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19th January 2008, 03:54 PM
dosto meri ek nimaani jehi koshish aap sab di nazar........
De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
si majboor na rok saki maiN usnu,
hawa vich bas hath lahraunda rah geya,
kade khaunda si soha.n mere vishvaas diya.n,
aj ohi jaunda jaunda bewaffa kah geya,
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
vagan.ge hanju kar chetey usdi har gal,
ena aakha.n vich har khaab adhoora rah geya,
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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19th January 2008, 05:44 PM
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dosto meri ek nimaani jehi koshish aap sab di nazar........
De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
si majboor na rok saki maiN usnu,
hawa vich bas hath lahraunda rah geya,
kade khaunda si soha.n mere vishvaas diya.n,
aj ohi jaunda jaunda bewaffa kah geya,
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
vagan.ge hanju kar chetey usdi har gal,
ena aakha.n vich har khaab adhoora rah geya,
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
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R. Sunita Ji...
Bahot sundar rachna likhi hai... Ehsaas nu kinni khoobsurti naal Shabad Jaal vich bunia hai... Ik ik Shabad dard hi dard naal bharia piya hai... Khoobsurat... Bahot hi khoobsuart...
Regards,
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Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN
Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN
Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT,
Zindgi apni to kiyA,
Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN.
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19th January 2008, 07:39 PM
Sach keha hai Rishi ji tusi.sach much bahut hi sohna likheya hai dard nu.it's really good.
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
wah wah.gr8.fir milde aa....................................
R.Sharma(Gazal)
Tumhari Gazal.
ik sajda tainu milane da.
ik khwaish tainu poon di,
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21st January 2008, 10:10 AM
sunita ji ssa ji.......thuadee poetry parhi lagda punjabi vich v maidaan maaronge.....bhut sohne ehsaasan nu bhut sohne dhang naal byaan kitta hai parh ke bhut sakoon mileya....rab thuadee kalam nu hor taqat bakshe....likhde raho.....raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Bahut Khoob -
21st January 2008, 01:47 PM
Bahut khoob likhiya hai Sunita ji. Your poetry is maturing up day by day. It's beautifull. Ik gustaakhi kar rihaaN tuhadi aakhri line naal....
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
Eh agar is tarah hovey.....
hun koi v sukhan usda mere naam hona nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
Wasdey raho
tilak...
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
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21st January 2008, 03:59 PM
ohhhhh rabb vasda ji tuhade dard vich.......mainu ta aa gya nzara pad k eh klaam.......thanx 4 nice poem .......keep it up
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5th February 2008, 11:41 PM
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dosto meri ek nimaani jehi koshish aap sab di nazar........
De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
si majboor na rok saki maiN usnu,
hawa vich bas hath lahraunda rah geya,
kade khaunda si soha.n mere vishvaas diya.n,
aj ohi jaunda jaunda bewaffa kah geya,
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
vagan.ge hanju kar chetey usdi har gal,
ena aakha.n vich har khaab adhoora rah geya,
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
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wowww di aap punjabi main bhi likhti hainnnnn aaj parrha pehli baar bohat khoob di bohat ache se paish kia hai aapne yunhi likhti rahiye di khush rahain
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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14th February 2008, 05:04 PM
De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
bhut hi khoobsurt hai sorry sunita ji mein late reply kr skea , mein ta anjaan hi c es paunche hoe shyer to , bhut hi khoobsurt sunita ji. likhde rho te wasde rho
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15th February 2008, 04:50 AM
Hi
I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved this. It was so beautiful and reminded me of something I went through years ago and still have the pain running deep somewhere. Keep writting, its awsome.
Chota Sa Dil
"Work like you dont need money,
Love like you have never been hurt,
and
Dance like no one is watching."
"Janee kya likha hai us Rub ne apne kismat par, roz hathon ko dekh kar unee parne ke koshish karthe hai"
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29th February 2008, 06:44 PM
bhut hi khoobsurt hai tuhadi poem sunita g , bhutb drd hai
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18th March 2008, 10:30 PM
perfect dear
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24th March 2008, 02:18 PM
[quote=sunita virender;266554] dosto meri ek nimaani jehi koshish aap sab di nazar........
