Quote:
Originally Posted by Shayar 4ever
Kuch is tarah se Tu Jeeti
Kuch is tarah se Main Haara
Mera hi Dil Tu Jeeti
Apna hi Dil Main Haara
Ajeeb sa hain, Is Duniya ka Andaaz
Pyar se Tu Jeeti
Pyar se Main Haara
Tujhse karta rahunga Bepanah Ishq
Ta umra Teri is Bewafa Fitrat se
Sochta hun, 'dil se'
Kya Tu Jeeti ?
Kya Main Haara ?
- dil se
Hamza Ali
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Lines are Ok Hamza,
But remember always using same Qafiya (rhyming words) is never taken a good shayari in urdu literature . Just a suggestion