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Jara si khushi -
29th July 2004, 11:29 AM
Khaawbon mein rehnaa achaa nahii hai Aadmi ke liye,
Barhaa hum bahut kuch lutaa dete hai Zara si khushi ke liye Maana tumko andherey mein rehne ki Aadat hai, Magar ghar to naa jalaao kisi ka Zara si Roshnii ke liye Yahaan sabhi ek dusree ko Dokhaa dene mein lagey hain, Pal ka bharosaa nahii Samaan ikatha kar rahe hai ZINDAGI ke liye Gardishey wakt mein hoti hai PEHCHAAN apne PARAAYE ki ''JAI'', Thokar khaana bhi Zaroori hai AADMI ke liye barhaa=kayi baar |
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Bahut khoob |
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Bahut khoob -
30th July 2004, 12:19 PM
Bahut hi achchha saahab...wakai khoob likha hai aapne.
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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30th July 2004, 11:33 PM
Shukriya Dost
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Waah... |
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Waah... -
31st July 2004, 03:05 AM
Aadaab,
Yeh bhi bohot khub likhha hain aapne.  Har ek sher dilko achha laga...kitni sachhai chhupi houi hain...Ek gana pata nahin kyun yaad aa rahi hain, bura na maniyega...chhod dein sari Duniya kisi ke liye yeh munasif nehin aadmi ke liye~Pyaar se bhi zaroori kayi kam hain Pyaar sab kuch nahin Zindegi ke liye.......dil se nikli houi Daad kubool kijiyega. Younhi likhte rahiyega. Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Do take care of yourself. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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31st July 2004, 10:06 AM
Very nice words.... Do keep up the good work... Keep writing... TC
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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