De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
si majboor na rok saki maiN usnu,
hawa vich bas hath lahraunda rah geya,
kade khaunda si soha.n mere vishvaas diya.n,
aj ohi jaunda jaunda bewaffa kah geya,
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
vagan.ge hanju kar chetey usdi har gal,
ena aakha.n vich har khaab adhoora rah geya,
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
SUNITA JI sachmuch bahut hi khoobsurat likheya hai tusi.jo tusi likhde ho oh aapne aap ch sampuran hunda hai.thx eni pyari rachna lai.
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24th March 2008, 04:45 PM
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R. Sunita Ji...
Bahot sundar rachna likhi hai... Ehsaas nu kinni khoobsurti naal Shabad Jaal vich bunia hai... Ik ik Shabad dard hi dard naal bharia piya hai... Khoobsurat... Bahot hi khoobsuart...
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shukriya rishi jee..........
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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24th March 2008, 04:46 PM
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Sach keha hai Rishi ji tusi.sach much bahut hi sohna likheya hai dard nu.it's really good.
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
wah wah.gr8.fir milde aa....................................
R.Sharma(Gazal)
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R.sharma ji bahut bahut shukriya
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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sunita ji ssa ji.......thuadee poetry parhi lagda punjabi vich v maidaan maaronge.....bhut sohne ehsaasan nu bhut sohne dhang naal byaan kitta hai parh ke bhut sakoon mileya....rab thuadee kalam nu hor taqat bakshe....likhde raho.....raj........
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rajveer ji namaskaar
kyuN majaak karde ho, main te bas apne dil de ahsaasa.n nu tuhade sab naal sanjiya.n kardi haan......
te tuhade vargia.n shayra.n nu padke kuj housla kardi haan likhn da....
duava.n laye shukriya
tuhadi dost
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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24th March 2008, 04:52 PM
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Bahut khoob likhiya hai Sunita ji. Your poetry is maturing up day by day. It's beautifull. Ik gustaakhi kar rihaaN tuhadi aakhri line naal....
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
Eh agar is tarah hovey.....
hun koi v sukhan usda mere naam hona nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
Wasdey raho
tilak...
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tilak ji namaskaar...........tusi bahut dhayaan naal padiya hai meri shayri nu....dil to shukriya
te tuhadi gustaakhi menu bahut vadiya lagi.....
aida hi saath dende rahna
kush raho te kushiya maande raho
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:54 PM
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ohhhhh rabb vasda ji tuhade dard vich.......mainu ta aa gya nzara pad k eh klaam.......thanx 4 nice poem .......keep it up
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ohhhhhhhhhh...........deep ji bahut bahut shukriya.....jab tuhade varge padan wale dost hon taan kalam apne aap chal pendi hai....bahut vadiya lagiya tuhada review padke...
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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wowww di aap punjabi main bhi likhti hainnnnn aaj parrha pehli baar bohat khoob di bohat ache se paish kia hai aapne yunhi likhti rahiye di khush rahain
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aree mani jaan.....maine punjabi mein kuch jayada to nahi likha hai....haan shuruyaat ki hai abhi....yoon hi aap sabka saath milta raha to jaroor yaha bhi thoda bahut naam ho hi jayega.....
kush raho
bahut sare pyar ke saath
tumhari diiiiiiiii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 04:59 PM
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De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
bhut hi khoobsurt hai sorry sunita ji mein late reply kr skea , mein ta anjaan hi c es paunche hoe shyer to , bhut hi khoobsurt sunita ji. likhde rho te wasde rho
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preet jee namaskaar...............sorry wali koi gal nahi hai.....tusi menu padiya mere laye eh hi bahut hai, te padke aina pyara jeha review ditta.....thanks a lot preet jee
kush raho te kushiya.n maande raho
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th March 2008, 05:03 PM
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Hi
I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved this. It was so beautiful and reminded me of something I went through years ago and still have the pain running deep somewhere. Keep writting, its awsome.
Chota Sa Dil
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dost..............tuhada review padke mere kol kuj nahi reha ki maiN tuhade ahsaasa.n da kuj jawaab deva............mera likhya padke tusi ateet (past) vich chale gaye....maaf karna dost....jaandi haan ki puraniya.n yaadd.n bahut jaanleva hundiya.n ne.
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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bhut hi khoobsurt hai tuhadi poem sunita g , bhutb drd hai
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shukriya Raghav jee
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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perfect dear
mindblowing.great job
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Roop jee....sab to phela te menu eh daso ki tusi aine din laye kithe gayab ho gaye c, bahut dina baad tuhanu SDC te dekh rahi haan.....aaunde reha karo
shukriya, aida hi housla dende rahna, taaki main kuj na kuj likhn da housla kardi rahaN
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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[QUOTE=A-BABBU;277086]
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
dosto meri ek nimaani jehi koshish aap sab di nazar........
