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26th May 2009, 11:21 PM
*** yaad aaungi ***
tum meri hasti ki haqiqat naa bhula paoge,
mujh jaisa kisi aur ko paoge to yaad aaungi,
humne saath saath bitaye hai kai mausam,
yaadon ke panne gar paltoge to yaad aaungi,
sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me,
koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi,
meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the,
sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi,
isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi,
pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi,
khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera,
kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi,
tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi,
apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi,
saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena,
baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi,
dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal,
kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi,
yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut,
jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi,
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 09:29 AM
Lamha,
Just one word...................... Amazing........
How can u write such beautiful dear..... Let me know the secret???
...........Keep writing Sweety.........
God bless you!!
Purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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27th May 2009, 09:50 AM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
*** yaad aaungi ***
tum meri hasti ki haqiqat naa bhula paoge,
mujh jaisa kisi aur ko paoge to yaad aaungi,
humne saath saath bitaye hai kai mausam,
yaadon ke panne gar paltoge to yaad aaungi,
sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me,
koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi,
meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the,
sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi,
isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi,
pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi,
khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera,
kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi,
tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi,
apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi,
saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena,
baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi,
dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal,
kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi,
yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut,
jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi,
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lamha ji
i like it. it's gooooood & full of dard,,
keep it up
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27th May 2009, 11:07 AM
haaye kya likha hai, seedha dil me utar gaya................ waise woh kon kambakht hai jisne apko bhulne ki bewakufi kari hai, par is poem ka ek-ek shabd seedha dil me utar jaata, itna dard....................itna gussa......................sach kahun, yeh apki likhi hui ab tak ki sabse best poem hai........................ The Only word to describe it is "Qatil"...............Kya "Qatil" likha hai apne............
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
*** yaad aaungi ***
tum meri hasti ki haqiqat naa bhula paoge,
mujh jaisa kisi aur ko paoge to yaad aaungi,
humne saath saath bitaye hai kai mausam,
yaadon ke panne gar paltoge to yaad aaungi,
sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me,
koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi,
meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the,
sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi,
isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi,
pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi,
khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera,
kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi,
tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi,
apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi,
saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena,
baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi,
dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal,
kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi,
yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut,
jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi,
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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27th May 2009, 11:08 AM
very good lamha jee,
its really very fantastic, sach mein aapne kuch beete pal yaad dila diye.... Its awesome... Bilkul dil se nikli hui....Great feelings...Ab shabd nahin hain ....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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27th May 2009, 12:38 PM
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*** yaad aaungi ***
tum meri hasti ki haqiqat naa bhula paoge,
mujh jaisa kisi aur ko paoge to yaad aaungi,
humne saath saath bitaye hai kai mausam,
yaadon ke panne gar paltoge to yaad aaungi,
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sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me,
koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi,
meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the,
sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi,
isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi,
pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi,
khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera,
kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi,
tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi,
apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi,
saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena,
baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi,
dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal,
kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi,
yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut,
jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi, [/quote]
Well........ Sabse pehle to tum jaise pyari si dost ko bhool kaun sakta hai......... ! jo bhoolega woh sabse bada duffer hoga....... aur lamha....... as baqs always says, jyada gamgeen mat likha karo...................
one sher for you
Lamhe judai ke bekarar karte hai,
Halaat mere mujhe lachaar karte hai,
Nazro ko padhlo kabhi,
khud hi pata chal jayega,
Kitna pyar aapse karte hai
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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27th May 2009, 01:39 PM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
*** yaad aaungi ***
tum meri hasti ki haqiqat naa bhula paoge,
mujh jaisa kisi aur ko paoge to yaad aaungi,
humne saath saath bitaye hai kai mausam,
yaadon ke panne gar paltoge to yaad aaungi,
sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me,
koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi,
meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the,
sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi,
isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi,
pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi,
khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera,
kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi,
tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi,
apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi,
saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena,
baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi,
dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal,
kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi,
yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut,
jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi,
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Achi tarha chori karti hoooo..........
