jane,,per thori bahut tukbandi,,ki adat si per gayi hai,,jo kalam ko agey brahati hai,,,,
dadd dene ke liye dil se shukriya....


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bahon ke dermyan ab doori na rahey koi
chahat ke paimane me majboori na rahey koi

jindgi ki rahon me bewafai miley kharon ki
phoolon ki hasratey bhi jaroori na rahey koi

jis sheh per nazar dalo,,aye tere daaman me
tamanna tere dil ki adhoori na rahey koi

mahabbt ke aaene me surat teri hi jhalkey
ankhon ke jharokho me jee-hazoori na rahey koi

phalak ke sitaron se gila kerna nahi "sona"
arzoo-e-jami per tarap-e-kastoori na rahey koi
Swati ji,

kaisi hain aap?

kya baat hai..bahut khoob..
umda kalaam ke liye daad kubool kijiyega...poori kavita bahut achhi hai..zaldi me hoon varna detail se likhta...

yoonhi likhti rahiyega..
take care
bye


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h - 1st September 2004, 09:45 PM

hello pulkit
..tumne to sach itni tareef ker di,,ki ab main khud dobara parhker dekh rahi hoon ki aisa kya likh daala maine?
waise ek bat batoon?mujhe sach..khud 10 min,,baad ye yaad nahi rehta ki maine kya likha hai? lol....
ab ssab log jab sunatey hai ki ye accha sher hai to dobara main bhi dhayn se parhti hoon,,ki aisa kya hai?isliye kai bar bahut galti bhi ho jati hai,..per dekho,,agar kuch galat ho to bata diya kero..sirf tareef hi nahi,,,o.k?
tumhe pasand ayi,,gazal..iskey liye shukriya...


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hi - 1st September 2004, 09:47 PM

hello kavvish ji
...apne chand panktiyon me likhi is dil ki awaz ko parhker tareef ki bus,,samjhiye,,hamara yun is bekhayali me likhna safal ho gaya.....
apko daad ke liye shukriya!!!!!!!


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