De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
si majboor na rok saki maiN usnu,
hawa vich bas hath lahraunda rah geya,
kade khaunda si soha.n mere vishvaas diya.n,
aj ohi jaunda jaunda bewaffa kah geya,
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
vagan.ge hanju kar chetey usdi har gal,
ena aakha.n vich har khaab adhoora rah geya,
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
SUNITA JI sachmuch bahut hi khoobsurat likheya hai tusi.jo tusi likhde ho oh aapne aap ch sampuran hunda hai.thx eni pyari rachna lai.
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Babbu ji tuhada v dil to shukriya, jo tusi menu aine pyar naal padiya, te es adna jehi kavish te aina sanmaan bakshiya.
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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dosto meri ek nimaani jehi koshish aap sab di nazar........
De ke menu dard diya.n sugaata.n,
aaj oh has ke alvidha kah geya,
si majboor na rok saki maiN usnu,
hawa vich bas hath lahraunda rah geya,
kade khaunda si soha.n mere vishvaas diya.n,
aj ohi jaunda jaunda bewaffa kah geya,
usdi kushi laye main har dard seene la leya,
esi bahane usde pyar da karz seero.n leh geya,
vagan.ge hanju kar chetey usdi har gal,
ena aakha.n vich har khaab adhoora rah geya,
hun koi v shayri usdi mere naam aauni nahi,
"Sunita" naam bas purane safiya.n te hi rah geya
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7 saalan baad nazar payi te main haale tak dil nu samjhauna chaunda ki eh gal sach nai ha, Didi tuhade dil diyaa cheekha goonj rahiya ne kan'ch hun tak...bahut sona likhya tusi ta mere athruu rukan da nau nahi le rahe...
rab rakhaa
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7 saalan baad nazar payi te main haale tak dil nu samjhauna chaunda ki eh gal sach nai ha, Didi tuhade dil diyaa cheekha goonj rahiya ne kan'ch hun tak...bahut sona likhya tusi ta mere athruu rukan da nau nahi le rahe...
rab rakhaa
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Wow that was so nicely said... Keep writing 😊
"Work like you dont need money,
Love like you have never been hurt,
and
Dance like no one is watching."
"Janee kya likha hai us Rub ne apne kismat par, roz hathon ko dekh kar unee parne ke koshish karthe hai"
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10th July 2015, 09:03 AM
Sunita ji ,
Tuhadee ek puranee punjabee kavita paree , bahut hee kamal da likhiya theth punjabi vich tusee .. aine doonge ehasaas per ke tuhade vichore nu main baree kolon mehsoon keeta ..
bada changa lagiya per ke tuhadi 7 saal purani kavita.. do lina meri tarfon tuhadee nazar ..
Hun reha vi nahi janda, te seha vi nahi Janda,
Vichora apne preetam da.
Likhde raho te asee pad,e rahiye , eho mang hai saadi Reps added +++
Hamdam
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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22nd July 2015, 04:45 PM
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7 saalan baad nazar payi te main haale tak dil nu samjhauna chaunda ki eh gal sach nai ha, Didi tuhade dil diyaa cheekha goonj rahiya ne kan'ch hun tak...bahut sona likhya tusi ta mere athruu rukan da nau nahi le rahe...
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Mast bhai....ab kya kahuN en ehsaasoN par...waqt har dard ka marham hota hai
aapne en ehsaasoN ko mehsoos kiya...shukriya
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22nd July 2015, 04:46 PM
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Wow that was so nicely said... Keep writing 😊
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22nd July 2015, 04:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Sunita ji ,
Tuhadee ek puranee punjabee kavita paree , bahut hee kamal da likhiya theth punjabi vich tusee .. aine doonge ehasaas per ke tuhade vichore nu main baree kolon mehsoon keeta ..
bada changa lagiya per ke tuhadi 7 saal purani kavita.. do lina meri tarfon tuhadee nazar ..
Hun reha vi nahi janda, te seha vi nahi Janda,
Vichora apne preetam da.
Likhde raho te asee pad,e rahiye , eho mang hai saadi Reps added +++
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Sanjay ji
tusi mere ehsaas samjay...changa lagiya te jo tusi 2 lines likhiyaa hai, menu bahut pasand aayiaa.
padan lye te samjan lye shukriya
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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