phir usko modify bhi karti hooo
Har pal guzre ga udaasi ka to yaad aaoon ga
Roothe ga jab koi tum se to yaad aaoon ga
Kabhie kabhie khushi se tum muskuraaoo gi tum
Dekho gi phir aaina to yaad aaoo.n ga
Jab kisi din pao gi mujhe khuwaab mein
Bedaar hogi jab neend se to yaad aaoo.n ga
Rooth kar kisi se jab tum udaas betho gi
Na manaye ga tumhein koi to yaad aaoo.n ga
Jab kehna chaho gi kisi se apne dil ki baat
Na mile ga tumhein koi to yaad aaoo.n ga
Anjaane mein daairi ke warq jab bikhrein ge
Sameto gi jab tum unhein to yaad aaoo.n ga
Logo.n ke hujoom mein tum shayad mujhe bhool jao
Per baitho gi jab tanhaa to yaad aaoo.n ga
Hum na hoon ge to kon hansaaye ga tumhein
Dukhe ga jab dil tumhara to yaad aaoo.n ga
Kis kis se chupaaoo gi tum apna Haal-e-Dil
Pooche ga koi daastaan to yaad aaoo.n ga
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27th May 2009, 04:38 PM
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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27th May 2009, 04:55 PM
Well Lamha that ghazal (original) was for you from the person above me....hahaha
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27th May 2009, 05:50 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 05:53 PM
is ghazal ka meri ghazal se koi lene dena hi nahi hai...iske ehsaas aur meri ghazal ke ehsaas me zameen aasmaan ka fark hai.....BAQZ....maine apni ghazal bahut dil se aur mehnat se likhi hai, hosake to thodi izzat karna sikho....
tumhare reply ka shukriya.......................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 05:59 PM
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is ghazal ka meri ghazal se koi lene dena hi nahi hai...iske ehsaas aur meri ghazal ke ehsaas me zameen aasmaan ka fark hai.....BAQZ....maine apni ghazal bahut dil se aur mehnat se likhi hai, hosake to thodi izzat karna sikho....
tumhare reply ka shukriya.......................
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Wooooooooooo.....Chori uparse xplanation bhi........
Zameen Asmaan ke farqq dooor se dekhne par kahin doooor ek hojate hai , u can see zameen aur aasmaan meeting in somplace....
tou wohi concept par tou ye ghazal nahi churai na (Ooops tumhare dil se likhe ehsaaaaas) hahaha
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27th May 2009, 06:07 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 06:09 PM
Aihai... ab photo ley lo apne " I phone " se khud ki phir mujhe mail kar deyna.....
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27th May 2009, 06:12 PM
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Wooooooooooo.....Chori uparse xplanation bhi........
Zameen Asmaan ke farqq dooor se dekhne par kahin doooor ek hojate hai , u can see zameen aur aasmaan meeting in somplace....
tou wohi concept par tou ye ghazal nahi churai na (Ooops tumhare dil se likhe ehsaaaaas) hahaha
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Baqs............. bas kar yaar, ab jyada ho raha hai..............!
leave that thread
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27th May 2009, 06:13 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 06:18 PM
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Baqs............. bas kar yaar, ab jyada ho raha hai..............!
leave that thread
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Alrite Dude..... Warna tumhari Lamha... tumse naraaz hojayegi...
Cuz mujhse koi kuch ho..... I JUST DONT CARE.....hahaha
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27th May 2009, 06:22 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 06:24 PM
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Alrite Dude..... Warna tumhari Lamha... tumse naraaz hojayegi...
Cuz mujhse koi kuch ho..... I JUST DONT CARE.....hahaha
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woh mujhse kyun naraz hone lagi.........................
(it seems somebody is jealous here)
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27th May 2009, 06:51 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 06:53 PM
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lamha ji
i like it. it's gooooood & full of dard,,
keep it up
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shukriya RANI........yaha aake muje padhne ka bahut bahut shukriya dear............keep coming......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 06:57 PM
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haaye kya likha hai, seedha dil me utar gaya................ waise woh kon kambakht hai jisne apko bhulne ki bewakufi kari hai, par is poem ka ek-ek shabd seedha dil me utar jaata, itna dard....................itna gussa......................sach kahun, yeh apki likhi hui ab tak ki sabse best poem hai........................ The Only word to describe it is "Qatil"...............Kya "Qatil" likha hai apne............
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'Qatil' to aap ka reply hai dear......izzat afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya NALIN........shayri me thoda sa dard mil jaye to uska mazaa hi kuch aur hota hai...hai na??....yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna dost.......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 06:59 PM
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very good lamha jee,
its really very fantastic, sach mein aapne kuch beete pal yaad dila diye.... Its awesome... Bilkul dil se nikli hui....Great feelings...Ab shabd nahin hain ....
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thank u soooooooooooooo much ARU.....meri is ghazal ko padh kar agar aapko beete pal yaad aagaye to isse bada compliment aur koi ho hi nahi sakta dear....yuhi saath dete rehna....thanx a ton..
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 07:06 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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27th May 2009, 07:08 PM
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Well........ Sabse pehle to tum jaise pyari si dost ko bhool kaun sakta hai......... ! jo bhoolega woh sabse bada duffer hoga....... aur lamha....... as baqs always says, jyada gamgeen mat likha karo...................
one sher for you
Lamhe judai ke bekarar karte hai,
Halaat mere mujhe lachaar karte hai,
Nazro ko padhlo kabhi,
khud hi pata chal jayega,
Kitna pyar aapse karte hai
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saath dene ka bahut bahut shukriya dear............itna pyara sher likhne ka bhi shukriya SHAAN............yuhi saath dete rehna.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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30th May 2009, 04:27 PM
Dear Lamha.........
Really it's a amazing poetry...
Aisa laga dear ke tumne zindagi ka har khushgawar aur memorable yaadon ko yaad kar kar yeh creation kii hai...
So superB.. Now really aisa lag raha hai... ke mere alfaz tarif nahi kar payenge............
It's so sweet and nice post dear......
Keep writting Keep Up...
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Originally Posted by Baqtiar
Well Lamha that ghazal (original) was for you from the person above me....hahaha
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Baqtiar
Wooooooooooo.....Chori uparse xplanation bhi........
Zameen Asmaan ke farqq dooor se dekhne par kahin doooor ek hojate hai , u can see zameen aur aasmaan meeting in somplace....
tou wohi concept par tou ye ghazal nahi churai na (Ooops tumhare dil se likhe ehsaaaaas) hahaha
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Baqtiar
Alrite Dude..... Warna tumhari Lamha... tumse naraaz hojayegi...
Cuz mujhse koi kuch ho..... I JUST DONT CARE.....hahaha
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And Baqs dear Shayad aapne use bariki se nahi padha isliye aisa keh diya.....
Andaze bayan ek hua to ehsaas bhi ek hi nazar aa rahe hai aapko.......
Kahir koi baat nahi... per sudhar jaiye Bhai Bus yehi chahunga......................
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30th May 2009, 05:27 PM
hey lamha..
kya kahe aab hum...
lafz nahi hai tarefoo ke liye... bahut hi badiya haiN..
ek dam.. jabardast.. rocKing gal..
its..like wow.. post..
yUH hi likhate rahiyee..
-- OMi
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
*** yaad aaungi ***
tum meri hasti ki haqiqat naa bhula paoge,
mujh jaisa kisi aur ko paoge to yaad aaungi,
humne saath saath bitaye hai kai mausam,
yaadon ke panne gar paltoge to yaad aaungi,
sard raaton ke mehekte hue sannaton me,
koi haseen khwaab sajaoge to yaad aaungi,
meri aankho ke jugnu dil tera lubhate the,
sham dhale jab diye jalaoge to yaad aaungi,
isi andaaz me hote the mukhatib mujhse bhi,
pyaar se gale kisi ko lagaoge to yaad aaungi,
khushbu se meri behekta tha chanchal mann tera,
kisi dilnashi phool ko chumoge to yaad aaungi,
tumhare ashk mai apne honto se chura leti thi,
apne haathon se khud inhe pochoge to yaad aaungi,
saawan ke mausam me baahon me muje kas lena,
baarishon me akele jab bhigoge to yaad aaungi,
dard-e-zindagi se kabhi tum hoke nidhaal,
kisi deewar ko jab thamoge to yaad aaungi,
yaaron ki mehfil pe hai aaj ghuroor bahut,
jab kabhi tut ke bikhroge to yaad aaungi,
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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30th May 2009, 07:16 PM
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Dear Lamha.........
Really it's a amazing poetry...
Aisa laga dear ke tumne zindagi ka har khushgawar aur memorable yaadon ko yaad kar kar yeh creation kii hai...
So superB.. Now really aisa lag raha hai... ke mere alfaz tarif nahi kar payenge............
It's so sweet and nice post dear......
Keep writting Keep Up...
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thank u sooooooooooooooooo much SAMEER.....tumhara reply padh kar bahut achcha laga...aur tumhe meri ye koshish pasand aayi uske liye tahe dil se shukra guzaar hu....yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna......take care dear....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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30th May 2009, 07:20 PM
thank u sooooooooooooooooooo much OMI........tum yaha aaye aur itni izzat afzai ki uske liye bahut bahut bahut shukriya...yuhi saath banaye rakhna dear.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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31st May 2009, 12:32 PM
Ur most welcum..
Aap ne likha hi badiya haiN.. to tareef to karni hi padegi naa
and abt sath.. woo to banake hi rakhenge ji..
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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1st June 2009, 06:15 PM
thanx once again OMI............................................... ...........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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1st June 2009, 06:20 PM
Seems like even this will be moved to Chit Chat section.....hehehehe
cuz of this faltoo ki Thanx... no u deserve it....
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1st June 2009, 10:05 PM
Hello Lamha ji how are you? very nice thoughts and feeling keep it up
mushkan
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1st June 2009, 10:28 PM
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1st June 2009, 10:31 PM
hey SAMEER..............chill yaar....tum bhi kis se bahes kar rahe ho yaar....
anyways...............thanx buddy...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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1st June 2009, 10:32 PM
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Hello Lamha ji how are you? very nice thoughts and feeling keep it up
mushkan
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thanx MUSHKAN........................................... ........................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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1st June 2009, 10:41 PM
hmmm..... yet again... thanx no thanx u deserve it...hahaha
and the story continues........
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1st June 2009, 10:44 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa ,
ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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